石家庄留学机构留学文书diy模板用自身特殊经历赚取眼球.ppt

1、留学文书diy模板：用自身特殊经历赚取眼球,特殊经历 写作要领： 服诺网提醒既然是“特殊”的经历，就要有吸引力，不能写流水账。做到情感真实、情节生动(并不一定 要像电视剧一般跌宕起伏，但对于一个十几岁的中学生来说，对自己内心的触动一定是深刻的、难以忘怀的。),【精彩例文一】,Dialogues with the Mirror Aug 17 2000 “Ouch! ” I cry of pain. I am in the middle of growing permanent teeth and one of my front teeth hangs there fighting against

2、 the new one growing behind it. Staring at it in the mirror, I do not know what to do. Me: It really hurts. What should I do? Mirror: Just pull it out. Then you 11 be fine. Me: No, I can 1.1 am scared. What if it starts bleeding? What if it becomes worse? Mirror: No, it won t. Be brave. Pull it out!

3、 Perhaps I should try. Looking into the mirror, I put my finger on that annoying tooth, close my eyes, bite my lips. Me: Oh, no, I can 1.1 quit. Mirror: Coward. I hear the mirror jeer at me. Nov. 18 2009 I am now studying in Forest Park High School in Virginia,U.S.A. I like the country, the school a

4、nd the people, but do they like me as well? Standing in front of the mirror, I am lost in uncertainty. Me: There will be a new selection held by the school basketball team. I want in.,Mirror: Then do your best and you 11 be one of them. Me: But I am not so tall as native students. I am not that stro

5、ng, either. I saw an American student dunk today. It was amazing! I won t be able to do that in my whole life. Mirror: Think about what you CAN do. Suddenly my landlady turns the light on and I look into my eyes in the mirror. Me: Yes, that s it! My eyes! I remember my getting the best view of other

6、 teammates and passing the ball to the one having a best opportunity in time. Mirror: That s what I am saying. Be yourself and take advantage of your strength. Nov. 19 2009 I pass the test and become a point guard of the team. May 20 2011 Tomorrow is a big day for me. I will attend the 9th Annual 21

7、st Century CASIO Cup National English Speaking Competition and give a speech in front of hundreds of people. is nine oclock in the evening and I am still practicing my speech in front of the mirror. Mirror: Shouldnt you go to bed early today? Getting nervous? Me: A little but I can manage it. I just

8、 want to be 100% sure that I am ready for tomorrows competition. Mirror: You have done a thorough preparation. I am sure you are fully prepared. Just remember. Me: Be myself and take advantage of my strength. Yes, I know. Mirror: Then wait for your good news. With my touching speech and smart answer

9、s to the questions raised for me, I win the 1st Prize in the competition. Excitedly, I run back home and put the trophy in front of the mirror. Me: See, I made it!,Mirror: Yes, I knew you would. Jun 25 2011 On the eve of school debate contest, I sit at the desk and go over the materials for the last

10、 time. It is the first time for me to participate in a contest as team leader but surprisingly I feel OK with it. Mirror: Hey, how are you there? Me: Fantastic. V m confident that we will win the champion. Mirror: Why did you say that? Me: Because we have figured out our strength and we will give it

11、 a full demonstration. Mirror: Yes, I know you will. It is a fierce combat. Nevertheless, whatever happens, I do not get panic, neither do I lose confidence in my team. We stick to the correct path and manage to get the support of most of the attendees. We are the winner! Getting back home, I still

12、have a smile on my face. And I can see the young man in the mirror smiling back at me. Mirror: I guess this is the last time we talk to each other. You have grown up. You can control your life on your own. Me: Yes, I can and I will.,【我和镜子的对话】 2000年8月17日 “哎呀! ”我痛得大叫一声。我正在换牙，然而有一颗门牙固执地留在那阻碍新牙的生长。我盯着镜子

13、里面那颗固执的牙齿看了许久，却不知道该怎么办。 我：真的很疼啊。我该怎么办呢? 镜子：把它拔掉。然后就好了。 我：不行啊，我做不到。我害怕。要是流血了怎么办?要是变得更严重了怎么办? 镜子：不会的。勇敢点。拔掉它吧! 或许我应该试试看。对着镜子，我将手指放到那颗讨厌的牙齿上，闭上眼，咬着牙 我：哦，不行，我做不到。我放弃了。 镜子：胆小鬼。 我听到镜子嘲笑我。 2009年11月18日 现在的我在美国弗吉尼亚州森林公园高中学习。我喜欢这个国家，这所学校和这里的人，但是他们喜欢我吗?站在镜子面前，我被不确定的气氛包围着。 我：马上学校篮球队会组织一次新队员选拔。我想进篮球队。 镜子：那就尽最大努力

14、，你会成为篮球队的一员的。 我：但是我不想美国学生那么高大。我也不强壮。我今天看到一个美国学生灌篮了。太精彩了!我一辈子都做不到像他那样。 镜子：想想你能做什么。,突然我的房东打开了灯，我看到了镜子里的自己。 我：是的，就是这个!我的眼睛!我记得我能够时刻留意队友的位置然后在最佳时机将球传给他 们。 镜子：这就是我说的。做你自己，发挥你的强项。 2009年11月19日 我通过了测试成为了篮球队的一名控球后卫。 2011年5月20日 明天对我来说是重要的一天。我将要参加第九届21世纪卡西欧杯全国英语口语大赛，在几百人面前 做一个英文演讲。现在是晚上九点，我仍然在镜子前紧张地练习我的演讲。 镜子：

15、今天不应该早点休息吗?感觉紧张了? 我：有一点，但是我能控制。我只是想100%确定我准备好参加明天的比赛了。 镜子：你已经准备得很全面了。我确定你巳经准备好了。只是记得 我：做我自己，发挥我的强项。我知道的。 镜子：那就等着你的好消息啦。 第二天我的演讲打动了现场观众，并且我机智地回答了他们提出的问题，凭借着出色的表现我获得了比赛的一等奖。,我兴高采烈地回到家，把奖杯放在镜子前面。 我：看，我成功了! 镜子：是啊，我就知道你会的。 2011年6月25日 明天学校的辩论赛就要开始了，我坐在桌子前最后一次复习我准备的材料。这是我第一次作为队长参加比赛，但奇怪的是我感觉很轻松。 镜子：嘿，你感觉怎么

16、样? 我：很好。我相信我们可以获得冠军。 镜子：为什么这么说? 我：因为我们已经找到了我们的强项并且会将它发挥到极致。 镜子：我知道你们会这样做的。 比赛很激烈。但是，不论发生什么，我都没有惊慌，也没有对我的队伍失去信心。我们坚持着正确的路线并且得到了现场多数观众的支持。我们赢了! 回到家里，我的脸上仍然带着笑容。我看到镜子里的那个年轻男孩也在冲我笑着。 镜子：我想这是我们最后一次对话了。你已经长大了。你可以掌控自己以后的人生了。 我：是的，我能，我会的。,【佳文精评】 石家庄留学机构认为这是一篇形式新颖的文章。全文通过作者和镜子的对话展开，运用了隐喻手法，将作者的心理活动生动外化。镜子和作者的对话实际上就是作者和另一个 自己的对话。这样的处理让文章扣人心 弦，