大学英语四六级写作课件PPT--现象解释型.ppt

1、四级作文高分策略,Kelly 主讲,大学英语四级考试大纲对写作的要求,教育部（2006修订版）明确规定写作部分要求考生达到大学英语课程教学要求中的一般要求，即“能完成一般性写作任务，能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等，能写常见的应用文，能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出至少120词的短文，内容基本完整，用词恰当，语意连贯。能掌握基本的写作技巧。”,评分标准,短文写作要求考生在30分钟内根据提纲写出一篇120词以上的短文，本部分的得分占总分的15%，采用总分评分法（Global Scoring），从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。满分为15分，共分五等：14分、11分、8分、5分及2

2、分（注：四级作文在试卷总分中占15%，改卷时按照作文总分15分来评改，然后经过处理转化为710分中的作文分数）。各个分数档的标准如下：,四六级高分要求,1 切题（不跑题） 2 脉络清晰，模式明确 3 字体美观 4 语法和拼写错误 5 不要有废话 6 结构句型和闪光词汇 7 字数120180之间,二、纵观历年大学英语四级考试作文题目，我们不难发现，近年来的四级作文凸显三大趋势：,1实用性增强从体裁上看，议论文、说明文、应用文写作占绝大多数，记叙文偶尔也会涉及。到目前为止，虽然议论文占绝对优势，但近年来应用文上升的势头很猛，书信、欢迎词、祝贺词、招聘书、解说词、见证书、竞选演说等频频出现，集中体现

3、了大纲对实际运用语言能力的要求。 2主要考核三大主题从内容上看，所考题型都与考生熟悉的生活事件与现象有关。就话题而言，四级作文主要有三类：社会热门话题、校园生活话题和日常生活话题，如教师节、英语口试、计算机的使用、求职面试、上大学的费用等等，因此，平时应尽量偏向这几方面的主题进行练习。 3注重综合能力的考核四级作文从倾向于单纯考查某一文体，逐渐过渡到几种文体的结合。如：2004年6月的A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction是一篇解说词，属应用文，但同时要求说明和描写。这说明作文命题越来越灵活。,七类常见的写作类型,. 对比选择型 . 现象解释型

4、 . 原因阐释型 . 问题解决型 . 应用型 . 综合叙事型 . 图表型,四级写作基本模式三段式,. 现象解释型写作流程特点及写作要求,第一段：概述。(简要描述某一现象或某一观点。) 第二段：具体阐述。(具体阐释现象或观点的正确性或危害性等。) 第三段：个人见解。(表明自己的态度或看法。) 或者 第一段：概述。(简单描述某一现象或观点。) 第二段：具体阐述。(具体阐述引起这种现象的或持有这种观点考虑的主要因素。) 第三段：个人评价。(对现象或者观点进行评价。),. 现象解释型句子模板（1）,1. 分析原因： There are many/plenty of/ a number of/ nume

5、rous reasons explaining/ for . The reasons of lie in several aspects . Many factors contribute to . There are many reasons that many account for . The reasons for/why are as follows: . There are many reasons for it, but generally, they come down in three major ones.,. 现象解释型句子模板（2）,1. 分析原因： is mainly

6、 caused by . What caused these changes? . There are many factors that have stimulated this huge change. The reasons that caused changes are diverse. On the one hand, . On the other hand, . The rapid growth of owes much to .,. 现象解释型句子模板,2. 总结归纳 / 说明影响 / 表明作者态度 / 以作者个人为例： Through the analysis, we can

7、draw a conclusion that . In short/ In brief, . To solve the problem of , we . From all the facts given above, we can see . Considering all these /Taking all these into consideration/account, I believe . As to/for me, I believe . Take me as an example/In my own case, I .,. 现象解释型作文模板（1),1 In recent ye

8、ars, (描写现状或趋势). 2 This has caused a lot of problems. 3 First, (结果1). 4 For example, (细节，说明结果1). 5 Second, (结果2). (细节，说明结果2). 6 Finally, (结果3). (细节，说明结果3). 7 Since is such a serious problem, we should take effective measures to . 8 First, we should (措施1). 9 Besides, (措施2). 10 And finally, (措施3).,2008

9、年12月份作文解析,1、一次性塑料袋曾经广泛使用 2、由此带来的问题 3、限制一次性塑料袋的意义,分析中.,1 从选题意义 2 从文章结构 3 从文章构思上,提纲,Limiting the use of disposable plastic bags,现象描述,带来的问题,限制的意义,对比和欣赏,题目：BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China 提纲： （1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及 （2）和汽车的比较 （3）自行车在中国的前途,8分作文,Bicycle is an important means of transport in Chin

10、a. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to

11、travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesnt ask to build the gar

12、age like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isnt too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesnt need any oil, and it cant cause the pollution. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be

13、in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.,15分作文,Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people - men and women, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. That

14、is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles” 总-分-总,第二段-和汽车的比较,Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Though cars are faster and more comfo

15、rtable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.,第三段-在中国的前途,In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country a

16、nd has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present conditions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.,例文 -限制的意义,Disposable plastic bags were once widely used in China. When we went shopping at supermarkets and departments stores, shop

17、ping assistants often provided free plastic bags for our convenience. For a while, life without them seemed unimaginable for most of us.,例文 -带来的问题,However, disposable plastic bags do bring severe damage to our environment. Costumers usually threw them away after use, and because they are thin and ha

18、rd to decompose, these plastic products will exist for a long time. This is an immediate threat to our earth and water.,例文 -限制的意义,Nowadays, the government has passed relevant regulations for limiting the use of disposable plastic bags: they are not free any more. In some shopping places, in order to invoke the public awareness of environmental protection, plastic bags are offered in a much higher p