英语高考读后续写指导-“三个句式”搞定情感描写素材

英语高考读后续写指导■〃三个句式”搞定情感描写人物的情感随着故事的发展而变化，从而体现人物的性格。在续写中，需要关注并延续情感线索，进而凸显人物的性格、升华文章的主题。与此同时，情感描写也使得文章的细节更生动,充分实现”情节与细节〃并行推进，体现出文章的精彩度。大部分学生对于情感描写词语匮乏，词不达意，手法单一，故此，特将其总结为三个句型，帮助更多的同学。万能句式一：adj1andadj2,主句,doing.../独立主格结构句式来源：Tiredandhungry,hewenthome,notsayingaword.他回到家里，又累又饿，不想说一句话。用法示例：.他站起身来领奖。Hestooduptoaccepttheprize.句式升级：Surprisedanddelighted,hestooduptoaccepttheprize,feelingproud.又意外又开心,他站起身来去领奖，感到非常自豪。.他交了很多朋友。Hemadealotoffriends.句式升级：Modestandeasy-going,hesoonmadealotoffriends,gettingalongwellwiththem.因为谦虚，随和，他很快交到了很多朋友，并和他们相处地很融洽。.我们早早在校门口集合。Wegatheredattheschoolgateearly.句式升级：Eagerandenthusiastic,wegatheredattheschoolgateearly,chattingandlaughingallthetime.满怀热情和渴望，我们早早就在校门口集合，又说又笑。用法体验：.非常兴奋，我们全神贯注地和同学商讨着并写下我们的建议，希望能帮助解决这个问题。Excitedandwhole-hearted,wewerediscussingwithourclassmatesandwritingdownoursuggestions,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem..极度惊讶和困惑，我一篇接一篇地看着日记，每一篇表现的主题都很相似。Greatlysurprisedandconfused,Ireaddiaryafterdiary,eachexpressingasimilartheme..Thrilledandenraptured,Janequickenedpaceandsprintedtothehelicopter,knowingthatshewouldberescuedeventually.简欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升机冲去，她知道自己终于获救了。.Satisfiedandcontent,mysisterstaredattheflowers,regardingthemasthemostmarvelousworkintheworld.心满意足的，姐姐看了看这些花，认为它们是世界上最奇妙的作品。用法实战：.既害怕又无助，他一动不动站在那好一会，不敢相信刚才发生的一切。Scaredandhelpless,hestoodstillforamoment,notbelievingwhathadjusthappened..又绝望又疲惫，Jane跪了下来，眼泪顺着她的脸颊流了下来。Desperateandexhausted,Janekneltdown,withtearsrollingdownhercheeks..我们好奇而兴奋，迫不及待地想要和外国学生交换礼物，以表达我们彼此真挚的友谊。Curiousandexcited,wecouldn'twaittoexchangegiftswiththeforeignstudents,conveyingoursincerefriendshiptoeachother..非常兴奋，我们全神贯注地和同学商讨着并写下我们的建议，希望能帮助解决这个问题。Excitedandwhole-hearted,wewerediscussingwithourclassmatesandwritingdownoursuggestions,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem..句式改造Hewalkedintotheclassroom.（害怕）Cautiousandevenabitscared,heswiftlyslippedintothequietclassroom,bagonbackandsweatonforehead.万能句式二：量词+表情感状态的名词+动词+sb常用量词：aburst/wave/flood/surge/senseof...常用动词：seize,grasp,takeholdof,crawl/creep爬，swallow吞噬,wellup涌出，surge涌动，sweepover•冲；卷，overwhelm充溢，压倒用法示例：.当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。Whensheknewtheresultofthetest,shefeltexcited.句式升级：Theinstantshewasinformedoftheresultofthetest,asurgeofexcitementseizedher..她伤心不已。Shefeltextremelysad.句式升级：Shewasseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn'thelpcryingbitterly..我感到很害怕。Ifeltveryscared.句式升级：Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorwithmypalmssweating.用法体验：.看着他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悦。Atthesightofhisconfidentsmile,asenseofjoysweptover/floodedoverme..听见他说的话，Alice咧开嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头。Hearingwhathesaid,Alicegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher..电话里，听见他的话，我羞愧得低下头，一阵愧疚向我袭来，脸上发烫。Hearinghiswordsonthephone,Ihungmyheadshamefully,awaveofguiltsweepingovermewithmyfaceburning.句式变化：doing...,sb.feltagreatsenseof+，情绪名词+wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb,doing…"某人感到一股强烈的……在内心升腾、奔涌。〃句首可以加上doingsth,表示这种情绪产生的原因；句尾可以加上doingsth或which,表示这种情绪产生后的结果。Seeinghishusbandchattingwithabeautifulgirl,Janefeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,throwingtheteacupatthegirl.Seeinghisdaughtersafeandsound,hefeltagreatsenseofreliefwellingupinhisheartandsurgingthroughhim.Swingtheirskirtsandimagingtheywerethemostattractivewomenattheball,thewivesfeltagreatsenseofpridewellingupintheirheartandsurgingthroughthem.