2024年上海专用英语近两年名校联考模拟题08 概要写作（解析版）

专题08柢要写作（解析版）

目录

1.上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三试卷

2.上海市卢湾高级中学2023年高三英语模拟考试

3.上海市2023年高三“六校联合教研”调研试卷

4.上海市宝山区2023年高三区统考试卷

5.上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三试题

6.上海市控江中学2023年学高三试卷

7.上海市涌东新区新川中学2023年高三试题

8.上海市市北中学2023年高三试卷

9.上海市同济大学第一附属中学2023年高三试题

1().上海市吴淞中学2023年高三调研试卷

1.【上海市格致中学2023・2024学年高三试卷】

Directions:Readthefollowingthreepassages.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassagein

nomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

InstagramConcerns

AlthoughthepopularsocialmediaAPPInstagramcanbeusedinmanypositiveways,therearesignificant

riskstoyourchildthatallparentsshouldbeawareof.

ManyInstagramusersareknownfortheirperfectlyposedandeditedphotosofdelicatelife.Theline

betweenrealityandwhatispostedonsocialmediaisoftenvague.Teensoftenfinditimpossiblenottocompare

theirappearance,belongings,status,andlifestyletothelivesofthosetheyfollow.Itissoeasyforachildto

becomeconsumedbythisconstantcomparison.IfyourchildhasgatheredalargeInstagramfollowingordoesnot

havepropersettingsturnedon,sharedinformationmaybepublicforalltosee.Althoughcontentshowedinyour

child'sInstagramfeedistailoredtowardtheirbrowsinghistoryandinterests,itispossibletheycouldencounter

potentiallyinappropriatesubjectmatter.

Feelingconcernedorworried?Ratherthanbanningyourchildfromtheplatformentirely,youmightconsider

thefollowing:

Whenachildspendstoomuchtimeviewinglifethroughtheimagesofothers,theycanforgettotakethe

timetotrulylivetheirownlife.Encourageyourchildtoincorporateplentyofscreen-freeandInstagram-freetime

intotheirdailylives.Onewayyoucaninfluenceyourchildtodevelopahealthyrelationshipwithsocialmediais

bydemonstratingoneyourself.Setasideyourownscreen-freetimeeachday.Also,itiscrucialthat,asaparent,

youunderstandyourchild'ssocialmediapresenceandhaveopenandhonestconversationsaboutthedangersof

self-comparisonandoversharingonInstagram.Ifyounoticeyourchildisconstantlyexperiencingthesideeffects

ofInstagram-despiteyourbestefforts-takethestepsnecessarytoprotectyourchild.Forsome,thismaymean

lockingtheapponyourchild'sphoneuntilacompromisecanbereached.

（答案］Instagramusemaycauseteenagers9anxietybecausetheyfeeldwarfedbythecomparisonwiththefancy

postsbytheinfluencers.Privacyleakandinappropriatecontentexpositionareunderlyingrisks.Parentscanset

screen-freetime,setagoodexamplethemselvesinproperlyusingInstagram.Theycanhaveopenconversations

abouttheirconcernsandintervenewhenit'snecessary.

【导语】本文是一篇说明文，文章介绍说，尽管流行的社交媒体APPInstagram可以有很多积极的用途，

但所有父母都应该意识到，这对你的孩子来说有很大的风险，文章也介绍了降低或克服这种风险的一些措

施。

【详解】1.要点摘录

①ManyInstagramusersareknownfortheirperfectlyposedandeditedphotosofdelicatelife.Thelinebetween

realityandwhatispostedonsocialmediaisoftenvague.Teensoftenfinditimpossiblenottocomparetheir

appearance,belongings,status,andlifestyletothelivesofthosetheyfollow.

②IfyourchildhasgatheredalargeInstagramfollowingordoesnothavepropersettingsturnedon,shared

informationmaybepublicforalltosee.

@Onewayyoucaninfluenceyourchildtodevelopahealthyrelationshipwithsocialmediaisbydemonstrating

oneyourself.Setasideyourownscreen-freetimeeachday.

④Also,itiscrucialthat,asaparent,youunderstandyourchild'ssocialmediapresenceandhaveopenandhonest

conversationsaboutthedangersofself-comparisonandoversharingonInstagram.Ifyounoticeyourchildis

constantlyexperiencingthesideeffectsofInstagram-despiteyourbestefforts-takethestepsnecessarytoprotect

yourchild.

