2020中考英语复习研讨-书面表达复习教学课件-共30张

2020中考专题复习---书面表达It'stimetopracticeorallanguage.?我的家乡Myhometown?要点：?1.我的家乡在中国的东部，是个小城镇。?2.城里有个美丽的公园，在那里我们可以散步，也可以看到小山、树和湖；城里有一些高楼，最高的楼有二十四层；有很多商店，我们经常去购物。?3.我很喜欢我的家乡。?评分标准?完整性（70%）Completeness?正确性（20%）Correctness?流利性（10%）Fluency?MyhometownisintheeastofChina.Itisasmalltown.Initthereisabeautifulpark.Wecangowalkingthere.Wecanseehills,treesandlakestoo.Therearesometallbuildingsinthetownandthetallestonehastwenty-fourfloors.Therearelotsofshops.Weoftengoshoppingthere.Ilikemyhometownverymuch.Bothofthemarefamouswriters.theylovewriting.Doyoulovewriting?……………..problemsinwriting.……………..………………newwords:whattowritepoorhandwritingReadingmakesafullman,andwritinganexactman.--FrancisBacon阅读使人充实写作使人准确Howtobegoodatwriting?Anartilceusuallyhasthreeparts:Atthebeginningofyourwriting,youshouldwriteaboutyouridea,yourthoughtclearly,directly.youshouldtellyourreaderswhatyouthinkabout...Exerciseoneonlywriteabeginning--howtowritethemainbody?step2:mainbodytips1:five-whmethodFirstmakealistofmainpointstips2:practisewritingaboutJ.K.Rowling.J.K.Rowlingwasbornin1966.Asachild,sheoftenwrotestoriesandreadthemtohersister.In1990,shegottheideaforthefirstHarryPorteronatraintriptoLondon.In1998,ShefinishedthefirstHarryPorterbook.In2007,ShefinshedtheseventhHarryPorter..DateofbirthAsachildIn1990In1998In20071966WrotestoriesandreadTheidea---onatrainTheseventhHarryPorterFinishtheFirstHarryPorterExercise:2J.K.RowlingJ.K.Rowlingwasbornin1966.Asachild,sheoftenwrotestoriesandreadthemtohersister.In1990,shegottheideaforthefirstHarryPorteronatraintriptoLondon.In1998,ShefinishedthefirstHarryPorterbook.In2007,ShefinshedtheseventhHarryPorter...Doyouthinkthisisgood?J.k.Rowling,aworld-famouswriter,wasbornin1965.Asachild,Sheoftenwrotestoriesandreadthemvividlytohersister.In1990,whileshewasonatraintoLondon,theideaforthefirstHarryPortercametohermind.ThenIn1998,shesuccessfullyfinishedthefirstHarryPorterbook,andin2007shefinallyfinishedtheseventhbookoftheseries,that'sthelastoneoftheHarryPorter./vividli/Thisisbetter?Why?J.k.Rowling,aworld-famouswriter,wasbornin1966.Asachild,sheoftenwrotestoriesandreadthemvividlytohersisterThenIn1998,shesuccessfullyfinishedthefirstHarryPorterbook,andin2007shefinallyfinishedtheseventhbookoftheseries,that'sthelastoneoftheHarryPorter.usemoreAdj/Adv!---makeyoursentencesmorebeautiful/vividli/Thisisbetter?Why?ThenIn1996,shesuccessfullyfinishedthefirstHarryPorterbook,andin2007shefinallyfinishedtheseventhbookoftheseriesuselinkingwords!--makeyoursentencesmoreformalmorelinkingwords:9Aunit1:and,but,or,so,both..and,notonly...butalso,either...or,neihter...nor.9AUnit4:before,after,when,while,till,untill,assoonas,whenever.9Aunit5:because,as,since.9Aunit6:if,unless.9Aunit7:although,though,so...that,such...that,sothat.使用学过的连词改写作文片段本文描述Mike痴迷于足球，一到家就打开电视。本文节选自描写粗心的害处。本文描述自己爸爸乐于助人，一有钱就帮助需要的人。Usefamoussayings!--makeyoursentencesmorepowerfulAbadbeginningmakesabadending.恶其始者必恶其终。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患难见真情。Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事实胜于雄辩。wheninRome,doastheRomansdo.入乡随俗。Theearlybirdcathestheworm.早起的鸟儿有虫吃。结合语境，正确使用谚语，增添色彩。AnappleadaykeepsthedoctorawayPracticemakesperfect结合语境，正确使用谚语，增添色彩。Manyhandsmakelightwork.thelastparagraphstatesagainyouridea,thought...weallthinkthathe/sheshould.......welookforwardto........Inaword,….isso…that.......inmyopinion,.........usefulexpressions:Goodsentencesforending优美例文结尾段落展示！推荐信，结尾部分再次强调所推荐人员适合这个职务。结尾再次强调，人并非天生有才能，坚持熟能生巧的观点。假设你是英文周刊EnglishWeekly的特约记者，请以“Myschool”为题，写一则80词左右的简讯，介绍我校的变化.内容提示见下表：简介位于邳州东，近2年变化巨大过去没有操场，没有食堂，没有宿舍楼现在新的操场已经建立，环境优美，空气清新，食堂、宿舍楼正在建设中......问题尚存一些问题，其中之一是绿化太少，厕所还没有建好，给师生带来很多的不便展望……要求：1、简讯须包括表格中所有信息，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2、表格中“展望”一栏，请用自己的2-3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥exercise:3中考英语作文评分标准分数段要求17-20分要点齐全，书写工整，基本无语法拼写错误。13-16分要点基本齐全，语言欠流畅，有一些语法或拼写错误，但尚能达意。9-12分要点基本齐全，语言欠流畅，有一些语法或拼写错误，但尚能达意。5-8分要点不全，语言不流畅，错误较多，影响理解。1-4分仅写出１－２个要点。1)usemoreAdj/Adv!--makeyoursentencesmorebeautiful2)uselinkingwords!--makeyoursentence