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1、高考看图作文指导如何谋篇?,标题:有无体裁时态,审题,夹叙夹议类,presenttense,narrative+comment,要点:,WritingReview(2012宁波二模),thepicturethethemethecomment,第二节:书面表达(满分30分)请你以“Son,BacktoSchool!”为题,用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文,描述漫画内容,并结合生活实际,就漫画的主题发表感想。,Tips1人称:(第三)时态:一组图画_一幅图画_,Son,BacktoSchool,要点提示1:看图说话类作文-Thepicture,过去式现在时,Tips2夹叙:(whenwhere
2、whowhatwhyhow)描述力求全面,简洁,Asisshowninthepictureabove,thenewschooltermapproaching,thefathertrieshardtopullthesonoutoftheTVandthemotherisanxiouslyhelpingherhusbandwithabaginherhand.,第二节:书面表达(满分30分)2012高考样卷请根据下图写一篇100120个词的短文。你的短文应包括下列要点:1.简要描写图画内容;2.说明图画含义;3.表达你的观点。,TooMuchCareSpoilsaChildAsisshowninthe
3、pictureabove,_,Tips1人称:(第三)时态:一般现在时,Tips2夹叙:(whenwherewhowhathowwhy)描述全面,简洁,theplantisbeingruinedbytoomuchwatering.,Tips1人称:(第三)时态:一般现在时,Tips2夹叙:(whenwherewhowhathowwhy)描述全面,简洁,2002年上海高考作文简要描述图片内容,结合生活实际,就图片的主题谈谈自己的感想。,Inthepicture,wecanseethatthegirlsparentsandhergrand-motherarehelpingthegirl,which
4、makesitimpossibleforthegirltorideabicycleonherown.Whatismore,itisridiculousthathermothereventakessomemedicinewithher.,根据图画内容,以“WeWantOurSchoolbagsLighter”题,用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点,不得逐条翻译。1.简单描述漫画的内容;2.作业负担过重;3.精讲精练;4.参加体育锻炼和社会活动。,WeWantOurSchoolbagsLighterThepictureshowsthatagirliswearingapairofgl
5、assesandcarryingabigheavyschoolbag,andawomanisdoingsomeexercise.Thegirlsaystothewoman,“Ifyoucarrytheschoolbagforme,Imsureyouwilllosesomeweight.”,Tips3画面描述开头句子:ThisisapictureaboutInthepicture,wecanseeFromthepictureitcanbeseenthatLetslookatthepicture.Asisvividlydescribedinthepictureabove,Son,BacktoSch
6、ool,要点提示2:看图说话类作文-Thetheme,ThepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthatnowadaysalargenumberofstudentsareseriouslyaddictedtowatchingTV,Asisshowninthepictureabove,_._,,ignoringtheirstudyandresponsibility.,Tips1:揭示实质,得出结论(可用上which和doing结构)。,eg.1.Thispictureconveysthemessagethatifteammembersareself-centere
7、d,theteammaybreakup.(Dontbeself-centeredinaclass)eg.2Themessageconveyedinthepictureisinstructive.Everythinghasitspositiveandnegativesides.(Insideoroutside)3.Thedrawingdoesreflectacommonsocialphenomenonthat4.Theimpliedmeaning/themeofthedrawingshouldbe5.Thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthatleaving
8、thesharedgoalunfinished.whichneedsfurtherunderstanding.,Tips2揭示主题开头句子,leavingthesharedgoalunfinished.,whichneedsfurtherunderstanding.,eg.1.Thispictureconveysthemessagethateg.2Themessageconveyedinthepictureisinstructive.3.Thedrawingdoesreflectacommonsocialphenomenonthat4.Theimpliedmeaning/themeofthed
9、rawingshouldbe5.Thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthat(顾),揭示主题开头句子,weChinesestudentsareoverburdenedwithlessonsandhomeworkwhichourteachershavegivenus,.whichdamagesstudentsmentalandphysicalhealth,Tips:揭示实质,得出结论。,1.Thispictureconveysthemessagethat2.Themessageconveyedinthepictureisinstructive.3.Thedr
10、awingdoesreflectacommonsocialphenomenonthat4.Theimpliedmeaning/themeofthedrawingshouldbe5.Thepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthat(顾),揭示主题开头句子,Tips:揭示实质,得出结论。,Perhapspeopledothisoutofgoodintentions,butgoodintentionsmaynotnecessarilybringaboutgoodresults.,要点提示3:看图说话类作文-thecomment,Tips1:加以联想与引申联系现实生活
11、,在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容,发表自己的看法.可以提出一些建议和办法。忌空洞说教(有可操作性)Tips2:应有条理(巧用连词/关联词),Perhapspeopledothisoutofgoodintentions,butgoodintentionsmaynotnecessarilybringaboutgoodresults.liketheplantinthepicture,childrentodayreceivetoomuchcare.,Perhapspeopledothisoutofgoodintentions,butgoodintentionsmaynotnecessarily
12、bringaboutgoodresults.liketheplantinthepicture,childrentodayreceivetoomuchcare.forexample,parentstendtodoalmosteverythingfortheirchildren,frommakingbedstocarryingschoolbags.Bydoingthis,theyaretryingtoshowtheirlovefortheirchildrenintheirbestpossibleway.Theybelievewhattheydowillmaketheirchildrenslifee
13、asierandbetter.However,whatchildrenreallyneedistoexperiencedifficultiesandtakechallengessothattheycangrowuptobemoreindependent.Toomuchwaterkillsaplant,andtoomuchcarespoilsachild.,Tips1:加以联想与引申联系现实生活,在画面意义的基础上联想到另一层新的内容,发表自己的看法.可以提出一些建议和办法。忌空洞说教(有可操作性)Tips2:应有条理(巧用连词/关联词),要点提示3:看图说话类作文-thecomment,Idi
14、sagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory.Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren.Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildrenshealth,buttheirminds.Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble.Weliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus.Everyoneshoulddosomethinggoodtobuildu
