高中英语应用文写作课件

英语书面表达EnglishCompositionWriting2021/5/91Whatmakesagoodessay?Theessay2021/5/92StructureofaGoodComposition1.Topicparagraph2.SupportingParagraphs3.Concludingparagraph2021/5/93四大内容：Topicparagraph(Introductionparagraph)

Generalstatement

开头段：四大内容：问候；自我介绍；写信背景；写信目的。2021/5/94Wellbegunishalfdone.开头段：1、问候Howareyoudoing?Howiseverythinggoing?2、自我介绍Iam

Lihua,a17-year-oldboystudyinginXXXmiddleschool.IamLiHua,who…2021/5/95Wellbegunishalfdone.3、写信背景（写信的缘由）Iheard/learnedthat…Yousaidinyourlastletterthat…4、写信目的Now,Iamwritingthislettertodosth.2021/5/96hadplannedtodosth.gotothemovies/gotothecinema/watchamovieon(this)Sundayafternoon/on(at)theweekendbreak/keepone’spromise/wordapologizetosb.fordoingsth.makeanapologytosb.fordoingsth.I’msorrytodosth./that…因为失约，向对方道歉2021/5/97DearPeter,IfeelterriblysorrytohavebrokenmypromisethatIwouldseeafilmwithyouonthiscomingSundayafternoon.Pleaseacceptmysincereapology!因为失约，向对方道歉that引导同位语从句2021/5/98

SupportingParagraphs(Body)Paragraphs

TSSSSSSSSSFirstly,...Secondly,...Moreover,...Finally,...However,...Inaddition（另外）,Furthermore（而且）,2021/5/99TheparagraphWhatmakesagoodparagraph?2021/5/910正确使用有关连接词

时间先后：first,then,later,intheend,eventually,最后sincethen,afterawhile转折关系：but,however,onthecontrary（相反地）nevertheless（然而）因果关系：because,since,as,thanksto,owingto,asaresultof,dueto,becauseofforthereasonthat,thus,therefore2021/5/911正确使用有关连接词

让步关系：though,although,evenif,eventhough,as

递进关系：what’smore/worse,tomakemattersworseinaddition,furthermoreontheonehand…ontheotherhand条件关系：if,unless,aslongas（只要）,onconditionthat…(如果）表列举：forexample/instance,take…forexample,that’stosay,inotherwords表总结：inshort,inbrief,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole,ashasbeenstated,allinall,tosumup,personally,insummary2021/5/912FirstlySecondlyThirdly......①Tobeginwith/Firstofall②Inaddition/besides/furthermore/moreover/What'smore/atthesametime③AtLast/intheend/finally/eventually/Lastbutnotleast正确使用一些承上启下的连接词或短语2021/5/913用于陈述观点的词或短语Personally,Frommypointofview,Inmyopinion,Inmyview,AsfarasI'mconcerned,Iholdtheideathat......Asforme,Asregardstome,2021/5/914解释失约的原因（时态），安排下次活动esbeabouttodosth.when…beonthepointofdoingsth.when…receiveone’scallsbcallme,sayingthat…/tellingmethat…takepartin/joinin/attendtheassaycontestthetestwillbeheldonSundayafternoonthereason(why…)isthat…forgive/pardonsb.ifyouarefree…/ifit’sconvenientforyou…gofor/onapicnic,goshopping……Isuggestdoingsth/

Isuggestthat…该部分内容可以适当拓展2021/5/915解释失约的原因(时态），安排下次活动es

Yesterdayafternoon,IwasabouttoleavethedormitorywhenIreceivedmyChineseteacher’scall,tellingmethatIhavetoattendtheessaycontestheldthisSundayafternoon.Ihopethechangewon’tcausetoomuchtroubleforyou.ShallwegotohaveamealtogethernextSundayafternoon?Ifitisconvenientforyou,let’smeetat5:00p.m.outsidetheschoolgate.Ifnot,pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.WhenIreceivedacallfrommyChineseteacherwhoaskedmetoattendtheessaycontest……2021/5/916TheconclusionWhatmakesagoodconclusion?2021/5/917take…intoconsideration/accountIwouldappreciateitifyoucould…Iwouldbegratefultoyouifyoucould…I’mlookingforwardto…结尾段2021/5/918I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.结尾段2021/5/9191.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）2.ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用as倒装句)3.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)4.Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyourhelp.(强调句）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.Practice怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaperthatheknewwhathadhappened.

ItwasbecauseofyourhelpthatIpassedthephysicsexam.2021/5/9205.Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)6.Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)7.Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）

8.Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.2021/5/9219．Hehadhardly

comebackfromBeijingwhenhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)10.Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)11.Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)12.Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Hardly

hadhecome

backfromBeijing

when

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Itturnedouttobe

thattheplanwasafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.2021/5/922句式改写

e.g.

大家都知道，清明节是我国的传统节日。在这一天，人们会去给亲人扫墓来寄托他们的哀思。WeallknowTomb-sweepingDayisatraditionalfestiva