小学英语作文范文合集及写作方法

AbadcoldI'mnotfeelingwelltoday.IthinkIhaveabadcold.Ihaveaheadache.Ihaveafever.Mynosehurts.Mythroatissore.Ihavetotakesomemedicineandstayinbed.Myparentswilltakemetothehospital.Whatabadcold!IhopeIcanbebettersoon.AndIwanttogotoschool.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了生病、病的病症、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复并且去上学的愿望。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数,动词别忘了第三人称单数形式。句型：要用feel加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病"的用法have+表示的疾病的单词。注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt和sore。不要只用一个单词，以防止枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。常见病句：Mynoseishurto因为be后面要加形容词，而hurt是动词，因此应使用sore；东西放在床上要用onthebed。生病，是卧床不起，应该说stayinbed。表示吃药时，通过用takesomemedicine,不用eato词汇量要控制在40〜6()之间。Tom'sholidayTomwenttoBeijingbyplaneoverhisholiday.Everydayhehadfunwithhisparents.Theywenttothenaturepark.Theysawelephants.Theywentswimming.Theyatelotsofdeliciousfood.Theyalsotookmanybeautifulpictures.Theywillcomebackhometomorrow.Theyenjoytheirholiday.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。句型：①主语+动词过去式+其他.②主语+will+动词原形+其他.注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规那么。例：eat的过去式为ate,为不规那么变化。Zoom'sweekendZoomhadabusyweekend.OnSaturdaymorning,hewashedhisclothesandwenttoapark.HedidhishomeworkandwentfishingonSaturdayafternoon.OnSundaymorning,hecleanedhisroomandvisitedhisgrandparents.HeplayedfootballandwatchedTVonSundayafternoon.Zoomwastootired.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写。句型：主语+动词过去式+其他+过去时间状语.注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。BirthdayMybirthdayisonSunday.Myparentsaregoingtohaveabirthdaypartyathome.Iinvitemyfriendstocometotheparty.Attheparty,theygivememanysmallpresents,suchascards,picturebooks,pens.Theysingthebirthdaysongtome.Mymothermakesabigcakeforme.Icutthecakeintosmallpiecesandgivethemout.wesinganddance.Wehaveagoodtimeattheparty.HappydayTodayI'mveryhappy.AfterIhavebreakfast,Igotoapark.It'sasunnyday,birdsaresinging.I'msinging,too.WhenIgettothepark,Iseesomegirlsareplayinggames.SoIjointhem.Weplayveryhappily.ThenIhavelunchwithmyfriends.Webothhaveagoodtime.Whatahappyday!LastweekendIhadahappyweekendlastweek.OnSaturdaymorning,IwatchedTVandhelpedmymotherwashclothes.Intheafternoon,Icleanedthreebedroomsinmyhouse,mine,myparents,andmybrother's.OnSunday,Iplayedfootballinthepark.ThenIwenttomygrandparents,house.Grandpaplayedthepiano.Thewholefamilywassohappy.Later,wewantedtoswim.Butitwastoocold.Thiswaslastweekend.Mike'sweekendMikeisastudent.Heismygoodfriend.Heisbusyattheweekend.HeisgoingtoreadamagazinethisSaturdaymorning.HeisgoingtothezoothisSaturdayafternoon.HeisgoingtobuyabookthisSundaymorning.HeisgoingtolearnkungfuthisSundayafternoon.HeisgoingtowatchTVthisSundayevening.MyhappyweekendIamgoingtodomanythingsandbeverybusyontheweekend.SoIdomyhomeworkonSaturdaymorning.Intheafternoon,Iamgoingtodohouseworkwithmymother.BecauseIamagoodgirl,andIamhelpfulathome.OnSundaymorning,Iamgoingtovisitmygrandparentswithmyparents.Intheafternoon,wearegoingtotheparktogether.Becausethereisakiteshow.Andmygrandparentslikesmakingkites.Ithinkwecanseemanybeautifulkitesthere.Andwearegoingtobuysomebeautifulkites,too.Thenwearegoingtoflythenewkites.That'sfun.Intheevening,wearegoingtohaveabigdinner.Wearegoingtohavefishfordinner.Becausemygrandparentslikeseatingfish.Andmygrandmacooksfishwell.Afterdinner,wearegoingtowatchTVtogether.Wearegoingtobeveryhappy.Thisismyhappyweekend.Ilikemyweekendverymuch.Whataboutyourweekend?Canyoutellme?MywinterholidayIfsJanuary.Mywinterholidayiscoming.IamgoingtoThailand.Iwillgotherebyplane.IlikethefoodinThailand.It'sspicyandtasty.Inthewinterholiday,Iamgoingtoplaybasketball.Iamgoingtodrewpictures,too.Iwillhelpmymotherdosomehousework.Iwillbeveryhappyinmywinterholiday.ThevacationItravelledtoHainanthissummerholiday.Itwassobeautifulthere.Theblueseawasaroundus.It'sverywideandverynice.Thecoconutmilkwasdelicious.Ilikeditsomuch.Ialsolikedtoswimthere.IwashappyandIswamlikeafish.Iwillalsocomehereforanothertripthenextsummerholiday,becauseitisaniceplacewithabeautifulsceneryanddeliciousfood.AvisittoBeijingThissummervacation,IwenttoBeijing.Itwasaverygreatcity!WewenttotheGreatWallfirst.Likeitsname,itwasverygreat.Wecouldseemanymountainsaroundandmanyforeigners.ThenwewenttovisitTiananmenSquare.Itwasalsofantastic.Thereweresomanypeopleonthesquare.Somewereflyingkites,andsomeweretakingphotos.WelivedinasmallhouseinBeijing.ItwasatraditionalbuildinginBeijingcalled"Four-SectionCompound”.IenjoyedmyselfalotduringthesummervacationinBeijing.Itwasagreatmemory!MywinterholidayWinterholidayiscoming.Iamsoexcited.Inthiswinterholiday,Iamgoingtotakeatripwithmyparentsbyplane.WearegoingtoBeijing.ThenIamgoingtogoice-skatingthere.Iamgoingtoseethesnow.Iwillplaywiththesnow.Iamgoingtomakeasnowmanwithmysister.ThenwearegoingtovisittheGreatWall.Atlast,wearegoingbackhomebyplane.Thatwillbefuninthewinterholiday!Ican'twait!HappyfamilyEveryonehasafamily.Ihaveafamily,too.Inameit"Happyfamily,\becauseeveryoneinmyfamilyishappy.Comeandmeetmyfamily,please!Mymotheriskind.Iloveher,andshelovesme,too.Mymotherispretty.Shelikesbeautifulclothes.Icallher"DressyMum”.Myfatherisaboss.Heistallandthin.Hehasasmallhead.Igivehimanickname“SmallHeadFather”.Iamfatandlovely.Ihaveabighead.Igivemyselfanickname“BigHeadGirl”.Istudyhard.Iamagoodstudent.Wearehappyeveryday!Hereisaphotoofmyfamily.Thesearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyfather,mymother,mybrotherandme.Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Hegoestoworkbysubway.Mymotherisateacher.Sheworksinaschoolnearmyhome.Shegoestoworkbybike.Afterwork,theylikereadingbooks.Whoisthetallboy?Heismybrother.Heisfiveyearsolderthanme.Heisasinger.He'sinBeijingnow.Hegoestherebyplane.Ilovemyfamily.【要领点评】一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?MybestfriendMybestfriendisMary.Shelivesinatallbuilding.Shelivesonthefifthfloor.Everydayshetakestheliftupanddown.Sheistwelveyearsold.Sheistallandthin.Shehasshortblackhair,twobigeyesandasmallmouth.Sheisverycute.Ilikeplayingwithher.Weareinthesameclass.Iliketoreadbooks,butshelikesplayinggames.Shelikestoeatpopcornandicecream.Ilikethem,too.Herfavouritefoodisfish.Sheloveshercat.Sheoftenplayswithher.ThecatlikesMary,too.Theyarecute.Doyouhaveabestfriend?Canyoutellmesomethingaboutyourfriend?MyEnglishteacherMissTangismyEnglishteacher.She'sverypretty.Sheistallandthin.Shehastwobigeyesandasmallmouth.Herhairislong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing,too.HerEnglishisverygood.WeoftenplaygamesinEnglishclasses.Sheisverykindtous.Weallloveher.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师“，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的单词或短语，以免写出一些错误句子。