作文05 建议信-备战2022年中考英语满分作文+万能模板+热点素材

2017-2021年中考满分作文精选专题05建议信【2020·江苏省泰州市中考真题】假定你是李华，三年的初中生活就要结束了你和好友Mike分别在即，请你根据以下要点提示，用英语给Mike留言：1.回忆你俩之间一段难忘的经历（如互相帮助、互相鼓励或一起参加某项活动等），并谈谈你的感受；2.你对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；3.你对Mike的祝福和期待。要求：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；3.词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearMike,Howtimeflies!It’stimetosaygoodbye._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,Lihua参考范文内容参考范文内容DearMike,Howtimeflies!It’stimetosaygoodbye.Wehavestudiedinourschoolforthreeyears.Wehadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears’life.Oneofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.Assoonasyoufoundmyproblem,youhadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,youhavekepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I’vebecomeinterestedinEnglishandI’mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofyourbestfriends.I’velearnedalotfromyou.It’simportanttokeephealthy.Ihopeyoucankeepdoingsportseveryday.Youcantakepartinallkindsofsportsinordertobecomestronger.Ithinksportscanmakeyouenergetic.Iwishyoucanbecomebetterandbetterineverything.Iamlookingforwardtoyoursuccess.Yourssincerely,Lihua考题解析考题解析内容1.题干解读：这是一张留言条。三年的初中生活就要结束，要求给好友Mike留言，回忆难忘的经历并谈谈你的感受；提出对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；对Mike的祝福和期待。2.例文点评：例文包含了所有要点，主要以第一、二人称为主，用一般现在时和一般过去时来写，在讲述最值得回忆的故事时要用一般过去时，其它用一般现在时；内容包含四部分：第一部分开篇点题；第二部分讲述难忘的一件事情及自己的感想；第三部分对Mike今后学习或生活方面的建议；第四部分对Mike的祝福和期待。本文时态使用正确，表达有条理，语句通顺，意思连贯，使用了一些固定句式。3.高分亮点：短语：saygoodbye；dowellin；dowellin；Sincethen；assoonas；haveatalkwithsb；learnalotfrom；keephealthy；takepartin；inorderto；lookforwardto。句型：①让步状语从句NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.②时间状语从句whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.Assoonasyoufoundmyproblem,youhadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.③宾语从句IthinkIamsoluckytobecomeoneofyourbestfriends.【2021·广西梧州市中考真题】假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jenny因视力减退感到不安，向你倾诉。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封电子邮件给她，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法，并提出建议。要点提示：1.近视原因：阅读坏习惯、使用手机时间过长、……2.提出建议：户外活动、做眼保健操、……3.……要求：1.文中必须包括以上内容，可适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出现真实的校名、人名和其他真实信息；3.词数不少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。参考词汇：eyesight视力mobilephone手机DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours参考范文内容LiHua参考范文内容DearJenny,I’msorrytoknowthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.I’d

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题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和提示要点，写出自己认为造成近视的原因以及提出的建议等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

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写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，用第一人称和其他人称相结合来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。【2021·四川省绵阳市中考真题】假定你是李华，请阅读笔友Mike的邮件并回复。给他至少3条建议且说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。To:LiHuaFrom:MikeDearLiHua,Iseverythinggoingwellwithyou?Ihavetosharearoomwithmylittlebrother,andhe’sdrivingmemad!HehasahabitofplayingtheguitarwhenI’mstudying,andhealwaystakesmythingswithoutasking.Itrytokeepmyroomtidy,buthedoesn’t.Ilovemybrother,butsometimeshe’smakingmesoangry!WhatshouldIdo?Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Allthebest,MikeTo:MikeFrom:LiHuaDearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua参考范文内容参考范文内容DearMike,I’msosorrytohearthatyouhavesuchaproblem.

