新教材2025版高中英语Unit5PoemsSectionⅣWriting-写一篇诗歌评论学案新人教版选择性必修第三册

SectionⅣWriting——写一篇诗歌评论文体感知诗歌评论就是对诗歌进行分析和评论。这必需建立在很好地把握原诗主旨的基础之上，而非排列原诗的诗句。一首好的诗歌，自然有其动人之处。行文时可侧重于诗中最打动你的某一方面来抒发自己的感想。其基本架构为：增分佳句首段：介绍诗歌的作者状况1．Theauthorlovednatureandoftenwanderedinthefield.这位作者喜爱大自然，常常在田野中闲逛。2．Hereisapoementitled“SympathyontheFarmers”byLiShen,whichenjoysgreatpopularityamongreaders.这首诗的题目是《悯农》，作者是李绅，这首诗很受读者欢迎。中段：介绍诗歌的内容以及主题等1．Thepoemisaboutafarmerwhoisworkinginthefield.这首诗是关于一个在田地里劳作的农夫的。2．Wecanlearnanimportantlessonfromthepoem.我们能从这首诗中学到一个重要的道理。尾段：表达自己的感想1．I'mdeeplymovedbytheloveshowninthepoem.我被这首诗中展示的爱深深感动了。2．Iwillbeencouragedbythepoemwhengettingintotrouble.当我遇到困难时，这首诗会激励我。典题演练请依据下面的要求写一篇关于唐诗《悯农》的评论。SympathyontheFarmers—LiShenfromTangDynastyAtnoon,afarmerisweeding,Downthefield,sweatisdropping.Whoknowsriceonadish,Everygrainisfullofmoiling?留意：词数80左右。第一步布局谋篇其次步遣词造句1．这首题为《悯农》的诗是李绅写的。______________________________________“SympathyontheFarmers”．2．李绅很受中国读者的欢迎。LiShen__________________________________．3．夏日正午时刻，外面天气燥热；一位农夫依旧在田地里除草。Itissohotoutsideatthissummernoontime.Thefarmer____________________________．4．他全身湿透，汗水不断地掉在庄稼生长的土地上。Heiswetalloverandthesweat________________________________________．Thecropsgrowthere.5．我认为对今日的年轻一代来说，理解这首诗歌并珍惜每一粒粮食是很重要的。Ithink__________________________________________________________thepoemandtreasureeverygrain.第三步句式升级1．用过去分词作后置定语以及定语从句合并升级其次步中的句1和句2________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.2．用as引导的倒装句改写其次步中的句3________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.3．用with复合结构和where引导的定语从句改写其次步中的句4________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.4．用“itisof＋抽象名词＋主语从句”结构改写其次步中的句5________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.第四步完备成篇用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇英语短文。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SectionⅣWriting——写一篇诗歌评论典题演练其次步1．HereisapoembyLiShenanditistitled2．isverypopularwithChinesereaders3．isstillweedinginthefields4．isfrequentlyfallingintothesoil5．it'sveryimportantfortheyounggenerationtodaytounderstand第三步1．Hereisapoemtitled“SympathyontheFarmers”byLiShenwho/thatisverypopularwithChinesereaders2．Hotasitisoutsideatthissummernoontime,thefarmerisstillweedinginthefields3．Heiswetalloverwiththesweatfrequentlyfallingintothesoil,wherethecropsgrow4．Ithinkit'sofgreatimportancethattheyounggenerationtodayshouldunderstandthepoemandtreasureeverygrain第四步Hereisapoemtitled“SympathyontheFarmers”byLiShenwho/thatisverypopularwithChinesereaders.Itgoeslikethis:Hotasitisoutsideatthissummernoontime,thefarmerisstillweedinginthefields.Heiswetalloverwiththesweatfrequentlyfallingintothesoil,wherethecropsgrow.Butwhoknowsexactlyallourfoods,thedeliciousdishesonourtable,comefromthehardworkofthefarmers?ThereasonwhyLiShenwrot