作文 08 黑龙江卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英语满分作文解析

作文08黑龙江卷2021年真题在线（2021黑龙江绥化市）为了迎接全国爱牙日，你们学校下周要举行“爱牙周”活动，号召学生们保护牙齿。请你根据以下表格内容，以“GoodHabits,StrongTeeth”为题，写一篇海报文稿，宣传本次活动。周二在报告厅听取牙齿保护的报告。周三召开班会。内容包括：演讲、观看保护牙齿的图片或视频、设计传单……分享保护牙齿的方法。周六去商场和公园发放传单，号召全民养成爱牙的好习惯。提示词∶lecturehall（报告厅）design（设计）leaflet（传单）要求∶1.根据表格内容，适当发挥；2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；3.文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.词数不得少于80词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）请在答题卡上把你的作文写在相对应的题号后的指定区域内GoodHabits,StrongTeethForthecoming“ToothCareWeek”,ourschoolwillhavesomeactivitiestotellstudents________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’sprotectourteethandenjoylife!考题解析【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根据表格，写一篇宣传文稿，分别介绍周二、周三和周六的活动。开头结尾已给出，完善正文部分，正文可直接呈一段。注意条理清晰。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。需正确使用时间介词和时态，多使用从句和比较级。满分范文GoodHabits,StrongTeethForthecoming“ToothCareWeek”,ourschoolwillhavesomeactivitiestotellstudentshowimportantitistoprotectteeth.OnMonday,we’lllistentoareportontoothcareintheschoollecturehall.ThenonWednesday,weplantohaveaclassmeeting.Studentswillgivespeeches,watchvideosorpicturesabouthowtotakegoodcareofteeth.Afterthat,eachclassisrequiredtodesignaleaflet,tellingpeopletobrushteethoften,eatlesssugarandseethedentistsontime.OnSaturday,wearegoingtohandouttheseleafletsatparksorstores.Wehopemoreandmorepeoplewilldevelopgoodhabitstohavehealthyandstrongteeth.Let’sprotectourteethandenjoylife!真题在线（2021年黑龙江齐齐哈尔）值此毕业之际，学生会主席倡议大家“携手爱校园，为母校献礼”，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。介绍你将如何为母校献礼。要求：1字迹工整，段落清晰，表达清楚，语法正确，行文连贯；2.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并适当发挥；3.词数：80-100词。开头已给出，不计入总词数。Howtimeflies!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容介绍你将如何为母校献礼，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般将来时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍要做什么；第三段收尾，提出希望。保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。满分范文Howtimeflies!It’stimetoleavemyschool.NextMonday,I’llgobacktodosomethingforit.HerearethethingsthatIwilldo.First,Iwillpickuptherubbisharoundtheschool.I’llcleanthewindowsanddoors,too.ThenI’llgivetheyoungerschoolmatessomeusefuladvice.Forexample,dothehomeworkbythemselvesorlistentotheteacherscarefully.NextI’llgiveawaymynotes.It’sreallyhardtosaygoodbye.Iwishmyschoolwillhaveabetterfuture.真题在线（2021年黑龙江鸡西市）同学们都知道安全的重要性，在生活中危险无处不在，你知道如何保护自己的安全吗?请结合自己的实际生活，谈谈看法。提示:1.家庭安全；2.校园安全；3.户外安全……Asweallknow,dangeriseverywhereinourlife...(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“如何保护自己的安全”写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。从生活安全，学校安全和户外安全等方面，结合实际生活提出自己的想法和观点。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。满分范文【答案】例文Asweallknow,dangeriseverywhereinourlifeandsafetyisthefirst.Soit’snecessarytoknowsomewaystoprotectus.Don’tletchildrenplayinthekitchenathome,becausetheymayburnthemselves.It’seasytoslipandfallonawetfloor.Besuretokeepthebathroomfloordryafterhavingashowerorbath.Don’ttakeanyknifetoschool,becauseitmayhurtyourclassmatesbyaccident.Whenyougoacrosstheroad,youmustobeythetrafficrules.Don’tletthechildrengoswimmingalone.Ihopethesetipscanhelpyou.真题在线（2021年黑龙江鸡西市）12．为了有效地控制新冠疫情的蔓延，2021年我国实施了免费接种疫苗的政策。请根据提示列出接种疫苗后的注意事项。提示词:wine(酒)内容包括:1.三天之内不洗澡；2.多喝水，不喝酒；3.多吃水果和蔬菜；4.不吃鱼类和蛋类；5.适当的户外运动，不熬夜。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕疫苗接种后需要注意的事项写一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，多用祈使句句式。分为两段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍需要注意的事项。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。满分范文【答案】例文InordertoeffectivelycontrolthespreadofCOVID-19,Chinacarriesoutapolicyoffreevaccinationin2021.Thereareafewthingstolookoutforaftervaccination.First,don’ttakeashowerinthreedays.Next,drinkmorewater,anddon’tdrinkwine.Third,eatasmanyfruitsandvegetablesaspossible.Fourth,don’teatfishandeggs.Lastbutnotleast,dooutdoorsportsproperly,don’tstayuplate,andgetplentyofsleep.真题在线（2021年黑龙江鸡西市）17．仔细观察图片，展开合理想象，然后写一篇短文。提示词:volunteer;theoldpeople’shomes要求:1.话题作文和图示作文任选其一。2.词数:80—100之间。3.字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析【详解】1.