万能句式三：(doing...),so+adj/adv+部分倒装+that...,(doing...)用法示例：.Jane忍不住哭了。Janecouldn'tstopcrying.句式升级：Recallingthescene,soregretfulwasJanethatshecouldn'tstopcrying,tearssparkingouthereyes.回想起那一幕，简非常后悔，忍不住哭了起来，泪水夺眶而出。.小鹿很害怕。Spottingthis,sofrightenedwasthedeerthatsheshiveredandtrembledalloverlikealeaf.看到这儿，小鹿吓得像一片叶子一样浑身颤抖。.看到那头狼，我很害怕。Catchingsightofthefrighteningwolf,soscareddidIfeelthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.看到那头可怕的狼，我吓得喉咙发紧，两腿发软。用法体验：.保罗回想起这些伤人的字眼，气得暴跳如雷，重重地摔门而去，头也不回地大步走开。Recallingthesehurtfulwords,soirritatedwasPaulthathestormedoutandslammedthedoorheavily,stridingawaywithoutlookingback..杰克激动得走上舞台，给了妻子一个温暖的拥抱。SothrilledwasJackthathesteppedintothestage,givinghiswifeawarmhug.技法综合体验：.听到这个好消息，他开心地跳起来，眼睛像星星一样闪烁。Hearingthisgoodnews,hejumpedupinhappiness,withhiseyessparklinglikeshiningstars..亲眼看到他的榜样,Jayce开心到说不出话来，只能站在那里，嘴巴张的很大。Seeinghisrolemodelintheflesh,Jaycewastoothrilledtosayasinglewordbutstandherewithhismouthopenwide..跟老师讲出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉着，心跳得像打鼓一样。Havingtoldtheteacherthetruth,shesatrestlesslyinherseatwithherfingerscrossedandherheartpoundinglikeadrum..用灼热的目光怒视着我，他几乎控制不住自己的怒火，声音因愤怒而颤抖。Glaringatmewithburningeyes,hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage,hisvoicetremblingwithanger..觉得冷得无法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道该如何应对这种可怕的情况。Feelingunbearablycoldandextremelyexhausted,Janewasquiteatalossastohowtocopewiththeterriblesituation..一瞬间，泪水涌上眼眶，我感动的说不出话。Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords..听到这话，Bob感到很尴尬，扭动并使劲揉搓他的手，似乎是想在这刺骨的冬日里取暖。Onhearingthis,Bobbecameembarrassed,twistingandrubbinghishands（）overandoveragainseeminglytogetwarminthisfreezingwinter..从未想过我会陷入如此的两难境地，我感到无比尴尬和恐慌。Standingfrozenasice,neverhadIthoughtaboutbeingtrappedinsuchadilemmathatIwasfloodedwithoverwhelmingawkwardnessandpanic.素材积累（转）L开心：Learningthechildren'sidea,Mrs.Meredithwasso1.overjoyed（高兴的）thatshesmiledbrightly.Then,thechildrengotdowntopreparingpopcorn2.cheerfully（高兴地）.Withabasketofpopcorn,theyleftfortheBernard/s3.joyfully（高兴地）tosharewithBernardthegoodplan.Hearingwhattheysaid,Bernard4.dancedwithjoy（高兴地雀跃）,withtearsfillinghiseyes.Atthesightofthebasketofpopcorn,hisparentswerealso5.seizedwithjoy口F常高兴）.Later,6.muchtohisdelight（另彳也IF常高;（的是），thepopcornwassotastythatitsoonsoldout.Hesoonreturned,hiswholeface7.beamingwithdelight（高兴得满脸通红）.8.Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.（笑声在房间里萦绕）.伤心Iwasselectedtorepresentmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.ButIwassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.Onthedayofthecontest,Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyselfandsufferedfromstagefright.IntheendIwalkedoffthestage,1.myeyesfilledwithtears（眼里饱含泪7K）.Finally,resultswereannounceda代erthecontest.Ididnotwinanyprizes.Ibitmybottomlip2.withsadnessfillingherheart（心'里充满悲伤）.Idraggedmyheavylegs3.withasinkingheart（心情沉重）andmovedoutofthelecturehall.4.Ihungmyheadinsadness,greatsorrowcloudingmyeyes（我伤心地垂着头,巨大的悲伤笼罩着我的双眼）.Onenteringtheclassroom,5.disappointmentandsadnesscameinwavesandtearsstreameddownmycheeks（悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落）.Thenextfollowingdays,Ifeltlikeshewas6.floatinginanoceanofsadness.（我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里）,notwantingtodoanything..