专升本写作句型练习课件

第一章句式优化

不同的思想内容当然应该用不同的句式来表达．而同一思想内容也可以用不同句式来表达．句式不同，表达的效果就不同．一篇文章中如果反复使用同一句式，就会显得单调乏味，毫无生气，写作时一定要注意句式的变换，避免单一重复．1.长句和短句变换

长句使文章富有气势，却容易产生语法错误或造成理解障碍；短句不容易出错，但是短句的堆砌容易让人感觉语言技巧不成熟，不老练．在实际写作中，一味地采用长句或短句都是不可取的，要注意长短句的交错使用．通常简单而又实用的长短句交错方法是：以简单句为基础，配以适当的并列句和复合句．简单句可长可短，一般要加些附属成分，如分词短语，不定式短语，介词短语，副词短语等．第一章句式优化1.短句变长句１．[原文]Liesdoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies.Liesalsodoharmtothosewhotellthem.１．[优化]Liesnotonlydoharmtothosewhoarebeingtoldlies,butalsodoharmtothosewhotellthem.

受汉语思维习惯影响，很多考生往往会直接将脑子里的意思议程英语，而忽略句与句之间的联系，导致写出来的句子无法体现英语作为“形合语言”的特点．因此，在平时写作时，考生要注意前后句之间的联系，用恰当的连接词将简单句连接起来，组成准确地道的复杂长句．增加文章的气势．一．长句和短句变换1.短句变长句３．[原文]Teenagersarepressuredbyschoolwork.Theyarealsoencouragedbytheirpeers.Undersuchcircumstances,theyresorttosmoking.Butsometimestheyfeelalittleguilty.３．[优化]Pressuredbyschoolwork.andencouragedbytheirpeers,teenagersoftenresorttosmoking,thoughtheyfeelalittleguiltysometimes.２．[原文]Usually,afactisdefinedasatruth.Thetruthcanbetestedbyobservationorexperimentation.２．[优化]Usually,afactisdefinedasatruth,somethingthatcanbetestedbyobservationorexperimentation.第一章句式优化一．长句和短句变换2.长句变短句１．[原文]Hisfather,whoisasalesman,becameamillionaireovernight.１．[优化]Hisfather,asalesman,becameamillionaireovernight.

长句固然能表达出复杂而缜密的思想，但如果片面最求复杂句式，反而会显得华而不实，累赘．写作中句子的长短应根据表达的需要而定，有话则长，无话则短．短句不仅指句子长度较短，也指句子内部结构精练，简洁是写作的一个重要原则，用词累赘则是写作的忌．2.长句变短句３．[原文]Hedidn’thaveenoughexperience,whichisthereasonwhyhedidn’tdotheworkwell.３．[优化]Hedidn’tdotheworkwellforlackofexperience.２．[原文]Perhapstheybasicallydistrustedourcapacitytojudgecorrectly.２．[优化]Theydistrustedourjudgment.1.短句变长句4．[原文]Abasicreasonfordivorceisthatsomepeoplearenotreallyreadyformarriage,perhapsbecausetheyarestillestablishingthemselvesintheircareersandhaven’thadenoughtimetogettoknowthemselvesandmanymembersoftheoppositesex,butfamilypressuresmakethemfeelthatsomethingiswrongwiththemsincetheyarenotmarried,andsotheymarryinhastewithoutknowingeachotherwell.4．[优化]Abasicreasonfordivorceisthatsomepeoplearenotreallyreadyformarriage.Astheyarestillestablishingthemselvesintheircareers,theyhaven’thadenoughtimetogettoknowthemselvesandmanymembersoftheoppositesex.However,familypressuresmakethemfeelthatsomethingiswrongwiththemsincetheyarenotmarried.Sotheymarryinhastewithoutknowingeachotherwell.2.长句变短句３．[原文]Whentheprimeministerarrivedattheairport,hundredsofreporterssurroundedhimimmediately.３．[优化]Whentheprimeministerarrivedattheairport,hewasimmediatelysurroundedbyhundredsofreporters.

２．[原文]TheemployeeselectedMr.lichairmanofthecommitteelastweek.２．[优化]Mr.liwaselectedchairmanofthecommitteebytheemployeeslastweek.第一章句式优化１．[原文]Nothowmuchyoureadbutwhatyoureadreallymatters.１．[优化]Itisnothowmuchyoureadbutwhatyoureadthatreallymatters.三．强调句和倒装句变换2．[原文]Bymakinggooduseofinternetwecanmakeadifferenceinourlife.2．[优化]Onlybymakinggooduseofinternetcanwemakeadifferenceinourlife.