写作时要注意语意连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰规范等。AfarewellpartyIfstheendoftheschoolyear.ThestudentsinClassTherehaveafarewellparty.Theyinvitetheirparentstotheparty.Manystudentshaveperformancesattheparty.Look!ChenJieissingingsongs.ZhangPengisplayingthepiano.Sarahisplayingtheerhu.MikeisdoingChinesekungfu.WhatisMissWhitedoing?Sheisdancing.Everybodyhasalotoffun.ButLiuYunisn'there.Shehasacold.Sheisathome.Theclassmatesaregoingtovisitherafterparty.Theypreparemanygiftsforher.Andtheywilltakeapicturetogether.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。时态：这篇习作可采用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时三种时态来写。句型：①一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他.②现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他.③一般将来时：主语+begoingto/will+动词原形+其他.注意：由于本文章中所涉及的时态比拟多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要MyfamilyHi,everyone!I'mCindy.IliveinHainan.Tm13yearsold.Iamtallandthin.Now,letmetellyousomethingaboutmyfamily.Therearesevenmembersinmyfamily.Theyaremygrandparents,myparents,mysister,mybrotherandme.Mygrandparentslikereadingnewspapers.Theyareveryold.Theyarealwayshappy.Myfatherisabusinessman.Heworkshard.He'sverytallbutfat.Helikessleeping.He'skind.Mymotherisahousewife.Shelooksyoung.She'sstrictwithus.Mysisterisauniversitystudent.Shestudieshard.MybrotherisinGradeFour.Heisonly10yearsold.Helikesplayingcomputergames.He'sanaughtyboy.Iloveeachpersoninmyfamily.Ilovemysweetwarmhome.Myfather'sDayMyfatherisverybusy.Everydayhegoestoworkbysubway.Heteachesmathsatschool.Hismathsisverygood!Intheafternoon,heeatslunchatschool.Afterlunch,hereadsnewspapers.Thenhegoeshomeat5:3().Heeatsdinner.Thenhetakesabathintheevening.HewatchesTVatthelivingroom.AfterwatchingTV,hegoestobedat10:00.Myfatherworkshard.Ilikemyfatherverymuch!Whoisyourfavoriteperson?Myfavoritepersonismymother.Sheisbeautiful.Sheis38yearsold.Sheistallandthin.Shehasbigeyesandlonghair.Shelikescooking.Shecooksgoodmealsforuseveryday.Andshealwaysdoesallthehousework.Shelooksaftermyfatherandme.Ilovemymotherverymuch.Hello,mynameisSteven.Ihavemanygoodteachers,butmyfavouriteteacherisMissLi.Sheisaverygoodteacher.Sheisveryyoung,butherEnglishisverygood.SheteachesusEnglisheveryday.Herclasshassomuchfun.Shesingssongsandplaysgameswithus.Wearesohappy.AndwelearnEnglishwell.OurEnglishareverygood.SoIlikeherverymuch.Shelikesreadingbooksandplayingsports.Afterclass,MissLioftenplayssportswithus.Weareveryhappy.Weallloveherverymuch.Thisismyfavouriteteacher.Sheisagoodteacher.IlikemyEnglishteacherverymuch.Whataboutyou?Doyouhaveagoodteacher,too?I'vegotalovelyfriendatschool.HisnameisJack.Jackis12yearsoldnow.I'm11.He'solderthanme.He's150cmtall.Tm148cm.He'stallerandstronger.He's43kgandI'm41kg.He'sheavier.We'vegotroundfacesandshorthair.Butmyeyesarebigger.Ourfavouritecolouriswhite.Welikesummerbest.Webothlikesports,too.OnSaturdays,weplaytabletennis.OnSundays,weplaybasketball.He'sgoodatbasketball.ButIdobetterattabletennis.Welaughandplaytogether.Howhappyweare!【要领点评】写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我“。既然写作范围是两个人物,就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只表达我。这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比拟，通过比拟突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。句型：因为涉及两个人的比拟，不要忘记使用比拟级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B注意：在列举两个人的“外貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比拟。