高三英语写作专项复习

命题特点选才贴近考生实际生活；文体类型丰富记叙文

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应用文命题形式多样，但相对稳定。

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开放作文第一页，共61页。考查要点准确运用语法、词汇、拼写、标点；使用某些句型，词组，清楚地表达自己的意思；第二页，共61页。评分原则四个角度，五个档次给分；先定档次，然后根据书面等再做微调。第三页，共61页。评分原则四个角度：内容要点；

运用词汇和语法结构的数量；

词汇的准确运用与句子的结

构把握；

上下文的连贯性；

本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分；评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分；词数少于100的，从所属档次拟给分数中减去2分；评分的主要内容是：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量及准确性、上下文的连贯性；开放性作文，需要考生就内容要点适当展开，视其展开内容，酌情给分；拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑；如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次；第四页，共61页。各档次给分范围和要求：第五档21----25分

完全完成了试题规定的任务。1.覆盖所有内容要点；2.应用较多的语法结构和词汇；3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但是为尽力

使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强

的语言运用能力；4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构

紧凑；完全达到了预期的写作目的。第五页，共61页。各档次给分范围和要求：第四档16----20分

完成了试题规定的任务。1.覆盖所有主要内容，但要点没有充分展开；2.应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求；3.语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主

要是因为尝试较复杂的语法结构或词汇所致；4.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧

凑；达到了预期的写作目的。第六页，共61页。各档次给分范围和要求：第三档11----15分

基本完成了试题规定的任务。1.虽遗漏了一些内容，但覆盖了所有主要内容；2.应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求；3.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理

解；4.应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯；整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。第七页，共61页。各档次给分范围和要求：第二档6----10分

未恰当完成试题规定的任务。1.遗漏或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关

内容；2.语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；3.有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写

作内容的理解；

4.较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性；信息未能清楚地传达给读者。第八页，共61页。各档次给分范围和要求：第一档1----5分

未完成试题规定的任务。1.明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可

能是未理解试题要求；2.语法结构单调，词汇项目有限；3.有较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写

作内容的理解；4.缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯；信息未能传达给读者。第九页，共61页。各档次给分范围和要求：0分

未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所

写内容均与写作要求无关或所写内容无法看清。第十页，共61页。一档作文漂漂亮亮二档作文像模像样三档作文马马虎虎四档作文糊里糊涂五档作文一塌糊涂

Whichleveldoesyourcompositionbelongto?第十一页，共61页。解题技巧认真审题，理解题意

定体裁

定时态

定人称

定格式

考虑语言，语气写作过程

写要点

连句成文

查错漏3.书写规范，卷面干净第十二页，共61页。第十三页，共61页。Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?1.Thecharacterofthisgalaisthatitrelatespeople’slives.2.Themoststrikingfeatureofthisgalaisits

traditionallycloselinkwithordinarypeople’slives.4.Youngpeopledon’twanttowatchTV,sotheypay

attentiontootherformsofcelebration.3.Youngpeoplefocustheirattentiononotherformsof

celebrationinsteadofimmersingthemselvesinTV.第十四页，共61页。遣词造句的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;第十五页，共61页。

good

think

cleverperfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…

wisebrightsmartintelligentcute第十六页，共61页。我们应该努力学习。Weshouldstudyhard.Wearesupposedtostudyhard.Weoughttostudyhard.Wearesupposedtoputallourheartsintostudy.Wearesupposedtopayallourattentiontostudy.Weshouldconcentratealltheattentiononourstudy.……第十七页，共61页。造句原则

♦合并句子改写句子一句多译第十八页，共61页。合并句子Agirlwascrossingaroad.Thegirlwaspretty.Theroadwaswide

Aprettygirlwascrossingawide

road.

第十九页，共61页。合并句子Itwasearlyinthemorning.Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.Hewaswateringflowers.

Earlyinthemorning,Mr.Smithwaswateringflowersinhisgarden.第二十页，共61页。合并句子Theirbabiesmayhaveasmallerbirthweightorevenbeabnormalinsomeway.Mycigarettesmokecouldaffectthehealthofnon-smokers.Ididn’tknowneitherofthem.

NeitherdidIknowtheirbabiesmayhaveasmallerbirthweightorevenbeabnormalinsomeway,nordidIknowmycigarettesmokecouldaffectthehealthofnon-smokers.

第二十一页，共61页。改写句子丰富的句式

Heisakindboy.

What

akindboyheis!

Hewasdisappointed.

How

disappointedhewas!

感叹句强调句Thisyoungboyhelptheoldgranny.It

wasthisyoungboythat

helpedtheoldgranny.

