科技改变生活 热点02 -中考英语高分作文（浙江专用版）

备战2023年中考英语高分作文热点02科技改变生活一、话题作文1．科技改变生活，发明无处不在，如computers，cars，smartphones，e-books，robots，Internet…请结合自身经历，谈谈哪一项发明对你的影响最大以及它是如何改变你的生活的。要求:1.词数80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。Technologychangesourlifeandinventionsarearoundus.Inmydailylife,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】

Technologychangesourlifeandinventionsarearoundus.Inmydailylife,thecomputerhasbecomeanimportantpart.Anditchangedmealot.Withthehelpofthecomputer,Icansearchforsomeusefulinformationandreaddifferentkindsofbooks.Byreceivingandsendingemails,Icancommunicatewithmyfriendsfreely.IfIhavesomeproblemswithmystudy,IcandiscussthemwithmyclassmatesontheInternet.IfIfeelstressedfromtimetotime,Icanlistentomusiconlinetorelaxmyself.Icanalsobuyallkindsofthingsonline.

ButifImeetsomedifficultproblemsinmyhomework,IoftenlookforanswersontheInternet.Thismakesmelazyandtoomuchcomputerworkisbadformyeyes.SoIthinkeveryoneshouldusethecomputerwisely.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：从题干所给的科技中选择一种，谈谈这个发明对自己的影响以及是如何改变自己的生活的。[写作步骤]第一步，点明主题，是哪一个发明改变了自己；第二步，介绍这项发明是如何改变自己的生活的；第三步，介绍自己的感受总结全文。[亮点词汇]①withthehelpof在……的帮助下②searchfor寻找③fromtimetotime不时[高分句型]①IfIhavesomeproblemswithmystudy,IcandiscussthemwithmyclassmatesontheInternet.（if引导的条件状语从句）②SoIthinkeveryoneshouldusethecomputerwisely.（省略that的宾语从句）2．你校课堂上引进了新科技，可以把老师的语音识别成文字，还可以生成这节课的二维码，学生随时可以观看这节课。请你根据以下提示，以ANewChangeinClass为题，写一篇短文。内容包括：1.Doyouagreewiththenewchangeinclass?Why?2.Whatdoyourparentsthinkofthenewchange?Why?3.Whatdoyouhopetoachieveinyourstudywiththehelpofthenewtechnology?注意：1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；2.词数100左右。短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ANewChangeinClassAnewtechnologyisintroducedintoclassinmyschool.Teachers’voicescanbeturnedintowords.What’smore,aQRcode（二维码）willbecreatedafterclassforstudentstoreviewthewholelessonanytime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】ANewChangeinClassAnewtechnologyisintroducedintoclassinmyschool.Teachers’voicescanbeturnedintowords.What’smore,aQRcode（二维码）willbecreatedafterclassforstudentstoreviewthewholelessonanytime.Iamstronglyforthenewchangeinclass.Itbringsalotofadvantagestoourstudents.First,studentswhoareabsentfromschoolbecauseofillnesscanstudythelessonintimesothattheywon’tfallbehindothers.Second,becauseoftheCOVID-19,wemaynotgotoschool.Withthehelpofit,wecanlearnfromtheInternetwithoutworryingaboutthestudy.Last,itcanmakestudentsinterestedintheclasswiththehelpoftechnologyandscience.Asforourparents,theyseemtonotagreewiththechange.Becausetheythinkmoststudentscannotlistencarefully,whichleadstofailureinexams.Theyalsothinkthatwatchingcomputerscreenstoomuchcanbeharmfultooureyes.IhopeIcanreviewwhatteacherstaughtinclasstoachievemoreknowledgewiththehelpofthenewtechnology.【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以ANewChangeinClass为题，写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有提示内容。2.写作指导：此作文时态用一般现在时；采用第一人称和第三人称口吻；可采用3段落格式，第一段：描述自己的观点以及原因；第二段：描述父母的观点以及原因；第三段：描述自己的希望。确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。二、材料作文3．假如你发明的“飞行单车”在学校科技节中获奖，被推荐参加一个国际青少年科技展览。请用英语介绍你的发明,内容包括下图中1-4项.注意：（1）参考词汇：轮子wheel太阳能solarpower（2）词数80左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）。（3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Myinventionisaflyingbike...._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Myinventionisaflyingbike．Itisfast，convenientandgreen!Theflyingbikehastwowheelsandtwowings．Ithasatopspeedof300km/h.Youcangotofartherplacesinashortertime．Itcanrunonlandandflyintheair．Ifyoushout"fly"thebikewillturnintoaplanein30seconds．Thenyoucanflyintheair．Youwillbeasfreeasabird．Itcantakephotos，too．Insteadofpetrol，thebikeusessolarpower，soitwillnotpollutetheair．Iwilladdaseatbehinditsothatitcancarrytwopersons.Myinventionwillhelppeopleliveabetterlifeinthefuture．【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍一项发明，题目中给出外观、用途、特点，需要作者展开想象，写出一两点改进计划。写作指导：本文是一篇说明文，人称主要是第三人称，时态是一般现在时。注意主谓一致，介绍内容清晰，有条理。4．世界上有很多不同种类的发明。这些发明改变了我们的生活。请根据下列表格所提供的信息，描述数码相机的发明，并简单介绍它的使用。要求：80词左右。