2023届高考英语一轮复习专项突破短文改错一诊专项训练

高三一轮复习短文改错一诊专项训练1.真题多维细目表主题考点卷名体裁主题语境主题语境内容动词名词、数词连词形容词副词代词冠词介词2022全国乙说明文人与自我骑车的好处411102012021说明文人与自我做家务的好处511201002020课标全国I记叙文人与自我家庭生活412101102019记叙文人与自我学校生活121131102018记叙文人与社会家乡变化21112111小计1666656322020课标全国n记叙文人与自我乐于学习112112022019记叙文人与自我梦想职业121320012018记叙文人与自我家庭生活42100111小计654433142022全国甲记叙文人与自我家庭生活401122002021记叙文人与自我学校生活4110120120202019课标全国出记叙文人与自我生活方式41110210记叙文人与自我个人梦想410102112018记叙文人与自我学校生活41211110小计204544932I.命题规律：.文章体裁以记叙文为主；.试题设错比例通常为：加词1个，删词1个，改正8个;.考频由高到低为：v.zn./conj.,adj.,adv.,prep.,art.;IL备考策略：.掌握命题规律，熟悉短文改错解题步骤、解题原则及解题思路；1）解题步骤：通读全文，掌握大意；上贯下联，逐句改错；对照考点，推敲难点；代人答案，复读全文。2）解题原则：①规范性原则:按照规定的符号改错。②四不改原则:词序不改;大小写不改;标点符号不改;单词拼写不改。③五改动原则:忠实原文;一对一原则;改动最少原则;实词以改变形式为主;虚词以添加或删除为主。2）解题思路：①词法测试；②句法测试；③篇章测试。.日常学习中要：①多归纳、多总结，且规范答题格式；②熟记“十字口诀”；动名形副冠代介连+逻辑和数。.一诊短文改错再现：（成都七中高2023届高三一模）DuringashowatmyJuniorhighschool,manyotherstudentchosetoplayamusicalinstrumentortellajoke,butIdecidedsingmyfavoritesong.Ihadpracticedthesongmanytimesandcouldsingitperfectly.However,thisdaydoesn'tgoasIhadplanned.Whenmynamewascalled,Iwalkedonthestage.Suddenly,300peoplewerewatchingus.Iwasverynervousthatmyhandswereshaking.Thenthemusiccameon.Icouldn'trememberofthefirstpartofthesonganddidn'tsingitatall.Tomysurprising,insteadoflaughatme,peopletriedtocheermeon.Ibecamerelaxingandsangtherestperfectly.Itwasreallyaunforgettableexperience.Keys；student-*^students2.sing前力口to3.doesn'tfdidn't4.usfme5.veryfso6.去掉of7.surprising-*^surprise8.laugh-^laughing9.relaxing-*relaxed10.a-*an【解析】【分析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲述作者初中时一次难忘的演出。【详解】第一处：考查名词的数。句意：在我初中的一次演出中，许多同学选择演奏乐器或讲笑话，但我决定唱我最喜欢的歌曲。student为可数名词，根据前面的manyother修饰可知用复数形式。故将student改为studentso第二处：考查短语。句意：在我初中的一次演出中，许多同学选择演奏乐器或讲笑话，但我决定唱我最喜欢的歌曲。decidetodosth.决定做某事。故在sing前加to。第三处：考查时态。句意：然而，这一天并没有像我计划的那样进行。根据全文时态可知，陈述过去事情,用一般过去时态。故将doesnt改为didnt。第四处：考查代词。句意：当叫到我的名字时，我走上了舞台。突然，300个人都在看着我。根据前后逻辑和句意可知，这里指下面的观众看着“我”。故将us改为me。第五处：考查固定句式。句意：我紧张得双手发抖。so…that…如此……以至于……。故将very改为so。第六处：考查动词。句意：我不记得这首歌的第一部分，所以根本就没唱。动词remember为及物动词，后面直接接宾语。故去掉of。第七处：考查固定短语。句意：使我吃惊的是，人们不但没有嘲笑我，反而设法鼓励我。toone's+抽象名词形式。toone'ssurprise令某人吃惊的是。故将surprising改为surprise。第八处：考查非谓语动词。句意：使我吃惊的是，人们不但没有嘲笑我，反而设法鼓励我。insteadof而不是,介词of接动名词形式。故将laugh改为laughing。第九处：考查形容词。句意：我放松下来，把剩下的部分唱得很完美。主语是人，此处表示人的感受，需用-ed结尾的形容词。故将relaxing改为relaxedo第十处：考查冠词。句意：那真是一次难忘的经历。形容词unforgettable发音为元音音素开头，所以用不定冠词an。故将a改为an。（成都七中高2022届高三一诊）Howareyoudoing,myfriends?Thetwoweeksexchangeactivityhascometoanend.However,lookbackonthepastdays,wehavegainedalotindeed.InthepasttwoweekswehadcommunicatedwitheachotherfacetofaceinEnglish.Inthisway,wehavenotonlyimprovedouroralEnglish,andyouhavealsoknownmoreaboutourcultureandtradition.What*smore,abridgeoffriendshiphasestablishedbetweenus.Besides,noonewillforgetthefarewellpartythatweenjoyedthedelicioustraditionalfoodofourcountryandyouramazingsongsanddances.Formanyofus.thetimewespenttogetherisveryunforgettablethatIthinkIwillvaluethemforever.Ihopewecanallkeepmakingaprogressinstudies.Inthemeanwhile,Idohopetoseeyouagainatthenearfuture.短文改错：1.weeks一weeks*2.look-looking3,had-have4.and---but.在established前力口been.that-where7.very-so8.them-it9.