a-gift-of-love公开课教案教学设计课件案例试卷

Follow-upwriting

characters:event:Reuben(a12-year-oldboy)Dora(theboy’smother)Theshopkeeper

Reuben,a12-year-oldboy,wantedtobuyabeautifulbroochforhismother,Dora.Readforbriefinformation

theme:LoveReadfordetailedinformation1.Whydidthebroochcausehisheartracing?2.Whatkindofpersonishismother?3.What’sReuben’sbehaviorwhenaskingtheshopkeeperwhathewanted?4.Inordertocollectenoughmoney,whatdidhedecidetodo?Aboysawabeautifulbroochinashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Butthepricewastoohighforhim.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehome,thegluethatheldittogether.Standingproudandstraightinhisflour-sackshirtandwashed-outtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted..Onhearingthesoundofhammeringfromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanideathathewouldraisemoneybysellingusednailbags.非谓语同位语从句定语从句形容词作状语beginning:Wishtopresenthismotherwithanexpensivegiftdeveloping:Carryouthisplansecretlytobuythegiftending:……Discussthequestions,writedownsomepointsPredict1、HowdidReubenfindenoughusednailbags?2、WhattroublemightReubengothrough?3、Whatencouragedhimtoinsist?4、WhatdidReubenfeelduringthemoney-savingprocess?……Everydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Organizethepointsbyusingadvancedsentencepatterns.

sentencepatterns(句式)定语从句,状语从句,名词性从句,强调句.非谓语…Predict1、WhatwouldReubendo?2、What’shismother’sreaction?……Finallythetimecame!Tomysurprise,mydaughterwhoalwaysdrivesmecrazypresentedmewiththeflowers.ThemomentIsawtheflowers,tearswelledupinmyeyes.Movedandspeechless,Ihuggedhertightly.Itismydaughterwhoteachesmealessonoflove.定语从句状语从句形容词作状语强调句ApossibleversionEverydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,

Reubenwanderedthestreets,searchingforthenailbags

carefully.Tosavemoremoney,heevendecidedtodeliverpapersintheearlymorning.Exhaustedandtiredashefelt,hestillinsisted.Itwas

thebroochintheshopwindowthatremindedhimwhathedidwasworthwhile.Afteralongtimeofhardwork,hemadeiteventually.Paragraph1:Finallythetimecame!ApossibleversionParagraph2:Finallythetimecame!Hetookoutthesodatin,pouredthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollars!Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,Reubenrushedfortheshoptobuythebrooch.Themomenthegotthebeautifulbrooch,heburstthroughthefrontdoorandplaceditinDora’shand.NeverhadDorareceivedsuchagift.

Speechlessandhappy,sheheldhersontightlyintoherarms,withtearswellingupinhereyes.HomeworkPolishyourwritingbyusingadvancedsentencepatternsandproperconnections.注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。问题1.对话（直接引语）太多2.第一段行数太少（6-7行）3.无下划线4.时态乱用5.个别情节扯太远

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受好心人捐赠）坚持Stick(stuckstuck)todoingInsistondoingCarryon捡Pickup美句赏析1.Badastheweatherwas,hisdesireforthebroochneverchanged.——302蓝素倩2.Heranagainstthestrongwind,searchingforthenailbags.——302王轶雯3.Itwashisdeterminationaswellashislovetohismotherthathelpedhimtogetthebroochfromtheshopkeeper.——302徐逸文4.Staringatthemoneyhegained,hisheartwasfullofexcitementandhappiness.——302曹威5.Withthedarkapproaching,Reubenfelttiredandhungry,butloveinspiredhimtocarryon.——302戴梦娜6.Everytimehethoughtthathecouldbuythebroochsoon,excitementandhappinesscrowdedinonhim.——302戴梦娜7.Herushedtotheshopwithmoneytightlyheldinhishand.——302戴梦娜8.Loveisreallyafantasticthingthatmakesthefamilywarm.——302钱雨薇9.Love,suchamagicalthing,madethefamilyfullofwarmthinthecolddays.——302孙雪颖10.Mother’sloveinspiredhimtoovercomeallthedifficulties.——302谭荧莹11.Hepickedupthenailbagsoneafteranother,exhaustedbutsatisfied.——302谭12.Everytimehethoughtofhismother,hefeltenergetictoraisethemoney.——302钱滢13.Theheavierthesodatinwas,thehappierhewas.——302胡雪苑14.Withthebeautifulbroochheldinhandscarefully,hewalkedstraighttohismother.——301周可行15.SheheldReubeninarms,enjoyingthehappiestmomentinherlife..——301周16.Nomatterhowbadtheweatherwas,hestillranfromonecornertoanother,tiredbuthappy.——301金东辉17.Nevertheless,hestilldidithappilywithoutcomplaint.——301高展阳18.Motheropenedtheboxwithasurprisedlook.——301赵烨男19.Bad

astheweatherwas,hecarriedonseekingnailbagstoexchangethemforfivecents.——301施怡潇ApossibleversionEverydayafterschool,Reubenstartedhisplan.Coldandhungry,

Reubenwanderedthestreets,searchingforthenailbags

carefully.Tosavemoremoney,heevendecidedtodeliverpapersintheearlymorning.Exhaustedandtiredashefelt,hestillinsistedon.Itwas

thebroochintheshopwindowthatremindedhimofwhathedidwasworthwhile.Afteralongtimeofhardwork,hemadeiteventually.Paragraph1:Finallythetimecame!ApossibleversionParagraph2:Finallythetimecame!Hetookoutthesodatin,pouredthecoinsoutandbegantocount.Fivedollars!Hishardworkpaidoff!Holdingthesodatinfirmly,R