英语人教版九年级全册环保作文设计

1、教学重点：如何写好一篇英语作文教学难点：区分建议和做法的句子表达教学设计：一、Discussion:Whatwordsorphrasesdoyouhopetoseewhenyouseetheword“environment”?学生充分发表自己的见解以表达他们理想中的环境但现实中，我们周围的环境是不是如我们所愿意呢，请看大屏幕：Therearemanyotherpollution,suchasnoisepollution,landpollutionandsoon.Theearthisbadlypolluted.Pollutionisbadforusall.请看大屏幕：Theearthisourh

2、ome.Itiseveryonedsutytoloveandprotecttheenvironment.Everyoneshouldplayapartinprotectingtheenvironment.Itstartswithsmallthingsaroundus.Whatcanwedotoprotecttheenvironment?学生充分发表自己的见解SampleAsweallknow,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworsetoday.Waterispolluted,manytreesarecuttingdown,someanimalsa

3、regettinglessandless.Somefactoriesarepouringdirtyairintothesky.Notonlydoesitaffectourlivesandhealth,italsohasagreataffectioninthefuture.Peopleshealthhasbeengreatlyaffectedbypollution.Inordertoliveabetterlife,somethingmustbedonetostopthepollution.Itsourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Weshouldntthrowawayr

4、ubbisheverywhere.Treesareveryhelpfulandimportantforus.Weshouldplantmoreandmoretreesinordertolivebetterandmorehealthilyinthefuture.Weshouldstopfactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintotheriverandwastegasintotheair.Wheneverweseelitterontheground,weshouldpickitupandthrowitintodusbins.Neverspitinpublic.Dontdra

5、wonpublicwalls.Itsourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.提醒：SuggestionsWeshouldWemustItsnecessarytoWeshouldntNeverDont二、task:现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个低碳生活的中学生。请以“MyLowcarbonLife为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。内容包括：1. 地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。2. 你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇

6、、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。3. 号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。Mind-map:MyLow-carbonLife1. Whatproblemsdothepollutionscause?2. Theimportanceofthelow-carbonlife.3. Whatdoyoudotolivealow-carbonlife?注意：建议和做法的语句表达不同WritingmodeBeginningTheenvironmentalpollutionisworseandworsetoday.AsastudentI,trytolivealow-carbonlifetosaveenergyand

7、reducepollution.IoftenIalwaysIneverSometimesIbecauseItcanhelpLetsConnectthesentenceswithlinkwordstointroducesupportingpoints:Post-writing1.Good-structure.T结构合理）訂2分2.Fullcontent（内容完整厂Ioftenbecause（至少3方面）4分3.Correctexpression（表达准确）1）Correcttense（时态准确）2）Conjunctions（连词）5分4.Richexpression（语言丰富）Goodwordsandsentences2分5.Goodhandwriting（书写优美）2分SummaryAgoodTo|ntencepassageBodyof“giving”opinionsRightLinkwordsandsentencepatternsConclusionHomework请你以保持城市环境干净”为主题，写一份倡议书。内容包括：1. 保护城市环境是我