2021年新课标新高考英语复习练习讲义：专题十读后续写

1、专题十 读后续写【考情探究】考点所给信息特点 浙江考情分析2019.62018.112018.062017.112017.062016.10体裁故事类记叙文小两口野外露营, 因小事发读后续话题所给文章长度爸爸带儿子去朋和朋友一起骑车友家农场游玩迷路的故事320和父母一块去旅游的故事338游玩 , 野外遇狼的故事344生争执, 女主人独自走进森林迷路, 在野外独自过夜的故事332写标名词 （ 词组 ）7778示动词 （ 词组 ）2032词形容词、副词1300分析解读1.考查方式提供一段 350 词以内的语言材料, 要求考生依据该材料内容和所给段落开头语进行续写（150 词左右 ）, 将其发展成一

2、篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。2. 考查能力读后续写主要考查学生以下四个方面的能力 :宏观把控语篇结构的能力 : 学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系 , 所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性, 所续写的短文语句要连贯、有序。熟练准确运用语言的能力 : 学生能准确、 恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构, 还能够根据内容需要使用较多较复杂的词汇和语言结构, 使语言表达丰富而又有感染力。把握故事情节和语言特点的能力 : 学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容, 并通过续写短文表现出来。进行创造性思维的能力 : 学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容 , 包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。【真题

3、探秘】20怖浙江1。月 语答美里；记叙支字域语境；人与社会 主呻境内容；人物故事真题再现Oneweekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that

4、she said to Tom, I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp'and walked away.With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a

5、snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.Tom!”she cried.No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became.As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop

6、for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very muchto be with Tomand her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him howmuchshe loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling（ 滴落）somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a strea

7、m. To her great joy,she also saw someberry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter.the trees made it impossibl

8、e for people toAs she picked her way carefully Is that for me?Unfortunately, see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead.阅读点拨这是一篇情节自然，但是有冒险色 彩的故事。原文讲到 Tom和Jane 因琐事吵架,后来Jane意外迷失 在森林里。根据原文及所给的段首 句，续写部分的构思不会太难。根 据第一段的首句可知，本段应该描 述当天晚上Jane的心态和行动。而 根据第二段的提示 句可知，本段主 要叙述Jane最终是

9、如何获救的。当 然，在续写中，一定要反映出 Jane 的坚韧和聪明，同时，最后一定要有 Tom努力救援的信息，这样的续写 故事结尾才有正能量。本文的矛盾冲突为Jane在森林中 迷失这个问题，表现的是人与环境 之间的冲突。故事情节围绕该矛盾 冲突展开。问题的产生（在森林迷路）问题如何解决（试图走出森林，试图 向直升机求救）问题的解决（获救）该矛盾冲突推动了故事情节的发展，依照Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open areaand flag them if they cameback again

10、.Before getting lostParagraph 1:But no more helicopters cameand it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up.While getting lostAfter getting lost这一时间线索串联出文章的叙事逻 辑主线。其中，After getting lost 为文章的重点展开部分。流程详解1.梳理记叙要素，归纳文本大意whoJane, TomwhatJane waslostwherein the forestwhenone we

11、ekendin Julywhya quarrel with Tom,her husband主 旨大意Jane was lost in the forest and survived in the end.2.清清叙事情节，助推故事高潮beginning .started to quarrel.was lostdevelopment叙事情节.kept moving.had to stop for the night.rose along the stream and hope.at the break of day.began to walkclimax heard a helicopteren

12、ding 待续增加障碍让直升飞机发现Jane的困难扩大Jane在夜晚内心的冲突（后悔与丈夫吵架）助推高潮营造冲突 渲染Jane当晚与次日与环境之间的冲突（当晚恶劣”的环境与内心无助和恐惧的冲突；次日让直升飞机发现自己的困又t与渴望被救的冲突）3.研读段落开头语，精准定位续写方向研读续写段落的开头语But no morehelicopters cameand it was getting dark again. Howdid Jane feel then?Para. 1 Howdid Jane struggle through the night?Did she fall asleep and