2.缜密构思

将第1、2两个要点进行重组，将第3、4两个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

TeenagersfeeldwarfedbythecomparisonwiththefancypostsbytheInstagraminfluencers,whichisthereason

whyInstagramusemaycauseteenagers9anxiety.Thereareunderlyingriskswhichincludeprivacyleakand

inappropriatecontentexposition.Parentscansetscreen-freetime,whichmeanstheysetagoodexample

themselvesinproperlyusingInstagram.Theycanhaveopenconversationsthatareabouttheirconcernsand

intervenewhenit'snecessary.

【点睛】[高分句型1]TeenagersfeeldwarfedbythecomparisonwiththefancypostsbytheInstagram

influencers,whichisthereasonwhyInstagramusemaycauseteenagers'anxiety.（运用了which弓I导的非限制性

定语从句、why引导的限制性定语从句）

[高分句型2]Thereareunderlyingriskswhichincludeprivacyleakandinappropriatecontentexposition.（运用了

which引导的限制性定语从句）

2.【上海市卢湾高级中学2023年高三英语模拟考试】

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomore

than60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

WearingHelmet

Somekidsridethroughcitybicyclelaneslikeaprofessional,andotherssetoutalonedownquietcountry

lanes.However,everyday,anaverageofmorethan500childrenwithbike-relatedinjuriesaretreatedinU.S.

emergencydepartments,accordingtoananalysisofinjurydatafrom2006to2015.Thosewearinghelmetswere

significantlylesslikelytohaveheadandneckinjuries,thestudyfound.Andalthoughchildrentendtowear

helmetsmoreconsistentlythanadults,manystillridewithoutone.

Alongwithcallingforsafer,morebike-friendlystreets,it'simportanttochooseahelmetthatwillhelp

protectyourchildfrominjuryinafalloracrash.Whenyou'rechoosingahelmet,focusprimarilyonensuringthe

correctfit."Apoorfitwillimpacttheprotectionahelmetcanprovide/9saysAngelaLumba-Brown,anemergency

medicinephysicianatStanfordHealthCare.

Thebestwaytofindtherightsizeistotakeyourchildintoabikeshopandhavethemtryonhelmetswitha

salesassociatewho'sfamiliarwiththeoptions,saysBradBowman,productmanageratGregg'sCycle.Ifyou

choosetobuyonline,Bowmansuggestsmeasuringyourchild'sheadwithflexiblemeasuringtapeaboutaninch

abovetheeyebrowsbeforechoosingasize.

Helmetsizesaremeasuredbyheadcircumference（圆周），andhelmetsusuallycomewithadjustabledialsto

accommodatearangeofcircumferences.Forexample,a3-to-5-year-oldchildmightwearahelmetwitha

50-to-52-centimetercircumference.Bowmansuggestschoosingonethatfitscomfortablybutalsoallowsforabit

ofgrowth.Onceasalesassociatehelpsyouidentifytheright-sizedhelmet,adjustthedialuntilthehelmetfeels

tightbutisn'tcausingthechilddiscomfort."Afteryoudialinthefit,ifyoupulluplightlyontopofthehelmet,it

shouldn'tcomeofftheirhead,^^hesays.

【答案】Asthereisanalarmingnumberofkids'bike-relatedinjuries,apartfrommakingsecurerandmore

rider-friendlystreets,wearingahelmetwhileridingiscritical.Bowmansuggestsconsultingasalesassociatefor

helpormeasuringyourkid'sheadcircumferenceyourselfwhenselectingafithelmet.Healsosuggestsallowing

comfortablespacetoavoiddiscomfortcausedbytightness.

【解析】

【导语】这是一篇说明文。文章主要介绍戴上头盔骑车在保护孩子安全方面也是至关重要的，并介绍了一

些选择适合的头盔的方法。

【详解】1.要点摘录

©However,everyday,anaverageofmorethan500childrenwithbike-relatedinjuriesaretreatedinU.S.

emergencydepartments,accordingtoananalysisofinjurydatafrom2006to2015.Thosewearinghelmetswere

significantlylesslikelytohaveheadandneckinjuries,thestudyfound.

