四级写作教案(二)

四级写作教案(二)四级写作教案(二)/NUMPAGES10四级写作教案(二)四级写作教案(二)四级写作教案（第二课）分类法有时候可以很快帮我们产出内容。分类要明确对象和标准：比如电视机的优缺点，可以以人为对象，年龄为标准，分成老年人，中年人和少儿。再比如计算机的优缺点，可以以人为对象，职业或身份为标准，分成学生，老师，工程师等。句法和句型：写出最基本的正确的句子你就可以拿到8-11分的档Whatisthemostimportantfactorofasentenceforthefirststep?Correct!(Right)or(Wrong)Hehasthreesons,mostofthemaremiddleschoolstudents.☆五大简单句基本句型：主+谓；主+谓+宾；主+谓+宾+补；主+谓+宾+宾；主+系+表☆如何在正确写出短句的基础上把句子加长？方法一：写并列句(compoundsentence)并列句：两个或者两个以上的简单句通过连词连接起来的句子。方法二：写复合句(complexsentence)三种针对上文错句的改法：Hehasthreesons.Mostofthemaremiddleschoolstudents.Hehasthreesons,andmostofthemaremiddleschoolstudents.Hehasthreesons,mostofwhomaremiddleschoolstudents.复合句的概念引入定语从句状语从句名词性从句：主语从句宾语从句表语从句同位语从句X语从句即为句子做X语句子做主语→主语从句你所说的非常重要。________________isveryimportant.Whatyousaidisveryimportant.句子做表语→表语从句你所说的正是我想要知道的。WhatyousaidiswhatIwanted.1、_______________(他们为什么离开家乡去云南)isstillasecret.WhytheylefttheirhometownforYunnan2._______________(这么做是故意的)becameobvious.Thatthiswasdoneonpurpose3.Itisnoneofyourbusiness_______________(玛丽与谁订婚).whomMaryisengagedto4.Finally,theworkersgotananswer_______________(政府做不了什么事来提高他们工资).thattheGovernmentcoulddonothingtoraisetheirwages.强调句和倒装句的写法Itis（was）＋被强调的部分＋that（who）＋原句其它部分Tommetmeonthestreetthedaybeforeyesterday.强调TomItwasTomwhometmeonthestreetthedaybeforeyesterday.强调时间ItwasthedaybeforeyesterdaythatTommetmeonthestreet.强调地点ItwasonthestreetthatTommetmethedaybeforeyesterday._______________(正是Jefferson写下了)theDeclarationofIndependence.ItwasJeffersonwhowrote_______________(正是因为水涨了)wecouldnotcrosstheriver.Itwasbecausethewaterhadrisenthat_______________(人们听见正是Jim这个无情的家伙)shoutingathismotherinthedeadofnight.ItwasJim,theheartlessfellow,whowasheardWhenyoubadlytwistyourankleontheplayground,yourfriendswillsendyoutothehospitalnearby,giveyourparentsacallimmediatelyandtakecareofyouwithoutanycomplaint.Itisyourfriendswhowillsendyoutothehospitalnearby,giveyourparentsacallimmediatelyandtakecareofyouwithoutanycomplaintwhenyoubadlytwistyourankleontheplayground.Whenyoufailinanveryimportantexam,yourfriendwillnotonlyhelpyoupasstheexamsuccessfullybutalsostandrightbesideyouandencourageyou.Whenyourparentsareinaquarrel,yourfriendwilldowhateverhecantohelpcomfortyouandtellyouthatnomatterwhathappenshewillsupportyoufirmlyandconstantly.句式训练－倒装句（必杀）总结:Only+句首状语Onlythen_______________(那个医生才意识到他的病人需要手术).didthedoctorrealizethathispatientneededsurgery.Onlywhenyouadjustdownyourprice_______________(我们才能做成这笔买卖).canweconcludethebusinessOnlyunderspecialcircumstance,suchasweddingorcelebrations,dowedrinkwine.总结：否定副词位于句首NosoonerhadAnnearrived_______________(就生病了).thanshefellill.Scarcelyhadshefallenasleep_______________(一阵敲门声就把她吵醒).whenaknockatthedoorawakenedher推荐句型Asmallcitydoesnothaveasmuchexcitementasabigcityingeneral.改：Seldom/hardly/scarcely/doesasmalltownhaveasmuchexcitementasabigcity.Anewfactorywouldcontaminatethelivingspaceofmostofourcity’sinhabitantstosomedegree.改：Seldomcanafactorybeestablishedwithoutcontaminatingthelivingspaceofourcity’sinhabitantstosomedegree.二大句式改变一、moreandmore1、Moreandmorepeoplewhobecomemoreandmorefortunatecanaffordacar.替换：growingnumberof/increasinglyThegrowingnumberofpeoplewhobecomeincreasinglyrichcannowaffordacar2、Moreandmoreteachersareneededwiththedevelopmentofeconomy.替换：改换句式Thereisanincreasingdemandforteacherswiththedevelopmentofeconomy.3、Moreandmoreteenagerssmokecigarettesinrecentyears.替换：ontheriseTeenagesmokingisontheriseinrecentyears.二、IPeopleWePeoplethroughoutthecountryhavegreatlydemandedallkindsofnutritiousfoods.改：Allkindsofnutritiousororganicfoodsareincreasinglydemandedthroughoutthecountry.Peopleshouldrealizethedreadfulconsequencesoftakingupthesmokingh