InventionTimeWhoUsersDigitalcamera1975StevenSasson;AmericaTakephotosclearly,makevideos____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Therearemanydifferentkindsofinventionsintheworld.Allofthemareveryusefulandhavechangedourlives.Thedigitalcameraisoneofthemostusefulinventions.ItwasinventedbyStevenSassonwhowasfromAmericain1975.It’sverypopularwithbothyoungpeopleandoldpeople,becausepeoplecanuseiteasilyandconveniently.Andpeoplecantakephotosmoreclearlythanothercameras.Wecanalsousedigitalcamerastomakevideos.Howusefultheyare!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇说明文。文章要描述数码相机的发明，并简单介绍它的使用。写作时要包括：发明时间；发明者；数码相机可以带给使用者的功能等这几个要点，缺一不可。2.写作指导：本文写作时注意时态要用一般现在时，并以“数码相机”为主语进行论述；写作时注意围绕主题，思路清晰，语言流畅，表达完整。5．本届冬奥会是科技的盛会，各种高科技频繁亮相，无论是智慧餐厅还是“猎豹”摄像机，让外国媒体大呼惊艳。不仅如此，科技给我们的生活也带来了巨变。假如你是九年级一班学生王华，学校正在举办科技节，你应邀参加以“科技改变生活”为主题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍身边的科技及其优点。要求：1.要点齐全，适当发挥；2.句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；3.词数：80~100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其它任何个人相关信息。Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【参考范文】Hello,everyone!IamWangHuainClassOne,Grade9.It’sagreathonorformetospeakhere.Therapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatchangestoourlife.Smartphones,robots,high-speedtrainsandelectriccarsarefourgreatinventions.Thesmartphonebringsbothconvenienceandpleasuretoourlife.Wecanshoponline,watchmovies,andhavevideochatsthroughit.Asfortherobot,itcanhelpuswithhousework,helpourchildrenwiththeirhomeworkandsoon.Itsavesusalotoftimeandenergy.Thehigh-speedtrainhasgreatlyimprovedourtravelspeed.Ittravelsathighspeed.It’sveryfastandcomfortable.Theelectriccarhasalsochangedourlife.Itcannotonlysaveenergybutalsoprotecttheenvironmenttoagreatextent.Itisconvenientandgreen.Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.That’sallformyspeech.Thankyou!【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据所给思维导图的提示，以“科技改变生活”为主题，写一篇作文介绍身边的科技及其优点。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，人称以第三人称为主。写作时思维导图的提示全部要涵盖在内，可以从四个方面介绍身边的科技：智能手机、机器人、电动汽车以及高铁。针对细节可适当发挥，行文确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。三、电子邮件6．人工智能（AI）的迅速崛起无疑是新世纪以来最为重要的科技事件，而我们的生活也将因为人工智能的成熟应用迎来巨大改变。假如是李华，你校将于周六上午十点使用视频会议举办一场介绍人工智能的线上讲座。你打算邀请你校英国留学生Tom一起参加。请用英语给Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加线上讲座（onlinelecture），向他说明举办讲座活动的时间、目的以及讲座的内容。提示词语：helpful,convenient,introduce,examples,apply(应用)...to...,questions提示问题：●Whattimewilltheonlinelecturestart?●Whywilltheschoolholdthisactivity?●Whatwillthespeakertalkabout?DearTom,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendanonlinelectureaboutAItechnology.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyouwillbethereontimeandenjoyit.Ifthereisanythingmorethatyouwanttoknow,pleasetellme.Yours,LiHua【参考范文】DearTom,I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendanonlinelectureaboutAItechnology.Itwillstartat10o’clockonSaturdaymorning.Duringthelecture,thespeakerwillintroducewhatAIis.Then,hewilltellushowtouseitinourdailylifesinceitishelpfulandconvenient.Toattendtheonlinelecture,youneedtogetyourcomputeroryourphoneready.Andpleasemakesureyoucangetonline.Itisagoodideatoprepareanotebookbecauseyouwillneedtotakedownsomeexamplesandanswersomequestions.WecanapplyAItoourdailylife.Hopeyouwillbethereontimeandenjoyit.Ifthereisanythingmorethatyouwanttoknow,pleasetellme.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，给Tom写一封邮件，邀请他参加线上讲座。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第二、第三人称来行文，时态用一般将来时和一般现在时。作文要分别介绍讲座活动的时间、目的以及讲座的内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。四、看图作文7．机器人Sophia的问世，引起了大家极大的兴趣。如果将来你有一个机器人，你想用它来干什么呢？为此，你们班在英语活动课上进行了热烈的讨论，请根据下面的图表，用英语写一篇短文，总结讨论的情况，并谈谈你自己的想法。1.要点：2.要求：(1)文中不能出现真实的校名和姓名等；(2)语言要通顺，表达要正确；(3)要求包含所有要点提示，为了行文需要，可适当增加要点；(4）词数不少于60个英语单词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。3.参考词汇：聊天娱乐chatandplaySophia,arobotwoman,hascomeintotheworld.ItcausedaheateddiscussioninourEnglishclass.Ifwehavearobot,whatshallweaskittodo?Herearetheresults.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________