2009年高考英语作文范文

第1页共15页2009年全国各省市高考英语书面表达题范文集锦完整18套（附解析及专家简评）一、（2009全国卷I、海南、宁夏卷）假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东MrsWilson不在家，你准备外出，请给MrsWilson写一留言条，内容包括：1．外出购物2．替房东还书3．Tracy来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（BoltonCoffee）见面取消2）此事已告知Susan)尽快回电【参考范文】MrsWilson,I’mgoingoutshopping,andwon’tbebackuntilabout5:00pm.IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.Atabout1o’clockthisafternoon,Tracycalled,sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeetomorrowmorningasshehassomethingimportanttoattendto.Shefeltverysorryaboutthat,butsaidthatyoucouldsetsomeothertimeforthemeeting.Shewantedyoutocallherbackassoonasyouarehome.ShehasalreadytoldSusanaboutthischange.LiHua【解析】作文题仍然同去年一样，属于提纲式要点作文，要求学生就所给内容写一张留言条，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。应注意下面几点：1）注意人称，应该用第一人称的形式给房东（第二人称）写便条；2）注意时态的正确使用：从试题的内容上可以看出在表达要点1和2时应用将来时；而要点3中的几个方面则需要注意时态的替换，会用到一般过去时，现在时和将来时。3）注意恰当使用逻辑词语，是各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。二、（2009.全国卷II）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友sarah打算暑期来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：简况：长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺；位置：天安门广场南面；交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线；特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。参考词汇：步行街pedestrianstreet当当车trolleycar地铁subway【参考范文】DearSarah,ThankyouforyourletterforaskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600yearsold.Alongthis800-meterstreet,therearemorethan300shops.AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTian’anmenSquare,it’sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17,69or59.SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsotochattersandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I’msureyou‘lllikeit.【解析】本文是书信格式，给出四个要点，属于常规文体，学生只要把四个要点写全，注意上下文，句与句之间的合理过渡即可。三、（2009.北京卷）情景作文（20分）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的“绿色行动”专栏写一篇以“GreenActioninOurClass”为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60提示词：郊区suburbs第二节开放作文（15分）请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于50第一节情景作文（20分）内容要点：骑车去植树植树安插提示牌照相【参考范文】GreenActioninOurClassApril12ismemorablebecauseourclasshadameaningfulexperienceonthatday.Inthemorning,webicycledtothesuburbstoplanttrees,talkingandlaughingalltheway.Uponarrival,webegantoworkimmediately.Somewerediggingholes.Somewerecarryingandplantingyoungtrees.Otherswerewateringthem.Aftergettingtheworkdone,weputupaboardremindingpeopletoprotectthetrees.Beforeleavingwetooksomephotostorecordourgreenaction.Seeingthelinesoftrees,weallhadasenseofachievement.Wefeelit’sourdutytoprotectandbeautifyourenvironment.【解析】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。题材贴近学生实际，学生只要注意理清思路按照活动的内容和时间来写即可。第二节开放作文（15分）【参考范文】Whataninterestingpicture!AWesternyoungman,sittingatatable,isreadytoeatabowlofnoodles.HeisholdingtwoforksthesamewayasweChineseholdchopsticks.Heistryingsohardtopickupthenoodlesthatheissweatingalot.Atfirstglance,Ithinkit’sabitfunny,forweChinesetakeforgrantedthatchopsticksarethetoolsforeatingnoodles.Themaninthepictureistryingtocopyus.Obviouslyheisdoingitthehardway.Maybeusingoneforkwilldoabetterjob,Inmyopinion,wedon’tneedtocopyothers’waysofthinking.Sometimesasimplerwayofdoingthingsmaybeabetterway.