高三第一次月考可持续性发展书面表达.ppt

1、仔细审题，找出主题(Readthedirectionscarefully,lookthroughallthewordsorpicturesgiventoyouinordertofindthemainidea.),书面表达的五个步骤(Fivesteps),tokeepsustainabledevelopment,现状,政府措施,我的看法,2.认真阅读所给提示或图画，抓住要点及所有细节，找出每幅图画或每个句子的中心词。,例:可持续发展已成为全球共识，如何实行可持续发展是摆在世人面前的重大问题。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。目前的状况:自然资源日趋减少;环境问题依然严重;人的环保观

2、念淡薄;贫富差距越来越大;已采取的措施:制定了相关的法律法规;投入了大量的资金改善环境;对民众进行教育;加强了国际间的相互合作你的看法,A.Thepresentsituation,1.自然资源日趋减少naturalresourcesarebecominglessthanbefore.(进行时表逐步变化的趋势)2.环境问题依然严重;environmentalproblemsremainextremelyserious.3.人的环保观念淡薄;peoplenowadaysarenotquitewellawareoftheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection4.贫富差

3、距越来越大;Thegapbetweentherichandthepoorisbecomingwiderandwider.,Measures,Myopinion,Makerelevantlawstocontrol,investmuchmoneyto,educateandraisepeoplesawarenessof,duty,raisepeoplesawarenessof,callon,punishthepeoplewhodestroytheenvironment,planttrees,已经采取得措施1.制定法规;2投入资金改善环境;3.教育民众;4加强合作,strengtheninternat

4、ionalcooperation,3.把中心词或词组扩展成句子。(Extendthewordsandphrasestosentences.),Therestillexistmanyproblemsinprotectingtheenvironment.,Governmentshavemadelawstocontrolairpollution.,Theyhavetakenmeasurestoprotecttheresourcesandtopreventtheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted,Theyforbidanybehaviourthatisharmfultotheen

5、vironment.,Itseveryonesdutytoprotecttheenvironment.,Weshouldpunishthepeoplewhodestroytheenvironment.,Thegovernmentshouldletpeoplefullyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotection.,Morepeopletakeactiontoplanttreestobeautifyourenvironment.,Weshouldcallonotherstojoinusincreatinganewlookingearth.,4.把以上

6、句子编排成一个段落，在必要的地方加入一些连接词或句子。(Arrangethesesentencesinorder,gettinginsomelinkingwordswherenecessary.),B.过渡衔接Fortunately/Toourgreatjoy,specialattentionhasbeenpaidtothisproblemandmeasureshavebeentaken.Inordertoprotectit,governmentsofmanycountrieshavedonemuchtodealwiththepollutedenvironment.注：已经采取措施用现在完成时

7、态,A.起始导入现象Therestillexistmanyproblemsinprotectingtheenvironment./Thepresentsituationisfarfromsatisfactory/worrying.,（政府措施）Forinstance,theyhavemaderelevantlawstocontrolpollution.,D.（总结点题）Inaword,witheveryonedoinghisbit,Ifirmlybelieve/Iamdeeplyconvincedthattheenvironmentwilltakeonacompletelynewlookand

8、asustainabledevelopmentcansurelybeachieved,5.通读全文，仔细检查。(Readthroughthewholepassagetomakesurethatnomistakesaremade.),C.（过渡导入自己观点）Despitetheeffortofthegovernment,inmyopinion,itisfarfromenough.,Thepresentsituationisworrying.First,naturalresourcesarebecominglessthanbefore.Second,assomepeoplearenotawareo

9、ftheimportanceoftheenvironmentalprotection,theproblemswithitremainextremelyserioustosomedegree.Thegapbetweentherichandthepoorhasthetendencytobecomewiderandwider.Toourgreatjoy,manycountrieshavetakenaction.Ononehand,theyhavemaderelevantlawsandregulationsandputlargeamountsofmoneyintotheenvironmentalpro

10、tection.Ontheotherhand,popularizededucationaswellasinternationalcooperationisbeingcarriedout.（巧用被动句改变增加句子的多样性和简洁性）,（看法）Itseveryonesdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Thegovernmentshouldmakepeoplefullyrealizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectionthrougheducation(针对问题而言).Whatsmore,wehopemorepeopletakeactiont

11、oplanttreestobeautifytheenvironment.Besides,thosewhoarecaughtdestroyingtheenvironmentshouldbepunished.Furthermore,weshouldcallonotherstojoinusincreatinganew-lookingearth.,（过渡）Despitetheeffortofthegovernment,onmypersonalnote,itisfarfromenough.,如果前文已知条件不多，自己观点要适当增加，注意逻辑和层次，不可颠三倒四，语焉不详。,Inaword,witheve

12、ryonedoinghisbit,Ifirmlybelieve/Iamdeeplyconvincedthattheenvironmentwilltakeonacompletelynewlookandasustainabledevelopmentcansurelybeachieved,自己观点的多样表达：多样但是紧扣主题。最好要点题：Asformyself,Ishouldtaketheresponsibilitytodevotemyselftosustainabledevelopment,orourfutureandthelivesofthegenerationstocomewillbeinda

13、nger.,（总结）Inaword,witheveryonedoinghisbit,Ifirmlybelievetheenvironmentwilltakeonacompletelynewlook.,适当运用结构词、从句和关联词:and,but,so,however,therefore,them,thus,afterawhile,suddenly,atlast,asaresult,infact等,使句子更为流畅。,II.书面表达注意事项,尽量使用多种句式表达、高级词汇,1)Theyhavemadelawstocontrolairpollution.,2)Theyhavetakenmanymea

14、surestoprotecttheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.(被动),Theyhavemadeaseriesofrelatedlawstokeepairpollutionundercontrol.(高级词汇),Effectivemeasureshavebeentakentoprotecttheenvironmentfrombeingpolluted.,4)Thosewhoarecaughtdestroyingtheenvironmentshouldbepunished.,Whoeverdestroystheenvironmentcantescapebeingpu

15、nishedbylaw.,Weexpecttheretobemorepeopletakingactiontoplanttreestobeautifyourenvironment.,3)Morepeopletakeactiontoplanttreestobeautifyourenvironment.(therebe不定式结构),3.留心汉英表达差异,避免中式英语(AvoidingChinlish),1)父母对我们期望很高。,Thehopeofourparentsisveryhigh.,Ourparentsexpecttoomuchfromus.,2)高考,highexam?,collegeent

16、ranceexamination,3)ta的右眼瞎了a.Herrighteyeisblind.,b.Sheisblindintherighteye.,4)他体壮如牛a.Heisstronglikeacow.,b.Heisstronglikeahorse(asstrongasahorse).,5)汤姆的父亲打了他一个耳光。a.Tomsfatherbeathiminhisface.,b.Tomsfatherbeathimintheface.,4.书写必须工整,确保不犯拼写错误(Avoidingmistakes)。,parents&peasant&present,Natural&nature,resources&sources,environment,takemeasures/steps/buttakeaction.,Makelaws,Spend&cost?alotofmoney,cooperation&communication,investsomemoney/alargeamountofmoney,三要素：1、要点全-覆盖所有要点；2、有效连接，有过渡，有层次；3、高级表达，高级词汇和短语，较多的语法结构。语言流畅，