书面表达专项突破日记课件

1.日记文体概述英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要注意下面几点：

一、格式英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最后写天气。(例如：FridayFebruary26th,2016Sunny)

二、时态谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使用其他时态。三、写正文时应注意的问题1.围绕一个主题来展开。2.若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思，可采用“同义转换法”。3.结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体会。6.给……一些忠告/建议___________________7.帮助某人做某事___________________8.出发；动身___________________9.发生___________________10.积极参加……___________________takeanactivepartin…give…someadviceonhelpsb.withsth.setofftakeplace11.散步/休息___________________12.采取有效措施做某事___________________13.乘坐公交车/火车/自行车___________________14.拍照___________________15.在家/在上班___________________beathome/beatworktakeawalk/takearest/breaktakeeffectivemeasurestodosth.bybus/train/bike(takeabus/train/biketo…)takephotos/pictures套用句式今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。2.昨晚我和一些好朋友去KTV唱歌。3.这是我第一次做……2.LastnightIwenttotheKTVwithsomeofmygoodfriends.1.IhadanunforgettableexperienceinGuangzhoutoday.3.ThiswasthefirsttimethatIhaddonesth.习作修改(做短文改错，背经典范文)WednesdayJuly20,2015FineYesterdayIwenttoQingdaowithmyfamilybythetrain.Thesunshineandfreshairtheremadeuscomfortably.Wewenttotheseaside,wheretheseawasasblueasthesky.Bathinginthesunshineonthebeachwerereallyanenjoyablething.IfortablewasTherewebuymanyinterestingsouvenirs.Iwasplanningtosendthemmyfriends.Weatemanythingthere,suchasfish,prawn(大虾),beefandsoon.Theywereverydelicious.Atnighttheylivedinahotelnearbywherewascleanandtidybutthepricewasreasonable.Qingdaoissuchabeautifulandinterestingplacethatitiswellworthseeasecondtime.bought∧tothingswewhich/thatandseeing1.去掉train前的the因为乘坐交通工具不用定冠词fortably→comfortable作宾补用形容词。3.were→was动名词作主语谓语动词用单数。4.buy→bought这是一篇日记，讲述过去发生的事情用一般过去时。5.在myfriends前加to表示“把某物送给某人”用sendsth.tosb.。课堂练习假设你是李华，今天(星期日，3月20日，晴)在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进行了交流。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如下：1.想跟他谈话却不知所措。2.你向他介绍你的城市。3.他给你一些学习的建议。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为你写好。SundayMarch20,2016FineThismorningwhenIwastakingawalkinthepark,Isawaforeignerenjoyingthebeautyofthecity.ThiswasthefirsttimethatIhadseenaforeigner.Iwantedtotalkwithhim,butIwassoexcitedandnervousthatIdidn’tknowwhattodoandhowtostartaconversation,thoughIdidwellinEnglishclasses.EagertopractisemyspokenEnglish,Iencouragedmyselfandwenttosayhelloandwelcometohim.Hewasveryfriendlyandwetalkedforabout15minutes.Asanative,Iintroducedsometouristattractionsandtastyfoodtohim.Finally,hegavemesomeadviceonhowtofurtherimprovemyEnglish.Itwasmorethananexperience!SaturdayApril2,2016CloudyThisafternoonItookpartinanorganizedactivitywiththethemeof“HumanActivitiesandWildlifeProtection”inthesciencemuseum.Fromtheactivity,Ilearnthatatpresenttheenvironmentisbeingdestroyedbecauseofpeople’sharmfulactivities,whichcausesadecreaseofwildlife.Besides,manypeoplehuntwildanimalsfortheirmeatandmoney.Tomakemattersworse,inresponse,thedecreaseisdoingharmtopeople’slife.Soitisnecessarytotakeeffectivemeasures

toprotectourenvironment,suchascreatingwildlifereservesandpassing