【解析】本文是开放性作文，要求考生把握好图画内容，发散表达。考生重点要看出这个人是卷发高鼻的外国人，要体会到西式刀叉对中式食物的矛盾性。四、（2009.天津卷）61.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛，本年度的主题为“TheEnglishNovelILikeBest”。作为组织者，你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言，请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。1.说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；2.说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；3.预祝比赛圆满成功。评分原则本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后综合给分。词数少于100的，从总分中减去2分。评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。每错误书写3个单词从总分中减去1分，原则上不超过3分，重复的不计。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。标点符号错误，将视其对交际的影响程度酌情减分。如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。Goodafternoon.Ladiesandgentlemen. Welcometothisyear’sEnglishspeechcompetition.TakingpartinEnglishspeechcompetitionisahelpfulwaytolearnEnglish.Whilewefullyprepareforthecompetition,wecanimproveourabilitiesoflisteningandspeakinganddevelopagoodhabitofreadingEnglish.Intheprocessofthecompetition,youshouldpayspecialattentiontothefollowingrules.First,youshouldfinishyourspeechinfiveminutes.Second,youtryyourbesttoexpressyourselfinEnglishfluently.Finally,youshouldhaveagoodEnglishpronunciation.IhopethattheEnglishspeechcompetitionwilbeagreatsuccess!Thankyou!【解析】本题属于提纲式作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材内容贴近学生生活，给出要点表述较全，题的难度较小，考生注意一下几点即可：1、学生在写作时对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要逐条翻译，语言不要太书面化。2、正确运用关联词，使上下文联系更加密切，逻辑性强。3、注意要使所写内容和原文所给出的开头、结尾处衔接自然，浑然一体。五、（2009.四川卷）假设你是李华。你的外国笔友Jane打算于七月来中国，特来信了解中国人的社交习俗。请你用英语回一封信，从以下几个方面作具体介绍。页面时的问候方式；对毛病伯回答方式；接收礼物时的回应方式；餐宴礼节。【参考范文】DearJane,Gladtohearfromyouandyou’rewelcometoChinainJuly.ThefollowingaresomeChinesecustoms.Firstly,wegreeteachotherbysaying“Hello”oraskingsuchquestionsas“Whereareyougoing?”or“Areyoubusy?”toexpressourcare.Secondly,whenpraised,wereplywith“Oh,no!”or“I’mover-praised”toshowgoodmanners.Next,whenreceivingagift,weusuallysay“It’sunnecessary”besides“Thanks”toshowpolitenessandthenputitaway.Finally,atdinnerparties,wetalkloudlyandtouchglasseswhendrinkingtosomeone’shealthorsuccesstoshowthatwe’rewarm.Anyhow,differentcultures,differentcustoms.Ifyou“DoastheRomansdowheninRome”,you’llenjoymoreofyourstayhere.Ihopewhat’smentionedabovemightbehelpfulandwishyouagoodjourney.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】本文是一种常规的书信体提纲式作文，要点有四，学生只要把四个要点用恰当的语言，条理的句子，合适的句式，表达完整，注意过渡和复杂句使用即可。六、（2009.安徽卷）假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛，请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象，写一篇演讲稿，陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应认为同学们不必为此苦恼；希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；建议与父母进行交流和沟通。