②Alongwithcallingforsafer,morebike-triendlystreets,it'simportanttochooseahelmetthatwillhelpprotect

yourchildfrominjuryinafalloracrash.

@Thebestwaytofindtherightsizeistotakeyourchildintoabikeshopandhavethemtryonhelmetswitha

salesassociatewho'stamiliarwiththeoptions,saysBradBowman,productmanageratGregg'sCycle.

④Bowmansuggestschoosingonethatfitscomfortablybutalsoallowsforabitofgrowth.

2.缜密构思

将1,2两个要点进行整合，将3,4两个要点进行精简分说

3.遣词造句

Asthereisanalarmingnumberofkids'bike-relatedinjuries,apartfrommakingsecurerandmorerider-friendly

streets,wearingahelmetwhileridingiscritical.

Bowmansuggestsconsultingasalesassociateforhelpormeasuringyourkid'sheadcircumferenceyourselfwhen

selectingafithelmet.

Healsosuggestsallowingcomfortablespacetoavoiddiscomfortcausedbytightness.

【点睛】[高分句型l]Asthereisanalarmingnumberofkids,bike-relatedinjuries,apartfrommakingsecurerand

morerider-friendlystreets,wearingahelmetwhileridingiscritical.用一个原因状语从句和分词作状语结构对

一二段的部分内容进行总结，表达高级。

[高分句型2]Bowmansuggestsconsultingasalesassociateforhelpormeasuringyourkid'sheadcircumference

yourselfwhenselectingafithelmet.用动名词作宾语和一个省略的时间状语从句对第三段的内容进行总结，

表达高级。

3.【上海市2023年高三“六校联合教研“调研试卷】

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomore

than60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Thedefinitionofinnovativethinkingistheabilitytocomeupwithnewideasandnovelapproachesto

problems.Itisaboutbeingcreativeandflexible.

Inthebeginning,youshouldneverworryaboutanideabeing"notgoodenough^^oreven“silly”.Itonly

takesaminuteortwotocomeupwiththenextidea.Whatmattersisthatyougiveyourselfthecreativefreedom

tobrainstormlotsofideas.Thatway,theless-goodonescanhelpleadyouontosomethingthat'strulyinnovative.

Youmightthinkthatyou'dbeatyourmostcreativewithablankcanvasandthefreedomtodoanythingyou

want.However,thatusuallyisn'tthecase.Creativityactuallythriveswithlimits.Limitscanbeanything:time,

resources,capabilities,oreventhetypeofideasyou'refocusingon.

Alltoooften,inspirationcomeswhenyou'renotactivelychasingit.Actually,only3%ofpeople'sbestideas

cometothemwhilethey'reattheirdesk.Schedulebreaksintoyourweek.Timeawaydoesn'thavetobe

spontaneousandputtingitonyourcalendarmeansit'smorelikelytohappen.

It'scrucialtohaveasystemforcollectingandmanagingyourideas.Althoughyou'reconvincedyouwon't

forgetabrilliantidea,youmightforgetanideathatonlyseemsaverage—andyetthatideacouldbejusttheone

youneedsixmonthsdowntheline.

It'seasyfbrinnovationtobestifledifyouwanttogeteverythingjustrightfromdayone.Comeupwitha

simplifiedversionofoneofyourideas,putitintopracticeandtryitasanexperimentforalimitedperiodoftime

withoutbeingtooattachedtotheoutcome.Pickanideatotryasa30-dayexperiment.Ifthafstoolong,try14or

7days.

callingforthecreativefreedomaswellaslimits.Topromoteinnovativethinking,youaresupposedtohavea

systemforcollectingandmanagingyourideas.It5snecessarythatyouworkhardatasimplifiedideaandputit

intopracticeinsteadofcaringtoomuchabouttheresult.

【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，创新思维是指对问题提出新想法和新方法的能力。它要求创造

自由，但也要求限制。为了培养创新思维，你应该有一个收集和管理你的想法的系统。努力实现一个简单

的想法并将其付诸实践，而不是过于关心结果。

［详解］1要点摘录①Thedefinitionofinnovativethinkingistheabilitytocomeupwithnewideasandnovel

approachestoproblems.②Whatmattersisthatyougiveyourselfthecreativefreedomtobrainstormlotsofideas.

