高三英语新题型读后续写不同主题分析-帮助他人学案(含答案)

高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析--帮助他人板块一--例文阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。WhentheemployeesattheDomino’spizzaplaceinSalem,Oregon,hadn’treceivedanyorderfromKirkAlexanderformorethan2weeks,theyknewsomethingwasn’tright.Kirkwasaloyalcustomerandthestaffallknewhim.Soitwasnaturalthattheygotworriedwhentheyhadnonewsabouthim.Theirconcernsavedhislife.SarahFuller,thegeneralmanagerattheDomino’sbranch,saidthatKirk,whowas48yearsold,hadbeenaloyalcustomersince2009.“Heorderseveryday,oreveryotherday,”Sarahsaid.Normally,hisordercameuponthescreenbecauseheorderedonline.Sowesawitcameacrossthescreenandwewerethinking,“Oh,Kirk’sorder.”Afterafewdayswithoutasingleorder,Sarahandthestaffstartedtoworry.AfewDomino’sdrivershadmentionedthattheyhadn’tseenhisordercomeacrosstheirscreeninawhile.Sarahcheckedthesystemandsawthatnoorderhadcomein11days.Sotheydecidedtoinvestigate.SarahdecidedtosendTracyHamblen,adeliverdriver,toKirk’splace.Whenhegotthere,heimmediatelyknewsomethingwaswrong.WhilethelightsandTVwereon,Kirkdidnotcometothedoor.Additionally,hisphonewentdirectlytovoicemail.SoTracyimmediatelycalled911.Para.1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Para1:Whenthepolicearrivedattheplace,theyheardacryforhelpfromtheinsideofthehouse.Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.DuetothequickactionsofTracy,KirkisinstableconditionattheSalemHospital.TheDomino’semployeesreceivedalotofpraiseonlinefortheirunbelievablethoughtfulness.Buttheysaidthatitwasjustpartoftheirjobandtheywerejustdoingtheirjob.Para2:Afewdayslater,Kirkwasreleasedfromthehospital.HecametotheDomino’spersonallywithsomehomemadecookiestosaythank--youtoSarahandtheDomino’sstaff.TheDomino’smentionedthat“Caringforcustomersshouldnotbetakenatfacevalue.Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.”Kirk’sstoryhasmadethispizzashopevenmorepopularinthecommunity,andithasreceivedmoreorderseversince.【解析】【分析】文章以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个披萨店的员工，细心地发现近期没有收到来自老顾客Kirk的订单，于是派人前去查看，发现Kirk生病并及时报警就医，确保了Kirk的安全。员工的善举为披萨店赢得了更多的称赞和订单。【详解】1.段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“当警察赶到现场时，”可知，第一段可描写警察将Kirk送到医院的经过。

②由第二段首句内容“几天后，Kirk出院了。”可知，第二段可描写Kirk出院后去披萨店感谢员工们拯救了他的生命以及该披萨店因为善意举动而为自己赢得更多的订单和顾客。续写线索：呼救——成功被救助——感谢——店员表达观点——披萨店更受欢迎

3.词汇激活

行为类

①大声求救：cryforhelp/shoutforhelp/screamforhelp

②受到赞扬：receivedalotofpraise/bepraisedgreatly

③照顾，护理：caringfor/takingcareof/

情绪类

①.感谢：saythank--you/expressappreciation/showappreciation/showhisgratitude/begrateful

②.体贴：thoughtfulness/beingconsiderate

【点睛】

[高分句型1].Inside,theyfoundKirk,whowasinneedofimmediatemedicalhelp.(由关系代词who引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Kirk。)

[高分句型2].Weshouldrememberthatthecustomersdeterminethesuccessofourcompanyandinturnwecanalsohaveanimpactontheirlives,smallorbig.(that引导宾语从句作remember的宾语。)版块二---读后续写精彩词句集锦legShecrossedthefinishline

ontiredlegs.她用她那疲惫的双腿穿过了终点线。Herosetohisfeet

onshakylegs.他双腿颤抖地站了起来。His

legsweresoweak

thathecouldhardlystand.他腿软的几乎站不住了。Shebeginsdancing,

kickingherlegs

highintheair.

她开始跳舞，做了空中高踢腿动作。Aftertheaccidenthe

hadnofeelinginhislegs.