15、poursociety,right?,Actually,thisphenomenoniswidespreadintheworld.Ithinkbothchildrenandparentsaretoblameforit.Aschildren,theyshouldtakemeasurestocontrolthetimespentinwatchingTV,suchasmakingascheduleforthedailyactivity.Meanwhile,parentsalsocanwarnthechildrenofthedisadvantagesofbeinglostinwatchingTV.Af
16、terall,discipliningachildisadelicateprocessandisoneaspectofparenting.Onlywhenchildrenandparentsworkhardtogethercanthefamilyleadaharmoniouslife.,要点提示3:看图说话类作文-thecomment,Dontbeself-centeredinaclass.Thispictureconveysthemessagethatifteammembersareself-centered,theteammaybreakup.Aclassisactuallyateam.A
17、llthestudentsintheclasssharethesamegoal-tomaketheclassanexcellentteamandtohelpeveryonedevelopfullyandhealthily.Inordertoachievethisgoal,studentsshouldcooperateandsupporteachotherevenifsometimessomeonemayhavetomakesacrifices.Onlyiftheyworkasonecantheyachievesuccess.However,ifsomestudentsareself-cente
18、redandonlycareaboutthemselves,theteamworkwillsurelybenegativelyaffectedorevendestroyed.Ibelieve,thereisno“I”but“we”inateam.,要点提示3:看图说话类作文-thecomment,Themessageconveyedinthepictureisinstructive.Everythinghasitspositiveandnegativesides.Forexample,somestudentsaroundusaretiredofthepeacefullifeinschoolan
19、dlongfortheoneoutside.Theythinkthelifeoutsidemustbecolorfulandexcitingenough.Buthavetheyconsideredthedifficulties?Sowhenapersonisfrustratedbyhisunfavorablecondition,heshouldneverlosesightofhisownadvantages.,要点提示3:看图说话类作文-thecomment,Asisshowninthepicture,thenewschooltermapproaching,thefathertrieshard
20、topullthesonoutoftheTVandthemotherisanxiouslyhelpingherhusbandwithabaginherhand.ThepictureistryingtoconvinceusofafactthatnowadaysalargenumberofstudentsareseriouslyaddictedtowatchingTV.Actually,thisphenomenoniswidespreadintheworld.Ithinkbothchildrenandparentsaretoblameforit.Aschildren,theyshouldtakem
21、easurestocontrolthetimespentinwatchingTV,suchasmakingascheduleforthedailyactivity.Meanwhile,parentsalsocanwarnthechildrenofthedisadvantagesofbeinglostinwatchingTV.Afterall,discipliningachildisadelicateprocessandisoneaspectofparenting.Onlywhenchildrenandparentsworkhardtogethercanthefamilyleadaharmoni
22、ouslife.,Son,BacktoSchool,Inthepicture,wecanseetheparentsaretoughlypullingtheirkidoutoftheTV,andthekidisjustlikeafool,withoutanyemotion.Itsjustapicture,buteveryday,insomefamilies,itdoeshappen.ItsobviousthatwatchingTVtoolongisharmfultousstudentsbecauseitreallytakesupmuchtimeanddisturbsourregularsched
23、ule.Secondary,thehappinessistemporarybutthecostisthepermanentdamagetoouthealthandmorality.Whatsmore,wewillhavenochancetodevelopoursocialskillsandfriendshipwithothersifweseldomgoouttoexperiencetherichandlivelyworld.Inbrief,wemustbearinmindthatweshouldberesponsibleforourselvesandneverbeaddictedtoanyth
24、ingthatdoesharmtousphysicallyandmentally.范文,Son,BacktoSchool,Son,BacktoSchool,Aswecanseefromthepicture,theparentsaremakingtheirefforttopulltheirsonoutoftheTV,hopinghecangobacktoschoolwhilethesonisstrugglingagainsthisparentswiththeswolleneyes.ThepictureshowssomestudentsareaddictedtoTVtooseriouslytota
25、keanynoticeoftheirstudy.Inmyopinion,asisoftenthecasewithstudents,theyarelostinwatchingTVforthelackofself-control.Actually,interestingandattractiveastheTVprogramsmayappear,therearestillsomepotentialproblemslikewastingtimeandenergy,whichmaybeboundtoaffecttheirstudyandweakentheirbody.Soitshightimethatp
26、arentsandschoolsplayedtheleadingroleineducatingstudentstobalanceinterestsandstudy.Onlyinthiswaycanthestudentsenjoyahappyandmeaningfullifetothefullest.140朱静静,Insideoroutside,Thepictureshowsdifferentconditionsoftwobirds,thebirdinthecageandthebirdoutside.Lockedinasmallspaces,thebirdinthecagelivesanunha
27、ppylife.Althoughitisfedeveryday,itisboredtodeath.Itdreamsoffreezingitselfandflyinginthesky.Ontheotherhand,thebirdoutsidehasastrongdesiretogetintothecagebecauseitsuffersalotfromstarvation.Ithascompletelyforgottentheadvantageofbeingabletoenjoyfreedom.,Dontbeself-centeredinaclassAsisshowninthepictureabove,ahelicopterisgoingtoputtheletter“I”intotheword“team”.Butifso,thewordwillnolongerexist.Thispictureconveysthemessagethatifteammembersareself-centered,theteammaybreakup.Aclassisactuallyateam.Allthestudentsintheclasssharethesamegoal-t
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