注意：【参考范文】Goodmorning,ladiesandgentlemen.Someofusarehavingproblemswithourparents,astheyoftenlookintoourschoolbagsorreadourdiaries.Ifullyunderstandwhywearenotcomfortableaboutit,butthere’snoneedtofeeltoosad.Ourparentsarecheckingourbagsordiariestomakesurewe’renotgettingintoanytrouble.Theyhaveprobablyheardsomehorriblestoriesaboutotherkidsandthoughtwemightdothesame.Orperhapstheyjustwanttoconnectwithusbutaredongitallwrong.Mysuggestionis:Tellthemwewantthemtotrustusasmuchaswe’dliketotrustthem.Ifyoudon’tthinkyoucantalktothem,writethemaletterandleaveitlyingaround—thyareboundtoreadit.Thankyou!【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，体裁为应用文中的演讲稿，题材的现实性强，考生的话语较多，显见这种作文，难度不大，考生应注意基本语言和句式的运用，以及上下文的过渡。七、（2009.山东卷）写作（满分30分）假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith,但没有其联系方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学Tom写一封信：感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；询问Mr,smith的近况并索要其联系方式；邀请Tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。【参考范文】DearTom,IamnowbackChinaandsound.InthisletterIwouldliketoconveymyheartfeltappreciationtoyouforyourkindassistanceinmyEnglishlearningwhenIwasinNewYork.Additionally,yourgeneroushelpandtendercaremademefeelwarmlywelcomedandtransformedmyfirstAmericantripintoaunforgettablememory.IhavebeenmissingourEnglishprofessor,Mr.Smithwhoseunusualcastofmind,wideandvariedknowledge,togetherwithasingularpersonalcharm,combinedtoexertastronginfluenceonme.Whatabouthimrecently?Idesiretocontacthimforsomesuggestionsonimprovingmylisteningability.However,hisemailaddressisnotavailable.Sowouldyouminddeliveringittomeviatheonlinemailbox?IammorethandelightedtoinviteyoutojoinustocelebratetheSpringFestival-ChineseLunarNewYearsothatIcanrepayyourfriendship.Youcanpartnerwithmetohaveatryinliondances,whichisextremelyexciting.Andthegrandlanternfestivalparadewillbeboundtoimpressyou.IassureyouthatyouwouldenjoyvisitinghereasIdidatyouhome.Withmybestregards!Yourscordially,LiHua【解析】本文仍属于半开放性体裁，与书写体结合给考生发挥的空间，考生按照三个要点的提示，用合适的句式，句型表达出来即可。八、（2009.陕西卷）假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖（post）寻求帮助,请根据帖子内容,写作要点和要求回贴。写作要点：1.告诉Grown-up要理解母亲；2.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议。【参考范文】Hi,Grown-up,Asastudentofyourage,Iunderstandyoursituation.Theproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongourteenagers.However,itshouldbewisenottodoanythingthatmayhurtherfeelings.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom.Hearttohearttalkshelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Theyarealsoopportunitiestoletherknowyourideasofandattitudestowardmanythings.Second,youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswell,provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadya“Grown-up”.It’sevenbetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.【解析】考生在写作中应该注意如下几点：1.文体：应用文（电子邮件）。2.主体时态：一般现在时。3.主体人称：第二人称。4.内容要点：=1\*GB3①问题介绍；=2\*GB3②建议一；=3\*GB3③建议二；=4\*GB3④我的愿望。亮点句式：Theproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongourteenagers.Hereareafewsuggestions.it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom.Theyarealsoopportunitiestoletherknowyourideasofandattitudestowardsmanythings.Second,youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswell.九、（2009.江西卷）学校即将举行以“Turningabadmood（心情）intoagoodone”为题目的英语作文比赛，请按下列要求定一篇100词左右的记叙文或议论文。好心情的重要性。产生坏心情的原因。应该如何调整心情。记叙文议论文发生的具体事件。