人教版高二英语写作公开课-healthy-life-

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AdvicefromGrandad12Para.1Para.2Para.3Para.4Para.5Grandad’slife.Theforwritingtheletter.Threeinwhichonebecomesaddictedtocigarettes.Theharmfulofsmoking.healthyreasonwayseffectshopeScanthetextandgetthemainideaofeachparagraphGrandad’sandhisadvice13Writingstructure

DearXXX,

Lovefrom,XXXthereasonforwritingthelettertheharmfuleffectsadviceandhope14CompetitionTime!15Discussion

SupposeyouhaveagoodfriendcalledDean,whoisaddictedtoplayingonlinegameslikemanyyoungpeople.Hisstudyissufferinggreatly.

Whatwouldyousaytohiminordertopersuadehimtogiveupplayingonlinegames?16Discussion17Alettertomyfriend现象：据报道70%的高中生学习成绩不好是由于迷上网络游戏。我发现你不久前开始玩游戏，现在发现很难戒掉。危害：1.伤害视力，容易患上颈椎病。沉溺于玩游戏，不能集中注意力于学习。3.游戏充满暴力。反复玩，会不由自主以暴力来解决争端希望：我认为你该戒掉玩游戏了，真的希望你能像其它同学一样成为优秀学生。建议：……18Alettertomynephew现象：据报道70%的高中生学习成绩不好是由于迷上网络游戏。你妈妈告诉我说你不久前开始玩游戏，现在发现很难戒掉。(Itisreportedthat….dueto)危害：1.伤害视力，容易患上颈椎病。(dodamageto,Itiseasytodo,getagreatpaininone’sneck)沉溺于玩游戏，不能集中注意力于学习。（beaddictedto)3.游戏充满暴力。反复玩，会不由自主以暴力来解决争端（overandoveragain,automatically)希望：希望戒掉玩游戏并像其它同学一样努力学习。(Itistimetodo…Idohope….asadj.a+n.as)建议：1.…2.…3.…19Discussion:WhatadviceshouldIgivetohim?WhatadviceshouldIgivetohim?Firstly,…Secondly,…Lastly,…20Abalanceddiet平衡膳食Eatlessmeatandmorevegetables,fruit21getclosetonature拥抱大自然22

Singing23Dancing24Playingbasketball25DoingTaijiAhealthylifestyleYuga瑜伽26Running适量运动exercisewithfriendsregularly27mentallyhealthy心理健康positiveattitudealwayshappyagoodstateofmindbeoptimisticKeepagoodmood2829AlettertomyfriendDearDean,Itisreportedthat70%ofthehighschoolstudentssufferfromlowmarksduetoplayingonlinegames.Ifindthatyoustartedtoplaygamesandnowyouarefindingitdifficulttogiveitup.Youmaynotknowmuchabouttheharmfuleffectsofplayinggames.Infact,itcandoterribledamagetoyoureyesightorthatitiseasierforyoutogetagreatpaininyourneck.Besides,addictedtogames,youcan’tconcentrateonyourlessons.Asaresult,youquicklyfallbehindothers.What’smore,manygamesarefilledwithviolence.Ifyouplaythesegamesoverandoveragain,youmayalsosettledisagreementswithviolenceautomatically,whichmayresultincrime.30Howtostopplayinggames

Itisnoteasytostopplayinggames,butmillionshavemanagedtoquitandsocanyou.Firstly,listthedisadvantagesofthatbadhabit.Thenputthelisttotheplacewhereyoucanseeiteasily.Secondly,findsomethingfunandgoodtodo,butnotgamingrightaway.Leavemoretimewithyourfriends,moretimetohangoutatabookstore,joinasportteamorsomethingelse.Lastly,makeaneffectivescheduleandfindasupervisor.Heorshewillcheckyourprocessofthetimetableandalsowillgivewarningifyougotoplaygames.Yoursincerely,XXX31细审题，三确定1.确定体裁：本文为

；2.确定人称：本文的主要人称应该为

；3.确定时态：主要使用

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。建议信第二人称一般现在时一般将来时32巧衔接，顺成文first,firstly,inthefirstplace,firstofall...second,secondly,inthesecondplace,next,then,foranother...third,thirdly,besides,inaddion,futhermore,what'smore,apartform,moreover...atlast,lastly,finally,inthelastplace,lastofall,lastbutnotleast...inaword,insummary,tosumup,inshort,inbrief,inconlcusion...33写作“一二三”原则

短文中最好有“一”个定语从句若可能再使用其他“两”个复合句“三”处亮点:较好的短语(词组),连接词或得体的词汇Tip34Firstwealthishealth.

——Emerson爱默生

健康是人生第一财富。

Hewhohashealthhashope,andhewhohashopehaseverything.拥有健康,就拥有希望;拥有希望,就拥有一切。

Summary35Writingtask假如你叫李华，收到你的美国笔友Cathy的来信，得知她近几年经常生病因而影响了学习，原因如下；

1、为了保持身材