2018高三短文改错二轮改错公开课.ppt

1、2018高三英语二轮 短文改错 考点归纳与应考策略,In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me

2、 altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the

3、road. （作者暑假学车的经历, 8句，109词）,17年高考I卷改错,eighteenth,the / my,but,went,words,Turn,later,sudden,of,数词误用,冠词/ 代词的漏用,连接词逻辑错误,谓语动词时态错误,名词数的误用,谓语与非谓语的错用,副词的多余,副词的语义错误,词性误用,介性误用,My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is alwa

4、ys crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of tim

5、e. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. (叔叔开的饭店生意兴隆及成功秘诀, 8句，93词）,16年高考I卷改错,where,have,honesty,and,used,of,a,steadily,his,连接词逻辑错误,连接词错用,连接词重复使用,动词时态错误,词性误用,介词漏用,冠词错用,代词逻辑错误,词性误用,动词语态的误用,短文改错考些什么？怎么考？ 你有什么解题经验和大家分享？,长度： 2. 内容： 3. 体裁： 4. 考点 ： 5. 考法：,短文有610句话，含92119个词。,取材于学生习作，贴近学生生活。,

6、除2013年卷是说明文外，其余都是记叙文。,动，名，形，副，介，冠，代，连词等。,1) 8:1:1的规律 即：8个改错题，1个加词题， 1个删词题 2）每个句子最多不超过两个错误, 一词改一词,改错要容易，考点须牢记；根据考点找错误，逐一排查高速度。,1.从语篇入手，理解大意，着眼时态和语态。 2.从句子入手，依据考点，逐句分析，推敲语法。 3.从行文逻辑入手，兼顾上下，审查连代。,1. (2017全国卷)Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructors orders, but once I started

7、 the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. 2. (2017全国卷) The instructor kept repeating the words, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” 3. (2016全国卷) It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that 4. (20

8、16全国卷) Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are using for cooking.,have,Turn,went,used,考点1 谓语动词的错误,5. (2017全国卷) I had grown not only physically, but also mentally in the past few years. 6. (2017全国卷) About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my second year of

9、 high school and become a new member of the school music club. 7. (2016全国卷) We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip. 8. (2016全国卷) Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.,have,became,choose,should,9. (2014全国II卷) My dream school look like a big garden. There are

10、all kinds of flowers and We can lie on the grassThe teachers here are kindThey are not only our teachers,looks,归纳总结：,主要考查动词的时态和语态，主谓一致、语气等。,1. (2017全国卷) In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, which is on the rooftop of their house. 2. (2017全国卷) When summer

11、comes, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! 3. (2016全国卷) We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.,interested,to,考点2 非谓语动词的错误,taking,4. (2016全国卷) I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. 5. (2016浙江) He would ask who we were and pretend not to knowin

12、g us.,wearing,know,归纳总结：,主要考查动词不定式、动词-ing形式以及过去分词的用法、谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用、并列结构中非谓语动词的误用等。,作主语或作介词宾语，该用动词-ing形式时却用了原形。尤其注意分清to是介词还是不定式符号。固定结构中不定式符号的缺失与多余。情感类动词的-ed分词与-ing分词的区别。作定语、状语或补语时，非谓语动词形式用错。,1. (2017全国) The instructor kept repeating the word，“Speed up！” “Slow down！”. 2. (2016全国卷) My uncle tells me th

13、at the key to success is honest. 3. Jay began his performance with one of his most famous song.,考点3 名词错误,words,honesty,songs,4. (2017全国卷) Besides, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. 5. (2016全国卷) If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden our view and gain knowledges we cannot

14、get from books. 6. (2016全国卷) The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.,Tips : 可数名词大于一时要用复数，不可数名词一般没有复数形式。如air, milk, water等物质名词与music, advice, fun，knowledge，progress等抽象名词是不可数名词，一般是没有复数形式的。还有luggage / baggage, furniture, equipment, information等都是容易出错的不可数名词。,information,knowl

