A2011高考英语书面表达专题及范文.doc

2011高考英语书面表达专题复习范文高考书面表达的写作方法与技巧高考的书面表达写作时，应抓住以下四个要点：(一)认真审题（Carefully read the directions.）明确要求。审题是做好书面表达的前提，做题前应先认真阅读提示/题示，理解和明确题目要求，审题时主要从这么几个方面入手。审文体：弄清要写何种体裁的文章，如记叙文、说明文、应用文（书信、日记、通知、便条）等。以及该用什么时态。审格式：书面表达中一定的体裁有特定的格式，比如书信有信头、称呼、正文、结尾、署名等部分须写完整。审人称：即弄清书面表达要求用何种人称来写，是第一人称、第二人称、还是第三人称。如98年的书面表达要求用第一人称来写日记，可是有的考生用第三人称写，结果扣了分。(二)抓住要点（Mainly catch the points.）紧扣主题。是书面表达的评分依据之一，因此，在弄清题意的基础上，应逐条地、完整地将内容要点写全，必要时在紧扣主题时可适当发挥。(三)合理组织（Closely organize the passage.）行文连贯。写作中要点要写全，合理安排，分清文章的层次，弄清先说什么，后说什么，并使之连贯，过渡要自然，注意使用恰当的连接成分。(四)准确表达（Accurately express the ideas），遣词造句。一篇好的书面表达应做到开门见山，切中题意，文章结尾应起到画龙点睛的作用，文章内容的表达要甄酌用词，做到表达准确。 写作中应避免用一种句型显得单调，注意前几句和后几句，文章要有亮点，可以套用阅读理解短文中的好句子。误点警示：英语书面表达中容易出现的问题： 将提示逐条翻译，出现中国式的英语（Chinese English /Chinglish） 句子结构、逻辑错误，时态错误。 该详的不详，该略的不略（即详略不当） 总之，英语书面表能力的提高需要一个较长的学习过程，在长期坚持练习的同时，还必须多读多看，多模仿才行。正如英语的这句谚语“Rome was not built in a day.”如2003年的全国高考书面表达题： 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。（见下图）注意：1词数：100左右。2参考词汇：房租rent(n .)。本题的要点是开头公寓（一室带浴室、厨房）面积家具（25平方米、床、沙发、书桌、椅子）公寓位置（芳草街、离学校一站）月租费500元结尾。Dear Bob,Im so glad to learn that youre coming in September. Ive found a place for you. Its a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangchao Street, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No. 11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, its only one stop. Do you think youd like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 一 应用文A 通知(1) 书面通知格式示例NOTICEIn order to arouse the students interest in learning English, the Student Union has decided to set up an English Club with the help of the teachers of English._Student UnionNovember 9, 2004(2)口头通知格式示例Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Students Union is going to hold a party on Sunday evening, November 12th, to welcome our friends from the United States._Thats all . Thank you! 1. 假如你是旅行社导游，在高考以后，组织学生参加上海世博会(the World Expo)。根据下表内容，写一个口头通知，将行程安排通知游客。开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。出发时间6月16日上午6:30分在火车站前广场集合，7:00乘车交通方式乘火车，时速275km/h，用时4小时参观内容当天下午中国馆，可以领略各省市的精华第二天四个外国展馆，上午两个，下午两个，可以近距离体验外国文化返回时间乘夜车返回，到家时间约晚上11:30分注意：1.不要逐条翻译。 2.可适当增加细节，以使文章连贯。3.词数不少于100。 4参考词汇：展馆 pavilionDear Friends,May I have your attention, please? Here is our travel plan. We will meet in the front square of the railway station at 6:30 in the morning for the 7:00 train to Shanghai, which will cover the distance within 4 hours at a speed of 275km/h. After a simple lunch, we will go to visit the Chinese Pavilion, where we will see the best from different places of China. On the second day, we will visit 4 foreign pavilions, two in the morning and two in the afternoon, where we will experience the diverse foreign cultures by ourselves. We will take the night train back home and we will arrive home at about 11:30 at night. Thats all. Thank you.B书信（2010年高考英语书面表达预测）书信格式示例 ： 25 Tianshui Road Lanzhou, ChinaJanuary 3rd, 2003208 Hope RoadSydney, AustraliaDear Laura, How are you getting on now?_ Yours, Zhou Lan1.假设你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Michael 十年前来过你的家乡。现在远方的他写信给你想了解你们家乡的变化。请根据以下提示给Michael 回一封电子邮件。过去生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系简单、慢。现在生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住的舒适,手机普及。 要求：1围绕以上内容进行合理表述； 2所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面； 3词数80词左右, 开头语已给出 （不计入词数）。One possible version:Dear Michael, You want to know the changes about my hometownYou know, great changes have taken placed since 60 years ago In the past, the living conditions were very poorThere were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrowUsually, a big family was crowded into a small, dark houseMost families couldnt get enough foodThe communications were simple and slowPeople kept in touch with others far away mainly by letter or telegram Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recently yearsThe living conditions are much better and more comfortableThe roads are wideSome people have their own carsMost of the people have lived in big new housesQuite a few adults have mobile phonesBecause of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better Sincerely Yours,Li Hua2. 