2024届高考英语读后续写语篇练习(荒野求生)

高考英语读后续写语篇练习1——脱险篇（荒野求生）题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目再现3续写原文OnSunday,Nicholas,ateenager,wentskiingwithhisfatheratSugarloafMountaininMaine.TheyhadawonderfuldayanddecidedtodrivehometoMassachusettsafterafinalrun.Theytookachairlifttothetopofthemountain,wheretheysplituptogodownindifferenttrails.Whenthefatherfinishedhisrun,heheadedtotheparkinglottowaitforhisson.However,Nicholasnevershowedup.ItturnedoutthatafiercesnowstormhadsweptintotheareaasNicholaswasonhiswaydown.Unabletoseefar,heaccidentallyturnedoffthepathandventureddownthewestsideofthemountain.Beforeheknewit,Nicholaswaslostandallalone.Hiswaybacktotheskitrailswasblocked.What'sworse,hedidn'thaveanyfoodorwaterwithhim,letalonehiscellphoneorothersupplies.Thesunbegantosinkandhewasgettingcolderbytheminute.Nicholashadnoideawherehewas.Hetriednottopanic.HethoughtaboutBearGrylls'survivalshowManvs.WildthatheusedtowatchonTV.Intheshow,Gryllsisabandonedinawildareaandhastohelphimselfout.Itwastimetoputthetipshehadlearnedtouse.4续写原文Hedecidedtostopmovingaround.Heneededtheenergy,andthewindsweren'tasstronginthevalleywherehestoodastheywereuponthemountain.Plus,therewasabetterchanceofsomeonefindinghimifhestayedput.Thefirstthinghedidwastoseekshelterfromthefreezingwindandsnow.Usinghisskis,Nicholasbuiltasnowcave.Hegatheredahugemassofsnowanddugoutaholeinthemiddle.Thenhepiledbranchesontopofhimself,likeablanket,tostayaswarmashecould.Wheneveningcame,Nicholaswasreallyhungry.Heatesomesnowanddranksomewaterfromnearbystreamsothathewouldn'tdehydrate(脱水）。Thenhereturnedtohiscaveandslept.5段首句Para1:WhenNicholasdidn'tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.Para2:Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.6Part2题目分析7已知短文内容本文以人物为线索展开，十几岁的尼古拉斯和父亲去缅因州的SugarloafMountain滑雪，在下山的时候，古拉斯已经迷失了方向，孤身一人。他想起了以前在电视上看的贝尔·格里尔斯(BearGrylls)的生存节目“荒野求生”，成功自救并最终获救的故事。8点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写建议第一段：““当尼古拉斯没有出现时，他的父亲意识到一定出了什么事”可知，第一段可描写尼古拉斯的父亲报了警，警察以及派出小分队寻找尼古拉斯的过程。第二段：“第二天，尼古拉斯听到了雪地摩托的声音。”可知，第二段可描写尼古拉斯被救的过程以及尼古拉斯的状况。10续写线索：意识到出了什么事情——报警——救援队出去搜索——发现尼古拉斯——状况良好以及精神状态——与家人团聚Part3范文呈现11范文呈现WhenNicholasdidn'tshowup,hisfatherrealizedtheremustbesomethingwrong.Thefathercontactedthepolice,andasearchteamwasgatheredtolookforthemissingteenager.Althoughtheweatherconditionwaspoorandthewindwasstillfierce,theydidn'tlosehopeoffindingNicholasalive.However,theyknewtheclockwasticking,andNicholasstoodabetterchanceofsurvivaltheearliertheyfoundhim.Theteamsplitup,andoneofthesearcherswhoknewtheareabetterdecidedtosweepamountaintrailheusedtohikeup.12范文呈现Thenextday,Nicholasheardthesoundofasnowmobile.Hewentoutandfollowedthesoundtofindhelp.Hehadwalkedforaboutamilewhenheheardsomeonecallinghisname.Hemovedtowardsthesound,andsureenough,afewminuteslater,hecamefacetofacewiththesearcher.Despitefeelingweak,Nicholaswasgenerallyinagoodcondition,andhewasreallyhappyashewascarriedbac