谚语警句型作文.ppt

1、谚语警句型作文,2006,6-2011,6,综合评述型 5 利弊型 4 对比型 1 （06，12） 应用文（演说词） 1 （07，6）,2011,12,Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of ti

2、me.“ Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。,分析：出题风格出现巨大“颠覆”,颠覆一：话题发生大的变化。历年四级作文的话题都是针对某一校园或社会现象进行评述，而此次作文更像是对一句谚语进行评述。 颠覆二：题目形式更加复杂。传统的四级议论文出题形式非常简单，就是围绕一个标题写一篇议论文。而此次作文要先点评一句笑话，在此基础之上再来写文章的标题，以至于很多考生在写作时根本都没有提起这句笑话。 颠覆三：取消了传统的提纲作文模式。传统的四级议论文都是有两至三条提纲，面对完全无提纲的作文，学生对整篇文章的框架结构不知如何安排

3、。 颠覆四：字数有了上额限制。传统的四级作文字数都只有下限不低于120字。而此次作文字数明确规定在120-180之间，那么不够或超出这个范围之外就会扣除相应的分数。,题材和内容都是相当地令人陌生， 两点命题思路： 一、2011年6月份网络购物利弊的这篇题目过于简单，常见，容易被押题，因此今年的作文题目当然波动性地出现难度上升； 二，反押题精神，今年并没有考到之前的热点，如“酒驾安全问题”、“明星选秀问题”等等。,一、出题风格出现巨大“颠覆”； 二、文章主题：人生哲理，励志 接近2004、2007考研写作 考研真题普及面很广的“个人价值观、人生哲理类话题” ： 2008年考研写作真题的题目是“合

4、作人要学会合作共赢”； 2007年考研写作真题是“自信自信很重要” 2004年的考研真题写作是“坚持和毅力的重要性” 三、出题形式重复1997年1月CET4的“practice makes perfect”;,谚语警句型作文,写作思路 一般要求以议论为主体，以例证为手段 首段： 揭示寓意 主体段：（以例证）展开议论 结论段：提出劝诫,历届考题,97，1 : Practice Makes Perfect 1. 怎样理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如在英语学习中 3. 又如,历届考题,97，1 CET6 Haste Makes Waste 1. 为什么“欲速则不达” 2. 举例说明,历届考题,97，1

5、: Practice Makes Perfect 1. 怎样理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如在英语学习中 3. 又如,There is an old saying in china: practice makes perfect. Practice is a means and perfect is a goal. Only when you do more practice can you make things perfect. This is true not only in our learning but also in other walks of life.,Take the stu

6、dy of English for example. Practice enables us to spell words correctly and master the rules of grammar quickly and practice also makes us become fluent in speaking and writing. It is almost impossible for a person to speak English fluently and accurately without a lot of practice.,Another case in p

7、oint is cooking. A good cook can prepare a delicious meal but you will not be surprised at his performance if you know how much time he has spent practicing. Through practice, he then becomes an expert at cooking.,It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. Only through practice can one be g

8、ood at doing things. Since we have realized the importance of practice, why not put it into practice?,历届考题,97，1 CET6 Haste Makes Waste 1. 为什么“欲速则不达” 2. 举例说明,Haste Makes Waste,Haste makes waste is an English proverb which means that one should do everything step by step. Even simple operations can ea

9、sily be spoiled if we rush to complete them, neglecting important stages in the process. One should make full preparations before beginning an task.,Take English study for example. Without a good command of pronunciation, we can never hope to speak in an understandable way. Similarly, if we do not l

10、earn to spell properly and to acquire a basic grasp of grammar, we will never succeed in writing good composition.,In short, laying a solid foundation is essential if we want to make achievements in our studies or work, or indeed in any other aspect of our lives. At every step, review what has been

11、achieved and assess the problems ahead before moving to the next step. And remember, Rome was not built in a day.,谚语格言题文章逻辑结构 ： Paragraph I:（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言(general)； （2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻辑(specific)。 Paragraph II: （1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句； （2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）； （3）本段总结（可以省略）。

12、 Paragraph III: （1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。,历届考题,97，1 Cet4 Practice Makes Perfect 1. 怎样理解“熟能生巧” 2. 例如在英语学习中 3. 又如,97，1 CET6 Haste Makes Waste 1. 为什么“欲速则不达” 2. 举例说明,2011年6月Cet4 1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3.我的建议,2011年6月CET6 1. 现在许多人热衷于各种证书考试； 2. 其目的各不相同； 3. 在我看来。,2010， 6 Cet4 Due Attention

13、Should Be Given to Spelling 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种情况的原因 3.针对这个现象我认为,2010，6 Cet6 Due Attention Should Be Given To the Study of Chinese 1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象；2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果；3. 我认为,2011,12 CET4 Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong

14、Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。,2011,12 CET6 Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitledThe Way to Successby

15、commenting on Abraham Lincolns famous remark, Give me six hours to chop down a tree, and I will spend, the first four sharpening the axe. You should write at least150words but no more than200words.,遥相呼应 大同小异,12月的四级作文要求写一篇意志和成功的关系的短文。 首先，这个题目没有任何题材范围上的突破，和大学生的日常生活和成长有关。 第二，这个题目其实很有利于考生的发挥。 如何写,2011,1