不要一味指出不同，还要列举相同之处。两人能成为朋友，一定有共同语言和喜好，共性不容忽视。在表达喜好时,不同的句型应交叉运用，防止枯燥的重复。例"Ourfavouritecolouris…"Welike...best”,"Webothlike…，too."，为突出不同时间做不同运动，用“OnSaturdays…”，"OnSundays…”，形成鲜明比照。常使用并列连词and和转折连词but,使文章读起来更流畅。结尾以Howhappyweare!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐！Name：BillFavoritesports:tennis,football,basketballClothes:blackT-shirt,bluepantsAge:13Phonenumber:5352375MyfriendIhaveagoodfriend.Weareinthesameclass.HisnameisBill.Heis13.Helikessportsverymuch.Thesesportsaretennis,footballandbasketball.Heplaystennistwiceaweek.Heplaysfootballtwiceaweek.Heplaysbasketballonceaweek.HeoftenlikestowearblackT-shirtandbluepants.Hisphonenumberis5352375.Everyonelikeshim.Ihavetwogoodfriends.They'reZhangPingandJim.ZhangPingis12.Jimisthreeyearsolderthanher.He's15.JimisheavierthanZhangPing.He's60kilograms.Jimistallerthanher.He's162cm.ZhangPingisaChinesegirl.ShelivesinAnhui.JimisaCanadianboy.HelivesinGuangzhounow.ZhangPinglikesred.Herfavoritesportisbadminton.Jimlikesblue.Hisfavoritesportisswimming.Ilikethemverymuch.MygoodfriendZhangYingismygoodfriend.She'sinClass1,Grade4inaprimaryschool.She'samodelstudent.She'scleverandshe'shelpful,too.Sheoftenhelpsteachersandyoungstudentsatschool.SheisgoodatChinese,maths,English,artsmusicandsoon.Shehasalotofhobbies.Shelikespaintingandsinging.Andshelikeslisteningtomusic,havingpicnicswithherparents.Oh,shelikesfishing,too.Butshedoesn'tlikeplayingbasketball,football,tabletennisorvolleyball.ZhangYingisthebestfriendofmine.Ilikeplayingwithher.Wealwaysworktogetherandhelpeachother.MymotherMynameisJessie.Iamtwelveyearsold.Ilovemymother.Shehasblackhairandtwobigeyes.Sheisaverybeautifulwoman.Mymotherworksinahotel.Sheisamanager.Shelikesfishandvegetables,butshedoesn'tlikemeatandchicken.Mymothercancook,singandread,butshecan'tdance.Shecancookandsingverywell.Thisismymother!用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数形式。MynewteacherMynewteacherisascienceteacher.He'sverystrong.Hehasabigmouth,twobigears,twobigeyesandanottoobigandnottoosmallnose.Heoftenwearsablacknewshirtandbrownpantswithtwobigshoes.Myscienceteacherisverykind.Andheisverysmart.Todaywehaveascienceclass.Weareveryhappy.Becauseheissofunny.Whoishe?He'saMrZhou.Ihaveabusyfatherandakindmother.Myfatherisabusinessman.Heis42yearsold.Heisshort.Helikesreadingnewspapersaftermeals.HealwayswatchesTVintheevening.Hegoestoworkbycar.Hehasgotaniceblackcar.Heoftenplaysgolfwithhisfriendsontheweekend.Hedoesnotofteneatdinnerwithus.Mymotherisahousewife.Shedoesn'twork.Shestaysathome.Sheisbeautiful.Shehaslonghair.Shedoeshouseworkinthemorning.Sheoftengoesshoppingintheafternoon.Sheiskind,butsheisstrictwithme.Shelikesreading.ShewatchesTVatnight,too.Ilovemyparents.Andtheyloveme,too.AlibraryAlibraryusedtobeonlyabuildingwithalotofbooksandaveryquietplacetome.Ihadneverwantedtoenteratraditionallibrary,becauseitwasaboringplaceforachild.SinceIbecameahighschoolstudent,Ihavemorehomeworkthatrequiresmetofindthelatestinformationonatopicorsomegoodideas.SoIgotintothehabitofgoingtothelibrary,andIcan'ttellyouhowwonderfulitis!TherearesomanyinterestingbooksI'veneverread,includingnovelsandbooksaboutscienceandcomputers.Mostimportantofall,thereareevenalotoffamousclassicfilms,whichareverypopular.NowIalsohavesomethingelsetodowhenI'minalibrary:studying.Studyingtogetherwithalotofpeopleisagoodexperience.NowI'mneverboredwhenVminalibrary.Doyouwanttoseehowmuchfunitis?Comewithmetoalibrarytoday!Don'tbeagainstthetrafficrules!IgotoschoolfromMondaytoFriday.Igotoschoolbybikeat7:30inthemorning.Imustcrosstwobusyroads.Ifthetrafficlightisredoryellow,IknowIcan'tcrosstheroad,soIwait.Ifthelightturnsgreen,Iknowitmeans"Go”,andthenIwalkacrosstheroad.Ialwaysrideontherightsideoftheroad.Iamneveragainstthetrafficrules.