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作文讲评课芜湖市第二中学张德芝

“Mydreamcommunity”Let’sexaminethetopicagain:自主学习讨论：一重新审题：Examinethetopicagain,andsolvetheproblemsbelowafterdiscussion.1.Style(体裁):______2.Tense(时态):___________3.Person(人称):___________4.Structure:(结构):___________首先，体裁---说明文，题型---提纲作文:要点齐全，条理清晰。第二，时态：一般现在时，第三：人称---第一，三人称----注意主谓一致问题。第三，文章结构:要完整紧凑，语言要简练---思维导图:三段：1.概况：环境和设施。2.社区的邻居和志愿者，3.表达自己住在这样社区的感受。这样下来文章结构就比较完整，条理比较清晰。错误诊断：1）拼写错误2）名词单复数3）短语搭配错误4）主谓一致5）词性误用6）句子结构运用问题，特别是“有”字表达7）句子不完整，如缺少谓语动词。8）句子首字母大写问题9)卷面涂画，字迹不清10）要点不全，词数不够。主谓一致卷面涂画，字迹不清要点不全，词数不够Let’stranslate:e.g.里面有许多树和花。也有花园，运动场，游泳池

1.Therearemanytreesandflowersinit.Italsohasgardens,communityplaygroundsandswimmingpools.

2.里面也有种有许多树和花的花园。2.Therearealsobeautifulgardenswithlotsoftreesandflowersinit.合作学习Pairwork:Pleaseworkinpairsandhaveatalkaboutthemistakesinsentencesinthehandoutandcorrectthem.Let’scorrect:合作探究workingroupsof4:1)Correctthemistakesinyourwritingbyyourselves2)exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartners.Trytocorrectthemistakesinhis/herwriting.3)writedownsomegoodsentencesfromyourpartners'writingsinyournotebook.4)showusthegoodsentences幻灯片16wConsolidationwriting:Writeabout“Mydreamschool”Homework:Writeabout“Mydreamschool”Showtime!MydreamcommunityMydreamcommunityisverybigbuttherearen’tmanyfamiliesinit.Manytreesandflowersgrowthere.Theymakethecommunityverybeautiful.Thereisalsoagarden,aplaygroundandevenaswimmingpoolinit.Peoplecangoswimminginitinsummer.Ilikemyneighborsbecausetheyarekindandfriendly.Theyarealwaysreadydohelppeopleinneed.Someofthemarevolunteers.Theyhavemanykindsofskillsandtheyuseth