适当运用强调句和倒装句可以起到突出，强调的作用，达到较强的修饰效果，给读者留下深刻印象．1.短句变长句3．[原文]WehavegrownsooldbecausethebirthratefellearlierinwesternandnorthernEuropethanelsewhere,ratherthanbecauseofanychangeinthedeathrate.3．[优化]ItisbecausethebirthratefellearlierinwesternandnorthernEuropethanelsewhere,ratherthanbecauseofanychangeinthedeathrate,thatwehavegrownsoold.1.短句变长句2．[原文]Thelawcanpunishthosewhoproduceorsellfakecommodities.2．[优化]Thelawcanpunishthoseproducingorsellingfakecommodities.3．[原文]Becauseoneofmyparentsislaidoff,myfamilywon’tpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege.3．[优化]Withoneofmyparentsbeinglaidoff,myfamilywon’tpossiblyaffordallmyexpensesatcollege.第一章句式优化１．[原文]Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommates.Becauseeverypersonhashisorherownway,theythinkseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantness.Wehavethechancetoadjustthesubtlerelationship.１．[优化]Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommates.theythinkseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantnessbecauseeverypersonhashisorherownway.Wehavethechancetoadjustthesubtlerelationship.五．松散句和掉尾变换松散句主要用来陈述观点和罗列事实，因此文中绝大多数句子都是松散句，正是由于这个缘故，偶尔使用掉尾句会起到突出的效果，但如果频繁的使用掉尾句，则会使文章的意思表达不够直接名了，给读者做作的感觉．1.短句变长句2．[原文]Anewpatternofurbanlivinghasemergedinmostbigcities,asmanyofurbandwellershavemovedtothesuburbanringsinsearchofcleanerair,greaterprivacyandahigherqualityoflife.2．[优化]Asmanyofurbandwellershavemovedtothesuburbanringsinsearchofcleanerair,greaterprivacyandahigherqualityoflife,anewpatternofurbanlivinghasemergedinmostbigcities.第一章句式优化六．比较句变换5）viceversa/theverseistrue(反之亦然)e.g.ifyouarefriendlytoothers,theywillholdhospitableattitudetowardsyouandviceversa.6）noless(…)than/nomore(…)than(不比…多／强)e.g.thefatherisanambitiousman,theson’sambitionisnolessthanthefather.4）thesameistrueof/with…(…也是如此)e.g.peoplewhoarefinanciallydependentwillbebulliedbytherichones.Andthesameistruewithcountries.7）as…as(和…一样…)e.g.someofthedoctorsarepaidalmosttwiceasmuchasthenurses.第一章句式优化１）…theoppositeof…(…与…恰恰相反)e.g.hehopesthathiswifecangivebirthtoamaleinheritortosuchalargefortune;whereashiswife’swishisjusttheoppositeofhis.六．比较句变换2．表示差异性2）…itisjusttheotherwayround,…(…，相反，…)e.g.heisnotyourfriend.Itisjusttheotherwayround.Heisyourrival.第一章句式优化六．比较句变换4）less(…)than(比…少／差）／more(…)than(比…多／强)e.g.moreandmorepeoplearebuyingnewcarsthaneverbefore.3）…different/differfrom…inthat…(…和…的不同之处在于…)e.g.hischaracterisdifferentfromhisbrotherinthatheisintrovert.2．表示差异性第一章句式优化六．比较句变换4）表举例或列举Forexample,forinstance,asanillustration,suchas…3）表层进first,tobeginwith,furthermore,besides,moreover,inaddition,what’smore,alsoandthen,andequallyimportant,lastbutnottheleast…５）表总结insummary,inaword,inbrief,inconclusion,toconclude,inshort,onthewhole…第一章句式优化六．比较句变换７）表比较和对比While,whereas,likewise,similarly,equally,incomparisonwith,comparedwith,onthecontrary,inthecontrast,bycontrast…６）表强调Indeed,ofcourse,inparticular,aboveall,mostimportant,infact…第一章句式优化六．比较句变换例：Walter'sgoalinlifewastobecomeasuccessfulsurgeon.First,though,hehadtogetthroughhighschool,soheconcentratedallhiseffortsonhisstudies–inparticular,biology,chemistry,andmath.Becauseheworkedconstantlyonthesesubjects.Wa