雅思托福写作表达多样性训练

1、写作表达多样性训练Topic 1: Internet.因特网近几年很大的改变了我们的生活。分句型： The Internet has dramatically changed our lives in recent years.分句型： The internet has caused dramatic changes in our lives in recent years.分句型： The Internet has brought significant changes to our lives in recent years.但是因特网的影响是好是坏，人们还存在这一些争论。分句型：But

2、people still disagree about whether the effect of the Internet has been goodor bad.分句型：However, there is still some disagreement about whether the overall effect ofInternet has been good or bad.分句型： Yet, there remains some disagreement as to whether the overall of this technology has been positive o

3、r negative.首先，大部分人都会同意，因特网改进了我们的交流方式。分句型： First, most people would agree that the Internet has improved the way we communicate.分句型： Firstly, few people would disagree that the Internet has greatly improved the way we communicate.分句型：First of all, it is a indisputable fact that the Internet has revol

4、utionized the way we communicate.尽管花太多时间上网是一个危险的，因为它会导致社交方面的问题。然而，对于大多数 人而言，email或者聊天软件还是帮助了我们很多人。分句型：It is true that spending too much time using the Internet is dangerous because it can cause social problems. However, e-mail and Internet chat programs like MSN messenger have helped most of us.分句型：

5、 Although there is some danger of social isolation (a problem that we sometimes see in people who spend too much time online instead of talking to real people), e-mail and Internet chat programs like MSN messenger have brought great benefits to most of us.分句型： Despite the risk of social isolation ,

6、a problem occasionally seen in people who spend too much time at their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world , most of us have benefited greatly from e-mail and internet chat programs like MSN messenger.但是我认为这样的信息流通有着非常好的影响。分句型： But I feel that this free movement of info

7、rmation has been a very positive trend.分句型：However, I would argue that this free movement of information has generally been a very positive development.分句型： Nonetheless, I would contend that this free flow of information has generally been a very positive development.最后，重申一遍我的观点，因为网络给在人们交流以及信息流通方面的影

8、响，因特网的 影响是积极地。分句型：In conclusion, I restate my opinion that the internet has positively influenced modern life because of the effect on communication and the movement of information.分句型：By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that the Internet has had a positive impact on modern life

9、because of its influence on communication and the flow of information.Topic 2: fast food1.快餐在现在比五十年之前更加容易得到。分句型： Fast food is now much more widely available than it was 50 years ago.分句型：In the past 50 years the availability of fast food has increased dramatically.分句型： The past 50 years have seen a d

10、ramatic increase in the availability of fast food. 一些人认为这种食物在世界上有着重要的地位，因为它很方便和便宜。分句型： Some people feel that this kind of food plays a positive role in the world because it is convenient and cheap.分句型： Some people argue that this kind of food has a positive role to play in the world because of its c

11、onvenience and low cost.但是我认为这种食物无论是对于食客还是对于社会来说都是不好的。分句型： But I believe that this kind of food is bad for the people who eat it and also for the society.分句型： However, I will argue that this kind of food is harmful both to the individuals who eat it and to society in general.分句型： However, I tend to

12、argue that this kind of food is detrimental both to the individuals that consume it and to the society at large.众所周知的是快餐会导致很多健康问题。分句型： As everybody knows, fast food is very unhealthy.分句型：It is a well-known fact that eating too much fast food causes serious health problems.分句型：it is an undeniable fac

13、t that eating fast food to excess results in serious health problems.5.像炸鸡，汉堡和薯条这样含很高热量和脂肪的食物会导致高血压，肥胖或者心脏病之类 的疾病。分句型：Food like fried chicken, hamburgers and chips contain large amounts of fat and salt. They cause illnesses like high blood pressure, weight problems and heart diseases.分句型： Food such

14、as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips are very high in fat and salt. These foods are responsible for ailments like high blood pressure, obesity and heart diseases.分句型： Food such as fried chicken, hamburgers and chips, which are incredibly high in fat and salt, are responsible for such ailments as h

