lesson3-报告类议论文

1、议论文题型分类大全 搞定这一步，稳稳上6.5分！ 新浪微博：杜仕明-学为贵 2019-8-28 2019-8-28 Two Questions=Report 1. 原因分析原因分析+ 解决方案解决方案 2. 原因分析原因分析+ 有何影响有何影响 3. 原因分析原因分析+ 随机随机(鬼才知道会问什么鬼才知道会问什么) 4. 造成的问题造成的问题+ 解决方案解决方案-特别注意特别注意 你有可能遇到其中任何一种组合 2019-8-28 Two Questions=Report 注意区分这两个问题，经常导致注意区分这两个问题，经常导致TR低分 What do you think are the cau

2、ses? What problems does it cause? 2019-8-28 2019-8-28 分析原因的原则 1. 不能只局限在中国不能只局限在中国； 2. 客观的出发点客观的出发点(要有证据，别感慨要有证据，别感慨)； 3. 如果有比较级如果有比较级，要通过年代对比找到原因，要通过年代对比找到原因(至关重要至关重要)； 1. The first reason for the shortage of younger teachers is that a teaching job pays poorly. 2. The first reason why cycling is no

3、longer popular is that people today have much more choices for transportation. 3. In addition, the increase in the amount of rubbish is also a result of people using more disposable products. 4. It is true that poor health of the general population is associated with peoples bad eating habits. 2019-

4、8-28 用来写原因的topic sentences 1. 直接改写原题，不需要背景引出直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(考察改写能力考察改写能力) + 承上启下承上启下(可以只预告可以只预告 第一个问题第一个问题/也可以两个都预告也可以两个都预告) 2. 第一个原因分析第一个原因分析。(idea-support) 3. Another cause is that , 第二个原因分析第二个原因分析。(idea-support) 4. (因为因为很严重很严重/因为因为做某事很重要做某事很重要)so measures should be taken to . 解决方案解决方案 1 + (so that

5、)结果结果 解决方案解决方案2 + (In this way,)结果结果 5. 总结重复原因总结重复原因/解决方案解决方案 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (原因+解决方案版本) 2019-8-28 范文-1 Task 2： Fewer and fewer people choose to ride bicycles when going outside. What do you think are the causes? What can be done to encourage people to cycle? 2019-8-28 Owning a bicycle and u

6、sing it frequently seems to be much less popular today. I believe that the growth in the size of cities and the advanced modern transport system are the main reasons for this. The government should take steps to change this situation. The first reason why riding bicycles is no longer popular is that

7、 cities have been growing bigger. This means that the distance between home and destinations has become much farther. If people keep the habit of cycling, then they will find it really time-consuming and energy-consuming. When they finally get to the school or office, they will probably feel exhaust

8、ed and can hardly concentrate on their work or study. 范文-1 2019-8-28 Another cause is that a greater variety of means of transport are available to daily commuters today. In the past, riding a bicycle was the main choice for many people to go to work or for fun. Today, however, people living in citi

9、es and towns can have a wider range of choices, including more bus lines, taxies and even the Uber service. Any of these is more efficient and comfortable than cycling and therefore this traditional way of transport has been losing popularity. It is undeniable that riding a bike is beneficial for bo

10、th the individual and society, so measures should be taken to entice and encourage people to be more active in this choice. Firstly, the government could build special lanes for cyclists, so that they can ride safely and quickly. In addition, monetary rewards should be provided to people who ride th

11、eir bicycles more often. In this way, more people would have the incentive to use this old-fashioned way to commute. 范文-1 2019-8-28 In conclusion, the development of modern cities has led to a decreasing number of people traveling by bicycle. I believe that measures mentioned above could effectively

12、 reverse this situation. 范文-1 2019-8-28 范文-2分析 Task 2： A lot of young people do not know how to manage their money when graduating from high school. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to teach them this important skill? 2019-8-28 范文-2分析 这篇文章的两个原因写成了一个段落，因为各自展开比较少。这篇文章的两个原因写成了一个段落，因为

13、各自展开比较少。 为了保持段落平衡，合成一段比分开写更合理为了保持段落平衡，合成一段比分开写更合理 Many young people are leaving school without a basic and vital understanding of how personal finances ought to be managed in the adult world. This lack of knowledge is due to a lack of life experience and limited education which can be solved in two

14、simple ways. One main reason why so many young people are unable to manage their own finances upon finishing high school is that they have been living along with their parents for free. As a result, they have never needed to earn a salary or save their money in order to pay bills. Another cause is t

15、hat schools do not factor personal financial management into their curriculum. Schools focus instead on classic subjects, such as maths, geography, history and languages, which means important life skills are not being taught. Both teachers and parents are failing to prepare young people for the rea

16、l world. 2019-8-28 范文-2分析 There are two options for solving young peoples inability to manage personal finances. Firstly, parents should spend time with their children teaching them how money is earned, budgeted and used for either savings or expenses. One simple step could be for parents to start b

17、y teaching young children how to manage their pocket money and, as their child grows up, expand into more serious household expenses. Secondly, schools should incorporate life skills into their curriculum for final year students. In this way, children will be able to learn in a supportive environmen

18、t how their finances need to be budgeted and managed to avoid debt problems later in life. In conclusion, young people lack financial management skills due to the negligence of parents and schools, which can only be solved if both take more responsibility for equipping school leavers with the right