Herearemysuggestionsthatyoucangetonwellwithyourbrother.Firstofall,youcanhaveacommunicationwithyourbrother,andtellhimtoplaytheguitarwhenyouaren’tstudying.Second,youcantellhimnottotakeothers’thingswithoutasking,becauseit’snotpolite.Third,youcantaketurnscleaning,lethimkeepgoodhabits.Allinall,communicatingmaybethefirststepyoushouldthinkabout.Hopeyouwillsolveyourproblemsoon.Bestwishes.LiHua考题解析考题解析内容1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，写作时要按邮件格式来写。在写作时针对笔友Mike在邮件中提到的问题，给他至少3条建议且说明理由。2.写作指导：本文应该用第二人称为主来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；在叙述建议时，力求语言正确，语句通顺，行文连贯，保证条理清晰。【2020·山东省日照市中考真题】假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter因要参加高中入学考试(SSAT)而感到焦虑，来信向你倾诉。请你根据以下提示用英语写一封邮件，提出建议。1.考试态度(放松心情、无需焦虑……)；2.功课准备(用心做功课、学习方法恰当……)；3.减压方式(……)；4.表达祝愿。要求：1.根据提示内容，不要逐字翻译；2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3.词数90左右。DearPeter,IhavelearntyouareworriedaboutthecomingSSAT.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua参考范文内容参考范文内容DearPeter,IhavelearntyouareworriedaboutthecomingSSAT.Herearesomesuggestionsthathelpyou.It’sveryimportantforyoutobeinagoodmood.Don’tbemuchnervousandyoushouldrelaxyourself,whichcangiveyouenoughcouragetofacetheexam.Finshyourschoolworkcarefullyandlistentoyourteachersinclasscarefully.Youcanmakeaplantohelpyoustudywellandchoosethesuitablewaytostudy.Whenyouhavedifficultyleaningyoursubjects,youcanaskyourteachersorclassmatesforhelp.Besides,youcanlistentosomemusicordosomesportstorelievestress.Ihopethatyoucanpasstheexam.Yours,LiHua考题解析考题解析内容1.题干解读：该题目是书信类书面表达，根据彼得的来信，结合题目要求，向彼得提出建议。2.例文点评：例文采用三段式结构，第一段讲述得知彼得担心即将到来的考试；第二段提出具体的建议，可以帮助彼得；第三段向彼得表示祝愿；整篇文章内容完整，结构清晰条理；人称主要是第二人称，时态主要是一般现在时。3.高分亮点：短语：beworriedabout；havedifficultydoingsth.；asksb.forhelp；listentomusic；dosomesports。句型：that引导的限制性定语从句；it’s+形容词+forsb.todosth.；which引导的非限制性定语从句。【2020·湖南省永州市中考真题】假如你是李华，即将进入高中学习，请你写一封电子邮件给英国的笔友Linda，谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧，并请她给出建议。参考词汇：Expectation(向往)meetnewclassmatesandteachersmakedecisionsbymyselfchoosefavoritesubjects…Worryhavenotimeafter-schoolactivitiesfallbehindbedifficulttostudy…注意：1）信中不得出现真实人名，校名和地名；2）80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearLinda,How'sitgoing?I'llstudyinseniorhighschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,参考范文内容LiHua参考范文内容DearLinda,How'sitgoing?I'llstudyinseniorhighschool.I'msohappybecauseIwillmeetnewclassmatesandteachers.I'llalsobeallowedtomakemoredecisionsbymyselfandchoosemyfavoritesubjects.Besides,IexpectthereisalibrarywhereIcanread.However,Ialsohavesomeworries.First,I'mafraidI'llhavenotimeforafter-schoolactivities.Second,perhapsI'llfallbehindothersinsomesubjects.It'salwaysdifficulttostudymathswell.Atlast,I'mafraidthefoodinthenewschoolwon'tagreewithme.WhatcanIdowiththeseproblems?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua考题解析考题解析内容1.题干解读：本题属于书信作文，题目的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据参考词汇写给笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，用一般现在时和一般将来时分段谈了自己对高中生活的向往和担忧，运用了题干中所给的参考词汇，并进行了适当发挥。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3.高分亮点：

单词和短语：beallowedtodosth.；makedecisions；besides；however；after-schoolactivities；perhaps；fallbehind；atlast；agreewith；dowith；lookforwardto。

