短文改错专题训练.doc

短文改错专题训练 口诀巧记短文改错常设错误：动词形，名词数，-动词形式常错时态与语态，主、谓不一致，名词的单复数还要注意形和副；-形、副常常换着错非谓语，细辨别，-谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用，非谓语动词形式错误代词格，细领悟；-主格、宾格、所有格、反身代词，指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误介词短语常常考，-介词短语中的多词、少词与搭配习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，-分析句子成分，找出词性、连词、关系词误用等错误逻辑错误须关注，-上下文逻辑性错误，顺接和转折关系等逻辑关系错误冠词连词常光顾。-连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。 解题步骤：第一步：浏览全文，掌握大意第二步：分句阅读，逐行找错第三步：先易后难，缩小范围第四步：再次通读，复查验证 改错遵循“四原则” 1. 改动处以最少为原则 ：只能是增一词减一词或改一词 2. 多缺以虚词为主原则 ：介词、冠词、连词 3. 实词以变形为主原则4. 以保持句子原意不变为原则（1）One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasnt breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old mans breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.（2）One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent that he had a spare ticket. I didnt know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.(3)Today is Mothers Day. I love mother so much that Ive done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mothers Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears. Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful. (4)Rush buying of salt by worrying shoppers had emptied supermarket shelf in Zhejiang, Guangdong, Jiangxi, Guizhou, Sichuan, Jiangsu and Hubei provinces so well as the cities of Beijing or Chongqing. The MOC（Chinese Ministry of Commerce）took some measures immediately and was ordered local commerce departments to close monitor the market and organize timely distribution of goods meet peoples needs, according to the statement.The MOC advised shops and supermarkets to decrease their salt storage if necessary and supply the product in an orderly and balanced way. Also, China Salt had launched （启用）an emergency response mechanism to step up production and start a 24-hours distribution program.(5)Dear Jim,Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. Id like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meet was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.Looking forward to receiving your letter.Yours,Li PingOne day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. whenHe was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man himto the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. 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