四级作文专题-(一)

四级作文评分标准评判作文四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(TopicSentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）1、字母大小写2、怪符号3、单词拼写4、主谓一致5、动词时态6、名词单复数使文章富有表现力的手段：1、使用有难度的词汇；2、使用形容词修饰名词，用副词修饰动词或整个句子；3、使用被动语态；4、使用倒装句；(notonly...butalso...；only...)5、尽可能地使用名词，而不是习惯中的动词和形容词。作文专题(一)对比选择型Par.1S1开门见山，直入主题,表明对某事人们各有不同看法。Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson…Thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeopleasto…Whenaskedabout…,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.作文专题(一)对比选择型方案一：S2&3.分述两种不同看法。Somepeopleprefer…Otherstendto…Somepeopleconsider…However,othersthink…Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat…Intheiropinions,…Besides…方案二：S2-4.也可只陈述一种观点，并给出理由。作文专题(一)对比选择型方案一：Par.2分述两种观点的不同理由Somepeoplemaysay…Theyholdthisopinionbecause…However,othersbelieve…Theyarguethat…方案二：Par.2陈述观点二的理由However,othershold…Theymaintain…And…作文专题(一)对比选择型Par.3自己的观点、理由及总结全文Personally,Iaminfavorof…Firstly,…Secondly…Mostimportantofall…Takingabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,we/Imayreasonablyconcludethat…Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iamfor…Foronething,…Foranother,…Forinstance,…Therefore,asstatedaboveSpecialistorGeneralist1）有人认为专业人士更有发展前途2）有人认为通才更有发展前途3）你的看法SpecialistorGeneralistPar.1Thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeopleastowhetherastudentshouldbeaspecialistorageneralist.Somepeopleconsiderthatitisbestforcollegestudenttofocusondevelopingskillsinonefield.However,othersthink

thataversatilegraduateismorewelcomedinthecompetitivejobmarket.SpecialistorGeneralistSomepeoplemaysaythatitisimpossibletodemandcollegestudentstobecomeanall-roundgeneralistwithin4years.Theyholdthisopinionbecausetheybelievethatastudentcannotspendenoughtimeonseveralfieldsatthesametimebecauseofthelimitationofenergy.However,othersbelievethatcollegestudentsshouldstretchthemselvestoasmanyfieldsaspossible.Theyarguethatgeneralistswhohaveknowledgeonseveralareasarehighlydemanded.SpecialistorGeneralistPar.3Personally,Iaminfavoroftheformeropinion.Firstly,Idon’tthinkitisadvisablethatcollegestudentsequallyspendtheirtimeandenergyonseveralfieldsatthesametime.Secondly,enterprisesusuallyofferspecialistshighersalaries.Mostimportantofall,thedevelopmentofhigh-techneedsspecialists.Takingabove-mentionedfactorsintoconsideration,Imayreasonablyconcludethattobeaspecialististherightchoiceformoststudents.

专题(二)现象解释型Par.1摆出现象。…hasbecomeacommonpartofpeople’slife.And…hasalwaysarousedthegreatconcern.Whatimpressesusmostis…Thereasons…arevaried.Wehavewitnessed…Accordingto…,…And…Manyreasonscontributeto……hasbeenbroughtintofocus.Nowadays,…Inaddition,…Manyreasonscontributeto…专题(二)现象解释型Par.2分析原因Amongthevariousreasons,…playsanimportantpart.Thatistosay…Whatismore…Forexample…Tobeginwith,…Moreover,…Inaddition,…Asaresult…Generallyspeaking,…Firstofall,...Moreover,…Therefore,…专题(二)现象解释型Par.3自己的观点、依据及总结全文Whentalkingabout…Ontheonehand,…Ontheotherhand,…Inbrief,…Astome,…Firstofall,…Besides,…Toconclude…AsfarasIamconcerned,…Asweknow,…Furthermore,…Inaword,…TheHarmofPCGames1)现在电脑游戏在校园里很流行2)电脑游戏的危害3)怎样正确对待电脑网络游戏TheHarmofPCGamesPar.1Students’playingPCgameshasbeenbroughtintofocus.Nowadays,manystudentsoftenspendtheireveningsplayingsuchgames.Inaddition,theharmresultedfromPCgamesbringgreatconcernoftheparentsandthesociety.Manyreasonscontributetotheconcern.TheHarmofPCGamesPar.2Generallyspeaking,thereasonsfortheincreasingconcernonstudents’playinggamescanbelistedasfollows.Firstofall,playingPCgamesisanenormouswasteoftimeanditwillmakeushavelittletimeforourstudy.Moreover,thosewhoplayPCgamesdayandnightwillbeharmedphysicallyforlackofrestandsleep.Therefore,wemaysayplayingPCgamesreallydoharmtous.TheHarmofPCGamesPar.3AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldtrytoresistthetemptationofPCgamescarefully.Asweknow,studyisourpriority,andweshouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeandenergyongames.Furthermore,mostofusarenotfinanciallyindependentandweshouldn’tputanotherburdenonourparents.Inaword,weshouldtrytoavoidtheharmsofPCgame.OnStress1.随着生活节奏的加快,越来越多的现代人体会到了来自生活和工作的压力2.压力产生的原因3.我的看法OnStressPart1

1.Nowadays,stresshasgraduallybecomeanoticeablepartofoureverydaylifeinmodernsociety.2.Foronething,manypeoplebecomeillbecauseoftheLong-termstressandstrainintheirwork.3.Foranother,manypeoplefindithardtorelaxthemselvesafterworktime.4.it’sobviousthatweshouldlearnaboutthereasonofstress.OnStressPart25.Manyremarkablefactorscontributetotheupwardstressindexofcityresidents.6.Firstofall,thecompetitionforthejobscausesgreatestpressureonemployees.7.Inaddition,uncertaintyaboutthefuturemakesthesituationevenworse.8.Thirdly,thestressofmodernlifeisalsooneofthemainfactor.OnstressPart39.Astome,Ibelievethatthestressindex