句型：特殊疑问句；because引导的原因状语从句；宾语从句；therebe句型；where引导的定语从句；it固定句型。【2020·四川省绵阳市中考真题】假定你是李华，请回复笔友Mike的邮件，给他至少3条建议并说明理由。词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数。To:LiHuaFrom:MikeHi,LiHua.Iseverythinggoingwell?Summerholidayiscoming.IplannedagraduationtriptoChinawithmybestfriend.Butwearenotallowedtotravelabroad.Iamsodisappointed.Wouldyoupleasegivemesomeadvice?Allthebest,MikeTo:MikeFrom:LiHuaHi,Mike.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua参考范文内容参考范文内容To:LiHuaFrom:MikeHi,Mike.I'mgladtohearfromyou.Andcongratulationsoncompletingyourstudies.ButIknowyouarenotallowedtotravelabroad.I'msodisappointed.However,therearethingsyoucandoathometoprepareforfuturetripstoChina.Firstly,youcanlearnaboutChineseplacesofinterestandcustomsthroughtheInternetorTV.Secondly,IcansendyoupicturesofsomefamoustouristattractionsinChinabyemail,suchastheGreatWallinBeijing,theSummerPalaceandsoon.Thirdly,youcantalkwithlocalChinesetohelpyoubetterunderstandChinaanditsculture.Finally,Ihopeyouhaveagoodtimeinthesummervacation.IamlookingforwardtoyourearlytriptoChina考题解析考题解析内容1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，假如你是李华，要求你根据笔友Mike的邮件，给他写一封回信，至少给出3条建议并说明理由。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第二人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：hearfrom，learnabout，placesofinterest，byemail，suchas，soon，talkwith，haveagoodtime，lookforwardto。句型：Ihopeyouhaveagoodtimeinthesummervacation.我希望你在暑假过得愉快。Ihope后接宾语从句。IamlookingforwardtoyourearlytriptoChina.我期待着你早日来中国旅行。lookforwardto期待……，固定词组。【2020·四川省雅安市中考真题】现在越来越多的外国人开始学习汉语，假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，写信询问你学习汉语的方法。请你用英语给他回封电子邮件。要点提示：1.你的认识：汉语有用且有趣，是世界上最重要的语言之一。2.你的建议：看汉语电视节目、听磁带；多阅读汉语书籍；尝试用汉语写作；……3.表达祝愿.。注意：1.词数80﹣100，开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；2.短文必须包括所有要点,，可适当发挥,使其连贯、通顺；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等相关信息。DearFrank,How'sitgoing?YouaskedmeaboutthewaysoflearningChineseinyourlastletter.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua参考范文内容参考范文内容DearFrank,How'sitgoing?YouaskedmeaboutthewaysoflearningChineseinyourlastletter.IthinkChineseisusefulandinteresting.Itisoneofthemostimportantlanguagesintheworld.SoitisnecessarytolearnChinesewell.HerearesometipsonhowtolearnChinese.First,youshouldspendmoretimelearningChinesebywatchingChineseTVprogramsandlisteningtotapes.Second,readingmoreChinesebooksisagoodwaytoimproveChinese.Third,youcantrytowriteinChineseanddon’tbeafraidtomakemistakes.IwishyousuccessinlearningChinese.考题解析内容考题解析内容LiHua1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Frank打算学习汉语，因此他写了一封信向你询问有关于学习汉语的方法，要求你根据要点提示给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括你对汉语的认识、学习汉语的方法以及你对他的祝愿和希望；注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第二、第三人称来展开写作，辅以第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。【2021·江苏省常州市中考真题】假如你是Sam，你的英国网友Tom今年九月份将作为交换生来常州学习。他给你写了一封信。请你给Tom写一封英文回信,帮他解答疑惑。DearSam,I’mverygladtohaveachancetostudyinChangzhouthisSeptember.IhearthereisaspecialdayforteachersinChina.Idothinkit’sagoodidea,butstillhavethefollowingquestions:1.WhenisTeachers’Day?What’sthepurposeandmeaningofit?2.Whatdostudentsusuallydoonthatday?Asanexample,whatdidyouoncedotocelebrateit?Ireallywanttodosomethingtojoininthisinterestingfestival.Lookingforwardtoyourguideandhelp.Yours,Tom注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3.词数不少于100，文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。DearSam,I’mverygladtosharewithyouthisspecialfestival.