让书面表达更具文采.ppt

让书面表达更具文采,让书面表达更具文采,1. words,2. useful expressions,3. linking words,4. sentence structures,5. passage organization,一. 运用高级词汇,1.这件事情挺难的。,This is a challenging job.,2. 我们就会了解父母的辛苦工作。,Well then know about parents hardship.,3. 这有助于我们学会节俭。,This helps us learn to be thrifty.,高级词汇举例:,significant,hardship,available,contact,demanding,relatively,wasteful,frequent,二.增加形容词或副词,1.在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。,2. 如果父母的收入较好,There lies a lovely pond in our beautiful campus.,If their parents have a relatively high income,.,表示程度的副词举例,hardly,seldom,rarely,merely,relatively,slightly,a bit,partly,completely,三. 置于句首的副词,1. 这极有可能使孩子养成依赖父母的习惯。,2. 尤其当父母有足够的钱养家时，。,Probably this will make the children develop the habit of living on parents.,Especially when their parents have enough money to support the family,.,句首副词举例,strangely,frequently,especially,unbelievably,unexpectedly,surprisingly,besides,四. 各类句型,1.插入语,然而, 其他同学持有不同意见。,The other students, however, hold the different view.,另外，他们会以为将来可以依赖父母。,Besides, theyll think they can rely on their parents in the future.,2. It 句型,我们期望今年有个好收成。,It is expected that there will be a good harvest.,30%学生认为无必要让孩子知道父母的收入。,30% of the students think it unnecessary to let children know how much their parents earn.,3. with 结构,作业做完了，那个男孩出去玩了。,With the homework finished, the boy went out to play.,有了父母可依赖，他们就不再努力学习了。,Theyll not study hard any more, with rich parents to depend on.,4.分词短语,30%同学不赞同这一看法， 认为孩子不应当。,30% of my classmates disagree with it, saying children shouldnt.,知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。,Knowing this, theyll study harder and harder.,5.从句,他所做的一切使我们很失望。（主语从句）,What he did disappointed us all.,我们应当知道父母的收入，因为这有助于我们 理解他们的艰辛。（状语从句）,We should know parents income, because itll help us understand how hard they have to work.,五. 连接成分,表示时间:,first of all; to begin with; and then; finally; eventually-,表示递进:,whats more; moreover; furthermore; in addition; to make things worse; the most important of all;,表示并列:,and; but; or; so,表示转折:,however; on the contrary; nevertheless; anyway; anyhow; in spite of; despite,表示因果:,as a result; result in; thus; owing to; due to; as a consequence; therefore,表示结论:,in short; in brief; in a word; above all; on the whole,Joe, who is a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem.,Joe, a lawyer in town, persuaded them to settle the problem.,Joe is a lawyer in town. Joe persuaded them to settle the problem.,六. 综合运用,I followed your advice. I went to the supermarket. I found four chairs there. They were in good shape. They were at a reasonable price,I followed your advice and went to the supermarket, where I found four reasonably-priced chairs which were in good shape.,Following your advice, I went to the supermarket where I found four reasonably priced chairs in good shape.,假定你是某中学学生李华。最近你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次话题为：父母的收入有没有必要让孩子知道？请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。,We do have different opinions on this matter. Most of us (about 70%) think we should know our parents income since it will help us understand how hard our parents have to work, no matter how much they earn. Then we will study harder and will not waste money any more. We may also learn to share our parents trouble.,However, about 30% of my classmates think it unnecessary to let the children know how much their parents earn. If they know their parents have enough money to support the family, they will not study hard for they neednt worry about the future. Especially when their parents have a relatively high income, the children will easily form a wasteful habit.,05年浙江卷书面表达:,你的英国朋友正在做一个课题: 世界各地的 生日庆祝方式。 请你根据以下要点写一短文： 一. 通常方式: 1.生日聚会 2.生日礼物 3.生日祝福 二. 我认为有意义的庆祝方式和理由。 词数 100-120。,Chinese students celebrate their birthday in various ways. The most common way, however, is just to hold a birthday party, at which friends get together to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receive nice gifts as well as pure-hearted wishes. Besides, parents will prepare a special dinner or cake to show their deepest love for their children.,Since birthday celebrations is one of the most important activities in ones life, it can