15、igh blood pressure, obesity and heart diseases.International tourism.本文我将讨论两种国际旅游业所带来的问题。分句型：I will now discuss two of the main problems caused by international tourism.分句型： The following are just two of the main difficulties involved with international tourism.分句型： Two of the primary drawbacks asso

16、ciated with this trend are as follows.举一反三：下面我将讨论这种现象所带来的三个主要的好处。.因为只有有钱人才有足够的钱出国旅游，所以像泰国和印尼这样相对贫穷的国家成 为了有钱人的游乐场。分句型： Because rich people have enough money to travel overseas, poorer countries like Thailand and Indonesia have become the playground of richer ones.分句型： As it is only the rich that can

17、afford to holiday overseas, poorer countries such as Thailand and Indonesia have become the playground of wealthier nations.分句型： Since it is only the wealthy who can afford to travel abroad, developing countries like Thailand and Indonesia have become the playground of tourists from more affluent on

18、es.举一反三：因为只有那些古建筑具有很高的历史价值，所以像长城以及故宫这样的文化遗产才会被保存下来。3.在很多这些国家里，越来越多从西方来的游客引起了一些例如卖淫，酗酒以及吸毒 的问题。分句型：In many of these countries, this increasing number of visitors (mostly from western countries) has caused problems like prostitution, alcoholism and drug abuse.分句型：In many such countries, this flood of

19、mostly western tourists has created problems like prostitution along with alcoholism and drug abuse.分句型：In many such nations, this influx of mainly western tourists has brought with it problems such as prostitution, alcoholism and drug abuse.举一反三：对于我们人类本身来说，环境破坏引起了例如沙尘暴，耕地的退化，以 及全球变暖这些不好的后果。.然而，国际旅游

20、对各地环境带来的破坏更让人担忧。分句型： However, the damage that global tourism has caused to the environment in many places is even more worrying.分句型： Even more worrying, however, is the damage that international tourism has caused to the environment in many parts of the world.分句型：Even more disturbing, though, is the

21、 environmental degradation thatinternational tourism has caused in many parts of the world.举一反三：但是，更让人值得注意的是国际人道主义援助对于贫穷国家带来的消极影 响。5.澳大利亚的大堡礁就是一个很好的例子，过去几十年中数不清的游船，潜水员去游 览毁坏了很多珊瑚礁。分句型： Australia Great Barrier Reef is an especially good example of this - large areas of carol reef have been slowly des

22、troyed by the thousands of boats and scuba divers that have visited it over the years.分句型： One especially good example of this is Australia s Great Barrier Reef- the numerous boats and divers who have been there in recent years have slowly destroyed large areas of coral reef.分句型： One particularly sa

23、lient example of this is the Great Barriers Reef in Australia the countless boats and divers that have visited the reef over the past few decades have gradually destroyed vast sections of coral.举一反三：芬兰的著名公司诺基亚就是一个很好的例子，过去的十年缺乏创新导致了一个手机帝国的瓦解（collapse）。6.尽管这些问题并不是不能克服，但是我相信他们还会在一定的时间内存在。分句型： They are

24、certainly not impossible to overcome, but I believe these problems will probably continue for some time.分句型： They are certainly not insurmountable, however, it is very unlikely that they will be solved in the near future.分句型：Although they are by no means insurmountable, it is highly unlikely that th

25、ey will be resolved in the foreseeable future.举一反三：尽管互联网能够给我们带来交流的便利，但是它的弊端还是一段时间内无法跨越的。Immigration.如果我们要社会安定，移民必须遵循当地法律。分句型：If we want society to run smoothly, immigrants must follow the rules of their new country.分句型：It is very important that immigrants obey the laws of their new country to mainta

26、in order in society.分句型：it is vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their adopted country for the sake of social order.因此，即使新的国家的法律和自己国家的不同移民也应该遵守。分句型： so immigrants should follow the rules in their new country even if laws in their new country are different.分句型： Therefore, immigrants

27、 need to make sure that they obey the law in their newcountry despite any differences to laws in their home country.分句型：It is, therefore, necessary for all immigrants to ensure that they obey the law in their new country regardless of any differences to laws in their home country.不同的文化的确可以让国家更有趣，但是我