13、what did she think of?It was daybreak whenJane wokeup.Para. 2 WasJane rescued and who rescued Jane? Howwasshe rescued and how did she feel then?Paragraph 1 Jane 是如何熬过那一个夜晚的 ( 所听、所思、所感)续写内容Paragraph 2 Jane 是如何获救的( 所行、所听、所见、所感 )4. 添加细节描写 , 凸显人物情感Jane 的所听 (frightening sound) 、所思 (regret) 、 所感 (frighten

14、ed and Paragraph 1tired).Paragraph 2Jane如何被直升飞机发现和与丈夫重逢后的喜悦 5. 恰当使用连接词和过渡语 , 使全文流畅连贯在续写的过程中我们可以根据情节和逻辑的需要选用 but/however 、 although/though 、 unfortunately 、 instead 、 on the contrary 、 what's worse 、 worse still 、 so 、 thus 、 therefore 、 consequently 、 as a result 等连接词使上下文衔接紧密、表意连贯。6. 检查 “个人佳作 ”,

15、 检查故事情节是否连贯, 语法、词汇运用是否准确参考范文【五档作文】Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. She had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night. Jane was so tired and disappointed, but she didn't lose heart. She knew Tommust be trying his best to search for her. She believed

16、 that the helicopter must have been called by Tomand was sure it would comeback again tomorrow. She found a place near the stream and slept.Paragraph 2:It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She walked along the stream, hoping to find a suitable place so that the helicopter could find her. She was so lu

17、cky that before long a big rock appeared, which was high above the trees. There she climbed and waited with her yellowblouse in hand for the helicopter to comeagain.To her great joy,she didn'twait long before she saw the helicopter in the sky. She waved hard with the yellow blouse and the helico

18、pter quickly found her. She was right and it was Tomwho called the helicopter and saved her.【满分作文】Paragraph 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. In the dreadful darkness, Jane heard strange sounds of wild beasts clearly, feelingextremelyfrightened. If I hadn't quarreled

19、with Tom, I wouldn't be trapped here now,“ she thought to herself regretfullywith tears clouding her eyes. Surrounded by fear, Janefelt worn out and finally fellasleep. Tom, is that you? ?she murmured. Tom, help! ”Inher dream, she saw a manextending his arms towards her at a distance.Paragraph 2

20、:It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Jane decided to continue forcing her way ahead. In the boundless search, she found it hard to find a way out, which threw her into desperation. Fortunately, a helicopterflew overhead just at that moment. In no timedid Jane rush to the rock and climb onto it eagerl

21、y.She waved her yellow blouse madlyto the helicopter. To her great joy, the helicopterspotted her and cameto her help.The momentJane and Tomreunited, they hugged each other tightly in the warmlight of the setting sun.Writing 1（2018 浙江 6 月）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and mydad wanted

22、 to treat decided to take meon a trip to the Wild West.me to a vacationlike neverbefore. HeWetook a plane to Albuquerque, a big city Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.in the state ofmydad's friend,NewMexico.Wereachedpicked usup from theHi

23、s wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and wegot to knowhis sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guest and water rolling downthe river nearby. up to have breakfast. The day starts at went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,room of the farm house listening to the frogs Very early

24、 in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us dawn on my farm, “he said. After breakfast, I while mydad went with Uncle Paul to take thesheep out to graze（吃草）.I was impressed to They looked really cool.see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, a

25、nd he said yes, as long as mydad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, mydad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. Don't be late for supper, “Uncle Paul cried, and keep to the track so that you don'

26、t get lost! " OK!"my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blan

27、ket spread out upon the ground just for us.汪息：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:Wehad no idea where wewere and it got dark.答案Onepossible version:Paragraph 1:Sudden

28、ly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened myhorse, which madeit run wildly. I tried mybest to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped bef

29、ore a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, mydad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that wegot lost.Paragraph 2:Wehad no idea where we were and it got dark. Wedidn't know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previo

30、us track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation.Just as wewere at the point of desperation,we heard a faint voice from the distance. It must be Uncle Paul, “I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. Whatan amazing ride!Wri

