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1、雅思写作真题范文展示雅思写作真题范文展示:学校根据学生能力挑选被教育者是否合理?下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作真题范文展示:学校根据学生能力挑选被教育者是否合理Some people believe that schools should choose their students according to their abilities.While other people think students with different abilities should learn together.discuss both sides and give your opinion.

2、一些人认为学校应该根据学生的能力来选择他们。而其他人认为不同能力的学生应该一起学习。讨论双方并给出你的意见。下面请看本期范文:Endowed with different talents, every individual contributes to our society in different ways, so to treat every student equally is a common practice in most schools today. However, manyschools are nowentertaining the idea that students

3、should be selected and educated together according to their evels of academic intelligence. Generally, I believe that schools should continue with their traditional strategy.每个人都被赋予不同的才能,以不同的方式为我们的社会做出贡献,所以平 等对待每个学生是当今大多数学校的普遍做法。然而,现在许多学校都在考虑, 学生应该根据他们的学术智力水平一起被挑选和教育。总的来说,我认为学校应该继续他们的传统策略。It is true

4、 that teaching intelligent students together might improve their study efficiency to some extent, as being in a competitive learning environment, their potential abilities in academic studies could be developed as muchas possible. But schools and parents should also realize that it is/quite dangerou

5、s to oversimplify the situation here.诚然,将聪明的学生放在一起教学可以在一定程度上提高他们的学习效率, 因为在一个竞争激烈的学习环境中,他们在学术研究中的潜在能力可以得到尽可 能多的发展。但是,学校和家长也应该意识到,过分简化这种情况是很危险的。The top priority of education at any level should be the development of ones personality and morality. But what makes it a mockery is that the separate teachi

6、ng scheme usually focuses on the academic studies of students exclusively, so pupils are evaluated only by theif performance on examinations. Consequently, instead of making them outstanding, those selected Children are deprived of a normal but essential part of growing up.What is worse, those who a

7、re rejected from studying with the gifted studehts could easily suffer psychological pressure from their parents or themselves due to not being good enough.任何层次的教育的首要任务都应该是人格和道德的发展。但是,这是一种讽刺,因为单独的教学计划通常只关注学生的学术研究,所以学生的评价只能通过if考试成绩。因此,这些被选中的孩子非但没有成为优秀的孩子,反而被剥夺了一个正常但重要的成长部分。更糟糕的是,那些被拒绝与有天赋的学生学习的人 很容易遭

8、受来自他们的父母或自己的心理压力,因为不够“好”。Schools are needed because of their inborn features to provide students a relaxing and friendly environment for study. Students talented in one way mayneed help or inspiration in other fields. So before making young minds ready for the competitive world too early, allowing t

9、hem to study and live in a cooperative way is essential for thejr growing up.学校是需要的,因为他们天生的特点,为学生提供一个放松和友好的学习环 境。在某一方面有天赋的学生可能需要其他领域的帮助或灵感。因此,在让年轻 人过早地为这个充满竞争的世界做好准备之前,让他们以一种合作的方式学习和生活对jr的成长至关重要。To conclude, I believe that students should be taught together regardless of their levels of academic abi

10、litiesin most cases.总之,我认为,在大多数情况下,无论学生的学术水平如何,他们都应该在 一起学习。雅思大作文真题及范文解析:学校是否该根据学生能力进行挑选并教学Some people think that schools should select their pupils according to their academic ability. Others believe that young people with different abilities should be educated together. Discuss both sides and give

11、your opinion.一些人认为学校应该根据学生的学术能力来选择他们。另一些人认为不同能力的年轻人应该在一起接受教育。讨论双方并给出你的意见。范文It is a truth universally acknowledged that any one and every one has different talents. When it comes to education, opinions differ as to whether schoolchildren should be grouped based on their abilities, some wishing intell

12、igent students should be separated from ordinary ones, other supporting equal education should be obtained by all the students.Onthe one hand, those in favor of streaming students generally believe that this could improve the class efficiency and learning pace. In a mixed class, higher-level student

13、s tend to feel complacent if the tasks set in class are inappropriate for their level, but weaker students mayalso feel frustrated as the tasks may be beyond their capability. As for teachers, it is more convenient for them to choose appropriate materials, activities and pedagogic strategies accordi

14、ng to students levels. Consequently, teaching quality can be guaranteed and a larger number of students could enroll in university.On the other hand, others argue that this practice would definitely exert detrimental impacts to students dignity. This is especially true of adolescents who might feel

15、inferior as it can be quite discouraging to be at the bottom of the top grade. The last result teachers want tosee is that their students are demotivated from study, which is caused by streaming. Contrarily, students in mixed-ability classes could learn from each other and develop their team spirit.