15、edge,years,7 .(2011全国课标卷) When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.,表示“某人的”本应用名词的所有格，文中却没用。如上题。注意，以下情况中，名词所有格后的名词可省略：a butchers (shop)肉铺，a tailors (shop)裁缝店，a barbers (shop)理发店，a doctors (office)诊所，my sisters (home)我姐姐家，其中shop, office, home等表示处所的词都可以省略，直接用名词所有格表示。,friends,归纳总结：

16、,主要考查名词的数(可数还是不可数，单数还是复数)，偶尔考名词的格，以及转换成名词词性的用法。,1. (2017全国) It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle of the road. 2. (2016全国卷) Instead, he hopes that his business will grow steady. 3. (2017全国卷) I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and col

17、lecting the latest music albums. 4. (2016全国) They were also the best and worse years in my life. 5. (2014全国I卷) The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.,考点4 形容词及副词错误,sudden,steadily,worst,tasty,different,6. (2015全国II卷) Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.”

18、Tony promised her that this would never happen again. 7. (2013全国II卷) Interesting, it had a connection to the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. 8. (2017全国卷) I was so nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.,terribly,Interes

19、tingly,later,9. (2017全国I卷) I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. 10. (2015全国II卷) He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. 11. I found the test difficult, but I tried hardly to do it.,hard,归纳总结：,主要考查形容词和副词的词性辨析（混淆错用）、词义辨析、比较等级和最高级的错用等。,adj. 作定语

20、、表语、宾补 adv. 修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子作状语,1. (2017全国) It was a relief and I came to a sudden stop just in the middle on the road. 2. (2016全国) My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in a short period of time. 3. (2017全国) They have also bought for some gardening tools. 4. (2016全国) Now I am leaving hom

21、e to college. 5. (2015 陕西) My soccer coach retired in last week. 6. (2015全国卷) Tony saw a toy on a shop window.,考点5 介词错误,of,of,for,总结归纳：,in,主要考查介词的意义和用法、固定搭配中介词的误用、介词的缺失与多余等。,1. (2017全国) I still remember how hard first day was. 2. (2016全国) My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the sh

22、ort period of time. 3. (2017全国) They live far from the school，and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. 4. (2016全国) But in that case，we will learn little about world.,考点6 冠词错误,the,a,an,the,5. (2016全国卷) At the first, I thought I knew everything and 6.(2015全国II卷) He liked it s

23、o much that he quickly walked into the shop A woman saw him crying and told him to wait outside a shop.,the,归纳总结：,主要考查固定搭配中的冠词误用，定冠词和不定冠词表示泛指和特指的误用，不定冠词a 和an的混用，以及冠词的缺失与多余等。,1. (2016全国I ) Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steadily. 2. (2017全国) Mr and Mrs Zhang all work in our school 3. (

24、2017全国) This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days. 4. (2016全国) It does not cost many，yet we can still learn a lot. 5. (2016全国) At first，I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.,考点7 代词错误,his,both,my,much,myself,6 (2016全国) At last，I will

25、 be on my own，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help. 7. When Jay began to sing the seventh song it called Sunny Day, it started to rain.,I,总结归纳：,主要考查各类代词的用法（人称代词 / 形容词性的物主代词 / 反身代词 / 不定代词）、代词指代的人或事物前后不一致、代词的缺失或多余以及it的不当使用等。,1. (2017全国) Before getting into the car，I though

26、t I had learned the instructors orders，so once I started the car，my mind went blank. 2. (2016全国) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 3. (2016全国) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 4. (2016全国) Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high qu

27、ality oil are used for cooking.,考点8 连词错误,but,where,and,5. (2017全国卷) In their spare time, they are interested in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. 6. When Jay began to sing the seventh song, it started to rain. Therefore, the concert was not interrupted 7. (2013全国I卷) He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.,which,However,and,总结归纳：,When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is cle