31、ting 2（2017 浙江 11 月）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A Vacation with MyMotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my mother loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip wetook whenI was eleven tells a lot about her.My two

32、 sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who

33、knew if we'd ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and weloaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. Webravely drove off again two hours later after we'd returned home to get the purse and traveler's check

34、s Momhad forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept: You stand outside the door and play lookout（ 放哨）while I go, and I'll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go." I had terrible pictures in my mind: Ho

35、ney, where are the kids? " What?! Oh, Gosh.I thought they were being awfully quiet. " Wewere never actually left behind in a strange city, but we weren't about to take any chances.Onthe fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some

36、time, Momsuddenly got a great idea:Why didn't wefind a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Momnever couldunderstand our objections（反对）.If a strange family showed up on her front doo

37、rstep,Momwould have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 一、/ 汪后：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4 .续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The next day werememberedthe brand-new tent wehad bro

38、ught with us.Paragraph 2:Wedrove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.答案Onepossible version:Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent wehad brought with us. Wedecided to campalong the river. The views there were surprisingly beautiful the warmsunshine, th

39、e fresh air, the clean water. Wesat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dadwas about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dadhad to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.Paragraph 2:Wedrove through several states and sa

40、w lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Momwould cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in na

41、ture. Whenwe cameback to the hotel after the tiring but excellent visit, Momwould hug us and kiss us on our faces. Howsweet she was! Absent-minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.Writing 3（2017 浙江 6 月）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。On a bright, warm July afternoon

42、, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to makea bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Macto carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Macpedaled（ 骑行）along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two yo

43、ung daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. Man, that's a big dog! ”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantlythat it wasn't a dog at all,but a wolf, quickly catching up with him.Mac's hea

44、rt jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Mac's relief, it fell back, shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Mac's bike, teari

45、ng open his tent bag. Hefired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase（追赶）.Macwas pedaling hard now. Hewaved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knewthat once he hit the hill, he'd be

46、easy caught up and the wolf's teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didn't think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, as

47、sumed was a dog running alongside a manon a bike. As they got closer, they realizedthat the dog was a wolf. Macheard alarge vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards awaynow.汪息：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2 .应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语3 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好4

48、.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.答案Onepossible version:Paragraph 1:The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the people inside the car for help. Paul

49、and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb into the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They quickly pushed Macinto their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling and breathless. Seeing this, the wolf still howled outside the

50、 car for sometime and then left unwillingly.Paragraph 2:A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Mac's friends were shocked to hear the story and very grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his homefor dinner and he introduced his wife and daughters to his two new

51、friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.【三年模拟】A组 20182020年模拟 基础题组Writing 1（2020届山东夏季高考模拟 ）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, ther

52、e are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes, we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray（ 流浪）dog, until he cameto me.I was seven years old. Mydad had just got a new job in Nasik. Wehad movedinto a rented house. It was raining very heavil

53、y on the daywemoved.It was a cold dark night. Wehad our meal and went to sleep. Somehowin the middle of the night I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amusedwith what I saw outside.There was a smallpuppy lying on an

54、olddoormat whichmy mother had putoutsidethedoor. It was wet and trembling. At first itwas difficultto see the littleone. Itwasthe yellow spots on its eyes that mademerealize its presence.It was trying toget under the doormat to avoid thecold air outsideand ithadmanaged to get in asI could see only i

55、tshead outsidethe doormat. Was it sickorinjured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had becomedry. I took him into myroom and madea bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillo

56、w. He seemedvery healthy and comfortable in his newbed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. Shall we keep him with us? ”I questioned mymom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister an

57、d I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and becameone of the family members.Paragraph 1:Oneday, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg.Paragraph 2:Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly.答案Onepossible version:Paragraph 1:One

58、day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. Appearing exhausted, he cameto myroom and sat near me, the leg bleeding. I called mymother and she quickly tied a bandage around his leg and gave him food to eat. I was very upset. But the next day, Spotty followed me wherever I went happily as usual though he limped a bit. After this inciden