题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和图片提示，写出一篇有关参加志愿者活动的作文，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

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写作指导：写作时要图片内容紧密联系起来，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般过去时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。满分范文【答案】例文：Lastweek,severalofmyclassmatesandItookpartinavolunteeractivityheldbythecommunity.Wewenttotheoldpeople’shomesbybus.There,welearnedaboutthehealthsituationoftheoldpeopleandhelpedthemcleanup.Somecleanedtheyardandsomecleanedtheroom,suchassweepingthefloorandcleaningthetableandsoon.Wewerebusyallafternoon.Weweretired,butwewerehappy.Iwilltakepartinsuchactivitiesinthefuture.2020年1．假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。家庭安全：小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗；游泳安全：不独自去游泳,不去河、湖游泳；交通安全：过马路要当心,不在马路上玩耍。提示词：electricity(n.电)注意：1、词数80左右；2、请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥。DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangWei【答案】参考范文：DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Weareaskedtobecarefulwithelectricitywhenweareusingit.Itisdangeroustoplaywithfire,foritmaycauseterribleaccidents.Weshouldmakesuredoorsandwindowsareshutbeforeweleave.Besides,wearenotallowedtoswimalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.Ifwereallywantto,wemustgototheswimmingpoolwithourparentsorteachers.What'smore,followingtrafficrulesisalsoveryimportant.Everyoneshouldwatchoutwhencrossingtheroad.Andourschoolwarnsusnottoplayontheroad.Ithinktheserulesarenecessarybecausesafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!Yours,WangWei【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的安全要求。要求根据要点提示，给他回一封电子邮件。首先要注意邮件的格式，然后认真审题，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3.高分亮点：短语：playwith，makesure，what'smore，watchout，warnsb（not）todosth。句型：Itisdangeroustoplaywithfire.玩火是危险的。Itis+形容词+todosth.去做某事是……的，固定句型。Ithinktheserulesarenecessarybecausesafetycomesfirst.我认为这些规则是必要的，因为安全第一。Ithink后接宾语从句，because引导原因状语从句。二、通知2．难忘的初中生活即将结束。你们班计划举行"告别初中生活"的主题班会。假如你是班长,根据以下提示,用英语写一则通知。要点如下：1、时间：7月18日下午3:00；2、地点：班级；3、活动内容：对老师用话语表达谢意,同学交流、合影等等。Boysandgirls,Thewonderfulmiddleschoollifewillgototheend.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Don'tbelate!That'sall.Thankyou!David【答案】例文：Boysandgirls,Thewonderfulmiddleschoollifewillgototheend.Wearegoingtohaveaclassmeetingat3:00ontheafternoonofJuly18.Thethemeoftheclassmeetingissayinggoodbyetoourmiddleschoollife.Itwillbeheldinourclassroom.Weshouldsayathankfulwordtoourteachers.Wecanchatfreelywithourclassmatesandtakesomephotos.Don'tbelate!That'sall.Thankyou!David【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于通知写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据内容提示介绍主题班会的时间、地点以及活动的内容。2.例文点评：例文主要用第一人称进行写作，主要采用一般将来时态来写作。介绍班会的具体信息，叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：gototheend;haveaclassmeeting;sayinggoodbyeto;chatfreelywith;takesomephotos。句型：weshoulddo和wecando表示建议的句子；and表示并列的句子；Don'tdo…祈使句的否定形式。三、材料作文3．说起小动物，你的脑海中会浮现哪些画面，干净活泼的猫咪，还是对主人忠诚不二的小狗？这些可爱又有灵性的小动物让我们的生活丰富多彩，充满乐趣。你最喜欢的小动物是什么？你和它之间发生过怎样令人难忘的故事？小动物在你的生活中有怎样重要的位置？写一篇短文来和大家分享一下。要求：1.短文中须包括图表中包含的全部信息，条理清楚、行文连贯，可适当发挥。2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名等。3.词数不少于80词。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Ithinkanimalsareourfriends.Ilikeanimalsverymuch.Oncemymotherboughtagoldfishformeasagift.Itlookedverybeautiful.Ilikeditverymuch.Iputitinabigbowlandfediteveryday.IthoughtIshouldtrymybesttolookafterit.Butoneday.Ifounditwasdead.Itmademeverysad.MymothersaidthatitwastoofullbecauseIfedittoomuch.Fromthenon,IrealizedIshouldlearnaboutthehabitsofsmallanimalsinordertocareforthemwell.【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你根据提示写一篇短文，讲述你最喜欢的小动物以及你和它之间的故事。