©Creativityactuallythriveswithlimits.Inspirationcomeswhenyou'renotactivelychasingit.④It'scrucialto

haveasystemforcollectingandmanagingyourideas.Comeupwithasimplifiedversionofoneofyourideas,put

itintopracticeandtryitasanexperimentforalimitedperiodoftimewithoutbeingtooattachedtotheoutcome.

2.缜密构思将第2、3两个要点进行重组，将第2、3两个要点进行整合。3.遣词造句Innovativethinkingrefers

totheabilitytocomeupwithnewideasandnovelapproachestoproblems.Innovativethinkingcallsforthe

creativefreedomaswellaslimits.Ifscrucialtohaveasystemforcollectingandmanagingyourideas.Workhard

atasimplifiedideaandputitintopracticeinsteadofcaringtoomuchabouttheresult.

【点睛】［高分句型1］Innovativethinkingreferstotheabilitytocomeupwithnewideasandnovelapproachesto

problems,callingforthecreativefreedomaswellaslimits.运用了现在分词作状语对原文第二段和第三段进行

了概括。

［高分句型2］It'snecessarythatyouworkhardatasimplifiedideaandputitintopracticeinsteadofcaringtoo

muchabouttheresult.用that引导主语从句对最后一进行/概括，表达非常高级。

4.【上海市宝山区2023年高三区统考试卷】

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassageinnomore

than60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

Parents,teachers,andanyonewhoregularlydealswithteenagersknowhowdifficulttheadolescentyearscan

be.Adolescentshavealwaysbeenknowntodowild—evendangerous—thing.Now,brain-imagingtechnology

allowsscientiststostudythephysicaldevelopmentofthebraininmoredetailthaneverbefore.Theirdiscoveries

haveledtoanewtheoryofwhyteensactthewaytheydo.

Recently,scientistsdiscoveredthatthoughourbrainsarealmostattheirfullsizebytheageofsix,theyare

farfromfullydeveloped.Onlyduringadolescencedoourbrainstruly“growup”.Duringthistime,theygo

throughgreatchanges,likeacomputersystembeingupgraded.This"upgrade“wasoncethoughttobefinishedby

aboutage12.Now,scientistshaveconcludedthatourbrainscontinuetochangeuntilage25.Suchchangesmake

usbetteratbalancingourimpulsesG中动）withtheneedtofollowrules.However,abrainthatisstilldeveloping

doesthisawkwardly.Theresult,scientistsclaim,istheunpredictablebehaviorseeninteenagers.

Thestudiesconfirmthatteensaremorelikelytotakerisksandbehaveinextremeways.Fortunately,the

newsisn'tallnegative.AsbrainscientistB.J.Caseypointsout,theteenbraininspiressuchbehaviorinorderto

helpteenagersprepareforadultlife.

Onewaythebraindoesthisisbychangingthewayteensviewrisksandrewards.Researchersfoundthat

whenteensthinkaboutrewards,theirbrainsreleasemoreofthechemicalsthatcreatepleasurethananadultbrain

would.Researchersbelievethismakestherewardsseemmoreimportantthantherisksandmakesteensfeelthe

excitementofnewexperiencesmorekeenlythanadultsdo.

Researchintothestructureoftheteenbrainalsofoundthatitmakessocialconnectionsseemespecially

rewarding.Assuch,teenshaveanintenseneedtomeetnewpeople.It,therefore,connectssocialrewardswith

evenmorepleasure.Inthisway,thebrainencouragesteenstohaveawidecircleoffriends,whichisbelievedto

makethemmoresuccessfulinlife.

【答案】

Scientistsdiscoveredthecauseofteenagers?unpredictablebehaviorsthankstobrain-imagingtechnology.

Studiesshowthatbrainscontinuetogrowuntilage25,soteenagers?still-developingbrainscausesthemtotake

risks.Teenagers9brainsmeasurerisksandrewardsdifferentlythanadultbrainsdoandstimulatethemtohave

moresocialconnections,pavingthewayfortheirfuturesuccess.