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规那么”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，表达自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。小朋友们在写作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。FourseasonsTherearefourseasonsinayear.Theyarespring,summer,autumnandwinter.Ilikespring.Itiswarm.Itoftenrains.Icanplanttreesandflowersinspring.Thespringisgreen.Summerisveryhot.Icanswimintheriver.Fallisagoodseason.Itisnice.Icanflykitesinfall.Icaneatmanyapplestoo.Winteriscold.IwishIcanplayinthesnowandmakeasnowmaninBeijingsomeday.BecauseitdoesnotsnowinHainan.Ilovealltheseasons,becausetheyareallnice.HowtobeamodelstudentIwanttobeamodelstudent.WhatshallIdo?Ishouldbepolite.Ishouldstudyhard.Ishouldcarefulandhelpful.Ishouldwalkinthecorridors.Ishouldthrowrubbishinthebin.Ishouldbequietinthelibrary.Ishouldn'twalkandrunonthegrass.Ishouldn'tthrowrubbishonthefloor.1shouldn'truninthecorridors.1shouldn'tfight.Ishouldn'tbenoisyinthelibrary.HowtogettothesciencemuseumWearegoingtothesciencemuseumtomorrow.Thesciencemuseumisnexttothehospital.It'snearourschool.Sowecangothereonfoot.First,gostraightfromourschool.Next,turnleftatthepostofficeandwalkforfiveminutes.Thenturnrightatthebookstore.Wecanfindthehospitalontheright.Walkstraight,andwe'llseethesciencemuseum.IcanhelpdohouseworkIamagirl.MynameisLiLing.TminClassThree,GradeFive.Tmhelpfulathome.Icanwatertheflowers,emptythetrashandsweepthefloor.Aftermeals,Icanhelpmymotherdothedishes.OnSunday,Icanwashtheclothes.Whataboutyou?Areyouhelpful,too?【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要表达自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，内容很详细。小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会防止在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。InthekitchenThisisthekitchenofmyfamily.It'sbigandnice.Look!Mymotheriscookinginit.Thisisamicrowaveandthatisastove.Thereisabigtablehere.Therearemanythingsonit.Whatarethese?Theylookyummy!Oh,they'restrawberries.Andwhatarethose?Theyaregrapes.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“在厨房里”，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈在做饭，非常真实。小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子,描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。请描写一下你的房间，注意要使用“therebe”句型。MybedroomIhaveasmallbutnicebedroom.Thereisabeautifulbedandtwosmallchairs.Ialsohaveabigandtallcloset,becauseIhavemanyclothes.Thereisabigdesknexttothewindow.Ialwaysdomyhomeworkatthedesk.Thereisafamilyphotoonthewall.Wetookthisphotothissummerholiday.Ilikemybedroom.IntheparkItissunnytoday.Mymother,myfatherandIaregoingtothepark.Weliketheparkverymuch.Itisverybigandbeautiful.Therearemanytreesandflowersinit.Manypeopleliketogothere.Look!Anoldmanissittingonthechair.Heisreadingabookcarefully.Twoboysarejumpingontheground.Theirmothersaretalkingwitheachother.Twobirdsareflyinginthesky.Theducksareswimmingontheriver.Theyareveryhappy.Whatisthecatdoing?Oh,itisrunningafteramouse.It'sabadmouse.