三年（21-23）高考真题汇编分项解读及变式 读后续写真题变式题（解析版）

2023年高考真题变式题分类汇编

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读后揉写真题变式题（新高考卷）

【2023年高考真题】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoenterawritingcontest.Isaidnowithout

thinking.Ididnotlovewriting.MyfamilycamefromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writing

wassodifficultandpainfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingofthe

Titanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharderthanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?Hisreply:"BecauseIlove

yourstories.Ifyou,rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithinkyouhaveagoodshotatthis."Encouragedbyhiswords,

Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere,shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（银匠）inBostonwhorodeahorse

atnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeoplethatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcome

straightfromthehorse,smouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Havedoubts?Didhewanttoquit?I

sympathizedimmediately.Igottired.Ihaddoubts.Iwantedtoquit.But,likeRevere'shorse,Ikeptgoing.I

workedhard.Icheckedmyspelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalfdozen

booksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,andsaid,“Great.Now,writeitagain.

Iwroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinallyfinishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytothe

enjoymentofwriting.IfIdidn'twin,Iwouldn'tcare.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150个左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.

Iwenttomyteacher,sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

【答案】

Afewweekslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethenews.IwasinformedthatIwonthefirst

prizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbeanawardpresentationintwodays.Iwassohappytohearthe

newsthatIimmediatelyshareditwithmyteacher."Iknewyou'dwin!Iamproudofyou.Youmadeit!”hesaid

excitedly.Thencamethebigday.WhenIwasinvitedtothestagetoreceivetheaward,Iexpressedmythanksto

myteacher.Isaid,"It'syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.Withoutyour

recognitionandguidance,Icouldn'thavewrittenthisarticle.Againthankyouverymuch!”

Iwenttomyteacher?sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.Myteacherwaswaitingforme.Holdingmy

hands,hesaid^Congratulations!Youareagoodwriter,sokeepwriting.“YouknowIdidn?tlikewritingbefore,

butnowIamcrazyaboutit!Iwilltrymybesttocreategoodworks."Isaidseriously.Sincethen,Ihavewritten

manygoodworksandnowIamafamouswriter.Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmy

lifeontheroadtowriting.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者上中学的时候，社会学老师邀请作者参加一个写作比赛。作

者不喜欢写作，于是想都没想就拒绝了。但是在老师的鼓励下，作者同意试一试。作者在写作过程中虽然

很累，但是没有放弃，坚持下来了。在作者最终完成写作时，作者感到写作让他很快乐，他已经不在乎输

厩了。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“几个星期后，当我几乎忘记比赛的时候，传来了消息。”和第二段首句“颁奖后我

去了老师的办公室。”可知，第一段可描写作者获得比赛一等奖，在颁奖典礼上作者表达了对社会老师的

感激。

②由第二段首句内容“颁奖后我去了老师的办公室」可知，第二段可描写老师鼓励作者继续写作，自此

作者坚持写作取得了成功，作者将这一切归功于自己的老师。

2.续写线索：比赛消息传来一一作者获奖一一高兴一一颁奖典礼感谢老师一一颁奖后来到老师办公室一

老师告诉作者坚持写作一一作者表达了对写作的喜爱一一作者写作取得了成功一一感激老师

3.词汇激活

行为类

①告知：inform/tell

②成功做到：makeit/succeed

③表达：express/convey

情绪类

①高兴的：happy/glad

②激动地：excitedly/withexcitement

【点睛】[高分句型1]IwasinformedthatIwonthefirstprizeinthewritingcontestandthattherewouldbean

awardpresentationintwodays.（运用了由连接词that引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型2]It'syouwhomakemefallinlovewithwriting,mysocialstudiesteacher.（运用了强调句）

[高分句型3]Iowemysuccesstomysocialteacherwhoisabeaconinmylifeontheroadtowriting.（运用了

who引导的限制性定语从句）

【高考真题变式题1】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Inhighschool,Iwasaneditoroftheschoolnewspaperatthestudentunion.AndIwontwonationalawards,

rvebeensofocusedonmydreamofbeingamagazineeditorthatI'veneverwastedmytimebeingfake-friendly

topeople—Iwastoobusyforthat.Ialmostdidn'tsocializemuchinschool,whichmeantIalmostdidn'thave

anyrealfriendsinschool.Unexpectedly,thatannoyedalotofpeopleoutofmyexpectation,sotheybegantotalk

aboutmebehindmyback.Thegossip（流言蜚语）neverbotheredmesinceIwassointomygoalsandhadno

timetocaremuch.ButthenIappearedonTV,andthingschanged.