19、skills. 2019-8-28 范文-2分析 1. 政府-至关重要(收税/花钱/颁布法律)； . The government could impose higher taxes on so that . . What the government should do is to invest in./financially support./spend money doing . The government ought to require .to . 2. 家长 3. 学校 4. 公司 5. authorities 2019-8-28 解决方案-切实可行 1. 直接改写原题，不需要背

20、景引出(扩充或者缩减原题) + 承上启下(最好两个问题都预告) 2. One of the reasons is that 第一个原因分析。(idea-support) 3. In addition, 第二个原因分析。(idea-support) 4. 过渡句-To my knowledge, there are 完全取决于你自己(好/坏/虽然.但是.) 5. 总结(重复原因/影响) 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (原因+有何影响版本) 2019-8-28 Task 2 An increasing number of people are changing careers du

21、ring working life. What do you think are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development for society？ In the past, many people used to stay in the same job for their lifetime. Today, however, job hopping has become the new normal, which, from my point of view, is due to a combinat

22、ion of reasons and seems to have significant negative effects on society. One main reason for more people changing careers is the increase in their job choices. With the development of economy and technology, there are a great number of new occupations which are believed to be more appealing. In Chi

23、na, for example, an increasing number of white-collars with repetitive daily routines have switched from working in the office to starting their own business on the internet. 2019-8-28 Another cause of career move is the continuously rising living cost in most countries around the world. As the pric

24、e for almost everything has been soaring, there is enormous financial pressure imposed on adults who want to provide their families with high quality of life, which drives them to seek better paying jobs. One of the most effective ways to achieve their financial ambition is believed to hop from one

25、company to another. Although it may be rewarding for the individual to change jobs, there will be several undesirable outcomes for society. Firstly, as more people consider switching their careers, there is likely to be a waste of money and time spent on the training of new employees, which as a res

26、ult will negatively affect the profitability and productivity of companies. In addition, job hopping may also cause a burden to the government, because people between jobs may be dependent on the financial assistance provided by public funds, which will lead to insufficient investment in more import

27、ant services, such as education and health care. 2019-8-28 2019-8-28 试着自己写个结尾段试着自己写个结尾段 1. 直接改写原题，不需要背景引出(扩充或者缩减原题) + 承上启下(我 认为这会导致的问题，他们能够被解决) 2. 第一个问题扩展(idea-support) 3. In addition, 第二个问题扩展。(idea-support) 4. 针对这两个问题提出解决方案 5. 总结(问题 + 解决) 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (问题+解决方案版本) 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (问

28、题+解决方案版本) Task2： A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might these problems be reduced? There has been a significant rise in living standards of people in many countries, such as better

29、 education quality and smaller income disparity. However, it seems that such improvements are mostly enjoyed by urban dwellers rather than those living in the countryside, which, in my opinion, will result in many undesirable outcomes for both cities and rural areas. 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (问题+解决方案版

30、本) As urban lives keep becoming increasingly appealing, a large number of people will be drawn to cities either in search of more employment opportunities or seeking superior health care. This will definitely pose tremendous pressure on both locals and newcomers of big cities, such as rising living

31、costs, frustrating traffic congestion, and intense competition for jobs. 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (问题+解决方案版本) As for rural areas, the problems caused are also significant. To be specific, there will be a severe shortage of labour force working in the agricultural industry, with too many people migrati

32、ng from villages to towns and cities. As a result, farming land would be left uncultivated and crop yields would significantly decline, possibly followed by a rise in food prices nationwide. 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (问题+解决方案版本) I think, therefore, that measures should be taken to narrow the gap of lif

33、e quality between urban and rural areas. Firstly, tax reduction and exemption could be a possible solution to the problem of labour drain. In other words, both individuals and businesses will choose to stay if there is such a favorable (preferential) policy. Secondly, the government could also make

34、people willing to stay where they were born and grew up by improving local living conditions, such as budgeting more money towards education and health services. In conclusion, the problems caused by the disparity between cities and villages are concerning people of both places. They can only be sol

35、ved if the government takes more responsibility for closing the gap. 2019-8-28 report类型的核心段 (问题+解决方案版本) 2019-8-28 Report 类型的第一段一般不需要背景句，题目中类型的第一段一般不需要背景句，题目中 的现象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接开始改写的现象本身就是背景，所以只需要直接开始改写 的工作就可以了。的工作就可以了。 2019-8-28 report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语) 1) In many countries schools have severe proble

36、ms with students behavior. What do you think are the causes? What solutions do you suggest? Poor student behavior seems to be an increasingly widespread problem in many countries. I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this. Parents and schools should be responsible for solving

37、this problem. （提前总结型过渡:预告了原因和解决） 2019-8-28 report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语) 2). Children and teenagers are committing more crimes than before. What do you think are the causes? How should they be punished? The number of crimes committed by children and teenagers has been increasing. I think that there could

38、 be several reasons why this is happening and that the younger criminals should be punished depending on what they have done.（空话型过渡） 2019-8-28 report类型的介绍段(从原文里找到新的主语) 3). Some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experiences and personal qualities when they look for an employee. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? Formal educational qualifications are believed to be more important than life experiences and personality traits when a company is recruiting new staffs. This cri