高考英语现象分析型书面表达题导写

-精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 1 高考英语现象分析型书面表达题导 写 一、文体概述 中国论文网 /9/view-12909341.htm 此类作文要求考生对某一现象进 行剖析并评论。其基本结构是：首先说 明现状；其次阐述这种现状产生或存在 的原因；最后提出解决建议或总结观点。 通常用一般现在时态。 二、必备短语 1. with the rapid development of. 随着的快速发展 2. with the growing popularity of. 随着的日益普及 3. be brought to ones attention -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 2 引起的关注 4. caused considerable concern 引 起了极大关注 5. there are several reasons why. 有几个方面的原因 6. .be more and more popular /be increasingly popular越来越受欢迎 7. account for /contribute to /lead to /result in 解释/导致 8. take effective measures 采取有 效措施 9. improve the situation 改善这种 状况 10. It is universally believed that. 人们普遍认为 11. raise the awareness of. 唤 起的意识 三、套用句式 1. Recently there has been increasing popularity among citizens to rent bicycles to cycle home or to work. 最 近，租自行车上下班在社会上变得越来 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 3 越流行。 2. With the rapid development of economy， repeated heavy smog， which has been interrupting production activities and annoying peoples everyday lives， has caused considerable concern.随着经济的快速发展，频繁出 现的重度雾霾屡屡打断生产，影响人们 的日常生活，引起了极大的关注。 3. Several factors could account for the constant existence of smog. 有几个方 面的因素可以解释雾霾的频繁出现。 4. To solve the problem， clean energy as well as more efficient heating systems must be adopted.要解决这个问题， 应采用清洁能源及更加高效的供暖系统。 5. Secondly， emissions from automobiles is yet another primary source of urban pollution.其次，汽车尾气也是 城市污染的一个主要来源。 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 4 四、习作修改 下列习作中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每 处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修 改。 Recently there has been the increasing popularity among citizens to rent bicycles to cycle home or work. The reasons can be list as follows. First， renting bicycles through smartphones is convenient for people with need and they can park the vehicles at his convenience. Beside， the price is reasonable， comparing with other means of transportation. Last but not least， being an environmental friendly choice， it cause little pollution and will undoubtedly attract more people. If the government can recognize online bike-sharing as part of public transportation system， in other words， with more bicycle lanes and parking place， rental bikes will sooner or later be -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 5 peoples top choice if they do not need to travel far. 五、n 堂练习 随着经济的快速发展，空气污染 问题也越来越严重。雾霾（smog）干扰 生产并影响人们的生活，成为热门话题。 请用英语就此话题写一篇短文，投给某 英语报，内容要点： 1. 雾霾的严重性； 2. 引起雾霾的原因； 3. 你的呼吁。 注意：1. 词数 100 左右。 2. 可以适当添加细节，以使行文 连贯。 参考词汇：排放物 emission；汽 车 automobile _ _ _ _ -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 6 _ _ _ _ _ _ 六、课外作业 越来越多人优先选择乘坐高铁出 行。请结合生活实际分析其中的原因并 谈谈你的看法。 _ _ _ _ _ _ -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 7 _ _ _ _ 参考答案与范文 习作修改 这篇讲的租用单车变得日益受欢 迎的现象，并对其原因进行了分析。 1. the 删除 因 popularity 不可数 且前文并未提及。 2. or 与 work 中间加 to 因这里是 cycle home or（cycle）to work，这里的 to 不能省略。 3. listlisted 被动语态，用过去 分词。 4. within 表示“ 有需要的” ，用 in deed，是固定搭配。 5. histheir 句子主语为 they， 用 their 才前后指代一致。 6. BesideBesides 因 beside 指 -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 8 “在什么旁边 ”，besides 才是“此外”的意 思。 7. comparingcompared 因 compared with（和比起来）是固定 短语。 8. environmentalenvironmentally 修饰形 容词 friendly，用副词。 9. causecauses 主谓要一致， 主语是 it，应该用 causes。 10. placeplaces 可数名词且需 与前面的 lanes 一致。 课堂练习 With the rapid development of economy， repeated heavy smog， which has been interrupting production activities and annoying peoples everyday lives， has caused considerable concern. Several factors could account for the constant existence of smog. Firstly， the dependence on coal to provide power -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 9 for energy is considered one of the main contributors to air pollution. Secondly， emissions from automobiles become another primary source of urban pollution. Thirdly， unfavorable weather conditions and inefficient winter heating have also contributed to the worsening of air quality. To solve the problem， clean energy as well as more efficient heating systems must be adopted. n 外作业 It is becoming increasingly clear that more and more people consider traveling by high-speed trains as their top choice. Generally， there are several reasons why high-speed trains become popular. First of all， besides its reasonable price， effective measures have been taken to make the ticket booking experience better. In addition， face recognition technology has been used to make the passenger flow smooth. -精选财经经济类资料- -最新财经经济资料-感谢阅读- 10 Whats more， New functions are provided to help check if the tick