对你的心情有何影响？你如何应对？【参考范文】议论文TurningaBadMoodintoAGoodOneItisveryimportantforustohaveagoodmoodinourdailylife.Ifyouhaveagoodmood,youwillbehappywitheverythingintheworld.Mostimportantly,youwillhaveaoptimisticeffectonthepeoplearoundyou.Weallwillliveaharmoniousandhappylife.Itisalsogoodforyourhealth.However，sometimeswhenyoumeetsomedifficulties,whenyouquarrelwithothersorwhenyoufailindoingsomething.Youmayhaveabadmood.Ifso,youshouldgetridofitassoonaspossible.Asweallknow,everythinghasitstwosides.Soyoushouldthinkmoreaboutitsbrightside.Wearesurethateverythingwillbebetterwithtimepassingby.Remember:Onlyyoucanmakeyourselfhappy.Ihopethateveryonehasagoodmoodeveryday!【解析】今年依然是开放式的作文，只提出了一个话题“Turningabadmoodintoagoodone”,并给出了体裁上的选择和内容上的简要提示。话题非常切合学生实际生活，考生只要按照要点去写，注意过渡即可。十、（2009.江苏卷）鼠标是计算机时代最佳的人机交互工具之一。它极大地方便了人们的计算机操作。但是，过分依赖鼠标的习惯也会带来一些不利影响。请你以鼠标为切入点，根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇短文。鼠标的必要性对多数人来说，操作计算机，上网冲浪……鼠标的便捷性点击、移动、插入、拷贝、删除……编辑文本，搜索信息……收发邮件，选购商品……点播音乐，下载电影……如果过分依赖鼠标……（请考生结合自身感受，列举两到三点）【参考范文】Themouseisamosteffectivedeviceusedbypeopletocommunicatewithacomputer．Formostpeople,it’salmostimpossibletooperateacomputerwithoutamouse,letalonesurftheInternet.Awell-chosenmouseisreallyhandy,flexibleandconvenientincontrollingthescreen.Withthefunctionsofinserting,deleting,movingandcopying,itenablesustoedittest,browsewebpageanddownloadwhatwewant.Itcanevenbringusafloodofmusic,moviesandPCgames.Justimagine,allthiscanbedonewithacutemouse.Aconvenienttoolcancertainlymakeourworkeasier,butitdoesn’talwayshelpinapositiveway.Toomuchreadyinformationonourfingertipsleaveslittleroomforknowledgepursuing.Toomanyreadyanswersmakeuslessexcitedinfindingtruth.Relyingtoomuchonmouseclickingmakesuslazierandlesscreativebothmentallyandphysically.（153words）【解析】本文为提纲式说明文体裁，所选内容与我们生活相关，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐条翻译即可。十一、（2009.湖南卷）假设你是某中学新老师李红，请给你的朋友张华写一封信，告诉他你第一天上课的情况，主要内容如下：1.描述一件课堂上令你印象深刻的事情；2.介绍你处理该事的方式；3.谈谈你的感想。【参考范文】DearZhangHua,It’sthreemonthssinceIheardfromyoulasttime.NowIwanttotellyouanimpressivestoryhappenedonmyfirstlesson.Onhearingthebell,studentsranintotheclassroomasquicklyastheycan.Butaboy,LiMing,whosefatherdiedamonthago,waslatefortheclass.Hestoodoutsidetheclassroom,silently.Ismiledtohimandlethimcamein.Afterawhile,hecriedonhisdesk.ThenIwalkedtohimandaskedwhathadhappened.Hetoldmethathismotherwasillandhehadtotakesomemedicineforher.Atthesametime,heapologizedtomeforhislateness.Movedbyhiswords,Ipraisedhimforhisdeedsanddecidedtosingasongnamed“Mother”forthestudents.Howtimeflies!ClasswasoverbeforeIrealizedit.FromthestoryIfeltweshouldrespectourparentsanddoourbesttohelpthem.Doyouthinkso?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHong【解析】本文属于半开放性提纲式书信体，要点有三，选材学生熟悉，也是发生在他们身边的故事，学生只要把握准情景和要求，使表达的内容不走题即可。十二、（2009.湖北卷）:假设你是华华，与英国网友汤姆约定用对方的母语通信，以提高各自的外语水平。最近你收到汤姆的电子邮件（附后），发现有一个成语使用不当。请根据下列要点，用英文回一封电子邮件。要点:1．不应使用“无所不为”，应使用“2．说明这两个成语的用法;3．给予鼓励。附（汤姆的邮件）:华华，你好!近几天在忙什么事?有什么有意思的事吗?我们的学校放假了，所以这几天在家无所不为，饱食终日，只好上网发伊妹儿。没意思。我决定找份工作，做个自食其力的人。祝好!