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第第8页共7页读后续写、考纲解读提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、 所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。二、原题分析①原文材料350词以内,所续写文章 150词左右。②原文多是情节丰富的记叙文,偶有少量的议论文。③原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语,所续写短文应使用 5W±o④续写部分分为两段,每段开头语已经给出。♦♦⑤续写部分分为两大类别:1)半开放性质。必须依据文章的 语境逻辑推理续写。2)完全开放性质。可以依据文章的思路,自己发挥。三、注意事项①词数要求。②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。⑤上下文的连贯性。四、评分原则①本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。②评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。③词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。④评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。⑥如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。续写导练(一)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwaselevenyearsold,Ihadabigaccident.IgetscaredevennowwhenIthinkaboutthattime.Iwentskatingnearmyhouse.Thereweremanypeople,andIsawsomeofthemfallingontheice.Itwasmyfirsttimetogoiceskating,soIwasnervous.Iwaswonderinghowtoskate.Iwentwithafriendwhowasveryskillful.Hespentsometimeteachingmehowtoskate,butIdidn 'tlmuch.Heleftmeandskatedallaround.Assoonasheleft,Ifelldown.Ienviedtheotherpeoplebecausethey
couldskatewell.IwasboredbecauseIkeptfallingsoItookoffmyskatesandjustwalkedaroundontheiceinmyshoes.Itwascoldandmyhandswerefrozen.Suddenly,Isteppedonsomethingthatwasnothard.Whatwasit?Itwasaweakplaceintheice.WhenIsteppedthere,Isankundertheice.IthoughtthatIwasgoingtodie,butIdidmybesttograbsomethingtogetoutfromundertheice.Itriedtograbtheedgeoftheice,butitwasverydifficultforaneleven-year-old.Itseemedlikeaverylongtime,likeayear.Then,fortunately,someonehelpedme.Hegrabbedmyarmsandpulledmeup.So,IlivedandI 'mstillalivetoday.Ithankedhim.Atthattime,myfriendcameback.Iwasannoyedathimbecausehewassupposedtotakecareofme,buthedidn't.alslembarrassed.WhenItookataxihome,thetaxidriverwassurprisedandaskedwhathadhappened.Ididn'twanttosayanythingbecauseIwastiredscared.Evennow,wheneverthinkaboutthattime,Ifeeluncomfortable.Idon 'twangaongevenannwa一、/注息:.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右;.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:ItwaslongbeforeIwentskatingonceagain,_ _Paragraph2:However,eversincethenIhaven'tfoundanytimetoHowever,eversincethenIhaven'tfoundanytimeto__skating续写导练(二)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。MrBrownlivedinahouselessthantwomilesawayfromhisoffice.Hewasthereforeabletodrivehomeeverydayforlunch.Everytimehedroveinthemiddleoftheday,hefoundcarswereparkedintheroadoutsidehishouse,andtherewasnoroomforhisowncar.Hehadtodrivetwoblocksfartherbeforehecouldfindaplacetopark.Thenhehadtowalkhome.Thismadehimveryangry.HehadputupaboardwhichreadNoParking!”inthegardenfacingtheroad,butnobodyseemedtopayattentiontoit.Peopleonlyobeyedapolicenotice,butnotaprivateone.Therewerenoparkedcarswheretherewasablueboardwithwhitelettersonit:PoliceNotice—NoParking!MrsBrownsuggestedthatheshouldstealapolicenotice.Buthedarednot,beingafraidofgoingtoprison.Shethensuggestedthathemakeonejustlikeapolicenotice.Hesaidhewasnotapolicemanandcouldn'tusethewordpolice”.Hedecidedthathemustfindawayoutandstartedthinkinghard.Forseveraldays,thesmellofpaintfilledthehouse.Onenightheshowedhislifeanewnoticeboard.Itwaspaintedinwhitelettersonablueboard:PoliteNotice—NoParking!“Oh,MrsBrownsaid,butyoutoldmeyouweren'tgoingtousethewordpolice'.That'sexactlylikeapolicenotice.”isit?”heasked.Lookagain.”Shebegantolaugh,Youarereallyratherclever.”一、/注息:.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:WhydidMrsBrownsayherhusbandwasreallyratherclever?