生气Thedooropenedandincameayoungman.Shockedtoseeuspackingthingsintooursuitcase,theyoungman1.letoutayellofanger,withhiseyesshiningwithannoyance（愤怒t也大叫了——声，眼里闪烁着恼怒的光芒。）.2.Hewasinafuriouspassion,andwentstampingabout（他大发雷霆，跺着脚走来走去）.Heaccusedusofillegallyenteringhisroomandthreatenedtocallthepolice,whichscaredmychildrentodeath.Justatthatmoment,myhusbandreturnedafterhisgroceryshopping.Hearingtheman'srudewords,3.afireofrageburninginhisheart（一股怒火在心中燃烧）.Itseemedthatnosettlementwouldbepossible,andthesituationreachedaboilingpoint.4.Quarrelsfueledhisangerandheeruptedlikeavolcano（争吵如火上浇油，于是他的愤怒就像火山一样爆发了）.Eventually,5.unabletocontainhisanger,myhusbandstormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim（无法控制心中的怒气，我丈夫气得冲出房间，狠狠地摔上门）..害怕Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.1.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,andIwasunabletomoveaninch（恐惧喷薄而出,将我紧紧包围,我已经寸步难行了）.2.Extremelyfrightened/panicked,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating（惊恐不已，我觉得两腿发抖,手心冒汗）.Besidemewasmywife,whowasrootedtotheground,3.whowasrootedtotheground,frozenwithfear（l下呆了）.Atthesightofthepolarbear'bloodymouth,4.shewasnearlydeadwithfright（吓得要死）.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.5.Wefeltthatthebloodinourbodyfroze（我们感觉浑身血;夜凝【司T）becauseoftheterriblesight.Ourthroatstightenedandourkneesfeltweak.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair..紧张WhenIfinishedhertestingperformance,IthankedMr.Butlerandknewtheresultwouldbepostedonthedoorofthechoralroomthenextday.l.Icouldn'tfallasleep,tossingandturninginbedforawholenight（我在床上辗转反侧了一整夜,无法入睡）Bythenextmorning,Ihurriedtotheschooland2.nervously（紧张t也）glancedatthelistonthedoorofthechoralroom,3.feelingasifmyheartwereinmymouth（感觉好像我的心都提到嗓子眼儿了）.There,atthetopofthelistwaspostedmyname.Inspired,Ipracticedevenharderforthedayofperformance.Finallythedayfortheperformancecame.WhenIwasstandingbackstage,4.nervousness/tensioncamefloodingoverme（紧张感席卷全身）.WhenmynamewascalledIcould5.feelbutterfliesinmystomach（我感到心里忐忑不安）.Mytremblinglegsbroughtmeonstage,andIcould6.feelmypalmssweatingandheartracing（我手心冒汗，心跳加速。）.Thehallcrowdedwithaudiencemademeevenmore7.uneasy（不安的）.8.Myheartwaspounding/thumpinghard,asifitwereabouttopop（我的心扑通扑通地好像要跳出来/）.Atthatmoment,myeyesparkedonMr.Butleratthecorner.Henoddedandexchangedadeterminedglancewithme,whichtimelyputmyheartbackinplace.Withthemusicrising,Ibeganmysinging.WhenIfinished,theauditoriumeruptedintoaseaofcheers..感动Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1.awaveofexcitementtakingholdofMom（妈妈激动彳：己）.Everytimewegottoanewplace,Momcouldhardly2.containherexcitement（抑制兴奋），andwould3.cheerup（振奋起来）likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround4.withexcitement（兴奋力也）.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5.lettingoutascreamofthrill（激动得尖口”起来），Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6.Witheyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement（眼里闪着激动的光芒）,wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature..尴尬Bynowwewerestandinginthelongholidaylinetopaythebill,andIfigureditwasagoodchance.Ithrewmyselfontheground,screaming,“Iwantthattelephone/overandoveragain."Becky,you'dbettergetupatonce”,mymothersaidwithatremblingvoice,1.embarrassmentwritteninherredface（涨红的脸上写满了窘迫）.Turningadeafeartoher,Iwasstillinfulltantrum.2.feelingthebloodrushingtoherface（羞愧不己），mymotherstoodthere,3.feelingthebloodrushingtoherface（觉得血液涌上脸颊）.Shesu