汤姆（以下所给内容不得抄入答题卡）【参考范文】Hi!TomNicetoreadyoure-mailtoday.Inoticedyou’vebeguntouseChineseidiomsandusedmostofthemcorrectly.However,I’mafraidthereisonemistakeI’dliketopointout.Itis“无所不为”.Thisidiommeans“doallkindsofbadthings”.Areyoudoingallkindsofbadthingsathome?Iguesswhatyouwerereallytryingtosayisthatyou’vegotnothingtodothesedays.Inthatcase,youshoulduse“无所事事”.Weusuallyuse“无所不为”toexpresstheideathatpeopledaretodoanythingbad,and“无所事事”todescribethesituationinwhichpeoplehavegotnothingmeaningfultodo.HaveImademyselfclear?Anyway,I’mamazedattheprogressyou’vemade.Hopyou’llfindagoodjobsoon.Huahua【解析】本文题材现实性强，属于较为保守的提纲式作文，考生只要审好题按照要点去表达即可。十三、（2009.福建卷）词数：120左右Therearemanyadvantagesofsmiling.Itcannotonlymakeushappy,butalsopleaseothers.Ifwesmileatlife,lifewillsmileonusinreturn.SoIwanttosmileatallwheneverandwhereverpossible,First,Iwouldliketosmileatmyparentsbecausetheyhavegivenmelifeandtakeallthetroubletobringmeup.Theyarrangealmosteverythingforme.Withtheirhelp,Ihavemadegreatprogress.Iwouldliketosay“Thankyou”tothemwithasmile.Thenmysmileshouldgotomyself,foronlyinthiswaycanIgainmoreconfidenceinsmilingmytroublesawayandliveabetterlife.Inaword,let’sgreeteverydaywithasmile.Tomorrowisanotherday.【解析】内容要点：=1\*GB3①微笑的优点；=2\*GB3②想对其微笑的人物（父母）；=3\*GB3③对父母微笑的理由；=4\*GB3④对自己微笑的理由；=5\*GB3⑤总结。十四、（2009.广东卷）第一节基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:时间:上周末对象:眼科医生（eye-doctor）王教授主题:我国中小学生近视（short-sightedness）问题基本信息:（1）发生率:略高于50％（2）人数:世界第一专家解读:（1）原因:很复杂（2）治疗:没有哪一种药物能治愈近视（3）建议:不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动（4）特别提示:如何握笔也和近视有关[写作内容]根据以上情况写一篇采访报道，并包括如下内容:Lastweekend,Ihadaninterviewwitheye-doctorProfessorWangaboutourcountryprimaryandmiddlestudents’short-sightedness.Itissaidthatslightlymorethan50%students,whichrankstheNo.1intheworld,areshort-sighted.ProfessorWangsaidthereasonofshort-sightednessiscomplicatedandthreeisstillnocureforshort-sightedness.Hesuggestedthatweshouldnotoveruseoureyesanddomoreoutdoorexercises.What’smore,sincetheholdingofpenhassomethingtodowiththeshort-sightedness,weneedtopayattentiontousingthepen.【解析】本文题材贴近学生实际生活，这个话题真正的做到“话题来源于学生实际生活”。近视眼是每个校园所必不可少的现象，是学生校园生活得隐形热点。因此今年的基础写作题目让每个学生都有话可说。考生要注意三大要点和表格内容，恰当表达即可。第二节读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Jackieisperhapsthemosteasilyannoyedkoala（考拉）attheFeatherdaleWildlifeParkinsouthernAustralia.Allthekoalasthereareunhappyandcomplaining.Youwouldbetooifyouwereusedtonightactivitiesandsomeonekeptwakingyouupalldaywhileyouweretryingtosleepitoff.That’sright—sleepitoff.Theaveragekoalaisalwayshalfasleepbecauseitfeedsontheleavesofaspecialkindthatmakesitsleepy.ThereasonJackieandherfellowkoalasarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepissotheycanbehuggedandphotographedbytourists，whomakethetripstoFeatherdaleandanincreasingnumberofothernationalparksforjustthatspecialexperience.WhateverdepartmentintheAussiegovernmentinchargeofsuchthingsisnowmovingtomakethepracticeillegal，whichisunderstandable.Howwouldyoureact，myfriend，ifyouweretryingtosleepoffadozentimesandsomeround，furrycreaturesmellingofgrasskeptwakingyou?*考拉即树袋熊[写作内容]1.以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；2.