例文点评：文章主要采用第一人称展开叙述，时态以一般过去时为主；文章主要分为三段：第一段总述自己对动物的看法；第二段详细描述自己和小宠物金鱼之间发生的故事；第三段发表自己的感悟，认为我们应该了解小动物的生活习性来好好照顾它们。文章层次分明、逻辑清晰、叙事有条理。

高分亮点：

短语：like...verymuch；buysth.forsb.；put...in；tryone'sbesttodo；lookafter；makesb.+adj.；learnabout；inordertodo。

句型：that引导的宾语从句；because引导的原因状语从句。4．你即将告别初中校园，请为学弟学妹们介绍一下初中的学习经验，帮助他们更好地适应初中的学习生活。内容包括：1、课前的自主预习；2、课上的具体做法；3、课后的复习方法；4、表达祝愿。写作要求：1、词数为80左右；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2、写作过程中注意分段和标点；前三个要点至少各写出两句话；3、句式灵活多样，行文连贯流畅；4、文章中不得出现真实的学校名称及姓名。I'dliketosharesomeexperienceinstudying.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]I’dliketosharesomeexperienceinstudying.Ifyouwanttobeagoodstudent,youmustdothreethings.First,youmustpreviewlessonsfortomorrowinordertofollowtheteachereasily.Findoutthepointsyoudon’tunderstandinadvance.Second,youmustlistentotheteacherverycarefullyinclass.Thisisveryimportantbecausetheteacherwillexplaintheproblemsveryclearly.Third,youmustfinishyourhomeworkontime.Afteryoudohomework,youwillknowwhatyouhavelearnedmoreclearly.Hopefullyyoucanenjoyyourschoollifeandhaveabrightfuture.【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，题目已给出要点提示，只需要按照要点提示进行写作即可。时态应用一般现在时，人称以第二人称为主。2.例文点评：例文分三段，第一段用于引出给学弟学妹建议这个主题，第二段则根据要点提示给出了课前、课上、课后的学习建议，第三段则表达了对学弟学妹的祝福。例文层次分明，要点齐全，思路清晰，熟练使用First、Second、Third等序数词，使句与句之间衔接自然流畅，是一篇优秀的例文。3.高分亮点：短语：inorderto，findout，inadvance，listento，ontime。句型：（1）Ifyouwanttobeagoodstudent,youmustdothreethings.（if引导的条件状语从句）（2）Findoutthepointsyoudon’tunderstandinadvance.（祈使句）（3）Thisisveryimportantbecausetheteacherwillexplaintheproblemsveryclearly.（because引导的原因状语从句）5．(B)2020年是不同寻常的一年。“新冠疫情”的爆发使我们的学习和生活发生了很大的变化，同时也引发了人们的思考。请你根据思维导图谈谈“新冠疫情”带给我们的影响以及我们从中得到的启示。要求：不少于90词，可适当发挥。TheoutbreakofCOVID-19hasmadeabigdifferencetoourlife.Wehaveto____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】[例文]TheoutbreakofCOVID-19hasmadeabigdifferencetoourlife.WehavetostayathomeinsteadofgoingoutduringtheSpringFestival.Itmadeusfeelquitebored.Sincewetookonlineclassesathome,therewerenoteachersorclassmatesaround.Wemissedourteachersandclassmatesverymuch.AllofushadtowearmaskstoprotectourselvesfromCOVID-19whengoingout.WhatcanwelearnfromtheoutbreakofCOVID-19?First,weshoulddevelophealthylivinghabitstoensureusahealthybodyandagoodmood.Second,weshouldhelpothersinneed.Third,weshouldcherisheverymomentwithourlovedones.【详解】1.题干解读：本题为材料作文，要求就COVID-19的爆发以及其带来的影响写一篇文章。文章时态应用现在时或过去时，人称用第一人称。2.例文点评：例文分两段，第一段写了COVID-19的爆发给我们生活带来的影响，第二段则写了疫情的爆发给我们带来的启示。例文思路清晰，叙述流畅，包含了所有题目所给要点，符合要求，是一篇合格的范文。3.高分亮点：短语：insteadof，allof，protectsb.from，learnfrom。句型：（1）Sincewetookonlineclassesathome,therewerenoteachersorclassmatesaround.（since引导时间状语从句，therebe句型）（2）AllofushadtowearmaskstoprotectourselvesfromCOVID-19whengoingout.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略形式）6．B：2020年是非同寻常的一年，在举国上下抗击疫情的同时，教育部发出了“停课不停学”的号召，鼓励中小学生在线学习。但长时间观看电脑或手机，缺乏户外锻炼的机会，影响视力和身心健康。假如你是LinHui，请从以下三个方面说明在这个特殊时期里你是如何保持健康的。ExerciseDoeyeexercises,dobodybuildingexercises(健身操)…EatinghabitsEathealthyfood…Mood(情绪)Behappy,smile…要求：1.字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2.要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作出适当发挥；3.词数：80—100词，首句己给出，不计入总词数。Hello!IamLinHui.Letmeintroducemylifehabits._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Hello!I'mLinHui.Letmeintroducemylifehabits.First,Ineedtodoeyeexercisesbetweenclassestomakemyeyesrelax.Ican'tgoouttoplaybecauseoftheepidemic(疫情).SoIcandobodybuildingexercisesindoorseveryday.Second,Ihavehealthyeatinghabits.Iofteneatalotofvegetablesandfreshfruit.Idon'teattoomuchmeat.Last,beinghappyisanotherwaytokeephealthy.WhenI'mlonelyorunhappy,Iusuallytrytomakemyselfrelaxbylisteningtomusicorchattingwithmyfriends.Ioftensmile.Ithinksmilemakesmehappyandhealthy.【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据表格内容从三个方面说明自己是如何在特殊时期保持健康的。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据以第一人称，假设自己是LinHui，从表格提示的三个方面（运动、饮食习惯和情绪）来写了自己如何在特殊时期保持健康。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3.高分亮点：

