高三英语写作专项之读后续写之亲情NoTime课件

1、亲情话题NO TIME原题呈现 No Time With a broad smile on her lips, 15yearold Sirin rushed to her mom to show off her new painting. But Mom raised her eyebrows with eyes wide open and spoke in an impatient tone, “No time, baby. Right now I am busy with an important talk. Just wait for some time, OK？” Holding he

2、r oil painting, she frowned, and then searched for her dad. “Dad, see what I have done，” Sirin announced aloud in a thrilling voice. Her dad turned around while adjusting his tie, grinned at her, and showed his thumbs up! Immediately, blowing her two cheeks, Sirin replied angrily, “Dad, you havent s

3、een it yet.” He smiled at her saying, “No time, baby. I will see it later.” He just patted her back lovingly, kissed her forehead, and rushed for his office. She was not a kid to be pleased with simple gesture or smile. She stood there for a few seconds, and then stormed off to her own bedroom. Hot

4、air was blowing from her nostrils (鼻孔); her face turned into red apple. She threw the painting on the table, slammed (把砰地关上) the door and threw herself on her bed. “Why is everybody so busy？” she recalled thousands of incidents that hurt her in preschool, middle school and even in high school too！Sh

5、e assumed at least her own family members would give some values to her thoughts, but they were no exception. Unconsciously, her eyes were filled with tears. The knocking sound on the door put a sudden brake to her thought. Her mom was calling her for dinner. Sirin deliberately came late to join the

6、m. She kept silent and didnt look at anyone, scratching the table mat with her nail. Her mom was puzzled at the unusual behavior. Suddenly, the morning incident clicked in her mind. Softly, she asked, “Honey, did I do anything wrong？”Sirin showed off her work for praise but both her mother and fathe

7、r ignored herSirins anger and her thoughtsAt dinner time, mother noticed her unusual behaviorone day.when back from school the next daySirins homeSirin, her mom, her dadwhenwherewhowhatwhyhowSirin tried to show off her new painting her mother and father were too busy to appreciate her paintingAt din

8、ner time, her mom remembered the incident in the morning and asked herproud, full of expectationangryupset and angry?THEMEProper attention and mutual understanding are the keys to a harmonious family.Paragraph 1At this very moment, Sirin could no longer resist her anger. “Why is everybody so busy？”_

9、Paragraph 2When back from school the next day, Sirin was surprised to see her beautifullydecorated painting on the wall._when at dinner time, at nightwhere at home, at her roomwho Sirin, mother and fatherwhat Sirin: complain Father and mother: apologize or explainhow Sirin: angry, sad father and mot

10、her: apologeticwhen the next day after schoolwhere at home, at her roomwho Sirin, mother and fatherwhat Sirin: thank and apologize Father and mother: apologize or explain mutual understandinghow Sirin: moved Translation(paragraph 1)1. 就在这时，Sirin再也控制不住她的怒气。2. 她咆哮着，眼泪流下来。3. 她尖叫着，几乎哽咽。4. 出于愤怒，她抓起桌上的画，撕

11、成两半。5. 妈妈感到很震惊，快速地站起来。6. 她紧紧地抱住她，细心地安慰她。Translation(paragraph 1)1. 就在这时，Sirin再也控制不住她的怒气。At this very moment, Sirin could no longer resist her anger.2. 她咆哮着，眼泪流下来。She roared, tears streaming down.3. 她尖叫着，几乎哽咽。She screamed, nearly choked.4. 出于愤怒，她抓起桌上的画，撕成两半。Out of great anger, she grabbed the paintin

12、g on the table and tore it in half.5. 妈妈感到很震惊，快速地站起来。Shocked, Mom quickly rose to her feet.6. 她紧紧地抱住她，细心地安慰她。She threw her arms around her tightly, comforting her with care and patience.Translation (paragraph 2)1. 她惊讶地看到了墙上装饰精美的画。2. 它被装上了漂亮的画框，边上有感人的话：“我们为你感到骄傲，我们的小天使”。3. 一看到，她就哭了出来。4. 她跑向妈妈，紧紧地抱住她，

13、意识到里妈妈的爱，5. 她爸爸站在那里，笑着点头。6. 回想起父母来自于工作和生活的压力，她对她之前的行为感到后悔。7. 他水汪汪的眼睛看着他们，道歉道“.”8. 他们想到在一个家庭中，正是适当的关注和互相理解帮助建立牢固的关系。Translation (paragraph 2)1. 她惊讶地看到了墙上装饰精美的画。Sirin was surprised to see her beautifullydecorated painting on the wall. 2. 它被装上了漂亮的画框，边上有感人的话：“我们为你感到骄傲，我们的小天使”。It was beautifully framed,

14、accompanied by the touching words: “We are so proud of you, our little angel！”3. 一看到，她就哭了出来。On seeing it, she burst out crying. 4. 她跑向妈妈，紧紧地抱住她，意识到里妈妈的爱。She ran to her mom and hugged her tightly as well and was fully aware of her moms love. 5. 她爸爸站在那里，笑着点头。Her dad stood there, nodding with a big smi

15、le.6. 回想起父母来自于工作和生活的压力，她对她之前的行为感到后悔。Recalling her parents stress from work and daily life, she was regretting her previous behavior.7. 他水汪汪的眼睛看着他们，道歉道“.”She looked up with watery eyes, apologising, “.”8. 他们想到在一个家庭中，正是适当的关注和互相理解帮助建立牢固的关系。It dawned on them that in a family, it was proper attention and

16、 mutual understanding that help build a strong bond.One possible versionAt this very moment, Sirin could no longer resist her anger. “Why is everybody so busy？” she roared, tears streaming down. She assumed that her mom and dad would be proud of her great talent and would appreciate her painting but

17、.She was deeply hurt with everybody having “no time” for her. “I hate you！” She screamed, nearly choked. Out of great anger, she grabbed the painting on the table and tore it in half. Shocked, Mom quickly rose to her feet. She threw her arms around her tightly, comforting her with care and patience,

18、 “Baby, I am so sorry! I promise we will try our best to make it right.”When back from school the next day，Sirin was surprised to see her beautifullydecorated painting on the wall. It was beautifully framed, accompanied by the touching words: “We are so proud of you, our little angel！” On seeing it,

19、 she burst out crying. She ran to her mom and hugged her tightly as well and was fully aware of her moms love. Her dad stood there, nodding with a big smile. Recalling her parents stress from work and daily life, she was regretting her previous behavior. She looked up with watery eyes, apologising,

20、“Sorry, Mom! Sorry, Dad！” It dawned on them that in a family, it was proper attention and mutual understanding that help build a strong bond.素材积累1. with a broad smile on her lips2. raise her eyebrows with eyes wide open3. speak in an impatient tone4. Holding her oil painting, she frowned, and then searched for her dad.5. announce aloud in a thrilling voice(表情及感官)(联动)1. Her dad turned around while adjusting his tie, grinned at her, and showed his thumbs up.2. He just patted her back lovingly, kissed her forehead, and rushed for his office.3. She stood ther