读后续写水中救人

RobertandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.OnedayRobertandHenryweregoinghomefromschool,when,onturningacorner,Robertcriedout,“Afight!Let’sgoandsee!”“No,”saidHenry.“Letusgoquietlyhomeandnotmeddlewith(插手)thisquarrel.Wehavenothingtodowithitandmaygetintomischief(trouble).AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“Youareacoward,andafraidtogo,”saidRobert,andoffheran.Henrywentstraighthome,andintheafternoonwenttoschoolasusual.ButRoberthadtoldalltheboysthatHenrywasacoward,andtheylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhimtogether.Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRobertforhisrudebehavior,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtogotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Robertdidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadsomeotherboyswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadalotoffun.Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andgotoutofhisdepth.Hestruggled,andscreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould,buttheydidnoteventrytohelphim.原文再现1st：六要素WhoWhen

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Henry;Robert;newfriendsonedayinariverRobertwasbathinginariverandgotoutofhisdepth.?1.在水深没顶的地方2.为某人力所不及，非某人所能理解2nd:细节信息

RobertandHenryweretwofriendsinthesameclass.Theyalwaysplayedtogetherandwenthometogether.OnedayRobertandHenryweregoinghomefromschool,when,onturningacorner,Robertcriedout,“Afight!Let’sgoandsee!”“No,”saidHenry.“Letusgoquietlyhomeandnotmeddlewith(插手)thisquarrel.Wehavenothingtodowithitandmaygetintomischief(trouble).AlsoourparentsareexpectingtohavedinnerwithustogetherathomeandIdon’twantthemtoworryaboutme.”“Youareacoward,andafraidtogo,”saidRobert,andoffheran.Henrywentstraighthome,andintheafternoonwenttoschoolasusual.ButRoberthadtoldalltheboysthatHenrywasacoward,andtheylaughedathimagreatdeal.Fromthenon,theylookeddownuponHenryanddidn’twanttoplaywithhimtogether.

Henrywassadbuthewasn’tangrywithRobertforhisrudebehavior,becausehelearnedthattruecourageisshownmostinbearingmisunderstandingwhenitwasnotdeserved,andthatheoughttobeafraidofnothingbutdoingwrong.Thus,hejustignoredtheotherboys’laughterandcontinuedtogotoschoolandstudyaswell.However,Robertdidn’tinviteHenrytogohomewithhimanymore.Instead,hehadsomeotherboyswhoalsothoughtHenrywasacoward.Everydayafterschool,theydidn’tgohomedirectlybutwenttotheriverorsomewheretoplaygamesandhadalotoffun.Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andgotoutofhisdepth.Hestruggled,andscreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould,buttheydidnoteventrytohelphim.unwillingtogetinvolvedtruecourage

Afewdayslater,Robertwasbathingwithhisnewfriendsinariver,andgotoutofhisdepth.Hestruggled,andscreamedforhelp,butallinvain.TheboyswhohadcalledHenryacowardgotoutofthewaterasfastastheycould,buttheydidnoteventrytohelphim.Paragraph1:Robertwasfastsinking.

Paragraph2:Thus,Robert’slifewassaved.

3rd:尾段&段首句

Robert:恐惧、挣扎…Henry:如何救人Robert：说、做？

Henry:说、做？其他人？Thethoughtthathemightdieflashedacrosshismind,whichmadehimshiverwithanuncontrollableterror/horror/fright.Lookingatthe…,hefeltasenseoffearsweptoverhiswholebody.Seeingthe…,hefelthisfearincreasing/growinginside.Aterriblefeartookholdofhim.描写恐惧努力挣扎Hebeataboutthewater,tryingnottodrown./tryingtokeepafloat.Hestruggledforairasthewatersplashedhim.Grittingtheteeth,hekeptonswimmingwithallhisstrengthtowardstheshore.Bygreatefforthestruggledtopullthemselvesoutofthewater.Tirednessengulfed

(包围)himwithhisfeetstiff/numb(僵硬/麻木)andshivering.Exhaustedashewas,hekeptonswimming,grittinghisteeth.

Afterwhatseemedacentury,hefeltextremelytiredwhileswimminghardtokeephimselfafloat.Castingalookat…,Icouldtellhewasalsoworn-out.

描写疲倦Para.1Robertwasfastsinking.Aterriblefeartookholdofhim.Withhisfinalstrength,hebeataboutthewater,tryingnottodrown.Justatthatmoment,Henryhappenedtobepassingby.Hearingthescreams,Henryrantotheriverside,threwoffhisclothesandploppedintothewaterwithouthesitation.HereachedRobertjustashewassinkingthelastminute.Thoughhewasextremelytired,hekeptons