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是用现在进行时描绘出公园里的人和动物们正在进行的活动，还运用了一般现在时表达了公园美丽的景色。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时和现在进行时两种时态。句型：①一般现在时：主语+谓语+其他.②现在进行时：(1)What+be(201小国©+主语+动词”叫+其他?(2)主语+be(am,is,are)+动词-ing+其他.MybirthdayYesterdaywasSeptember20th.Itwasmybirthday.Ihadabirthdayparty.Iatetoomuch.Mikebroughtsomefruit.Jennybroughtsomecandy.Marybroughtalotofcookies.Mymommadeabirthdaycakeforme.Mydadboughtatoycarforme.Iwasveryhappy.Atthepartywesanganddanced.Wehadagoodtime.Myclassroomisniceandbig.Therearefortydesksandchairsintheclassroom.Therearetwoblackboardsonthewalls.Andtherearetwopictures,too.Myclassroomhaselevenlightsandtwelvefans.Whatcolourarethefans?Theyareblue.Atthecomer,thereisashelf.Manybooksareintheshelf.Ilikethebooksverymuch.TodayisSunday.Itookoutthenicedollagain.Twoyearsago,mymotherboughtherformeonmybirthday.Itisagirl.Iliketocallher"Yuanyuan"，becauseshehasaroundface,aroundheadandroundeyes.Hernoseandmouthareroundtoo.Yuanyuaniswearingaredandwhitedress,aredhatandredshoes.Thereisalongtailbehindherback.1canseeasmileonherfacewhenIcomebackhome.Howlovelysheis!YuanYuanandIaregoodfriends.Shelookslikemylittlesister.Iusuallyplaygameswithher.SheoftenlistenstomewhenItellherastory.Igotobedwithher.IthinkIcan'tsleepwithouther.Ilikeyuanyanverymuch.Ithinkshelikesme,too!Mypetisatoybear.HisnameisSmallWhite.Heiswhite.Hehasblueeyesandblueears.Hishandsandfeetareblue,too.Heisnaughty.Helikestomakefunofme.Helikesreading.WhenIamunhappy,heaccompaniesme.Heismygoodfriend.Oneday,mymotherboughttwolittlerabbitsfbrme.Tmveryhappy.Fromthaton,thetwolittlerabbitsbecamemygoodfriends.Theyhavetwolittleears,redeyeswithwhiteandfatbody.They'rebeautiful.Everyday,theyplaywitheachotherhappily.Oneday,Icouldn'tfindthem.Iaskedmymother,"Wherearethey?^^Mymothertoldmethatshedidn'tknow.Atlast,Ifoundtheminthegrass.Theywereverydirty.Iwasangry,butwhenIlookedattheirlovelyfaces,Iwashappyagain.Ilovemylittlerabbits,andtheyloveme.Theyaremygoodfriendsforever.Ihavemyownroom.Itisbigandnice.Thereisabed,adeskandashelf.Thedollisonthebed.Thelampisonthedesk.Thebooksareontheshelf.Thetrashbinisbehindthedoor.Theclothesareinthecloset.Thereisaairconditioneroverthecloset.Look!Therearemanypicturesonthewall.Ilovemyroomverymuch.Myschoolisverybeautiful.ItisNo.lPrimarySchool.Therearethreetallbuildingsinourschool.Theyallhavefivefloors.Intheteachingbuilding,thegymisonthefirstfloor.Thelibraryisonthesecondfloor.Thescienceroomsareonthethirdfloor.Thecomputerroomsareonthethirdfloorandthefourthfloor.Themusicroomsareonthethirdfloorandthefourthfloor.Myclassroomisonthefifthfloor.IaminClass9,Grade6.Therearefivegardensinourschool.Inthegardenstherearemanybeautifulflowers,grassandtrees.Thereisabigplaygroundinmyschool.Ilikemyschool,becausemyschoolisverybeautiful!Myteacher'shouseMyEnglishteacherhasabighouse.Ithasalivingroom,abigdiningroom,twobedrooms,astudy,twobathroomsandabigkitchen.Inthelivingroom,thereisabigpicture,fourbrownsofas,whitefansandbluewalls.TheTVsetisbig.ThereisabigChineseknotonthewall.Therearelanternsbelowthelights.Ilikethem.ThisismyEnglishteacher'shouse.Myvillageisverybeautiful.Therearemanyhousesinthevillage.Nearthevillage,thereisaforest.Asmallriverisinfrontofthevillage.Thewaterinitisveryclean.Wecanseesomefishintheriver.Neartheriver,youcanseeamountain.Someflowersandgrassareonthemountain.Ilikemyvillage.Welcometomyvillage!