基础写作作文课件简介地方.ppt

评析高三第三次月考基础写作 高明二中 黄晓红,学习目的: 1. 学会使用在作文写作中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语(6个短语）。 2. 学会可以尽量使用非谓语动词-过去分词来把句子变成5句话作文。,高三第三次月考（11月23日）作文：第一节 基础写作,假设你是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省。请用英语写一份导游词，简介广东。 写作内容 1广东省位于中国大陆东南部，南临南海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多； 2广东省历史悠久，简称粤； 3广东素有“水果王国”之称， 香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝是其中的四大名果； 4广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利，海运发达； 5其中，经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等； 6广东省有“食在广东”的美称。,1广东省位于中国大陆东南部，南临南海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多；,1. Guangdong Province is located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China. It has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres.,1. Guangdong Province is located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China. It has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres.（用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）,-Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China, Guangdong province has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres.,2广东省历史悠久，简称粤。 6广东省有“食在广东”的美称。,2. Guangdong Province has a long history. It is called Yue for short.,6Guangdong Province is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate(犹豫) to have meals here.”,2. Guangdong Province has a long history. It is also called Yue for short. 6Guangdong Province is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” （用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）,Guangdong Province, also called Yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.”,3广东素有“水果王国”之称， 香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝、菠萝是其中的四大名果；,3. Guangdong Province is known as a fruit king. Guangdong Province is famous for its highquality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. （用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）,- Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous for its highquality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples.,4广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利，海运发达；,4. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, with convenient transportation both on land and water.,5其中，经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等；,5. It has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.,Guangdong Province, also called Yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China, it has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres. Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous for its highquality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, with convenient transportation both on land and water. It has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.,总结： 1. 作文中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语：（尽量回想，并默写下来）,1.be located by/in/at=lie in/on(位于/坐落于)；2.has a total length of（总共有-长）；3.cover/has an area of（有-面积）;4. has/with a long history；5. be known for/as；6.has a population of(有-人口),2. 可以尽量用非谓语动词把句子变成5句话。,假设你是一名高三的学生，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览广东省佛山市高明区。请用英语写一份导游词，简介高明。 写作内容 1广东省佛山市高明区位于佛山市的西部，水陆交通便利，海运发达. 2广东省佛山市历史悠久，广东省素有“食在广东”的美称。因此我们这里也有许多著名的当地美食；如濑粉。 3中文被称为濑粉；它是如此的美味，一经尝试后你就永远也不会忘记它的味道。 4濑粉是一种特别的食物，它已经吸引了来自世界各地的人们。 5欢迎各地的旅游者到高明来玩。,开头： I am a senior 3 student whothat is from Gaoming senior high school. Welcome to Guangdong Province. Im Ivy. And Im more than glad to be your guide.,1广东省佛山市高明区位于佛山市的西部，水陆交通便利，海运发达.（用非谓语动词过去分词）,Gaoming town is located in the west of Foshan city . Gaoming town has convenient transportation both on land and water.,高明区在哪儿,Located in the west of Foshan city , Gaoming town has convenient transportation both on land and water.,Whats more, Foshan has a long history and Guangdong Province is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” So there are also a quantity of local famous food, such as Laifen.,2广东省佛山市历史悠久，广东省素有“食在广东”的美称。因此我们这里也有许多著名的当地美食；如濑粉。,3中文被称为濑粉；它是如此的美味，一经尝试后你就永远也不会忘记它的味道。（用非谓语动词过去分词）,Laifen ,whichthat is called in Chinese, is so delicious that you will never forget its flavor after you have tasted it.,Laifen , called in Chinese, is so delicious that you will never forget its flavor after you have tasted it.,4濑粉是一种特别的食物，它已经吸引来自世界各地的人们。（用定语从句）,Laifen is a speciality here, whose flavor has attracted thousands of people from all over the world.,Laifen is a speciality here, whose flavor has attracted thousands of people from all over the world.,5欢迎各地的旅游者到高明来玩。(创新设计P60写作练笔第5句),Tourists from all over the world are welcome to our hometownGaoming for a visit.,高明皂幕山,高明合水桫椤,夜景高明大桥,Tourists from all over the world are welcome to our hometown for a visit. Located in the west of Foshan city , Gaoming town has convenient transportation both on land and water. Whats more, Foshan has a long history and Guangdong Province is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” So there are also a quantity of local famous food, such as Laifen. Laifen , called in Chinese , is so delicious that you will never forget its flavor after you have tasted it. Laifen is a speciality here whose flavor has attracted thousands of people from all over the world.,HW:基础写作 你的美国笔友Lisa暑假期间将要来中国旅游,请你根据提示, 写一篇介绍你的家乡广州的短文。 1. 广州地处广东省中部, 面积7434.4平方公里,人口约1000万, 是广东的省会, 是一座有二千二百多年文明的历史古城；,2. 1982年, 广州被选定为全国首批历史名城之一； 3. 广州一年四季如春, 繁花似锦, 故有“花城” 之美誉； 4. 广州正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海内外游客。,Guangzhou, with a history of 2200 years, is known as “ the flower city”, which is the starting place of “the silk road on sea” in ancient China. It has a population of 10 million and an area of 7,4