请你以A Worried Mother的名义给中国教育报写一封信，反映如下情况：1. 很多电视节目充满了暴力，儿童常常模仿；2. 不能用儿童来做广告，这样不利于孩子们的成长；3. 一些儿童看了电视里的广告后，要求他们的父母只购买广告里的糖果、玩具等之类的商品；4. 不能把一些著名的儿歌改变成广告词。注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好；摘自高考英语网2. 不能逐条翻译； 3. 词数100左右。Dear Editor,Id like to tell you something about the effect of television. _【参考答案一】Dear Editor,Id like to tell you something about the effect of television. Im sure that this is not the opinion of mine at all. When we open the TV, a lot of violence showings will appear on TV. I think this is not good for children, because many children will copy what they see.Today, many children were asked to play the roles of advertisements, singing the songs varied from the childrens songs or doing something else. So many viewers, especially children, asked their parents to buy only what they see on TV, such as candies, toys and so on.Are these helpful for children in the course of their growing? Shouldnt we, grown-ups, do something against these? 摘自高考英语网 Yours reader, A Worried Mother【参考答案二】Dear Editor,Id like to tell you something about the effect of television. Nowadays, there are many violence programmes on TV. Many children do the same as they see on TV. In addition, many children appeared in the advertisements. After children watched such kind of ads, they simply wanted their parents to get the things they see on TV, like candies and toys. More ever, some popular childrens songs were changed to advertising words. In my opinion, all these are not helpful for childrens growing. Please save our children! 摘自高考英语网Yours reader,A Worried MotherC. 日记1. 下面六幅图记载的是Peter上周星期五早上在上学路上经历的事情。请根据图示写一篇内容生动连贯的英语短文。字数在100-120之间。(陕西高三)参考词汇：uncover（揭开）passer-by（过路人）On the morning of last Friday, Peter went to school as usual. He was walking along the road when he saw a well uncovered. He thought it was dangerous for passers-by, so he decided to cover the well. The cover was so heavy that he took great trouble to remove it. At last he managed to cover the well. Hardly had he turned his back and gone when he heard a cry for “help” coming from the well. So he turned back and moved the cover away. To his surprise, a man was inside the well. Peter tried his best to pull the man out of the well. After that Peter covered the well again properly.2. 三月十四日上午，你校高三学生参加了体育毕业会考，请你根据下列图示，写一篇英文日记，并简谈你的体会。(海淀区高三练习)注意：1词数不少于60；2日记的开头已为你写好。 March 14, 2006 SunnyIt was a special day because I took the Final P. E. Test for Senior Three students .The sun was shining brightly and we reached the stadium by bus . Under the guidance of the teacher, we gathered in groups at the entrance. Before the 1500-metre race, we had a five-minute warm-up, but I felt a little nervous because I was not doing well in long-distance running. With the teachers order , we began to run as fast as we could . Towards the end of the race, I was so tired that my pace slowed down and several runners caught up with me. However, encouraged by my classmates, I kept running with every effort. Finally I crossed the finishing line at 540. To my delight, this is the best result I have gotten in a 1500-metre race.Today I was a success! Not only did I challenge the strength and endurance that a runner needed but also I learned that trying my best would really make a difference.3. 假设你在某本杂志中“我爱读书”系列漫画里看到了下面这幅漫画。请在日记中描述这幅漫画，并谈谈你所受到的启迪。(湖南师大附中2010届高三第三次月考)注意：1. 字数要求：不少于120字。2. 文中除了粽子可用汉语拼音外，其余词必须用英语描述。3. 