删去progress前的alO.at-in（成都七中高2021届高三一诊）Welcometomyschool!Whenyouarrive,therewillbeapartyforyouholdingbymyclassmates.YoumayattendtoEnglishclassestofeeladifferentlylearningstyle.Afterthat,youcangotoyourhostfamilythatyoucanexperiencetheChinesewayoflife.Youcanhavemealstogetherchattinganythingthatinterestsus.Thehostfamilywillalsoshowyouaroundsomefamousscenicspot.Youcanseepicturesandstatuesofpandaseverywherebecauseourcitywashometopandas.Therearemanykindsofsouvenirstochoosefrom.Soisn'titthegoodideatobuysomeforyourfriends?Writetomeunlessyouhaveanyquestionsabouttheschedule.短文改错：1.holding-held2.去掉to3.differently—>different4.that—>where.在chatting后力口about.us一you7.spot—spots8.was一is9.the—>a10.unless一if（成都石室中学高2022届高三一诊）Itisthecommonphenomenonnowadaystherearesomepersonsdisobeyingtrafficrulesontheroad.What'sworse,manyapersonalwayslitterhereandthereinthestreets,thatisofourgreatconcern.Ihavesomespecificideastosharewhenitcomestohandletheseproblems.IwillobservetrafficruleswheneverI'monmywaytoschool.Firstandforemost,neverwillIcrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnedgreen.Secondly,Twillalwaysusethezebracrossing.Thirdly,Iwillneverthrowrubbishandspitontheroad.Equallyimportant,it'snecessarytoeveryonetoincreaseawarenessofsafetravel.Asthesayinggoes,“Manyhandsmakelightwork.”Therefore,lefsjoinhandtoobeytrafficrules,whichwillmatteralot.短文改错：ItisthecommonphenomenonnowadaysAtherearesomepersonsdisobeyingtrafficrulesonathattheroad.What'sworse,manyapersonalwayslitterhereandthereinthestreets,thatisoflitterswhichourgreatconcern.Ihavesomespecificideastosharewhenitcomestohandlethesehandlingproblems.IwillobservetrafficruleswheneverI'monmywaytoschool.Firstandforemost,neverwillIcrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnedgreen.Secondly,Iwillalwaysturnsusethezebracrossing.Thirdly,Iwillneverthrowrubbishandspitontheroad.Equallyorimportant,it'snecessaryofeveryonetoincreaseawarenessofsafetravel.Asthesayinggoes,"ManyImportantlyforhandsmakelightwork."Therefore,let'sjoinhandtoobeytrafficrules,whichwillmatteralot.handsthe改成a。“acommonphenomenon”表示一种普遍的现象。nowadays后加thato此处考查主语从句的引导词that。litter改成litters。manya接名词单数谓语动词用三人称单数。that改成which,此处是非限定性定语从句。handle改成handling,前面to是介词。turned改成turns,此处应该用一般现在时态。and改成or,否定句中用or。important改成importantly,副词做状语。of改成for,固定搭配：it'snecessaryforsb.todosth.ohand改成hands,此处指我们携手。（绵阳中学高2020届高三一诊）Itwasfineandtheskywasclearblue.Iwantedtogosomewhereexcitedwithmyroommates.FinallywedecidedtoclimbtotheGreatWall.Ittookusoneandahalfhourtogettherebybus.Uponarriving,webegintoclimbhappily,sharingstoriesabouttheWall.Aftertwohoursofclimbing,wereachedthetop,whereweenjoyedthebreathtakingsceneryortookquiteafewphotos.SeetheGreatwallwinditswayoverthemountains,bothofusfeltreallyamazed.Howawonder!Asthefamoussayinggoes,“HewhohasneverbeentotheGreatWallnotatrueman."IfeltlikeIwasthetrueman.【答案】Itwasfineandtheskywasclearblue.Iwantedtogosomewhereexcitedwithmyroommates.FinallyweexcitingdecidedtoclimbtotheGreatWall.Ittookusoneandahalfhourtogettherebybus.Uponarriving,webegintoclimb去掉tohoursbeganhappily,sharingstoriesabouttheWall.Aftertwohoursofclimbing,wereachedthetop,whereweenjoyedthebreathtakingsceneryottookquiteafewphotos.SeetheGreatwallwinditswayoverthemountains,bothofusfeltandSeeingallreallyamazeiHowawonder!Asthefemous