================^_Paragraph2:IfthepolicediscoveredthattheBrownswereusingapolicenotice,续写导练(三)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Mymotherusedtoaskmewhatthemostimportantpartofthebodyis.ThroughtheyearsIwouldtakeaguessatwhatIthoughtwasthecorrectanswer.WhenIwasyounger,Ithoughtsoundwasveryimportanttousashumans,soIsaid,Myears,Mommy.”Shesaid,"No.Manypeoplearedeaf.Bhueyaredoingwellintheirlife.YoukeepthinkingaboutitandIwillaskyouagainsoon.”Severalyearspassedbeforesheaskedmeagain.Sincemakingmyfirstattempt,Ihadcontemplated(深思)thecorrectanswer.SothistimeItoldher,“Mommy,sightisveryimportanttoeverybody,soitmustbeoureyes.Shelookedatmeandtoldme, leYiruinigefast,buttheanswerisnotcorrectbecausetherearemanypeoplewhoareblind.”Overtheyearsmymotheraskedmeacouplemoretimesandalwaysheranswerwas:"Nobutyouaregettingsmartereveryyear,mychild. ”Thenlastyear,mygrandpadied.Everybodywashurt.Everybodywascrying.MyMomlookedatmewhenitwasourturntosayourfinalgoodbyetograndpa.Sheaskedme,“Doyouknowthemostimpbrtaytpartyet,mydear?"Iwassurprisedwhensheaskedmethisonthisoccasion.Ialwaysthoughtthiswasagamebetweenherandme.Shesawtheconfusiononmyfaceandtoldme,“Thisquestionisveryimportant.Howyouansweritshowswhetheryouhavelearnedaboutlife.Foreverybodypartyougavemeinthepast,IhavetoldyouwerewrongandIhavegivenyouareasonwhy.Buttodayisthedayyouwillknowtheanswer.”Ilookpuzzled.Allyourpreviousanswers-ears,eyes,hands,heart...Theyareallveryimportanttoyourself.ButthistimeIneedyoutothinkofsomethingthatisimportanttoothers.”一、/注息:.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右;.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“Mydear,themostimportantbodypart,“shesaid,_____________________________________________Paragraph2:Mom,Iunderstand.Andyoucancryonmyshouldertoo.”续写导练(四)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。An80-year-oldmanwassittingonthesofainhishousealongwithhis45-year-oldhighlyeducatedson.Suddenlyacrow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)ontheirwindow.Thefatheraskedhisson,Whatisthis?”Thesonreplied,Itisacrow.”Afterafewminutes,thefatheraskedhissonforthesecondtime , “Whatisthis?Thesonsaid, “Father,Ihavejustnowtoldyou,it'sacrowAfteralittlewhile,theoldfatheragainaskedhissonforthethirdtime, “Whatisthis?"Atthistimesomeexpressionofirritation(恼怒)wasfeltintheson'stonewhenhesaidtohisfatherwitharebuff(生硬回绝)."It'sacrow,acrowlittlewhilelater,thefatheragainaskedhissonthefourthtime,Whatisthis?”Thistime,thesonshoutedathisfather,Whydoyoukeepaskingmethesamequestionagainandagain,althoughIhavetoldyousomanytimes'ITISACROW.Areyounotabletounderstandthis?"Alittlelaterthefatherwenttohisroomandcamebackwithanoldtattered(发皱的)diary,whichhehadmaintainedsincehissonwasborn.Onopeningapage,heaskedhissontoreadthatpage.Whenthesonreadit,thefollowingwordswerewritteninthediary:“Todaymylittlesonagedthreewassittingwithmeonthesofa,whenacrowwassittingonthewindow.Mysonaskedme23timeswhatitwas,andIrepliedtohimall23timesthatitwasacrow.Ihuggedhimlovinglyeachtimeheaskedmethesamequestion.IdidnotatallfeelirritatedbutIratherfeltaffectionformyinnocentson.一、/注息:.所续写短文的词数应为 150左右;.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Afterreadingthediary, Paragraph2:Feelingashamed,thesongotdownonhiskneesbeforehisfather.续写导练(五)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Iwastouchedthroughexperiences,memories,books,stories,animals,angels,andmostofallotherpeople.Peoplehavemovedmeandmolded(对 影响重大)mewithmomentsofloveandexamplesofkindness.OnetimeonthedaybeforeChristmasmanyyearsagowhenIwasaminimumwagemill(工厂)worker,Ifoundmyselfwithverylittlemoneyandverylittletimetobuymysmallchildrenafewsimpletoys.IknewthattheywouldhavetobecheaponesandIhopedmychildrenwouldlikethem.Ihated_ooi_havingenoughtogivethemmore.Ihatedbeingpoor.AndIhatedfeelingbadatChristmasratherthanhappy.Ipulledintoastoreparkinglotandcountedmymoneyagain.Itwasn'tmuchbutmaybeIcouldgetsomethingsmallwithit.AsIwasgettingoutofthecarInoticedtheSalvationArmy(救世军)bellringerattheentrance.IfeltbadagainbecauseIdidn'tfeelIcouldspareanythingtogivehim.Istartedwalkingtowardstheentrancewhentw
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