16、 Advanced students can obtain satisfaction from helping lower-level classmates. In fact, our education is based on the belief that each student could achieve integrated development by developing not only academic capacity but also personal qualities and social skills which can be contributed by mixe

17、d ability teaching.In conclusion, I personally believe that although streaming is more efficient for students to acquire knowledge, more important is that students should learn to co-operate, to share, and to develop social skills which play a more essential role in their future development. Therefo

18、re, mixed-ability classes contribute more positively to a childs psychological development.范文解析该题目是关于教育类双边讨论类话题。有些人认为学校应该根据学生的学术能力来选择学生,而另一些人认为不同能力的学生应该一起接受教育,让考生讨论两种观点并且给出自己的观点。第一种做法的优点是老师可以设置出更加有针 对性的课程规划,从而提高授课效率,学生之间也可以通过竞争共同进步,从而 保证升学率。第二种一起接受教育的方法可以保护弱势学生的自尊心,促进同学间的互助,交流,合作,课堂也更加丰富和有趣。文章结构P1:交

19、代背景,引出两种观点;P2:主体段,论证第一个观点的合理性,分班对学习成绩,课程设置,学校 升学率的积极影响;P3:主体段,论证第二个观点的合理性,合班能够保护学生的自尊心,培养 沟通能力及合作精神;P4:总结全文,表明个人立场。高分话题表达complacent 自满的beyond their capability 超出能力pedagogic strategies教学方法enroll in university大学入学exert detrimental impacts产生有害影响this is especially true of尤其符合于demotivated 失去动力的contrarily

20、 相反integrated development全面发展contribute more positively to 有助于高分结构it is a truth universally acknowledged that同位语从旬some wishingother supporting.非谓语动词those in favor of后置定语the last result teachers want to see is that强调旬our education is based on the belief that同位语从旬more important is that倒装形式雅思写作字数和分数有何关

21、联写作评分标准解析雅思考试的写作任务1不能少于150字,任务2不能少于250字。写作要充 分展开论述,从而有利地支持文章观点,充足的字数是必须的。但是如果写作犹如滔滔江水连绵不绝,又如黄河泛滥一发不可收拾,这样的文思泉涌为什么也不一定会加分呢?其实,写得多有利有弊,关键还是看是否达到评分的标准的要求。如果你仔细阅读雅思官方评分标准的写作部分,就会了解雅思考官是从写作 任务的完成情况、连贯与衔接、词汇丰富程度、语法多样性及准确性4个方面来评分。文字的太多可能是把双刃剑,完成不等于码字,丰富不等于啰嗦,也千万不 要图多写一些忽略了语法和词汇的准确运用。如何做?首先,得确保你的文章充分回答了题目中的

22、问题 !写作任务1要求“能否有效地找到信息中关键的内容并对之进行描述和写 作”,考的是描述能力。在有限的时间内,想要把图表内的每个信息都进行描述 是不可能、也是不必要的,关键的是要把这些信息分组,然后挑出最重要的信息 突出表述,最后进行归纳总结、简述趋势。写作任务2主要考察”论点是否切中题目的要求、论证过程是否完整、论点 是否得到了论据的支持;观点是否清晰和有效”,考的是论述能力。其实,任何 考试作文题考的都是写作能力,而不是考你的观点有多么正确。正所谓“论之有据”,中文写作如此,英文写作也不例外,但中国烤鸭往往 落入费尽心思挖论点的误区,而忽略了使用论据来证明自己的论点。止匕外,要把观点表述

23、得“清晰有效”也很考功夫。 英文写作中注重言简意赅, 特别是在篇幅有限的考试写作的环境下, 更需要大家将自己的观点提纲挈领地表 述出来,并通过使用主题句(每段的开头或结尾)或者是连接词等清晰明了地指示 出自己的观点。时间足够不要慌,合理安排时间很重要!了解了每部分任务考查的重点之后,合理安排好写作时间则是我们向大家强 调的一大重点。在两项任务的时间分配上,建议大家用 20分钟完成写作任务1, 40分钟完成写作任务2。大多数烤鸭们确实会选择先做任务1,但许多人似乎都陷入了 “泥沼”一也 就是说,他们花了过多的时间用在写作任务 1上,无论是细节和篇幅都超过了必 要程度。当然,你必须了解图表的主要特

24、征并反映出来,但与此同时,你还须将 字数控制好,注意不要比150字的最短篇幅超出太多字数。要知道多出的篇幅并不能给你带来加分。常常看到有些烤鸭在30分钟、甚至35分钟过后仍然就写作任务1奋笔疾书。设想一下,将如此多的时间用来写 篇幅较短、分数值也较少的任务1,然后只能给篇幅更长、分数值更高的任务2留 下30分钟、甚至25分钟,这样做是否能够得到高分?答案当然是否定的,因为这意味着你可能需要一边“赶着”整理思路, 一边 完成250字的最低字数要求,同时在这样紧张的时间内还要避免明显的词汇和语 法错误。这样的时间安排想要拿到好成绩,难度也是很大呢 !止匕外,还有很多小伙伴过于担心不能在规定的时间内

25、写出要求的字数,匆忙浏览了一下题目就立即开始奋笔疾书了。 但是很快又能看到他们搁下笔费力地思 考下一步应该写些什么,有时甚至要用橡皮擦掉整个句子重新来过,就这样反反 复复,时间过去了一大半,写出的字数似乎还是那么点这样虽然下笔很快,但 由于需要浪费时间组织更多观点和/或修改已经写好的内容,导致最后甚至没有 完成考试要求的字数。最后也没有留出时间查错。因此,烤鸭们在下笔之前应该抽出几分钟仔细思考,确保你已经完全了解问 题;构思好几个关键思路,做一些简单的笔记;完成写作后如有时间,检查词汇和 语法是否运用正确。俗话说得好,“审题审三遍,下笔如有神。还想多得分,写完查两回。”想 要合理安排好写作时间。计划、行文、检查可是一个都不能少哦!如何积累雅思写作素

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