（浙江专用）2020版高考英语一轮复习专题十六读后续写课件.pptx

专题十六 读后续写,高考英语 (浙江专用),自主命题浙江卷题组 Writing 1(2018浙江6月) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dads friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawn on my farm,”he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chick-,五年高考,ens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Dont be late for supper,”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!”“OK!”my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark.,答案 写作提示 根据续写第一段所给的段首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.可知,本段 应该主要描写突然出现一只小兔子后的故事。按照常理,突然出现的兔子一般会让马受惊。 故本段应该描写马受惊后发生的事。 从第二段的段首句We had no idea where we were and it got dark.可以看出,作者和父亲迷路 了。那么本段的故事主要根据迷路后的情况展开。本段的主要内容应该是从迷路到回家的 故事。 写作时一定要注意以下两点: 第一,从本故事的发展来看,第一段是马受惊后发生的事,而第二段是迷路后的故事,因此要注 意人物心理和情感的描写。 第二,注意两段的逻辑关系。要注意第一段的内容,尤其是段尾的内容和第二段段首句之间的 衔接要合理,即第一段的最后一定要有迷路的情节设计。,One possible version: Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. This unexpected appearance frightened my horse, which made it run wildly. I tried my best to control it, but in vain. Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath, and so did I. At that moment, my dad also came up. Seeing I was OK, he was quite relieved. But it was clear that we got lost. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were and it got dark. We didnt know where the farm house was. What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly. But it was really difficult for us in such a dark situation. Just as we were at the point of desperation, we heard a faint voice from the distance. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I said. So we cried back with excitement. Finally, Uncle Paul safely brought us back home. What an amazing ride!,精彩语句 1.精美词汇 in vain 白费力气 previous adj. 之前的 at the point of desperation 将要绝望之际 a faint voice 微弱的声音 2.出彩结构 Frightened as I was, I tried to keep my balance to prevent myself from falling off.(部分倒装) What we could do was to go back along the previous track slowly.(what引导主语从句),Writing 2(2017浙江11月) 阅读下面短文. 根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements, all because of my motherloving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed ever see them again? Finally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and trav- elers checks Mom had forgotten. David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving,while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨)while I go, and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey, where are the kids?” “What?! Oh, Gosh.I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city, but we werent about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections(反对). If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.,答案 写作提示 原文是一篇有关家庭旅游生活的故事。文章内容贴近生活,中学生容易发挥想象去续写。续 写的内容应该还是按照家庭旅游的主线来进行,当然,涉及“妈妈健忘,但是很善良”的特点也 是续写的关注点。 One possible version: Paragraph 1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. We decided to camp a- long the river. The views there were surprisingly beautifulthe warm sunshine, the fresh air, the clean water. We sat on the grass, enjoying the splendid nature. However, when Dad was about to put up our tent, he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel. Well, Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping.,Paragraph 2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Every time we got to a new place, Mom would cheer up like a child. She would get off the car excitedly, laughing and dancing around. Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities, the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature. When we came back to the hotel after the tir- ing but excellent visit, Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces. How sweet she was! Absent- minded and forgetful as she was, she never forgot to express her love to us.,Writing 3(2017浙江6月) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling from his home to Alaska with his friends. One of his friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, but they had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行)a- long alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped to show them this beautiful place someday. Then Mac heard quick and loud breathing behind him. “Man, thats a big dog!”he thought. But when he looked to the side, he saw instantly that it wasnt a dog at all, but a wolf, quickly catching up with him. Macs heart jumped. He found out his can of bear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf. A bright red cloud enveloped the animal, and to Macs relief, it fell back, shak- ing its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macs bike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only to quickly restart the chase(追赶).,Mac was pedaling hard now. He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to slow down. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew that once he hit the hill, hed be easy caught up and the wolfs teeth would be tearing into his flesh. At this moment, Paul and Becky were driving their car on their way to Alaska. They didnt think much of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, they spotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer, they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He pulled in front of it as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived.,答案 写作提示 文章题材和野外生活相关,故事具有冒险性。原文是主人公Mac在和朋友一起外出骑车旅游 时不幸遭遇饿狼的故事。就在最危险的时候Paul和Becky驱车走近。这样,精彩的故事进一步 展开。本文故事设计具有很大发展空间。 根据文章的第一段提示句,本段应该描述Paul 和Becky是如何帮助Mac脱险的,而根据第二段 的提示句,本段则应该是Mac 的朋友到来之后发生的事。考生可以根据自己的理解和想象进 行合理的续写。一定要注意续写的内容的合理性,不可脱离原文的故事无限发展。 One possible version: Paragraph 1: The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac rushed down from his bicycle and waved at the peo- ple inside the car for help. Paul and Becky inside the car got out immediately to help him climb in- to the car, in spite of the danger that the fierce wolf was running near. They quickly pushed Mac into their car and closed all the doors as hard as possible, legs trembling and breathless. Seeing,this, the wolf still howled outside the car for some time and then left unwillingly. Paragraph 2: A few minutes later, the other cyclists arrived. Macs friends were shocked to hear the story and very grateful to the young couple. Mac invited all of them back to his home for dinner and he in- troduced his wife and daughters to his two new friends who saved his life. During the dinner they recalled the adventure and talked about the ways to deal with such dangerous situations.,Writing 4(2016浙江10月) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp”and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!”she cried.“Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.,Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me?Unfortu- nately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1:,Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up.,答案 写作提示 这是一篇情节自然,但是有冒险色彩的故事。原文讲到Tom 和Jane 因琐事吵架,后来Jane意外 迷失在森林里。根据原文及所给的段首句,续写部分的构思不会太难。 根据第一段的首句可知,本段应该描述当天晚上Jane的心态和行动。而根据第二段的提示句 可知,本段主要叙述Jane最终是如何获救的。当然,在续写中,一定要反映出Jane的坚韧和聪明, 同时,最后一定要有Tom努力救援的信息,这样的续写故事结尾才有正能量。 One possible version: Paragraph 1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. She had to stay alone in the forest for another cold night.Jane was so tired and disappointed, but she didnt lose heart. She knew Tom must be trying his best to search for her. She believed that the helicopter must have been called by Tom and was sure it would come back again tomorrow. She found a place near thestream and slept.,Paragraph 2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Shewalkedalong the stream, hoping to find a suitable place so that the helicopter could find her. She was so lucky that before long a big rock appeared, which was high above the trees. There she climbed and waited with heryellow blouse in hand for the heli- copter to come again.To her great joy,she didnt wait long before she saw the helicopter in the sky. She waved hard with the yellow blouse and the helicopter quickly found her. She was right and it was Tom who called the helicopter and saved her.,A组 20172019年高考模拟考点基础题组 Writing 1(2019浙江金华十校4月联考) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 “Were you Marks math teacher?” an old man came to my office and asked. I nodded.“Mark talked about you a lot. I want to show you something,” he said, taking a wallet out of his pocket. “They found this on him when he was killed in the battle. We thought you might recognize it.” Opening the wallet, he carefully removed a worn piece of notebook paper that had obviously been taped, folded and refolded many times. I knew without looking that the paper was the one on which I had listed all the good things each of Marks classmates had said about him. And that hap- pened 20 years ago. Mark was in the third grade class I taught. All 34 of my students were dear to me, but Mark was one in a million. Very neat in appearance, he had that happy-to-be-alive attitude that made even his occasional misbehavior delightful.,三年模拟,Mark also talked without stopping. I tried to remind him again and again that talking without per- mission was unacceptable. What impressed me so much, though, was the sincere response every time I had to correct him for misbehaving.“Thank you for correcting me,Sister!” I didnt know what to make of it at first but before long I became accustomed to hearing it many times a day. One morning my patience was growing thin when Mark talked once too often. I made a new teach- ers mistake. I looked at Mark and said,“If you say one more word, I am going to tape your mouth shut!” It wasnt ten seconds later when Chuck shouted,“Mark is talking again.” I hadnt asked any of the students to help me watch Mark, but since I had stated the punishment in front of the class, I had to act on it. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右; 2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1: I walked to my desk and took out a roll of tape. Paragraph 2: One day I decided to do something different when Mark talked again in class.,答案 写作提示 文章采用倒叙的方式,首先介绍了一个在战争中牺牲的战士留下的一张纸,然后回忆了这张纸 的来历。要特别注意续写的内容和原文中纸上的内容逻辑相对应。 One possible version: Paragraph 1: I walked to my desk and took out a roll of tape. Very deliberately, I proceeded to Marks desk, tore off two pieces of the tape and made a big X with them over his mouth. I then returned to the front of the room.As I glanced at Mark to see what he was doing,he winked at me.I started laughing.The entire class cheered as I walked back to Marks desk, removed the tape and shrugged my shoul- ders. His first words were,“Thank you for correcting me, Sister.” Paragraph 2: One day I decided to do something different when Mark talked again in class. I asked the other stu- dents to think of the good things they could say about Mark and write them down. Then I listed,them on a separate paper.The next day I gave it to Mark.“Really?” Before long I heard him whispering. The paper did work. Mark listened more and more carefully to my instruction from that day on.“Thank you so much for doing that,” the old man brought me back to earth.“As you can see, Mark treasured it.” he added. That was when I finally cried. 精彩语句 1.精美词汇 deliberately adv.故意地 proceed v.前进,继续 glance at 瞄一眼 2.出彩结构 Very deliberately,I proceeded to Marks desk, tore off two pieces of the tape and made a big X with them over his mouth.(本句使用了副词作状语,并使用了并列的谓语动词),Writing 2(2019浙江台州模拟) 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 For many years, I had a recurring (重复出现的) dream. I was a little girl again, rushing about and trying to get ready for school. “Hurry!Youll be late for school,” my mother called to me. “I am hurrying, Mom! What did I do with my books?” Deep inside I knew where the dream came from. It was about some unfinished business in my life. As a kid, I loved everything about school. I loved books, teachers, tests and homework. Most of all I longed to someday march down the aisle (通道) to receive my diploma. That seemed more ap- pealing even than getting married. But at 15, I had to drop out because my parents couldnt afford tuition (学费). My hope of getting a diploma was dead, or so I thought. Pretty soon, I married and had three children, and I thought, “There goes my diploma.” Even so, I wanted my children to be educated. But Linda, our youngest child, had juvenile arthritis,(幼年型关节炎) in her hands and knees, which made it impossible for her to function in a normal classroom. I felt really sorry for her and I didnt want her to live her life with regret. I didnt give up hope of her being back to school in some way. One day, I saw an ad in the newspaper for evening courses.“Thats the answ