16、2 CET4,Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。,Nothing

17、Succeeds without a Strong Will,P1. 点评谚语+引出话题 首先依据背景材料来提出问题，“从戒烟的问题引出做任何事情都需要坚强的意志，需要坚持到底，不可半途而废。” P2. 观点+举例 分析这一问题，可以正反论证，也可举例成功的实例进行论证，此为主体段落， P3.点题收尾+提出劝诫 总结来论证坚强的意志对于成功的重大意义,范文一,The humorous saying has subtly revealed the truth that nothing succeeds without a strong will. Seemingly easy as quitti

18、ng smoking is, it requires a determined mind and a strong will, the lack of which may give rise to the ultimate failure.,Undoubtedly, being determined is the most important quality that anyone who wants to achieve success should possess. A good case in point is Helen Keller who is a famous novelist,

19、 educator and philanthropist. Despite her paralysis, she has learned altogether five languages, namely English, French, German, Latin and Greek. Apparently, it is strong will that enables her to overcome all the difficulties and fulfill her ambitions eventually.）,To sum up, since there is no royal r

20、oad to success, we should always possess the unyielding spirit and never shrink in front of setbacks. Only by building a strong will, can we find the eventual pay-off could well be worth our effort and embrace a brighter future. Just as the saying goes, “When the going gets tough, the tough get goin

21、g” （环境越艰困 硬汉越吃香） . （172）,2011，12 范文二,There is a widespread humorous saying that,“Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of times.” Funny as it is, the saying ironically reflects the fact that strong will is the most essential quality for anyone who wants to achieve

22、success.,Our life involves all kinds of obstacles and setbacks which may exhaust us and knock us down. Therefore, we must have strong will to meet the challenge of them. Whats more, there are many temptations waiting for us when we are striving for success. For example, when you are doing your utmos

23、t to quit playing computer games, your friends just play with great satisfaction. Then how can you resist such terrible temptation? Obviously, only with strong will can you conquer yourself and realize your goals.,All in all, success only belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil an

24、d constant efforts, just as the old popular saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.”,范文三,Sometimes, in our daily life, the easiest thing might be the most difficult thing, as in the case of some people trying to quit smoking for hundreds of times and still making endless efforts without

25、 any hope of success. The reason for their failure is their lack of a strong will。,In our modern world, nothing is simple and straightforward. Something might appear deceptively easy at first, but as we proceed on, we will find that it is actually extremely difficult. Therefore, we must take whateve

26、r we do seriously and be mentally prepared to make our utmost exertions. When we encounter obstacles and setbacks, we must apply our strong willpower and persevere until we finally succeed。,For us university students, in our academic studies or in our daily life on campus, we might not be faced with

27、 insurmountable challenges. But we need to get prepared, right now, to take things seriously, try to cultivate our strong will, and be ready to pursue our goals through persistence and indefatigable(不屈不挠的) will. I believe its the only way we can achieve our success。,虽然这次作文大爆冷门，但也给我们一个新的提示： 四级作文的革新之路

28、已经开始了！ 四级大纲明确规定，要求学生根据规定的题目和所提供的提纲、情景、图片、图表等写一篇不低于120字的短文， 在过去近12次考试中，基本上都是“题目+提纲”的组合， 那么以后“题目+情景、图片、图表”的形式也要引起大家的关注了！,典型句式,As the old saying goes, Examples can be easily found to make a case for this proverb. Take for example/instance. Another good example is is a case in point(是恰如其分的例子) One（Anothe

29、r） case in point is Another illustration of this is sth is best exemplified by, To illustrate/demonstrate/In order to specify this statement, I would like to cite the experience of sb as an example.,An English proverb says, One of the great men once remarked, Haste Makes Waste. Nearly every civiliza

30、tion has its own equivalent to the proverb: History/Our society abounds with the examples of Haste Makes Waste. . On the other hand/On the contrary, . For us college students, the saying/proverb has a profound and realistic significance: .,模板一,It is well know to us that the proverb: _谚语_ has a profo

31、und significance and value not only in our job but also in our study. It means _谚语的含义_. The saying can be illustrated through a series of examples as follows. ( also theoretically ) A case in point is _例子一_. Therefore, it is goes without saying that it is of great of importance to practice the prove

32、rb _谚语_. With the rapid development of science and technology in China, an increasing number of people come to realize that it is also of practical use to stick to the saying: _谚语_. The more we are aware of the significance of this famous saying, the more benefits we will get in our daily study and

33、job,模板二,_(所给格言或谚语). This is a proverb full of logic. By this proverb, it is meant that _(解释该格言或谚语的内涵). In other words, _(换言之的解释). Indeed, we can learn many things from it. Examples can easily be found to make this point clearer. _(例子) is a case in point. Another case is tha _(例子二) Whatever you do, p

34、lease remember the saying “_(该格言或谚语). If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, youll necessarily benefit a lot from it.,模板三,The good old proverb, _(所给格言或谚语), reminds us that _(诠释该格言或谚语)。 On the one hand, _(详述1). On the other hand, _(详述2). Take _(某相关事例) for example, _(展开论述). However,

35、it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you hold it sooner or later.,Homework,A Fall into the Pit, A Gain in your Wit 1. 怎样理解“吃一堑，长一智” 2. 举例说明 Suggested homework Its never too old to learn,A Fall into the Pit, A Gain in Your Wit,Since to err is human, no one could see to it that he didnt ever make a mistake. However,