Module4-Unit1-Women-of-achievement-公开课基础写作

BasicWriting

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Module4Unit1WomenofachievementWelcome!Canyoutellmesomethingabouther?Brainstorming:HernameisLinQiaozhi.Sheisadoctor.ShewasborninXiamenin1901.Sheiskindandhard-working.Shegraduatedfromamedicalschool.Shedeliveredabout50,000babies.Weallthinkhighlyofher....namejobbirthplace/birthdateevaluationqualitiesachievementseducationIntroduceLinQiaozhiorallyIfwewanttointroducesomeone,whatcanwetalkabout?Whatcanwewriteaboutaperson?1.概况(name,age,birthplace,birthdate,job,background…)2.性格/品质(personality/quality)3.教育〔education〕

4.成就&评价〔achievements&evaluation〕Tips:介绍概况，一个句型轻松搞定Bornin+地点+on/in+时间,sb,同位语〔身份〕，谓语+…Characterintroduction1.概况(name,age,birthplace,birthdate,job,background…)纳尔逊·曼德拉〔NelsonMandela〕1918年出生,南非总统与2013年12月6日去世，享年95岁.____________,NelsonMandela,______________________,passedawayonDecember6th,2013attheageof95.Bornin1918thepresidentofSouthAfricaBornin+地点+on/in+时间,sb,同位语，谓语+…

BorninEnglandin1965,

J.K.Rowling,thewriterofHarryPotter,hasdreamedofbeingawritersinceshewasachild.是《HarryPotter》的作者，1965年出生在英格兰，她从小就梦想着当一名作家。Bornin+地点+on/in+时间,sb,同位语，谓语+…

2.性格/品质(personality/quality)Whatwordsdoyouknowtodescribeaperson’squality?Brainstorming(group-work):

personality/qualitydeterminedbraveconfidentwarm-heartedresponsibleunselfishhonestintelligentgenerouskindmodesthard-workingconsideratehelpfulactiveindependent

Groupwork:Brainstorminggood

out-going…Yogaisnotonlypatientbutalsoeasy-going,soweallloveher.Yogaissopatientandeasy-goingthatallofusloveher.2.性格/品质(personality/quality)Tips:介绍性格特点时，可用固定短语和句型。如:…notonly…butalso……so…that….等

李启明，帅哥，很积极，很热心。LiQiming,ahandsomeboy,is________active_________warm-hearted.李启明,很积极，很热心，我们对他评价很高。LiQimingis___________________________weallthinkhighlyofhim.notonlybutalsosoactiveandwarm-heartedthat赞一下你的小伙伴吧

！Forexample:Bornin

LiaoningProvince,Yoga,27,

ourEnglishteacher,isabeautifullady.

Sheisso

patientandeasy-going

thatallofusloveher./Sheis

notonlypatientbutalsoeasy-going,soweallloveher.Pair-work:她大学毕业后,去了国外深造。Aftershegraduatedfromuniversity,shewentabroad

for

further

education._________________________________,shewentabroad

for

further

educationAftergraduatingfromuniversity省略句3.教育〔education〕

Tips:介绍教育经历时可以用省略句等，使文章简洁。刘平毕业于中山大学，2001年获博士学位。AftergraduatingfromZhongshanUniversity,LiuPinggotadoctor’sdegreein2001.

外向，勤奋的林书豪在哈佛大学(Harvard)毕业后，于2010年参加了NBA。Haveatry!Onepossibleversion:LinShuhaoisnotonlyout-goingbutalsohard-working.AftergraduatingfromHarvardUniversity,hebecameamemberofNBAin2010.Withexcellentperformancein2012,LinShuhaowasconsideredasanewstarinNBAandweallthoughthighlyofhim.MarieCurie,whomadegreatcontributions(奉献)totheworldofscience,wasregardedasoneofthegreatestwomenscientistsintheworld.EinsteindevotedallhislifetoscientificresearchandwasawardedtheNoblePrizeforphysicsin1921.4.成就&评价〔achievements&evaluation〕Group-work:FindouttheexpressionsrelatedtothefollowingChinese凭借优秀的表现_____________________被认为____________________________高度评价_______________________做出巨大奉献_______________________致力于,把…奉献____________________被授予诺贝尔…奖________________________4.成就&评价〔achievements&evaluation〕withexcellentperformancebeconsideredasmakegreatcontributionsto/beregardedasdevote…tobeawardedtheNoblePrizefor…thinkhighlyofFindouttheexpressionsrelatedtothefollowingChinese4.成就&评价〔achievements&evaluation〕Withexcellentperformancein2012,JeremywasconsideredasanewstarinNBA.MarieCurie,whomadegreatcontributions(奉献)totheworldofscience,wasregardedasoneofthegreatestwomenscientistsintheworld.介词短语定语从句Tips:介绍成就评价时要牢记相关表达，善用介词短语或定语从句。1)凭借多部优秀的作品，莫言获得了诺贝尔文学(literature)奖。

Withmanyexcellentworks,MoYanwasawardedtheNobelPrizeforliterature.2)袁隆平为国家作出了巨大奉献，被誉为“杂交水稻之父”〔“FatherofHybridRice”〕。YuanLongping,whomadegreatcontributionstoourcountry,wasregardedastheFatherofHybridRice.Whatcanwewriteaboutaperson?1.概况(name,age,birthplace,birthdate,job,background…)2.性格/品质(personality/quality)3.教育〔education〕

4.成就&评价〔achievements&evaluation〕巩固练习WriteashortpassagetointroduceLinQiaozhiw