琼州学院附属中学张云华.ppt

Welcome to Our Class,琼州学院附属中学 张云华,Writing,写作,China Dream(中国梦）,Do you have the dream to go to the moon on a spaceship? (你们有乘坐宇宙飞船登上月球这个梦想吗？),如果有一天你得到一次乘坐宇宙飞船去登月球的机会，有可能带去的食物在宇宙飞船里漂浮着而让你吃不着。请用英语写一篇小短文来描述一下这个困难，并提供一种你将如何防止这个困难发生的方法，且对自己将要进行的月球之行进行预测。,要求：1. 字数为100120。 2. 卷面整洁，字迹工整。,ruth生活在太空站（流畅）_320x240_2.00M_h.264_baofeng.flv,GPS,TPS,What will help the drivers to find their destination? 什么将帮助这些司机找到他们的目的地？,Global Positioning System,全球定位系统,GPS,TPS,Tense （时态）,Person （人称）,Structure （结构）,What should we mainly pay attention to while writing an article? (在写作时，我们主要应该注意什么？）,The target of this period: To use the“TPS” method to write the article. 2. To evaluate(评价）the article.,如果有一天你得到一次乘坐宇宙飞船去登月球的机会，有可能带去的食物在宇宙飞船里漂浮着而让你吃不着。请用英语写一篇小短文来描述一下这个困难，并提供一种你将如何防止这个困难发生的方法，且对自己将要进行的月球之行进行预测。,要求：1. 字数为100120。 2. 卷面整洁，字迹工整。,书面表达：（满分25分）,Conclusion: 总结,Body paragraph: 主体部分,Lead-in: 导入,T,P,:,:,I,me,my,the food,it,its,will do,do/does/is/am/are,S,Conclusion: 总结,Body paragraph: 主体部分,Lead-in: 导入,prediction: 预测,difficulty: 困难,solution: 解决 方法,液体食物,S,:,However, we human beings are to overcome .,liquid food,So it is hard to ,固体食物,solid food,装入试管,put it into a tube,用吸管来吸,with a straw,I believe I will have if,I wont , instead, I will.Why I will do so is that I can,gravity重力,spaceship宇宙飞船,float around漂浮,There is very little , which makes things there.,S,:,T,will do,:,:,P,I,do/does/is/am/are,me,my,the food,it,its,There is very little , which makes the things there,So it is hard to ,However, we human beings are to overcome .,I wont , instead, I will.Why I will do so is that I can,I believe I will have if,Writing time!,minutes,10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1,11,12,13,13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 0,59,seconds,58,57,56,55,54,53,52,51,50,49,48,47,46,45,44,43,42,41,35,36,37,38,40,39,34,6,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,5,4,3,2,1,0,0,start,There is very little , which makes the things there . So it is hard to ,However, we human beings to overcome . I wont , instead, I will.Why I is that I can,I believe I will have if,Evaluate the writing according to the evaluation sheet.,（评价时间）,Evaluating Time,TPS,It is a fact that there is very little gravity in the spaceship. It is well known that too little gravity can make things float around. So it is hard to eat the taken food if we will visit the moon on a spaceship. However, we human beings are clever enough to prevent such a little difficulty from taking place. It is true that the solid food will float around in the spaceship. I wont take solid with me, instead, I will take liquid food which is put in a tube if I have a chance to visit the moon on the spaceship . Why I will do so is that I can easily eat it by using a straw. In a word, I believe I have the ability to stop the difficulty taking place and have a happy visit to the moon if given such a chance.,It is a fact that there is very little gravity in the spaceship, which makes things there float around. So it is hard to eat the taken food if we will visit the moon on a spaceship. However, we human beings are clever enough to overcome such a little difficulty . It is true that the solid food will float around in the spaceship. So I wont take solid food with me, instead, I will take liquid food which is put in a tube if I have a chance to visit the moon on the spaceship . Why I will do so is that I can easily eat it by using a straw. In a word, I believe I have the ability to overcome the difficulty and have a happy visit to the moon if given such a chance.,T,P,S,Evaluat