短语：lifehabits；needtodosth.；doeyesexercises；makesth.+adj.；goout；becauseof；everyday；alotof；toomuch；keephealthy；trytodosth.；chatwith。

句型：以let开头的祈使句；so连接的并列句；否定句；when引导的时间状语从句；宾语从句。7．A：临近毕业，学校开展了组内自评和互评活动。假设你是Sunshine小组的组长请对组员LiMing进行综合素质评价，并写一份“综合素质评价报告”。内容：1.他的爱好；2.他的优点（两条）；3.他的缺点或存在的问题；4.根据所提到的缺点，提出适当的建议。要求：1.字迹工整，表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯，用第三人称写；2.词数：30—50词，首句已给出，不计入总词数。ReportofQualityEvaluation(评价)forSunshineGroupNameLiMingAge15SexBoyClassClass9,Grade3ScoreAComment(评语)LiMingisamemberofmygroup._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LiMingisamemberofmygroup.Helikesreadingbooks.Heiskindandhelpful.Healwayshelpsotherswhentheyareintrouble.Hestudieshardanddoeswellinallthesubjects.Butheiskindofshy.Hedoesn'tlikemakingfriends.Ihopehecancommunicatewithothers.【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于材料作文，题目的开头已给出。要求根据提示内容写一份对组员LiMing的综合素质评价报告。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。

2.例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，根据四点内容提示对LiMing进行了综合素质评价并给出了适当的建议。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。

3.高分亮点：

短语：amemberof；likedoingsth.；studyhard；dowellin；kindof；makefriends；communicatewithsb.。