【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，多亏了大脑成像技术，科学家们发现了青少年不可预测行为的

原因。研究表明，大脑在25岁之前会继续生长，所以青少年仍在发育的大脑会让他们冒险。青少年的大

脑衡量风险和回报的方式与成年人不同，这刺激他们建立更多的社会联系，为他们未来的成功铺平道路。

【详解】1要点摘录

①Now,brain-imagingtechnologyallowsscientiststostudythephysicaldevelopmentofthebraininmoredetail

thaneverbefore.Theirdiscoverieshaveledtoanewtheoryofwhyteensactthewaytheydo.

②Now,scientistshaveconcludedthatourbrainscontinuetochangeuntilage25.Suchchangesmakeusbetterat

balancingourimpulses（冲动）withtheneedtofollowrules.

③However,abrainthatisstilldevelopingdoesthisawkwardly.Theresult,scientistsclaim,istheunpredictable

behaviorseeninteenagers.

©Onewaythebraindoesthisisbychangingthewayteensviewrisksandrewards.

©Researchersbelievethismakestherewardsseemmoreimportantthantherisksandmakesteensfeelthe

excitementofnewexperiencesmorekeenlythanadultsdo.

@It,therefore,connectssocialrewardswithevenmorepleasure.Inthisway,thebrainencouragesteenstohavea

widecircleoffriends,whichisbelievedtomakethemmoresuccessfulinlife.

2.缜密构思

将第1个要点进行重组，将第2、3和4、5、6几个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Scientistsdiscoveredthecauseofteenagers,unpredictablebehaviorsthankstobrain-imagingtechnology.

Studiesshowthatbrainscontinuetogrowuntilage25,soteenagers5still-developingbrainscausesthemtotake

risks.

Teenagers5brainsmeasurerisksandrewardsdifferentlythanadultbrainsdoandstimulatethemtohavemore

socialconnections,pavingthewayfortheirfuturesuccess.

【点睛】［.高分句型U：Studiesshowthatbrainscontinuetogrowuntilage25,soteenagers,still-developing

brainscausesthemtotakerisks.（运用/that引导的宾语从句）

［高分句型2］：Teenagers5brainsmeasurerisksandrewardsdifferentlythanadultbrainsdoandstimulatethemto

havemoresocialconnections,pavingthewayfortheirfuturesuccess.（运用了现在分词作状语）

5.【上海市格致中学2023-2024学年高三试题】

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint（s）ofthepassageinnomore

than60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

WhatCausesDejaVu?

It'safrighteningfeeling:Youwalkintoaplaceyouknowyou'veneverbeenbeforebutareoverwhelmedby

asenseoffamiliarity-amemoryyoucan'tquitereach.Hasthisallhappenedbefore?Mostpeopleexperience'this

sensation,knownasdejavu,atsomepointintheirlives.It'sahardfeelingtostudy,though,becauseittendsto

arisespontaneouslyandbeshakenoffeasily.

Dejavumeans"alreadyseen^^inFrench,atermpossiblycoinedbyFrenchphilosopherEmileBoirac.Ina

2009study,CognitivepsychologistAnneClearyofColoradoStateUniversityandhercolleaguesfoundthat

viewingthesesneakilysimilarsceneswasmorelikelytocausefeelingsofdejavuthanviewingdissimilar

scenes-suggestingthatperhapsthereissomeenvironmentaltriggerforthebraintocallout,“Hey,Irecognizethat!”

evenwhenit'sneverseenthescenebefore.

WhileCleary'sresearchshowsthataslightfamiliaritycanresultindejavu,AkiraRobertO?Connor,a

cognitivepsychologistattheUniversityofSt.Andrewssays,inspontaneousdejavucases,ifsquitepossiblethat

thefamiliarityfeelingisrandom.Supportingthisrandom-misfirehypothesisisthefactthatyoungpeopleactually

experiencemoredejavuthanolderpeople.Youngerbrainsarealittlemoreexcitable,morelikelytofiremore

quicklyratherthanholdingback,O9Connorsays.

Olderpeoplemayalsobelessadept（擅长的）fact-checkerswhenfalsefeelingsoffamiliarityarise,says

ChrisMoulin,acognitiveneuropsychologistattheGrenobleAlpesUniversity.Olderadultsstillrecognizesuch

falsefamiliarity."It'snotperhapsthatolderadultsarenotgeneratingfalsefamiliarity,9,Moulinsays."It'sjustthat

theydon'thave,anymore,thatcertaintythatwhatthey'reexperiencingisfalse.