WhentheshowfirstbroadcastlastMay,Ireceiveddozensofmeanpostsaboutmeonthemediasites,calling

me“crazy”,andevensomedirtywordswereused.Worsestill,somestrangersshottheirfingersatme.How

couldtheysaysuchterriblewordstomewhenthey'dnevermetme?Istilltriedtofocusonmyworkandtold

myselfnottocareaboutthis,butthatdidn'tstoptheircommentsfromstreamingin.Everyday,messmessages

continuedtocomeinanditseemednosignofend.

WhenIwalkedintoclassonaMondaymorning,somegirlsactuallypointedandwhisperedthatIbroke

downtheTVprogram.IwishIcouldhavefacedallnegativethingscalmlyorevenignorethegossip,butIcouldn'

t.EachtimeIwentoutoforintotheclassroom,therewouldbepeopleIknewortotalstrangers,staringatmeor

whispering,onlyaddingtomysenseofshame,andIjustwasn'tabletoshakeanyofitoff.Allthenegative

attentionstartedtooverwhelmmephysicallyandmentally.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Soonafter,allthenegativewordsstartedtodestroyme.

Isawaquoteinthejournal."Onceyouchooseyourwayoflife,bebravetostickitoutandneverreturn.”

【答案】

Soonafter,allthenegativewordsstartedtodestroyme.Icriedmyselftosleeplateinthenightandwokeup

withswolleneyesthenextmorning,hardlyabletogetoutofmyroom.Severaldayslater,overwhelmedby

depression,Irefusedtogotoschoolandtalkwithsomeoneandevenrefusedfood.ItseemedthatIwastotally

trappedindarkness.Thankfully,themagazinesathandhelpedtorelievemystresssomehow.Everythingchanged

fromthatday,whenIhappenedtoreadanarticle.

Isawaquoteinthejournal."Onceyouchooseyourwayoflife,bebravetostickitoutandneverreturn.

Readingit,Isuddenlycaughtwhatitmeant.Icouldeitherletmyselfdowninthegossiporhugitasachanceto

growupandbecomebetter.SoIrereadthepostsandreflectedonmyrecentexperiences.IrealizedthatIwas

botheredbecauseIcaredsomuchaboutpeople'sbadcommentsthatIlostheartandforgotmytarget.It'stimeto

facethesituationbravelyandsticktowhatIhavealwaysdreamedtodo.

【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者拥有成为一名杂志编辑的梦想，从未浪费时间对人假装友好，

慢慢地同学们之间开始传播她的流言蜚语，刚开始作者还是置之不理，可到了后来，面对越来越多人的偏

见，作者感到无法承受了。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由续写第一段首句“不久之后，所有的负面言论开始摧毁我。”可以预测续写第一段主要内容：作者无

法接受负面言论，整天以泪洗面。作者开始拒绝去学校，和别人交流以及吃饭。直到看到一篇文章，让作

者有所触动。

②由第二段首句“我在杂志上看到一句话。‘一旦你选择了自己的生活方式，就要勇敢地坚持下去，永不

回头。可以预测续写第二段主要内容：作者开始意识到这些闲言细语可以打败自己也可以让自己更加强

壮，作者决定不在乎那些负面评论，坚持自己的梦想。

2.续写线索：作者承受巨大压力，以泪洗面一一作者感到恐惧，拒绝与外面世界交流一一看到一篇文章得

到启发一一忽略负面评论，坚持自己梦想

3.词汇激活

行为类

①哭：cry/can'thelpcrying/burstoutcrying/burstintotears

②拒绝：refuse/reject/turndown/decline

③被困：betrappedin/getstuckto

情绪类

①感激地：thankfully/gratefully/ingratitude

②勇敢地：bravely/courageously/withcourage

【点睛】[高分句型1]Severaldayslater,overwhelmedbydepression,Irefusedtogotoschoolandtalkwith

someoneandevenrefusedfood.（运用了过去分词作状语）

[高分句型2]Readingit,Isuddenlycaughtwhatitmeant.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）