Idohopeyoucancomeifpossible.第二十二页，共61页。改写句子Youcansolvethisprobleminthisway.

Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Thepolicecarcomes.There

comesthepolicecar.Theyhadgottothestationjustbeforetheymettheyoungman.Hardly/Nosooner/Scarcely

had

theygot

tothestationwhen/than/when

theymettheyoungman.倒装句第二十三页，共61页。改写句子Theyreadwhiletheyarewalkingorridingonabus.Theyreadwhilewalkingorridingonabus.Pleaseletmeknowwhateverhappens.Please

keepmeinformedwhateverhappens.省略句第二十四页，共61页。改写句子Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthestreet.Andshetookahandbaginher

hand.Isawayoungladywalkingslowlyinthe

streetwithahandbaginherhand.With复合结构第二十五页，共61页。改写句子Ithinkwecanfindmuchusefulinformationin

cybercafes.Inmyopinion,cybercafesshouldbeaplacewherewecanfindmuchusefulinformation.Theschoollibraryisatthebackofthemainteachingbuilding.Let’scometotheteachingbuildingfirst.Let’scometothemainteachingbuilding,atthebackofwhich

standstheschoollibrary.定语从句第二十六页，共61页。改写句子Tellmesomethingyoudidyesterday.Tellmewhatyoudidyesterday.Weshoulddoafavortothepersonwho

needshelpatpresent.Weshoulddoafavortowhoever

needshelpatpresent.各种名词性从句第二十七页，共61页。改写句子Timepassedquickly.Timepassedquicklybefore

weknewit.Wegotdowntoharvestingwhenwereachedthefarm.Themoment

wereachedthefarm,wegot

downtoharvesting.We’llcatchupsoonerorlaterifwework

harderatourlessons.Solongas/Onlyifweworkharderatourlessons,

we’ll/willwecatchupsoonerorlater.各种状语从句第二十八页，共61页。Practice:♦Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomany

things.（使用名词性从句）♦ThoughI’mweak,I’llmaketheeffort.(使用倒装句)♦Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehad

readthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)♦Ipassedthephysicsexambecauseofyour

help.(用虚拟语气）What

surpriseshimisthat

thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.Itwasnotuntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper

thatheknewwhathadhappened.

Icouldn’thavepassedthephysicsexambutforyour

help.

第二十九页，共61页。Practice:♦

Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(使用过去分词)♦Theysangandlaughedastheywentbacktoschool.(使用V-ing形式)♦Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.（nomatterwhat状语从句）

♦Ifyoustudyhard,youwillmakerapidprogress.

（祈使句+and…）Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.Singingandlaughing,theywentbacktoschool.Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

Studyhardandyou’llmakerapidprogress.第三十页，共61页。Practice:●HehadnosoonercomebackfromBeijingthanhewassentabroad.(使用倒装句)●Weallthinkheisagreatman.(thinkhighlyof)●Asaresulttheplanwasafailure.(turnout)●Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(themore…themore)Nosoonerhadhecome

backfromBeijing

than

hewassentabroad.Weallthinkhighlyofhim

.Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.第三十一页，共61页。一句多译一到家，我就把所见到的一切都记了下来。IwrotedowneverythingIhadseenwhenI

arrivedhome.On/Uponarrivinghome,Iwrotedowneverything

Ihadseen.AssoonasIarrivedhome,IwrotedowneverythingIhadseen.TheinstantIarrivedhome,Iwrotedown

everythingIhadseen.NosoonerhadIarrivedhomethanIwrotedown

everythingIhadseen.第三十二页，共61页。一句多译我们都知道多做运动缓解压力有一定的好处。Weallknowthatdoingmoreexerciseisgoodforrelievingpressure.Asisknowntoallofus,doingexerciseisgoodforrelievingpressure.Thatdoingexercisecanhelprelievepressureis

knowntoallofus.Itisknowntoallofusthatdoingexercisecanhelp

relievepressure.Whatisknowntoallofusisthatdoingexerciseisofgreathelptorelievingstress.Doingexercise,asweallknow,canbenefitusalot.第三十三页，共61页。一句多译改变句子结构,与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。Astrong/bigearthquakehappenedinTangshaninthe1980s.TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangShaninthe1980s.第三十四页，共61页。一句多译改变句子结构,与众不同2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.Ireceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenon

August15ththismorning.YourletterofAugust15threached/gottomethismorning.第三十五页，共61页。1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews.→________thenews,hegotexcited.2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungry

andthirsty.→____________________,thegirlwenthome.3.IstudiedChinese,EnglishandPhysicsatschool.→____________________________________

includeChinese,EnglishandPhysics.HearingHungryandthirstyThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschool改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化第三十六页，共61页。1.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.→_______weweretoseecropsandvegetables

growing

well!2.Radiobroadcastsdidn’tbeginuntil1920.→Itwas____________________________________.3.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.→Never___________________________________.4.Anoticeissaying“PleaseSaveWater”onthewall.→Onthewall________________________________.Howgladnotuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegandoeshespeakabouthisownfamilyisanoticesaying”PleaseSaveWater”使用强势句式，增强语句表现力第三十七页，共61页。组织段落Theoutlineofthewriting:Conclusionparagraph:…Introductionparagraph:…Point2…BodyPoint1…supportingidea1supportingidea2supportingidea1supportingidea2第三十八页，共61页。组织段落Introductionparagraph:Theconcludingsentence:结论句

（有些段落没有该部分）构成Thetopicsentence:主题句Supportingsentences:

说明或支持主题的推展句第三十九页，共61页。组织段落Weallknowthatcigarette-smokingisadangeroushabitbecauseitcauseshealthproblems.Doctorssayitcanbeadirectcauseofthelungsandthroatandcanalsocontributetocancerofotherorgans.Inaddition,itcanbringaboutotherhealthproblemssuchasheartandlungdiseases.Itisclearlyidentifiedasoneofthechiefcausesofdeathinoursociety.topicsentenceconcludingsentenceSupportingsentences第四十页，共61页。组织段落Therearedifferentkindsofbee.Someliveinlargegroupslikethehoneybee,andmaketheirnestsintreesorholesintherocks.Other

speciesmaketheirnestsinholesintheground.Therearealsovarieties

thatdonotliveingroupsatall…第四十一页，共61页。组织段落Tomanystudents,schoollifeisboringandtiring.However,Ifindmyschoollifemeaningfulandcolorful.generalstatementtopicstatement第四十二页，共61页。常用句式关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……，而另一些人认为……Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…….Somepeoplesuggestthat……,whileothersholdthebeliefthat……现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……Nowadays,itiscommon…….Manypeoplelike……because…….Besides,…第四十三页，共61页。常用句式任何事物都有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。Everycoinhastwosidesand……isnotanexception;ithasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为……，在他们看来……People’sopinionsabout……varyfrompersontoperson.Somepeoplesaythat…….Tothem,……第四十四页，共61页。常用句式人类正面临一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。Manisnowfacingabigproblem……whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.……已成为人们关注的热门话题，特别是在年轻人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。……hasbecomeahottopicamongpeople,especiallyamongtheyoungandheateddebatesarerightontheway.第四十五页，共61页。常用句式……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发了一些严重的问题。……hasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtusalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……，但是为什么呢？Accordingtothefigure/number/statistics/percentagesinthechart/barparagraph/linegraph,itcanbeseenthat….Obviously,……,butwhy?第四十六页，共61页。组织段落Body/SupportingparagraphsAgoodparagraphisone

thatcontainsproperlinkingwords.IbelieveEnglishismoreimportantthanotherforeignlanguagesformanyreasons.Firstofall,Englishisspokenbyalargenumberofpeople,andthesepeoplearethemostwidelyspreadacrosstheworldinagreatmanycountries.Secondly,Englishisthemostwidelyusedlanguageontheinternet.Ithasbecomeanon-linelanguage.Thirdly,the2008OlympicGameswillbeheldinourcountryandEnglishwillbeveryuseful.Lastly,…第四十七页，共61页。常见连接词第四十八页，共61页。常见连接词罗列观点：●Firstly/Firstofall/Tobeginwith/

Aboveall/Inthefirstplace/OnonehandForonething,●Secondly/Besides/Apartfrom…/What’smore,/Inaddition，/Furthermore,/Moreover，/Worsestill,/Tomakemattersworse,/aswell/Ontheotherhand/Foranotherthing,/Next,●Finally/Intheend/Atlast/Lastbutnot

least,第四十九页，共61页。常见连接词表列举：

forexample(instance)/suchas/

take…forexample/that’stosay/

inotherwords/asfollows表条件关系：

if/unless/aslongas/onconditionthat…/

onlyif…第五十页，共61页。常见连接词表因果关系：

since/as/because/for/thanksto/dueto/owingto/asaresultof/forthereasonthat/nowthat/therefore/so/asaresult表陈述事实:

infact/actually/asamatteroffact/totellyouthetruth/tobehonest/

honestlyspeaking第五十一页，共61页。常见连接词表让步转折关系：

however/but/onthecontrary/nevertheless/

instead/despite/inspiteof(thefactthat)/whereas/though/although/as/

evenif(though)/while/incontrast/afterall表目的：

Forthisreason/purpose,…

Forthepurposeof…

……soth