Thisisanormalpartofaging,nottheconflation（合并）ofdejavuwithrealitythatpeoplewithdementia（老

年痴呆症）mayexperience.Soenjoythefeelingofhavingfeltitallbeforewhileitlasts,GenerationZ.

【答案】Dejavuisafeelingoffamiliarity.Itishardtostudybecauseitisunpredictable.Youngerpeoplearemore

pronetodejavu,duetotheirmoreexcitablebrains.Incontrast,olderpeoplemaybelessadeptatfact-checking

falsefeelingsoffamiliaritybutdonotconfusedejavuwithreality,whichisnotasymptomofdementia.

【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍说，似曾相识是一种常见的对新环境熟悉的感觉。它很难研究，因

为它不可预测，而且很容易被遗忘。年轻人更容易产生似曾相识，这可能是因为他们的大脑更容易兴奋。

相比之下，老年人可能不太擅长核实虚假的熟悉感，但不会将似曾相识与现实混为一谈，这不是痴呆症的

症状。

【详解】1要点摘录

①Youwalkintoaplaceyouknowyou'veneverbeenbeforebutareoverwhelmedbyasenseoffamiliarity-a

memoryyoucan'tquitereach.

②It'sahardfeelingtostudy,though,becauseittendstoarisespontaneouslyandbeshakenoffeasily.

©Youngerbrainsarealittlemoreexcitable,morelikelytofiremorequicklyratherthanholdingback,0,Connor

says.

©Olderadultsstillrecognizesuchfalsefamiliarity,notperhapsthatolderadultsarenotgeneratingfalse

familiarity,Moulinsays."It'sjustthattheydon'thave,anymore,thatcertaintythatwhatthey'reexperiencingis

false.M

⑤Thisisanormalpartofaging,nottheconflation（合并）ofdejavuwithrealitythatpeoplewithdementia（老年

痴呆症）mayexperience.

2.缜密构思将

第1、2、3几个要点进行重组，将第4、5两个要点进行整合。

3.遣词造句

Dejavuisafeelingoffamiliarity.

Itishardtostudybecauseitisunpredictable.

Youngerpeoplearemorepronetodejavu,duetotheirmoreexcitablebrains.

Incontrast,Olderpeoplemaybelessadeptatfact-checkingfalsefeelingsoffamiliaritybutdonotconfusedejavu

withreality,whichisnotasymptomofdementia.

【点睛】[高分句型1]Itishardtostudybecauseitisunpredictable.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）

[高分句型2]Incontrast,Olderpeoplemaybelessadeptatfact-checkingfalsefeelingsoffamiliaritybutdonot

confusedejavuwithreality,whichisnotasymptomofdementia.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）

6.【上海市控江中学2023年学高三试卷】

Directions:Readthefollowingthreepassages.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpoint(s)ofthepassagein

nomorethan60words.Useyourownwordsasfaraspossible.

PublicOpinionCounts

ModburyisatypicalsmalltownofthesouthofEnglandwithapopulationofabout1,600.Typical,thatis,

apartfromthefactthattherearenoplasticcarrierbagsinthetown.None.Plasticbagshavebeenwellandtruly

dumped!

TheremovaloftheplasticbagswasthebrainchildofRebeccaHosking,Modburyresidentand

documentary-maker.FilmingadocumentaryinthePacificOcean,Rebeccawashorrifiedattheeffectsofplastic

bagsonthewildlifeoffHawaii.Amongotherthings,shesawseabirdsfatallytrappedinplasticbagsthatdon't

biodegrade.WhenRebeccareturnedtoherhometown,shediscussedthisproblemwithpeople,includingthe

shopkeepersandeveryonesupportedhersuggestiontomakethetownplasticbagfree.