参考词汇：解开（包装纸等）unwrapSunny Thursday October 15, 2009 This morning when I read a magazine, I was deeply impressed by a series of cartoons with the theme of I love reading. Among them, the following is the most attractive to me.In the cartoon, a man is sitting at a table on which there is a plate full of Zongzi, a kind of Chinese traditional food for the Dragon Boat Festival, and a cup. Somehow it seems that he is at a loss to eat them. Believe it or not, he just finds a book on How to unwrap Zongzi and carefully reads it instead of trying himself.As students, we are learning by reading almost every day. It is true that books can tell us a lot and teach us how to deal with some problems. However, there are also some other ways of gaining knowledge, including the way of learning by doing. Isnt it better to try unwrapping these Zongzi than to read a book telling you how to do it? As the saying goes, Theory comes from practice.D招聘启事以“An English Editor Wanted” 为题目写一则招聘启事假设你是校报负责人，急需在学校内聘一为同学担任英文版的编辑，请用英文以“An English Editor Wanted”为题目写一则招聘启事，主要内容如下：1.编辑工作主要包括两部分：一是从英文报纸杂志及互联网上选择适合学生的文章；二是选择和编辑同学们的来稿。2.希望该同学能满足下列要求：（1）乐意贡献出一些业余时间为同学服务；（2）英文，美术皆好；能熟练使用电脑。3.感兴趣的同学请在本周内与学生会（the Students Union）联系。注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 不要逐字翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。 3. 参考词汇：编辑edit(v.)；美术fine artOne possible version:An English Editor Wanted Our school newspaper is looking for an editor for its English edition. The job mainly includes two parts: One is to choose English articles from other newspapers, magazines or the Internet for us students. The other is to pick out articles from students in our school and edit them for use. We hope that he/she could meet the following requirements: first, he/she is willing to devote some of the spare time to serving the others. Second, its necessary for him/her to be good at both English and fine art. Needless to say that the ability to use the computer is important as well.Those who are interested in the job please get in touch with the Students Union this week. The Students Union二 图表作文：1.以NMET2005NMET 江西书面表达为例：人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1广交朋友2可自由表达思想3利于外语学习1浪费时间2影响学习3可能上当受骗？注意：1文章必须包括表中的全部内容。 2词数为100左右。3参考词汇： 网络朋友on-line friend(s)，上当受骗to be cheatedOne Possible Version：开头：Should students make friends on line ? 展开：Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies.展开：Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line.结尾：It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us. 2.请根据下表，以“Shopping on the Internet”为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。项 目实物：书籍、CD、衣物等信息：网上新闻、杂志、故事、下载电脑软件等服务：预定机票或旅店优 点1、方便：每天24小时服务，容易找到想买之物2、便宜缺 点不能实地看到产品，不便检查质量注意：1、短文的开头已给出，但不计入总词数； 2、参考词汇：实物physical products；下载软件download computer software.Shopping on the InternetShopping on the Internet is becoming very popular. People can shop for a variety of products on the Internet. For example, you can buy physical products like books, CDs, clothes, etc. You can also buy information products such as on-line news, magazines, and stories; you can download computer software from the Internet. Services such as booking airline tickets or hotel rooms are also available on the Internet.Internet shopping has many advantages. The most important is convenient. You can shop whenever you like, as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day. It is often cheaper to buy goods on the Internet. The main disadvantage of Internet shopping is that you cannot actually see the products you are buying or check their quality.三看图作文：1. 最近，你校学生会对分类垃圾箱是否进教室一事进行了调查，调查结果见下表。请根据图表提供的信息用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的不同意见和看法，并表达你自己的观点。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：饼状图pie chart学生对分类垃圾箱进教室的不同看法及所占比例 Recently the student union conducted a survey on whether recycling dustbins should be set in classrooms. As can be seen from the pie chart, different students hold different opinions on this program. Only a few students care little about it. Surprisingly, about one third of students are totally against the program. They dont bother to change their old habits. However, over half the students are completely for the program, as it is not only beneficial to recycling of resources, but also it can help students develop their good habits of garbage classification. Besides, 12% of the students partly agree. They hold the opinion that educating people on how to classify the garbage goes first. Personally, Im in favor of this program. I believe its important to raise peoples awareness of garbage classification, from which we will get considerable benefits for the future. 