然后以约120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论，内容包括:（1）人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；（2）假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应；3）你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。【参考范文】Thepassagenarratesthatkoalaswhoarerepeatedlyawokenfromtheirdeepsleepareunhappyandcomplainingfortouriststakingphotos.Theauthorappealstoustobemorekindtoanimals.Thereasonswhytouristsliketakingphotosoftheanimalsinthezooperhapsvaryfrompeopletopeople.Somethinkitahappyreminderoftheirvisittothezooortheanimals,whileothersmayconsideritjustsortoffuntohave.Butanywaytheymaynotsharethedeepfeelingsoftheanimals.IfIwereinthesamepositionastheanimalinthezoo,myreactionwouldbeveryseverestronglyagainstbeingphotographed.Nohavingpeacefulsurroundingstosleep,don’tyousufferrestlessandfidgets.Nodoubtwedoandsodotheanimals.Ithinkitnecessarytobantourists’takingpictureswithanimals,makingacomfortableenvironmentforthemtoliveandregardingthemasourfriends,soastofoundharmoniousrelationswithanimals.【解析】今年的读写任务让学生就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”展开议论。议论文的写作有助于培养学生正确的价值观，纠正不正确的价值观。今年的读写任务暗中旨在培养学生保护野生动物的观念、把多一点的空间还给动物的观念、与动物和谐共存的观念。如果考生从“应该禁止游客和动物拍照”这一观点入手的话就迎合了阅读材料，同时也能够受到改卷老师的青睐。十五、（2009.辽宁卷）假定你住在一个涉外小区。社区委员会请你帮忙用英文以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。要点时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00内容：采摘苹果报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：带帽子、手套注意：第二节：一、评分原则本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。词数少于80和多余120的，从总分中减去2分。评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。内容要点时间：下周六上午8：00至11：00内容：采摘苹果报名：办公室，下周四下午5：00前提示：带帽子、手套欢迎踊跃参加【参考范文】Dearneighbors,Weareveryhappyannouncethatourcommunityisgoingtoorganizeanactivityforallthecommunitymembers.NextSaturday,wegoingtopickapplesinavillage20kilometersawayfromourtown,andallarewelcome.Wewillmeetat8:00amatthegate,whereabluebuswillbewaiting.Ouroutdooractivitywilllast3hours,andwe’llbebackatabout11o’clock.Ifyouareinterested,pleasesignupattheofficebefore5:00pmnextThursdaysothatwewillmakenecessaryarrangements.Wesuggestthatyoubringwithyouahatandapairofgloves.Wearelookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.CommunityOffice【解析本题命制稳健，是中学教学中最为常见的提纲式作文。给出要点学生有话可说。第一步：审题看要求：本题要求以短文的形式写一封电子邮件，将周末农家采摘活动的安排传达给住户。开头已经写好，这样格式应该已经给出，审题的重点放在要点和要求上：要点有五项，注意有三项，但注意的第一项是重要的一项。理思路：调整要点，讲清本次活动的安排。可以先将活动的时间，活动的内容，要求、注意事项表达出来；然后再写5和3要点，这样逻辑清晰表达合理。第二步：写作可以先在草纸上起草，用自己最有把握的句型、单词、短语去表达，要尝试最简单的复杂句，如用定语从句、宾语从句等，但句式不易过于复杂，要用一些恰当的连词，使句与句之间、段与段之间过渡自然。第三步：检查作文写完后，最后要进行检查。重点放在要点写全了吗？时态、语态、动词的数、单词拼写对了吗？标点符号、大小写用对了吗？检查完后再抄写在试卷上，注意卷面的整洁。十六、（2009.浙江卷）5月1日，高二（3）班的学生志愿者LiYue和ZhangHua去阳光敬老院（SunshineNursingHome）开展志愿者活动（送水果.打扫.聊天等）。假如你是校英语报的记者，请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的新闻报道。s5【参考范文】StudentVolunteersBroughtSunshinetotheElderlyOnMayDay,LiYueandZhangHua,studentsfromClassThree,GradeTwo,wenttoSunshineNursingHomeanddidsomevoluntarywork.Upontheirarrival,LiYueandZhangHuawerewarmlywelcomed,andrespectfully,theypresentedtheelderlywithflowersandfruits.Then,theystartedworkingatonce,cleaningthewindowsandsweepingthefloor.Everythingdone,theysatintheyardchattingwiththeelderlypeople.Whenitwastimeforthevo