高考英语Writing.ppt

How to write a good composition ( I ),写不好英语作文的原因： 1. 缺乏词汇和句型等基本语言知识 2. 没有掌握英语书面表达的技能,组织结构 Organization $5,内容 Content $10,语言 Language $10,A good composition=$25,评分标准,内容： 观点明确，内容充实，理由充分 语言： 表达正确，语言流畅，用词恰当，句式多样化 结构： 结构正确，上下文连贯一致,Introduction,Main body,Conclusion,基本结构,基本结构,以朋友为主题写一篇作文。 该文必须包含下列内容：,1. 你生活中所看到或所经历的一段交友故事。 2. 该故事对你产生的影响及你的想法。,Head: Introduction Paragraph,Write one or two sentences to explain the background of the topic and write the topic sentence.,Good Beginning,How to make a good beginning,警醒法：用令人感到惊奇的句子开头，激起读者的关注。 引用法：摘录或引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头。 A proverb goes that “A life without a friend is a life without a sun. ” 3. 问题法：用提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明和论述的主题，以引起读者的关注。 What makes a true friend? 4. 背景法：说明事件发生的时间、地点、情景和背景。 5. 数据法：利用已经被证实的数字来引起话题。,A complete sentence neither too wide nor too narrow.,A topic sentence should be:,Friends play a very important role in our life. Making friends is not always easy and maintaining friendship is far more difficult. Everyone needs friends but not all of our friends are worth getting on well with. Here I want to share my experience with you.,4. What does “friendship” mean? Maybe different people have different ideas. There is no definite answer to this question.,Body: Supporting Details,examples,facts detailed,reasons,cause and effect,data,examples,facts,Brain storming,opinions,From my point of view, a friend should be the person who could strike a chord with me and always point out my mistakes in a tender way. Lily is an authentic friend in accordance with my difinition. When I was in my junior school period, I was a bad-tempered girl, who always had an argument with her parents. However, it is Lily who was patient enough to persuade me out of continuing this kind of life that altered my lifestyle. So we can safely draw the conclusion that a good friend could change your life-long path.,From my experience, I learned that everybody should treat his friends with emapthy and sincerity, thus reaping an harmornious family rather than a cold place satruated with selfish concepts. By and large, it is high time that we made every effort to care for and love our friends with a warm heart.,Tail: concluding paragraph,A good concluding paragraph should be short but strong, repeating your opinion in a fresh way and giving your expectations and hopes for the future or determination.,Tail: concluding paragraph,总结法：以一句有特点的句子（诸如虚拟语气）来收口，起到画龙点睛的作用。 Since she is such a wonderful friend that I wish we would never part. 引语法：用名人名言、格言、谚语或习语等结尾，意味深长，耐人寻味。 In a word, friendship multiplies joys and divides grieves . 3. 反诘法：用疑问句形式结尾，具有很明显的强调作用，能引起读者的思考。 Arent good friends beneficial to each other?,多用高级词汇，长短句式互补举例,1. 用较高级词汇替换划线词: 1) All the foreign guests were surprised at the beautiful buildings in Pudong new area. 2) This question has caused many peoples attention.,amazed,maganificent, splendid,grand,This issue has caused wide public concern.,3) Using bicycle greatly improves peoples health as well as easing traffic jams. Using bicycle contributes greatly to peoples physical fitness as well as easing traffic jams. 4) We should try our best to overcome the difficulties We should spare no effort/endeavour / strive to conquer the difficulties,5) There were about 200 hundred people taking part in the writing contest. 6) More and more people are beginning to understand that education is not complete with graduation.,approximately,participating in,/ entering for,An increasing/growing/significent/great number of people,realize,7) There has been much increase in the world population in the last decades. 8) Im going to that big supermarket to buy some household appliances. 9) On my way home, I often walk into the shop to get some bread,dramatic/ drastic,grand,purchase,pop into,10) Those who break traffic rules should be punished. Those who violate traffic regulations deserved punishing/ punishment/ to be punished. 11) Since the examination is coming near, I have to give up doing sports. Since the examination is around the corner/ approaching/drawing near， I am compelled to give up doing sports.,12) It is known around the world that trees are necessary to us. It is unive