ButforRebecca'sconcept,Modburywouldstillbeanunremarkablelittleplace.Now,however,shoppers

takere-usablecottonbagsshoppingwiththem,ortheybuybiodegradablecornstarchonesontheshops.The

shopkeepersnowwraptheirgoodsinpaper.Toprovethatthetownsfolkarenotonlycommittedtoreducing

plasticwaste,theyorganisedamassbeachclean-uplastyear.Dozensofvolunteerscametothebeachonthe

appointeddaytocleanitup,takingtherubbishthatvisitorsthrowawayandrecyclingit.Andthegreatestpartof

thatrubbishwas...no,notplasticbags,butplasticbottles.

BecomingthefirsttowninEuropetobanplasticbags,Modburyisnowharvestingtherewardsoffame一

reportersandcameracrewsfromnewspapersandTVchannelsacrosstheworldarecomingtothismildtownto

findoutitssecret.And,contrarytosomeoftheinitialreports,itisanormaltown,tryingtolivelifeinaslightly

differentway.Asoneresidentputit."We'reordinarypeople,butwewanttomakejustalittledifference.”

【答案】Modbury,asmalltowninthesouthofEngland,isthefirstplasticbag-freetowninEurope,thanksto

RebeccaHosking,whoputforwardthisideaafterseeingtheeffectsofplasticbagsonthewildlife.Heridea

caughtonandtherewasevenanactivitytocleanupthebeach.Thoughfamous,Modburyisstillanordinary

town.

【导语】本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍莫德伯里是英格兰南部的一个小镇，是欧洲第•个没有塑料袋的小

镇，是一个名叫丽贝卡・霍斯金，在看到塑料袋对野生动物的影响后提出「这个想法。她的想法很成功了，

还发起一个清理海滩的活动。莫德伯里虽然很有名，但它仍然是一个普通的城镇。

【详解】I要点摘录

©ModburyisatypicalsmalltownofthesouthofEngland.

©Plasticbagshavebeenwellandtrulydumped!

（3）TheremovaloftheplasticbagswasthebrainchildofRebeccaHosking,Modburyresidentand

documentary-maker.

©RebeccawashorrifiedattheeffectsofplasticbagsonthewildlifeoffHawaii.

⑤Toprovethatthetownsfolkarenotonlycommittedtoreducingplasticwaste,theyorganisedamassbeach

clean-uplastyear.

⑥And,contrarytosomeoftheinitialreports,itisanormaltown,tryingtolivelifeinaslightlydifferentway.

2.缜密构思

将第1、2、3、4四个要点进行整合，将第5、6两个要点进行重组。

3.遣词造句

Modbury,asmalltowninthesouthofEngland,isthefirstplasticbag-freetowninEurope.RebeccaHoskingput

forwardthisideaafterseeingtheeffectsofplasticbagsonthewildlife.Herideacaughtonandtherewasevenan

activitytocleanupthebeach.Modburyisstillanordinarytown.

【点睛】［高分句型1］Modbury,asmalltowninthesouthofEngland,isthefirstplasticbag-freetowninEurope,

thankstoRebeccaHosking,whoputforwardthisideaafterseeingtheeffectsofplasticbagsonthewildlife.（运

用了who引导的非限制性定语从句）

［高分句型2］：Thoughfamous,Modburyisstillanordinarytown.（运用了状语从句的省略）

7.【上海市浦东新区新川中学2023年高三试题】

Directions:Readthefollowingpassage.Summarizethemainideaandthemainpointsofthepassageinnomore

than60words.Useyourownwordasfaraspossible.

CooperativelearningMayChangeYourMindaboutGroupWork

Twoheadsarebetterthanone.Itmeansthattwopeopleworkingtogetherhaveabetterchanceofsolvinga

problemthanonepersonalone.Butnoteveryonelikesworkingwithothers-especiallywhenthatmeans

workinginagroup.

Therecanbeanumberofreasonswhypeopledislikegroupwork.Somemayfeelnervousoruneasyingroup

situations.Othersmighthavehadabadexperiencewithindividualswhodidnotworkwellasateam.Another

criticismisthatteachersorsupervisorsfailtoassignrolestogroupmembers.Thismaycreateasituationwhere

everyoneornoonewantstolead.Whatevertheissue,theresultisthesame:thegroupdoesnotrealizeitsgoal.

Cooperativelearningisaneducationalmethodthatcanhelptosolvethisproblem.Therearemanymethods

ofcooperativelearning.Oneofthemistoeachpersoninasmallgroupaspecificdutytoreachashared