How-to-write-a-good-composition-公开课教案教学设计课件案例试卷

Howtowriteagoodcomposition?写作7步曲写作第一步-审1.认真审题，找出文章所要表达的中心。

1.介绍Betty

2.计划

2.时态一般现在时，一般将来时3.信息点写作第二步—列用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点goodfriendashortgirlwith

likewatchingmoviesdoingsportsnextSundaymorninggotothemuseumintheafternoonplaybasketballintheeveninggotoanEnglishparty写作第三步—加短语加上主语等其它成分变句子加上开头和结尾，注意开头结尾要简洁、漂亮加上之后结构完整，一般可以采用总分总或总分结构写作第四步—连

恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然1.并列，递进2.表选择3.表因果4.表转折5.表条件6.表解释7.表强调8.表顺序9.表结论1.and,aswellas.notonly..butalso,both..and..2.or3.because,so4.but,however5.if6.suchas,forexample7.what’smore,infact8.first/firstly,firstofall,second/-ly,then,later,next,finally,atlast,intheend…9..inaword,Ithink,allinall,inmyopinion,inmyeyes写作第五步—美选好词句，美化文章，在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。（切忌使用太多从句）Sheisa12-year-oldgirlcalledBetty.It’sgreatforhertoplaybasketballwithherfriends.Shelikesplayingbasketball.Sheisquiteinterestedinplayingbasketball.写作第六步—查1.动词错误SheisjointheMusicClub.ShejoinstheMusicClubShewillveryhappy.Shewillbeveryhappy.Shelikesdoingsports,suchasplaybasketball.Shelikesdoingsports,suchasplayingbasketball.写作第六步—查2.名词ShemakesafewChinesefriend.ShemakesafewChinesefriends.3.形容词和副词Sheisgoodatsports.Icanplayfootballgood.Sheisgoodatsports.Icanplayfootballwell.写作第七步—抄1.字体工整2.卷面整洁3.再次检查再加工1.开头宜直忌曲1.MynameisWangPing,astudentinGardenMiddleSchool.2.I’mWangPing.I’mfromGardenMiddleSchool.3.I’maGardenMiddleSchoolstudentwhoisinGradeNine.Bettyismygoodfriend.Sheis…2.过渡句引入衔接自然I’dliketotellyousomethingabouther.3.主要内容充实有序,

句型灵活，长短句结合1.Andshespends….on….Asaresult,2.NextSundaymorning,sheisgoingto…andtheywill…3.Ibelievewewill…4.结尾点题不拖沓I’msurewewillhaveagreattimethere.

Bettyismygoodfriend.Sheisashortgirlwithlonghairandtwobigeyes.Shelooksverybeautiful.Bettylikeswatchingmoviesand

sheisalsoquiteinterestedinsports.NextSundaymorning,sheisgoingtothemuseumwithherparentsandtheywillspendalotoftimethere.Intheafternoon,shewillplaybasketballwithherfriendsinthe