【要领点评】本文以“我的村庄''为题描述了自己家乡的风景。介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了这篇作文后确实感觉到“我的村庄”的美丽。小朋友们在写作时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行表达。PlantingtreesIt'sspring.It'stimetoplanttrees.Iwanttoplantatreeinourgarden.DadandMumareveryhappy.Theylikegreen.Dadhelpsmeplantthetree.First,wedigthesoil.ThenIputalittletreeintothesoil.NextIwaterit.IamsoexcitedandIwaitforthetreetogrow.Twoweekslater,mytreehassomelittleleaves.1wateriteveryday.Nowithaslotsofleaves.Itgrowsfast.Weshouldplantmoretrees.Theymakeourworldbeautiful.【要领点评】小作者写了一次植树的经历，但他并没有单纯拘泥于植树的过程。既有过程，也有感情，能使文章打动读者，给人以启发。作文的最后一句非常好，胜似千言万语。我们可以学习一下这种写法。既描述过程，又适时提自己的看法或想法的写法，在作文中叫做“夹叙夹议”，描述过程为了提出一种思想,提出看法或想法使原本平实的描述有了意义。我们在以后的写作中也可以试一试。Let'shaveanicedayIt'sSundaytomorrow.I'mgoingtothebookstorewithmyfriendstomorrowmorning.Wearegoingtolookforsomegoodbooks.Wealllikereadingbooks.Wearegoingtoeatlunchattherestaurant.Ilikechicken,beefandvegetables.Afterlunch,wearegoingtotheSummerPalacebybus.Wearegoingtoplayinit.Maybewearegoingtorowaboatonthelake.Wow,thatwillberelaxing.Wearecomingbackat5p.m.【要领点评】怎样才称得上是“美好的一天“？有两点不能忘记，一是安排得充实，二是安排得有意义。这两点小作者无疑都想到了，上午去书店看书、买书，中午在饭店吃饭，下午去颐和园玩耍、划船，丰富多彩！文章以时间为线索，表达清楚，文笔也很优美。小朋友们在写这种叙事的文章时，要尽量给读者交代好时间、地点、人物和活动等，使文章有血有肉。要确定好是写过去发生的事情,还是现在正在做的事情，或计划、打算要做的事情，以选择适当的句型。如果是写将来的事情，那么就要注意在表述时多用“begoingto+动词原形”这种句型。还有一点也很重要，那就是故事的线索要交代好，让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然。SpringrainSpringcomes.It'sgettingwarmerandwarmer.Everythingisdry,trees,fieldsandeventheair.Justthen,itrains.It'sassoftassilk.Itwashesthedirtyoftheearthandwaterstheplantsandthefields.Italsowaterspeople'stears.Farmersstandinthespringrainandsmile.Springrainisasdearasoil.Theyseemtoseetheharvesttimeinautumn.Springrainbringswatertotheair.Italsobringshopetopeople.ThecolourofautumnAutumniscoming.Itgetscoolerandcooler.Theskyisblueandthecloudsarewhite.Youwouldsayautumnisblueandwhite.Look!Birdsareflyingfromthenorthtothesouth.Theleavesareyellow.Somearehangingonthetrees,someareontheground,andsomearedancinginthewind.Someonewouldsayautumnisyellow.Therearesomanyfruitinautumn,pears,peaches,mangoes,orangesandsoon.They'refreshandhealthy.Oh!Isee.Autumnisaharvestseason.Autumniscolourful.Whatabeautifulseason!ThefunpictureLetmesaysomethingaboutthepicture.Therearetwotalltreesinthepicture.Underthetree,thereisalongchair.Andthereisanoldmanreadingaboutswimming.Neartheoldman,thereisaboypainting.Ithinkhelovespaintingverymuch.Nexttotheboy,therearetwoboysplayingfootball.Theyarehappy.Butthefootballisintheriver.Neartheriver,therearethreechildrenfishing.Theygofishingabouttwiceaweekandtheyalwaysgotothepark.Theylikefishing.Intheriver,thereisclearwaterandsomefishswimminginit.Theskyisclear,thesunisshiningbrightly,andtheweatheriswarm.Therearetwobirdsflyinginthesky,theyarehappy.Wow,thatisafunpicture!Dearfriends,canyoudrawthepicture?Whatisfamily?Everybodyhashisownfamily.Whatisfamily?Idon'tthinkeveryonereallyknows.Therearesixlettersintheword“familyIthink"F"means“角ther”,"A"means"and”,"M"means“mother",'T'means'T',"L"means"love”and"Y"means"you”.So"family“istheshortformof"Fatherandmother,Iloveyou."Don'tyouthinkso?Fatherandmotherloveus,andwelovefatherandmother.That'sahappyfamily.HobbiesHi,IamAmy.Iamastudent.Ilikeplayingfootballandreadingbooks.Ialsolikelisteni