读后续写微技能之情感描写-课件-2023届高三英语写作专项

读后续写微技能训练——情感描写Howdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnake?Whenseeingthesnake,I...scared

frightened

terrified

读后续写微技能训练——情感描写之“恐惧”Donot“tell”me,but“show”meyourfeelingoffear.心理描写:Iwas

afraid/frightened/panicked/scared/terrifiedoutofwits.

Iwasthrowninto/beseizedwithfright/fear/panic/terror/horror.

Aburstof

fright/fear/panic/terror/horrorheldmeentirelyinitspower.Panic/terror/horrorwashedover/floodedover/pouredthroughmybody.

神态描写：Eyeswidened;Mouthopened;Throattightened;Faceturnedpale肢体动作描写:Iwas

rootedtothespot/ground;Icouldnotmoveaninch;Iwasfrozenwithfear;Iburiedmyfaceinhands;Mylegstrumbled/shook;Mypalmssweated;Myheartpounded/beat/racedviolently2020年7月高考浙江卷：遇熊脱险Glancethegivenpassage,findoutthesentences

describingthefeelingoffearandlearnfromthem.Howtoshowyourfeelingoffearvividly(生动地)?Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,makingmeunabletomoveaninch.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,shewasrootedtotheground,withherfacepalewithfright.Thefurrycreaturelaunchedanattackonthefence,instantlyleavinganarrowopeningonit.Terrifiedandscared,weletoutacryofhorrorwithtearsstreamingdown,hopingsomeonewouldcometoourrescue.ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.1.

Aburstofhorrorheldmeentirelyinitspower,makingmeunabletomoveaninch.

(一阵恐惧袭来,将我紧紧包围,我已经无法动弹)

2.Extremelyfrightened,Ifeltmylegstremblingandmypalmssweating.（我惊恐不已，感觉两腿发抖，手心冒汗。）3.Atthesightofthepolarbear’sbloodymouth,shewasrootedtotheground,withherfacepalewithfright.(一看到熊的血嘴，她一动也不动，吓的面无血色)4.Terrifiedandscared,weletoutacryofhorrorwithtearsstreamingdown,hopingsomeonewouldcometoourrescue.(感到恐惧害怕，我们发出了一声惊叫，期待有人来救我们）心理+肢体动作描写with的复合结构心理+肢体动作描写心理+肢体/动作+神态描写肢体动作+神态描写形容词，主句形容词，主句+with复合结构+非谓语动词主句,非谓语动词肢体/动作描写神态表情描写心理描写Asisdescribedinthegivenpassage,therearemanyvividwaystoshowthefeelingoffear.vividwaystoshowfeelings……细节描写句式形容词做状语非谓语动词with复合结构/独立主格结构词组、句子

thedogjumpoutatme,

Iwasfrozen

withterror,withmyheart

violently

.看到那条狗突然跳出来冲向我，我吓呆了，心跳的很快。

sentences公式1：Doing...,sbfelt...with...Seeingbeating站在它面前，我吓得不敢动，双腿颤抖手心出汗。Standing

infrontofit,Iwastooscaredtomoveaninchwithmylegstremblingandpalmssweating.

Extremely

，Janeturnedpale,

.

惊恐万分，简脸色变得苍白,眼泪从脸颊流淌下来Panicked,sheletoutacryofhorror,withhereyeswidening.

她十分恐慌。发出了一声惊叫，瞳孔放大（眼睛）withtearsstreamingdownhercheeksfrightened公式2：Adj(feelings),sbdid...with...Howdoyoufeelwhenyouseethesnake?scared

frightened

terrified

Oneday,youwereaskedtoteacher’sofficefornotfinishingthehomework.(你因未完成作业被叫到老师办公室)Feelingingreattrouble,Iwasseizedbyhorrorwithtears