句型：when引导的时间状语从句；否定句；宾语从句。四、启事类8．(A)假如你是Gina，今天早晨你在走廊捡到了一部手机，红色外壳（case），壳上面有星星图案。你推测它可能是位女老师的。请写一则招领启事让失主去广播室（broadcastingroom）找李老师认领。Found______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Gina【答案】例文：FoundI’mGina.Ifoundasmartphoneintheschoolhallway.Ithasaredcaseandtherearesomestarsinthecase.Ithinkitmaybeawomanteacher’s.IgaveittoMr.Li.Ifitisyours,pleasegotothebroadcastingroomandaskMr.Liforit.Gina【详解】1.题干解读：这是一则给材料作文，由于是一则招领启事，写作时只要将材料提供的内容，介绍清楚物品的情况即可，同时要符合应用文体的格式。文章要用一般现在时。2.例文点评：文章是一则启事，语言精悍，表达准确意思明确，通俗易懂，主要写出了这则启事的目的，物品描述清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：givesthto；gotosp；ask…for。句型：Ithink+宾语从句；If引导的条件状语从句；Therebe句型。五、话题作文9．春节是我国的传统节日。请你结合下面的汉语提示为外国友人介绍春节的习俗及我们的庆祝活动。提示：1、打扫房间以扫除坏运气。2、吃年夜饭庆祝新年的到来。3、家人们观看春节晚会。4、穿上新衣去拜年。5、孩子们会收到压岁钱。1.___________________________________________________________________________________________2.___________________________________________________________________________________________3.___________________________________________________________________________________________4.___________________________________________________________________________________________5.___________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：As

you

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the

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festival.【详解】1.题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文。主要是以“春节”为主题，向外国友人介绍春节的一些习俗和我们在春节要做的一些事情和庆祝活动，要把题目中的要点都要写出来，要注意语言的连贯性。2.例文点评：文章分三段描写。第一段总体描述春节是最重要的节日，人们会为此会做很多准备；第二段分别具体的描写在春节要做的一些事情以及庆祝活动；第三段总结在春节每个人都会过的很愉快。整个文章结构完整思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思明确易懂。3.高分亮点：短语：oneofthe+最高级+复数名词；a

lot

of；inorderto；getridof；pay

a

visit

to；have

a

good

time。句型：because引导的原因状语从句；and引导的并列句；that引导的定语从句。10．假如你是中学生李平，曾经在你们班学习的交换生Peter看了你发布的朋友圈，他对你们班上周举行的主题班会很感兴趣。请你根据以下信息给他写一封信，向他介绍班会的情况并和他交流一下中学生如何才能实现自己的理想。写作要点：1.班会的主题：我的理想2.介绍你和几名同学的理想：（1）赵勇：想成为一名勇敢的警察；（2）张红：想做一名志愿者；（3）你：想成为一名优秀的医生。3.说说中学生如何才能实现（realize）自己的理想（ideal）。写作要求：1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。4.至少80词。Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：Dearpeter,I'mwritingtotellyousomethingabouttheclassmeetingheldlastweek.Thethemeofitwas“MyIdeal”.Ourmonitorhostedthemeeting.Duringit,allofustookanactivepartinthediscussionandsharedouropinionswitheachother.ZhaoYongisgoingtobeabravepoliceman.Hehopestohelppeopleindanger.ZhangHongwantstobeavolunteer,shewillhelppeopleinneedespeciallythedisabledandthehomeless.Mydreamistobeanexcellentdoctor,Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.Torealizeourideals,Ihavesomeopinions.Firstly,wemusttrytoworkharderfromnowonandlearnasmuchknowledgeaspossible.Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.Bestwishes!Yours,LiPing【详解】题干解读：这是一篇话题作文，介绍班会的情况，班会的主题是谈论理想，通过分析可知，除了短文开头介绍上周班会情况，我们应该使用一般过去时态，其他内容可以使用一般现在时和一般将来时，注意谓语动词要随着时态和人称的变化而改变。2.例文点评：例文采用分段式，文中衔接流畅，在写作的时候选择了一些相对高级的词汇，也运用多种句型，句式丰富多彩，避免单一化，增加了文章的亮点，润色了文章的内容。3.高分亮点：短语：hostthemeeting；takeanactivepartin；indanger；ameaningfuljob；fromnowon；learnfrom。句型：①Ithinkit’sameaningfuljob,becauseIcansavepeople’slivesandhelpthemoutofdanger.②Secondly,weshouldbelieveourselves,becauseconfidenceisthekeytosuccess.③Besides,it’salsoimportanttofindouthowsuccessfullypeoplediditsothatwecanlearnfromthem.2019年1．话题作文：构建和谐社会，创建美丽校园是我们每一名中学生的责任，但在我们的身边经常看到一些不文明的行为。请以“Howtobeapolitestudent”为题，谈谈在校内和校外如何告别不文明行为，做一名优秀的中学生。提示词：harmonioussociety（和谐社会），behavior（行为）【答案】HowtobeapolitestudentAsastudent,it’sourdutytomakeaharmonioussociety.Butwecanoftenseetheimpolitebehavioraroundus.Whatshouldwedotobeapolitestudent?Atschool,weshouldnotonlystudyhardbutalsofollowtheschoolrules.Wearesupposedtohelpotherswhoareintroubleinsteadoftroublingtheminpublic.Also,wemustrespectourtea