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WishyougoodluckinChangzhou.Yours,Sam参考范文内容参考范文内容DearSam,I’mverygladtosharewithyouthisspecialfestival.Teachers’DayisonSeptember10theveryyear.Itisadayforstudentstogivetheirspecialthankstolovelyteachersandshowpeople’srespectforteachers.Studentsusuallygiveflowers,cardsorothersmallgiftstotheirteachers.Idrewapictureandwroteanarticletomyfavoriteteacherlastyear.Shewasveryhappyandmoved.Wewillhaveabigpartyforourteachersthisyearandyoucanjoinus.Iamsureyouwillhaveagoodtimeonthatday.WishyougoodluckinChangzhou.Yours,Sam考题解析考题解析内容1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容，向Tom介绍教师节的相关内容，并给出一些建议。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍教师节的相关信息以及自己曾经在教师节做过什么；第三段介绍今年教师节的打算，邀请Tom一起参加；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。【2020·内蒙古呼和浩特市中考真题】新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情改变了我们的生活和学习方式。假如你是李华，你很关心国外笔友Jack，请你给他写一封信。内容包括：1.为了抗击疫情，你给他的有关保持健康的四条建议。2.你的线上学习情况。3.鼓励他克服恐惧心理，保持积极心态，相信一定会战胜病毒。参考词汇：thenovelcoronavirus（新冠肺炎）;mask（口罩）;virus（病毒）要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁、可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名等;3.80—100词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。DearJack,Howareyou?Asweknow,thenovelcoronavirushaschangedourlife.Toprotectourselves,herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考范文内容Yours,参考范文内容LiHuaDearJack,Howareyou?Asweknow,thenovelcoronavirushaschangedourlife.Toprotectourselves,herearesomegoodsuggestionsforyou.First,youshouldavoidgoingtocrowdedplaces!Ifyouhaveto,remembertowearamask.You'dbetterkeepatleastonemeterofdistancebetweenyourselfandotherpeople.It'snecessaryforustoopenwindowstoletinfreshairduringtheday.Keephealthyhabitssuchaseatingabalanceddietandexercisingregularly,aswellasgettingenoughsleep.Thenovelcoronavirusstoppedusfromhavinglessonsinschools.However,ourgovernmentandschoolshavemadeeffortstomakeitpossibleforustostudyonline.Wecansharemorelearningresources.Thenewwayisveryconvenientandeffective.Lastbutnotleast,duringthehardtime,weshouldkeepapositiveattitude.Trytoberelaxed,I'msurewemustfightthevirusintheend.Yours,考题解析内容考题解析内容1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述疫情期间保持健康的四条建议，讲述自己的线上学习情况并鼓励杰克克服恐惧心理和保持积极心态。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作；时态采用一般现在时为主，讲述疫情期间保持健康的建议分四个方面，叙述完整，注意连词的使用，使句意连贯，条理清晰。【2020·江苏省常州市中考真题】假如你是报社的编辑Sigmund，收到了初三学生Peter的一封求助信。请根据来信内容，用英文写一封回信，帮助Peter解决问题。DearSigmund,Ihadaquarrel(争吵)aboutmyhairstylewithmymothertheotherday.SheinsistedthatIshouldcutmyhairshortbecauseofthecomingzhongkao,butIwantedtokeepitlong.Idreamofalonghairstyle,butdon’twanttohurtmymother.WhatshouldIdo?HowcanIpersuade(说服)her?Yours,Peter注意：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；3.词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好,不计人总词数。DearPeter,It’sapitythatyouhaven'tcometoanagreementonyourhairstyle.Butit’scommonforparentsandteenagerstohavedifferentopinions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,参考范文内容Sigmund参考范文内容DearPeter,It’sapitythatyouhaven'tcometoanagreementonyourhairstyle.Butit’scommonforparentsandteenagerstohavedifferentopinions.Asparents,theywantgoodthingsfortheirchildren.Theymaythinkyourlonghaircangetinthewayofyourschoolwork.You’dbettercommunicatewithyourparents.Youcantellthemthatyoushouldbeallowedtomakethischoiceyourself.Iftalkingtoyourparentsisdifficult,youcanfindanotherwaytocommunicatewiththem.Learntowritedownwhatyouwanttosayandgivethemaletter.Showyourloveto