九年级中考英语总复习-作文讲评课件(共15张课件)

EnglishComposition英语作文

书面表达：近来，天津市正在创建全国文明城市，这一话题在我校引起了热烈讨论。作为一名中学生，请根据下面提示信息给学校英语专栏写一篇短文，呼吁大家如何为创建文明城市贡献力量。1.见面跟人打招呼2.与同学友好相处3.保持教室及社区环境卫生4.帮助家人做力所能及的事5.在公共场合遵守秩序6.如果友人不遵守规则，你会…要求:书写规范，语句通顺，行文流畅，结构完整，语法正确词数80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数短文应包括所有要点，不要逐字翻译，但可适当发挥。2018年九年级模拟考试英语作文提示词：话题issue全国文明城市社区thenationalcivilizedcity

遵守公共秩序obeypublicorder绝望型抄写型奋斗型精英型Problems

inyourwriting

要点不全词数太少无头无尾缺少过渡语法错误书写潦草卷面涂改

书面整洁干净，行文连贯通顺，句式多样，语法基本无误或有少量语法错误。Enjoythefollowingcompositions.Wehadbetterhelpourparentsdothehouseworkwhichwecando.(季建雯)It’sourdutytoprotect

ourenvironment.(周晶美)Weshoulddosomethingwecandotobuildanationalcivilizedcity.(郭爽)It’sagoodideatoget

onwellwithothers.

(姚春情)It’simportanttokeep

ourcommunityclean.(季雅杰)

Enjoythefollowingsentences.评分标准：第五档（13-15分）能写明全部要点，文章中语法无误，行文连贯且通顺，表达清楚且丰富。第四档（10-12分）能写明全部或大部分内容要点，文中有少量语法错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（7-9分）

能写明部分内容要点,文中有较多语法错误，尚能达意。第二档（4-6分）

只能写出少部分内容要点，文中有许多语法错误，只有个别句子可读。第一档（0-3分）

只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分；写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。评分：_______理由：______

Version1:First,studentssayhellowhentheypeople.Second,studentsarefriendlytoanybody.Third,studentsshouldkeeptheenvironmentiscleaninclassandincommunity.Fourth,studentshavebetterhelpparentstodohousework.Inpublic,wemustobeypublicorder.Finally,whenyoumetsomebodynottoobeyorder.Youmuststophis.andyoucantellherightisaction.

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Version2:

Englishtextbooksplayan

importantpartinourstudyof

English.Theycanhelpuslearn

Englishwell.Itcanalsohelp

openourmindsandmakeour

schoollifecolorful.We’velearned

manywonderfulthingsinthe

worldinourtextbooks.Wealso

learntalotaboutculturesaround

theworld.Myfavoritepersonis

SpudWebb.I’velearnedalot

fromhim.评分标准：第五档（13-15分）能写明全部要点，文章中语法无误，行文连贯且通顺，表达清楚且丰富。第四档（10-12分）能写明全部或大部分内容要点，文中有少量语法错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（7-9分）

能写明部分内容要点,文中有较多语法错误，尚能达意。第二档（4-6分）

只能写出少部分内容要点，文中有许多语法错误，只有个别句子可读。第一档（0-3分）

只能写出语所要求内容有关的一些单词或1-2个要点。正确抄写全部参考词汇给1分；写出相关要点的词组给2-3分。评分：_______理由：______13

Version2:Asamiddleschoolstudent,weshoulddosomethingwecandotobuildthenationalcivilizedcity.Hereissomeadviceforus.Firstofall,whenwemeetsomeone,weshouldsayhellotothem.Andweshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Second,wehadbetterkeepourclassroomandcommunityclean.Becauseweshouldprotectourenvironment.Atlast,wemustobeypublicorderinpublicplaces.Ifsomeoneagainsttherules,weshouldstophimandtellhimabouttherules.Ifeveryonecandosomething,ourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.

语法知识混乱，运用不够准确代词:Wemuststophefromdoingit.Youshouldgetonwellwithyouclassmates.时态:Ibelieveourcitygetbetterandbetter.主谓一致:Ifsomeonedon’tobeytherules,…词性：Wemustn’tagainsttherules.习惯搭配:Weshouldbefriendlywithothers.Weshouldkeepcleantheclassroom.

him

willgetbetterandbetter.break

doesn’ttoTypicalmistakes(典型错误)yourkeeptheclassroomclean.句型结构Chinglish现象

IverylikeTianjin.Whenweatschool…Ifhavepeopledoesn’tobeypublicorder…areatschool…

likeTianjinverymuch.

Ifsomeonedoesn’tobeypublicorder…Recently,Tianjinisbuildingthecivilizedcity.Atourschool,wearetalkingaboutthisissue.Thenwhatcanwedotohelpbuildthenationalcivilizedcity?First,Ithinkitispolitetosayhellowhenwemeetsomeone.Andalsoweshouldgetonwellwithourclassmates.Second,keepourclassroomsandcommunitycleansothatwecanliveinacomfortableenvironment.Andasastudent,weshouldhelpparentsdosomethingwecando.What’smore,whenweareinpublic,weshouldalwaysobeypublicorder.Andifsomeonedoesn’tobeypublicorder,it’sourdutytostophimandtellhimtodotherightthing.

Inmyopinion,Tianjinisourhometown,so

let’stryourbesttomakeitabetterplaceandhelpbuildthenationalcivilizedcity.英语作文万能的三段式“观点--事例--总结“StandardofagoodcompositionNomistakes没有错误

Enoughcontent内容充足Finelanguage语言丰富Beautifulhandwriting书写工整1.Youshoulddo…2.Youhadbetterdo…3.It’sagoodideatodo…4.It’sbettertodo…5.It’simportant/necessarytodo…6.Let’stryourbesttodo…

7.It’sourdutytodo…

Giveadvice（提建议）Youaresupposedtodo…

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