[高分句型3]IrealizedthatIwasbotheredbecauseIcaredsomuchaboutpeople'sbadcommentsthatIlostheart

andforgotmytarget.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，because引导的原因状语从句和so...that引导的结果状

语从句）

【高考真题变式题2】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Hewas50yearsoldwhenIwasborn.Ididn'tknowwhyhewashomeinsteadofMom,butIwasyoungand

theonlyoneofmyfriendswhohadtheirdadaround.Iconsideredmyselfverylucky.

Daddidsomanythingsformeduringmygradeschoolyears.Heconvincedtheschoolbusdrivertopickme

upatmyhouseinsteadoftheusualbusstopthatwassixblocksaway.Healwayshadmylunchreadyforme

whenIcamehome.

AsIgotalittleolder,Iwantedtomoveawayfromthose“childish”signsofhislove.Buthewasn'tgoing

togiveup.Inhighschoolandnolongerabletogohomeforlunch,Ibegantakingmyown.Dadwouldgetupa

littleearlierandmakeitforme.Theoutsideofthesackmightbecoveredwithaheartinscribedwith

“Dad-n-AngieK.K.".Insidetherewouldbeanapkin（餐巾纸）withthatsameheartoranaIloveyou.”

Iusedtohidemylunchsonoonewouldseethebagorreadthenapkin,butthatdidn'tlastlong.Oneofmy

friendssawthenapkinoneday,grabbedit,andpasseditaroundthelunchroom.Myfaceburnedwith

embarrassment.Tomyastonishment,thenextdayallmyfriendswerewaitingtoseethenapkin.Fromtheway

theyacted,Ithoughttheyallwishedtheyhadsomeonewhoshowedthemthatkindoflove.Ifeltsoproud!

WhenIlefthomeforcollege,Ithoughtthemessageswouldstop.ButmyfriendsandIweregladthathis

gesturescontinued.IbegangettinglettersalmosteveryFriday.Thefront-deskstaffalwaysknewwhotheletters

werefrom.Manytimestheenvelopeswereaddressedincrayon,andalongwiththeenclosedletterswereusually

drawingsofourcatanddog,stickfiguresofhimandMom.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

ItwasduringthistimethatDadbecamestrickenwithcancer.

ThenthetimecamewhenIdecidedtocomehomebecausehewasgrowingsicker.

【答案】

ItwasduringthistimethatDadbecamestrickenwithcancer.Whenthelettersdidn'tcomeonFriday,Iknew

thathehadbeensickandwasn'tabletowrite.Heusedtogetupat4:00a.m.Sohecouldsitinthequiethouse

anddohisletters.IfhemissedhisFridaydelivery,theletterswouldusuallycomeadayortwolater.Butthey

alwayscame.Myfriendsusedtocallhim“CoolestDadintheUniverse??.

ThenthetimecamewhenIdecidedtocomehomebecausehewasgrowingsicker.AndIknewthatourtime

togetherwaslimited.Thosewerethehardestdaystogothrough.Towatchthisman,whoalwaysactedsoyoung,

agepassedhisyears.Intheendhedidn'trecognizewhoIwas.EventhoughIknewitwasduetohisillness,it

stillhurtthathecouldn'tremembermyname.Iwasalonewithhiminhishospitalroomacoupleofdaysbefore

hedied.WeheldhandsandwatchedTV.AsIwasgettingreadytoleave,hesaid,uAngie,Iloveyou.”

