书面表达常见错误类型及改进意见

1、 书面表达常见错误类型及改进意见错误类型一:汉式英语错误不少考生在英语书面表达时易受汉语习惯影响,所写句子虽然语法正确,却不符合英语表达习惯,造成不少汉语式英语病句.要减少汉式病句必须做到(1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达.(2)平时多归纳总结,纠正汉式英语.(3)多收听对外广播、收看英语节目、广泛阅读英文版书籍、报纸及其它材料.例如:误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正:It cost five yuan to buy a dictionary.或The dictionary cost him five yua

2、n.误:Good good study,day day up. 正:If you study hard ,you will make progress every day.误:Here is suitable to grow cash crops 正:It is suitable to grow cash crops here.误:There is a nitice in the park saying “ To take notice of safe; the sidewalk is very crafty.” 正: There is a nitice in the park saying

3、“Watch your step. Slippery sidewalk.”误: His fever is high. 正: He has a high fever.误: The student is standing there is my brother. 正: The student standing there is my brother. 或 The student who is standing there is my brother.误: The price of the computer is expensive. 正: The price of the computer is

4、high.误: The population of China is many. 正: The population of China is large.误: Recently our village have taken plce great changes . 正: Recently great changes have taken plces in our village.误: There are twenty students in our class have been to Beijing. 正: Twenty students in our class have been to

5、Beijing.误: That factory broke out a fire last Sunday. 正: A fire broke out in that factory last Sunday.误: This building likes a school. 正: This building looks like/is a school.误: He will able to write articles in English next year. 正: He will be able to write articles in English next year.误: I will b

6、y bus to Beijing. 正: Ill go to Beijing by bus tomorrow.误: Professor Li comes from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow. 正: Professor Li from Beijing University will give us a lecture tomorrow.误: Hie friends are few. 正: He has few friends误: Wei Fangs father scolded her coming late to sc

7、hool. 正: Wei Fangs father scolded her for her coming late to school.误: To attend this meeting is important. 正: It is important to attend this meeting.误: His teaching methods are many. 正: He has many teaching methods.错误类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误 一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。如果把句子的某一个部分当成一个句子，就会导致非完整句子。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句

8、不能写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开。例如：误: There were foreigners came to our school.正: There were foreigners who came to our school.误: Without a friend will feel londly.正: Without a friend one will feel londly.误: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor.正: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs

9、; the boys mopped the floor. 正: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and the boys mopped the floor.误: The book was interesting. I read it rapidly.正: The book was interesting; I read it rapidly. 正: The book was interesting,and I read it rapidly.误: The woman talked to you just now is our English te

10、acher.正: The woman who talked to you just now is our English teacher.误: I cant imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.正: I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets.误: China is no longer what used to be .正: China is no longer what it used to be .误: Although rai

11、ned, we went on working.正: Although it rained, we went on working.误: They finished the homework, they went out.正: Since/As they finished the homework, they went out.误: I am tired, I must go to bed.正: I am tired, so I must go to bed.误:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possoble for the p

12、lants on the earth to grow.正: The sun gives off heat and light, which makes it possoble for the plants on the earth to grow.误:You practise more reading, you will improve your reading ablility.正:If you practise more reading, you will improve your reading ablility.误:I arrive at the station, the train

13、had left.正: When I arrive at the station, the train had left.误: China is still a developing country, most people cant afford a car.正: Because China is still a developing country, most people cant afford a car.错误类型三：重复累赘有些英语单词本身自带某个意思，或由于语法需要不能再出现某个单词，而学生基本功夫不够扎实，常常出现累赘现象。误: The box is too heavy for

14、the weak boy to carry it.正: The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.误: We hope to improve our work better.正: We hope to improve our work.误: We are very like his lesson.正: We are like his lesson very much.误: Yours class was intererting.正: Your class was intererting.误: In spite of the fact he i

15、s lazy, I like him.正: In spite of his laziness, I like him.误: Personally I think he is a good student.正: I think he is a good student.误: I seldom go to the Shanghai Library due to the reason it is far away from my home.正: I seldom go to the Shanghai Library because it is far away from my home.误: Mar

16、y married with John.正: Mary married John.误: I returned back the book to you yesterday.正: I returned the book to you yesterday.误: The teacher repeated the sentence again.正: The teacher repeated the sentence.误: My most favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.正: My favorite song is “Hand in Hand”.误: The train

17、is entering into the tunnel.正: The train is entering the tunnel.错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性一个句子必须表达一个完整、前后语意一致的意思。如果把不相干的意思放子一个句字里或一个句子表达不完整，就会出现逻辑问题。句子无论长短，在安排上要合乎逻辑，衔接自然，使句内语意关系明确。而学生在习作过程中常出现悬垂修饰语、指代不明、缺少过渡词语、非平行结构和语意不完整的分割句等错误。例如误: Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard.正: Being an honest man, Tom neve

18、r tells a lie.误: liu hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries.正: AS she has a trong will and confidence in herself,liu hua may be successful in anything she tries.误: Rose is in love with John, John is in love with Mary.正: Rose is in love with John, but John is in love

19、 with Mary.错误类型五：语法、词法错误许多考生写作中易犯关系不一致、词性混用、选词或搭配不当，时态语态错误、指代不清、语序不当等方面的错误。例如：误: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.正: In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.误: He closed the door and hurries away to class.正: He closed the door and hurried away to class.误: 60% of the s