英语写作要领及技巧.ppt

英语写作要领及技巧,制作人：薛少鹏,大学英语（CET4，CET6）作文要求,写作时间：30分钟 作文字数：100-150字 评分标准： A）是否切题 B）是否表达思想清楚 C）是否连贯通顺 D）是否存在或严重存在语言错误,Sentence Writing,用词必须明确、具体。 多用主动语态 省去不必要的词 不要滥用并列句 正确选择并列连词 避免悬垂分词 不要改变说话角度 避免主次颠倒 注意标点符号的使用,用词必须明确、具体,Ex: A) He was not very often on time. He usually came late. B) He did not think that studying Latin was of much use He thought the study of Latin useless. C) He show satisfaction as the took possession of his well earned reward. He grinned as he pocketed.,多用主动语态,My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me. My first visit to Boston will always be remembered. I shall always remember my first visit to Boston.,省去不必要的词,The question as to whether it is right or wrong depends. The question whether it is right or wrong depends. His story is a strange one. His story is strange. This is a subject that arouses public attention. This subject arouses public attention.,省去不必要的词,In spite of the fact that she was in a hurry, she stopped to talk. Although she was in a hurry, she stopped to talk. The fact that you had not succeeded in the examination should not deter you from trying again. Your failure in the examination should not deter you from trying again.,不要滥用并列句,We are going to the countryside this summer, and we are going to visit my grandmother. We are going to the countryside this summer to visit my grandmother. My friend told me that I had won the scholarship, and I was overjoyed. When my friend told me that I had won the scholarship, I was overjoyed.,正确选择并列连词,It is time for the curtain to rise ; and only a few of the audience have yet come. It is time for the curtain to rise , but only a few of the audience have yet come.,避免悬垂分词,Flying at 12,000 feet, the countryside looks like a green check tablecloth. When you fly at 12,000 feet, the countryside looks like a green check tablecloth. Walking through the fields, the wild flowers flowers are an interesting subject to study. As one walks through the fields, the wild flowers provide an interesting subject to study.,不要改变说话角度,The entire class attended the picnic, and an enjoyable day was spent by all. The entire class attended the picnic, and all spent an enjoyable day. When you have selected a satisfactory pattern, the material may then be bought. When you have selected a satisfactory pattern, you may then buy the material,避免主次颠倒(1),The development of the suburbs has created problem, while it has also provided substantial modern housing for millions of people. While the development of the suburbs has created problem, it has also provided substantial modern housing for millions of people.,避免主次颠倒(2),Joe walked out of the room , finding the boy still there. Walking out of the room , Joe found the boy still there. 分词表示次要动作,注意标点符号的使用,Mary says Amy is the greatest actress in London. Mary , says Amy, is the greatest actress in London. He is fortunately married. He is , fortunately married.,Paragraph Writing,The structure of a paragraph Topic sentence Development sentence Conclusion,The structure of a paragraph,Topic sentence,What is topic sentence The position of topic sentence How to write a topic sentence,TOPIC SENTENCE,Radar is very important in aviation today. Radar is greatly used in our life today. Radar plays an important role in supporting my family.,Development sentence,What is development sentence How to wrote a development sentence. Skill A: Enumeration Skill B: Comparison and contrast Skill C: Cause and effect,写作的基本步骤,审题 构思 列出提纲 动笔 复合,写作的基本要求,完整性 文章是有机的整体要表达完整的信息，初此文章还应保持结构的完整。 唯一性 主题唯一、中心鲜明 连贯性 对中心思想（论点）的阐述要合乎逻辑，前后连贯。,练习：,Adult Education in China 1) China needs to develop her adult education. 2) Adult education is now playing an important part in Chinas realization of the four modernizations. 3)However, adult education in China faces some problems.,习作评析,China needs to develop her education. In china , the number of high education is limited because of its economics and population. So her adult education is an important content . Adult education is important on increasing the whole education.,Adult education is now playing an important part in the realization of her four modernizations. The four modernizations-national defense, agriculture, science and technology, industry-are Chinas aim of development . Realizing the four modernizations needs more educated workers, so in China adult education is very urgent. However, adult education in China faces some problems.first, the number of adult education is too large to satisfy in funds.second, the quality of education cant be guaranteed.,词不达意 The number of the youth who can get higher education.,Its backward economy and large population. Is a very urgent task. The number of people receiving adult education is too large to be satisfied at once,HOME WORK,My suggestions on Education Chinas educational cause has developed very fast during the decade, but it still leaves much to be desired. _,英语写作的三要和三忌,要尽量用学过的词句表达法，忌用Chinese English 。 要紧扣要求，忌自由发挥。 要内容连贯，忌东拼西凑。,议论文写作,确定主题 论据充分 逻辑严密 结构清晰 态度忠诚，友好,转承词 I,表示时间：first, second,next,before during after, now, then, last 举例：in addition, also, anther, further, more, similarly, for example/instance 对比：although, but however, instead,