【导语】本文以时间为线索展开。作者的父亲从作者出生开始就做全职奶爸，尽心尽力地照顾着爱着作者，

同学和朋友们都因此羡慕作者，在作者大学期间，父亲重病去世，在陪伴父亲期间，作者感到了深刻的痛

苦和父亲深切的爱意。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“就在这段时间里，爸爸得了癌症”可知，第一段可描写爸爸在生病之后依然坚持给

作者写信。

②由第二段首句内容“后来我决定回家，因为他的病情越来越重了"可知，第二段可描写在爸爸病重时作

者一直陪在他身边。

2.续写线索：得知一一坚持写信一一陪伴一一病重一一难过一一表达爱意

3.词汇激活

行为类

①经历：gothrough/undergo/experience

②认出：recognize/identify

③认识到：know/beawareof

情绪类

①难过：hurt/pain

②艰难的：hard/rough

【点睛】[高分句型1]Towatchthisman,whoalwaysactedsoyoung,agepassedhisyears.（运用了who引导的

非限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]EventhoughIknewitwasduetohisillness,itstillhurtthathecouldn?tremembermyname.（运用

了it作形式主语和that引导的主语从句）

【高考真题变式题3】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

OnthesnowymorningbeforeChristmas,mycousinsBonnieandRubyweremakingsnowmenandthrowing

snowballstoeachotherwhileIwastryingtocatchthesnowflakes.Iwaselevenyearsoldandhadbeenliving

withmyauntandherlargefamilysinceI'dlostmymotherayearearlier.Mydad,whowasworkingoutofstate

andcouldonlyseemeoccasionally,wasonhiswayhome.

MycousinsandIwentintothekitchenwheremyaunthadbeencookingforhours.Asmycousinseyedthe

pies,Iaskedmyauntforthesixthtimethatmorning,“Shouldn'thebeherebynow?”"He'11beherewhen

hegetshere.Youneedtobepatient,dear!”shesaid.

MyauntandunclewerekindtomeandIlovedthemandmycousins,butthereweretimeswhenIfeltlonely

inthislargefamily.Icomparedmyselftothefruitsaladmyauntwasmaking.Thecousinsweretheapples,pears,

grapesandpeachesthatwereallhomegrownandbelongedtogether.Iwasthepineapplethatmyaunthadjust

added.Whileitblendedin,anyoneeatingitknewitwasaforeigningredient.SoIoftenprayedtomyself,“Please

presentmewithamotherandawarmhome.”

MystepswereslowasIfollowedmycousinstothebackdoor."Ifyougirlsgotothetopofthehill,you'11

seehiscarwhenitcomesaround,“myaunt'svoicebecamesoftwhenshesawmyslumped（宜拉着的）

shoulders.

We'dbarelygottentothetopofthehillwhenweheardthesoundofamotorandsawmyfather'scar

comingaround.Asitpulledtoastopbesidethefrontgate,Irandownthehillimmediately.Suddenly,aredheaded

womansteppedbetweenus."I'vebeensoanxioustomeetyouthatIcouldn'tresisthuggingyou,“shesaid.

ThenIfoundmyselfenfoldedinsoftarmsthatremindedmeofmymother.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式作答。

Isteppedbackandstudiedher.

“Wehaveaspecialpresentforyou,“mydadsaid.

【答案】

Isteppedbackandstudiedher.Shestoodnotallerthanmyfather'sshoulderandwaspleasantlyrounded.

Whenthesunlighttouchedherhair,itsparkledasbrightlyasanewpenny.Andwhenshespoke,itwaswithasoft

accent.Then,Igotthenewsthatthisyoungwoman'snamewasPollyandshewasmyfather'sgirlfriend.While

wechatteredexcitedly,mydadaddedtheirwrappedgiftstothepileswhichwerealreadyunderthetree.

“Wehaveaspecialpresentforyou,“mydadsaid."It'sPolly!Shehasagreedtomarrymeandtobeyour

newmother!”Pollywavedhernewringintheairandsaid,“Thatisn'tall.We'verentedabighouseforus.You

aregoingtocomewithusafterChristmastoournewhome.wIcouldfeelthetearsofhappinessspillingdownmy

cheeks.AfterChristmas,wesaidgoodbyetomycousin'sfamilyandmovedtoournewhome.Ihadmyown

homeandanewmother,whichwastheanswertoalonelylittlegirl'sprayers.