2. 假设你是李华，光明中学的学生。寒假期间你参加了社区居委会组织的社区服务活动。请你按照图片顺序，以“Community Service”为题，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。注意：1文章开头已为你写好 2词数不少于60 3参考词汇：sports facilities体育设施Community Service During the winter vacation, the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity in which all of us did our bit for the community.Community Service During the winter vacation, the students in our class joined in a meaningful activity in which all of us did our bit for the community.Fist we went to visit an old lady who lived all alone. While we were in her home, one of us chatted with her and the rest helped do a thorough cleaning. We swept the floor and dusted the table. When the work was done, the house looked really neat and tidy then we went to the sports center, where different sports facilities needed polishing. We set out to work at once. In no time everything was dust-free. To make the environment clean, we also picked up the litter on the grass and along the paths. As the Spring Festival was around the corner, we put up New Year decorations on the billboard and a poster with the characters Happy Chinese New Year on it.Having done all these, we saw a more pleasant community. Tired as we were, we felt happy as all of our work paid off.3. 如果有一场神奇的“价值拍卖会”, 你可以拍下自己最想要的东西, 你会为什么而举牌？请在以下的竞拍内容中, 选出你最想得到的三样东西, 并阐明你选择的理由。1、竞拍内容：爱心、梦想、名牌大学录取通知书、聪明、快乐、诚信、自由、权利、友情、金钱等；2、字数120左右, 不含开头语。Different people may bid for different things. _ Different people may bid for different things. As for me, I want dream, friendship and an admission notice to a famous university most.Dreams would be on the top of my list. Only by pursuing our dreams can we enjoy a meaningful and fulfilled life. Money can buy a comfortable life, but without dreams, even a millionaire would find his life boring.A person without friends can never be happy. Our life is full of joys and sorrows, which we need people to share with. Faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help. Just as a saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. Friendship can help us through ups and downs of life, so friendship would be in my list as well.After working hard for so many years, I deserve to go to a good university, because being admitted to a famous university can help me live up to my parents expectations and bring me a bright future.四说明文，议论文1.人们完成工作的方式通常有两种：独立完成和合作完成。两种方式各有特点。请你以“Working Individually or Working in a Team”为题,按照以下要点写一篇英语短文:1. 独立完成:自行安排,自己解决问题。2. 合作完成:一起讨论,相互学习。3. 我喜欢的方式和理由。注意：词数150，文章的题目和开头已经给出（不计入总词数）。Working Individually or Working in a TeamThere are basically two ways to get work done.One is to work individually. In this way, people can decide for themselves when to start work and how to do it. Whats more, they will be able to learn how to solve problems on their own and how to think independently.People may also choose to work in a team, where they can learn from each other and help each other. In addition, they may work out better ways to get work done through discussion. They can truly learn the skills of cooperation and how to get through the ideas to their team mates.As far as Im concerned, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and to share my experiences with them. As the work can be divided among several people, it can be done efficiently. Teamwork is always important.2. 自哥本哈根气候大会以来，“实行低碳经济”，“过低碳生活”已成为人们关注的热门话题。最近你班就这个话题展开了热烈的讨论。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给21st Century 写一篇文章，报道你们班的讨论情况。为什么要“实行低碳经济” 温室气体大量排放，污染严重，环境