事故过后，他的腿丧失了知觉。Themudstucktoherboots,makingherfeetheavyandher

legstired.

她的靴子上沾满了泥，使她举步沉重，双腿疲惫不堪。Jill

crossedherlegs

andrestedherchinononefist,asiflostindeepthought.

吉尔盘着腿，一个拳头支着下巴，仿佛陷入了沉思。Hefelloverthistime,flatonhisbackwithhis

legswide.

他这次摔倒了，背部着地，双腿叉开。Shesankintoanarmchairand

crossedherlegs.

她坐到一把扶手椅上，跷起了二郎腿。footHe

got

shakily

tohisfeet.他颤抖地站了起来。She

jumpedtoherfeet

whensheheardthenews.当她听到这个消息时，她跳了起来。Shewas

tapping/

stampingherfeet

impatiently.她不耐烦地跺着脚。She

draggedher

feet

asshereluctantlyfollowedherparents.她不情愿地跟在父母后面，磨磨蹭蹭地走着。Myfeet

slipped

asIwasabouttoshootandImissedtheball.当我正要射门的时候脚下滑了一下，一脚踢空。Theycarriedhimoutoftheroom

withhisfeetkicking.他们把他拖出房间，他的脚在空中乱踢。Heshiveredashisfeet

touched

thecoldfloor.当他的脚一碰到冰冷的地板时，他哆嗦了一下。Helikesto

puthisfeetup

andwatchTVwhenhegetshome.当他回家的时候，他喜欢翘着脚看电视。

板块三--能力提升（现学现用）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整短文.Iwaswalkingdownthemuddyroadonedaywhenmycellphonerang.Achild'svoiceontheotherendspoketomesoftly,"Dad,pleasecomehacksoon.Imissyousomuch!”Unconsciously,Iknewitwasawrongnumberonceagain.Idon’thaveasingledaughter.Ijusthaveasix-year-oldson.Itisnotunusualtoreceivethiskindofcallsnowadays,soIrepliedrudely,"You'vedialedthewrongnumber!”andthenhungupinanger.Duringthefollowingdays,Igotthesamecallnowandthen.Itdisturbedme,soIeitherrejectedherorhunguprightawayrudely.Icouldn’thelpcomplainingaboutthis,“Whatanimpolitegirl!Howcanshecallmeupoverandoveragain?”How1wishedthelittlegirlwouldstopcausinganytroubletomesomeday!Suddenly,thephonerangupagain.Itwasfromthesamegirl-Itseemedthatshewouldnotgiveupuntilshegotananswer.Sheconstantlycalledmeup.EvenifIdidnotgiveherananswer,shestilldialedmynumberfromtimetotime.EventuallyIunwillinglyansweredthephone.1heardtheweakvoiceofthatlittlegirl,“Dad,pleasecomebacknow.Imissyousomuch!Momtoldmethiswasnotawrongnumber.Itisyourcellphonenumber,right?Dad,Iaminsomuchpain!Momsaidyouweretoobusytotakecareofme.Sheistiredoutfromlookingafterme.Dad,Iknowyouarebusy.Ifyoucannotcomehome,pleasekissmeagaininthephone,OK?”Theinnocentrequestwasdifficulttoreject.Imadealoudkissintothephoneandheardaweakvoicesaying,“Thankyou....Dad,Iamso...happy,so…happy注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Icouldn’twaittoaskthewomanhowherdaughterwas.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】(Onepossibleversion)Shortlyafterthis,Ibecameinterestedinwhohadbeenontheotherendofmyphone.WhenIcalledthenumberback,awomananswered,“Sorry,sir.Iamreallysorrytobotheryou.Ididwanttocalltoapologize.”Fromthewoman,Ilearntthatthegirlhadbonecancerwhenshewasborn,andunfortunatelyherfatherdiedinanaccidentweeksago.Thelittlegirlsufferedfromunbearabletreatmenteveryday.Feelingpainful,shewouldcryforherdadwhohadalwaysencouragedher,sohermothergaveherarandomnumber.Icouldn’twaittoaskthewomanhowherdaughterwas.Thewomanthoughtforawhile,sayingsadly,“Shehasgone.Youmusthavekissedheronthephone,andshewentwithasmileasshetightlyheldthecellphonewithwhichshecouldhearhervoice...”Onhearingthis,Icouldn’tkeepbackmysadfeeling,tearsstreami