【导语】文章以故事为线索展开，讲述了一个失去母亲的女孩在圣诞节前夕在阿姨家居住，阿姨一家虽然

对她很好，但她仍祈祷想要一个妈妈，这时父亲带着新女友Polly来了，父亲的女友Polly成为了她的新母

亲，他们一起搬到了新家的故事。文章通过讲述女孩的内心独白和家庭生活的描写，展现了她对家庭温暖

和母爱的渴望，以及在圣诞节这个特殊的日子里，她的愿望得以实现的故事。

【详解】1.段落续写：

①由第一段首句内容“我退后一步，端详着她。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到Polly的反应，以及对Polly

外貌的描写。

②由第二段首句内容“‘我们有一件特别的礼物要送给你，‘爸爸说。”可知，第二段可描写作者父亲送给

作者的礼物（Polly成为新妈妈）以及最后搬家实现了自己拥有新家的愿望。

2.续写线索：端详Polly——对Polly外貌的描写一一送给作者礼物一一二人交谈一一搬到新家一一实现愿

望一一最终感悟

3.词汇激活

行为类

①收到消息：getthenews/hearthenews

②聊天：chatter/haveachat

③一起来：comewith/gowith

情绪类

①激动地：excitedly/withaflushofexcitement

②流下幸福的泪水：tearsofhappinessspillingdown/tearsofwell-beingrollingdown

【点睛】[高分句型1].Then,Igotthenewsthatthisyoungwoman,snamewasPollyandshewasmyfather,s

girlfriend.（由连接词that引导的同位语从句）

[高分句型2].Ihadmyownhomeandanewmother,whichwastheanswertoalonelylittlegirl'sprayers.（由关

系代词which引导非限制性定语从句）

【高考真题变式题4】

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Atelevenyearsold,mymainconcernwasmoney.Onmybedroomfloor,Iarrangedthechangefrommy

moneyboxtoseewhatIhad.Iwishedit'dmultiplybeforemyeyes,butofcourseitdidn't.Tohavemoremoney,

Idecidedtoworkformygrandmother.

Afterschool,mygrandmotherdrovetopickmeup.Aboutanhourlater,wearrivedatthepick-upkitchen

andgotdozensoflittleshinysilvertrays（托盘）.Afterourloadwasarrangedinthebackseat,mygrandmother

droveustoourfirststop:asmallwhitehouse.Itookamealandasmallboxofmilkfromthebackandwalked

besidemygrandmothertothedoor.Sheopeneditandsaid,"Mrs.Hershel,we'vebroughtyousomelunch."The

replycame,“Comeonin.”

InearlyjumpedwhenIglancedovertoseeatinyoldwomaninthecomerlookingatme.Shesatina

rockingchairandhadmanywrinkles.WhenIapproachedher,shesmiledatme,withnoteeth.Mygrandmother

guidedmeinsidetoplacethelunchonherkitchentable.Thehousesmelledbad.

Thenextstopwasmuchthesameandthenext.Thehousesvariedinsizeandshape,butthesamewrinkly

peoplewaitedfortheirmeals.EachpersonsmiledatmeandthankedmeasIhurriedtogetoutofthere.Iwas

sweatyandtired,andmyclotheshadcapturedthebadsmellofthefoodandoldhouses.

Attheendoftheday,IguesseditwasobvioustomygrandmotherthatIwasn'tverycomfortableaboutthe

jobanymore."Youdon'thavetohelpme,“shesaid."Iunderstandifthejobisn'twhatyouwanttodo.”

Iswallowedhard,wanderingwhattosay."Formanyofthepeoplewedeliverlunchto,thisistheironlymealof

theday.Manyofthemarealone,“mygrandmothercontinued.Seeingmyeyeswiden,mygrandmothersmiled,

“Butakindwordandasmilegoalongway.”

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

Whenwearrivedhome,mygrandmotherhandedmethemoneyI'dearned.

Thenextmorning,Isaweachpersonwithalltheirwrinklesandthehousesalittledifferently.

【答案】

Whenwearrivedhome,mygrandmotherhandedmethemoneyI'dearned.Icounteditandwassurprisedto

seethatitwasn,tasmuchasIha