28、认为太多的不同让人与人之间变得疏远。分句型： It is true that different cultures makes a country more interesting, but I believe that too much difference makes it weak by making people feel that they do not fit in there.分句型： Certainly, having many cultures makes a country more interesting, however, I would argue that too

29、much difference weakens a society by making people feel that they do not belong there.分句型： Of course, having a mixture of different cultures and traditions gives a country colour and vibrancy. However I would contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a society by alienating people from eac

30、h other.我相信相同的东西拉近我们的距离，不同让我们渐行渐远。分句型：I believe that things we have in common bring us together, but differences pull us apart.分句型：I believe that similarities between people unite them while their differences divide them.分句型：It is my believe that similarities unite people, whereas differences have a

31、 tendency to divide.5.我认为因为不同国家之间的接线变得越来越模糊，这个问题未来将会越来越重要。分句型： To conclude , I think this question will be even more important in the future because the lines between countries are slowly disappearing.分句型：In conclusion, I believe that this issue will probably become even more important in the future

32、 as boarders between countries become less and less clear.分句型： By way of conclusion, I believe that this issue is likely to become even more important in the future as borders between countries become increasingly blurred.Jobs and Gender.关于男性和女性是否同样擅长去做一切工作，存在着很多不同的观点。分句型： There are many different o

33、pinions about whether or not men and women are equally good at all jobs.分句型： There are various different opinions on the question of whether men and women are equally good at all jobs or not.分句型： There are a variety of different perspectives on the question of whether or not men and women are equall

34、y good at all jobs.观念更传统的人认为，有些工作适合女性做有些适合男性做，但是我认为男性女性都可 以很好的完成任何工作。分句型： Some people with more traditional views think that women should do some jobs and men should do others, but I believe that both men and women can do any job well.分句型：Some people still take the traditional view that some occupat

35、ions are better done by women and others by men, however, I personally believe that people of either sex are able to do any job effectively.分句型： While some still hold to the conservative view that certain jobs are better performed by men and others by women, it is my personal belief that people of e

36、ither gender are capable of doing any job effectively.首先我们不能把我们的想法建立在对于男性和女性的传统观点上，因为他们有的是错的。分句型： First, we should not base our opinions on traditional ideas about men and women because these ideas are often wrong.分句型： First, I feel it is a mistake to base our opinion on broad generalizations about

37、men and women because these stereotypes are often wrong.分句型： First of all , I believe it is a mistake to base our views on broad generalizations about males and females as these stereotypes are often wrong.如果一个男的想做一个通常女性去做的工作或者女性想做通常由男性完成的工作，我认为我们应该给他机会去证明自己。分句型：If a man want to do a job which is us

38、ually done by women or if a woman wants to do a mans job, I think he/she should be given the chance to show that he/she can do it.分句型：If a woman desires to pursue a career which is traditionally reserved for the opposite gender or vice versa, I believe he/she should be provided the opportunity to pr

39、ove himself capable.5.我们应该把这些不同看作我们工作中找到新的创意的机会而不是把他看作弱点。分句型：Instead of seeing these differences as weakness, I believe we should see them as chances to find new and better way to work.分句型：Instead judging these differences to be weakness, I feel we should view them as opportunities to innovate and d

40、iscover more effective and efficient ways to work.分句型： Rather than judging these differences to be weakness, I feel that we should view them as opportunities for innovation and the discovery of more effective and efficient work practices.Cigarette Smoking.我认为很重要的一点是，烟草是一种毒品。分句型： One thing that I thi

41、nk is very important is that tobacco is a drug.分句型： One thing which I believe to be vitally important is the fact that tobacco is a drug.分句型： One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that tobacco is a drug.如果他们不被禁止，医生会用一些像大麻或者吗啡这样的非法药物去治疗病人。分句型： This is especially true because doctors could use some illegal drugs, like heroin and marijuana, to treat sick people if they were not banned.分句型：This is especially so consi